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Make up a story!
Car
Repairing
Ⅰ
Reading
For Writing
① During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
② He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw(锯子)from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
③ I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
④ The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man's hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the little girl asked if I’d had lunch.__________
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Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.___________________
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3. Which one is the correct understanding about the sentence in para 1 “I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help.”
A. The author was sick on the way so people had to bother to offer help.
B. The author hated it when nobody offered him any help.
C. The author wasn’t satisfied with the way people bothered to help him.
D. The author hated it when people always bothered him.
4. Did I give money (a $20 bill ) to someone
1. A Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out. (Para 1)
A. wore out B. beat out C. stood out D. jumped out
2. He sized up the situation and called for his daughter. (Para 2)
A. managed B. improved C. analysed D. changed
1. 词汇 +文本梳理
① During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
Elements of
the story
who
where
what
when
how
a Mexican family and I
on the side of the road
My car broke down, and the Mexican family gave me a hand.
The process of …
one morning
2. 要素提取
Climax
Falling Action
Ending
Rising Action
Background
The Mexican family offered to help me repair the car .
My car broke down on the side of the road. I turned to someone, but nothing came of it.
After repairing the car, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
Noticing my car broke down, a Mexican family pulled over .
After they left, I opened the paper bag …
B
D
A
C
E
3. 故事发展过程
Events
disappointedupset
annoyed
hopeful
happy
delighted
surprised
confused
curious
…
4. 情感变化
Ⅱ
Writing
After Reading
5. 情节推理--- Questions
Para 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the little girl asked if I’d had lunch._____________
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag._____________________
1. Why did the girl ask if I’d had lunch
2. What was my reaction
3. Where was the bag from
refused the girl’s kindness
had lunch with the family
said goodbye to the family
Para 2:After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
I
emotion
plot
5. 情节推理
6. 结尾多样化
What might be the ending of this story
主题升华式结尾
首尾呼应式结尾
情景交融式结尾
4. 自然式结尾
欧亨利式结尾
Para 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. “No, I haven’t”. I responded. Sensing my embarrassment and tiredness, the little girl led me into their car, treating me to a variety of foods and fruits. I was hungry enough to eat up an elephant. I bet it was the most delicious food that I had had. Watching me wolfing them down, the family grinned from ear to ear. We chatted freely as if we were friends for many years. After extending my thanks for their help, I got off the car, when the girl passed a paper bag to me.
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. …
主题升华式结尾
首尾呼应式结尾
情景交融式结尾
4. 自然式结尾
欧亨利式结尾
7. 下水试写---多样化结尾
Have a try!
“景色类”的相关词汇积累
6. 唤醒词汇储备,搭建词汇脚手架
1. The sun shone brightly, bringing warmth and hope to the world.
2. The charming flowers smiling broadly, I was drunk with the scenery.
3. The wind murmured in a soft voice like whispering to …
4. Bathed in the sunshine, the trees stretched out their twigs as if calling for …
5. The fragrance of flowers embraced her tenderly, praising the arrival of spring.
“情感类”的相关词汇积累
1. He looked at me as if he were over the moon.
2. Her face lit up and her lips curved into a broad smile.
3. With gratitude rushing into his heart, he felt a lump in his throat.
4. He was amazed/shocked/dumbfounded, shaking his head in disbelief.
5. Overwhelmed with curiosity and excitement, he raised his head high …
“感悟类”的相关词汇积累
1. Roses given, fragrance in hand. 2. It is better to give than to take.
3. Light a lamp and warm a heart. 4. A small act of kindness can make a big difference .
5. Hand in hand, let love pass through our fingertips.
Para 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. “No, I haven’t”. I responded. Sensing my embarrassment and tiredness, the little girl led me into their car, treating me to a variety of foods and fruits. I was hungry enough to eat up an elephant. I bet it was the most delicious food that I had had. Watching me wolfing them down, the family grinned from ear to ear. We chatted freely as if we were friends for many years. After extending my thanks for their help, I got off the car, when the girl passed a paper bag to me.
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. …
主题升华式结尾
首尾呼应式结尾
情景交融式结尾
4. 自然式结尾
欧亨利式结尾
7. 下水试写---多样化结尾
Have a try!
绽放思维独特性，尝试结尾多样化
Micro-writing:
-----How to finish a story with
various endings
No1. 主题升华式结尾
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. The sight of the money filled me with surprise. It was the very $20 bill that I handed to her mother with a note attached reading, “Dear friend, may you have a good trip! Please pass it to those who are in need.” Surprised and deeply moved, I couldn’t speak but just hold the paper bag tightly in my arms. Their act of kindness does light a lamp and warm a heart. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes : “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”
No2. 首尾呼应式结尾
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. The $20 bill as well as a note came into my view. I unfolded it and the words leapt into my eyes, “Dear friend, please pass it to those who are in need.” At that very moment, a surge of warmth ran through my heart, changing my original thought “ I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bother to help” and bringing back my faith in others again. Anyway, there are nice people who are always willing to bother themselves to give others a hand.
No3. 情景交融式结尾
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. The $20 bill as well as some delicious fruits came into my view. With gratitude rushing into my heart, I felt a lump in my throat, lost in thought. Suddenly, I was brought back to reality by a gentle breeze ,which carried a burst of fragrance of flowers. The bright sunlight shone through my car window showing that the spring was around us.
No4. 自然式结尾
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. To my great surprise, the very $ 20 dollar bill I had handed to the mother caught my attention. What a kind and generous family! I was nearly on the point of shedding tears. Then I also spotted some self-made fruit pies which were carefully wrapped in a little box. Attracted by its smell, I eagerly gave it a big bite. How delicious it was!
No5. 欧亨利式结尾
Para 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the little girl asked if I’d had lunch. I replied with a forced smile, “No, I haven’t. There is more important thing to prepare for my party.” Then the little girl passed me a paper bag, saying sincerely, “For lunch. My mom cooks them using the fruit on the farm and we’ll make money by selling them on the market.” They drove away before I said thanks to her.
Para 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. I couldn’t believe my eyes, when I saw the apple pie. I started the car, chasing them immediately. They stopped again not for offering help but for the apple pie which my party tonight really needed. Who could know a car-trouble should become a good fortune.
绽放思维独特性，尝试结尾多样化
--- Shape the uniqueness of thinking.
--- Show the diversity of ending.
① During this past year, I’ve had three examples of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of(受够了) the fact that most people were unwilling to offer help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road waiting for help. Nothing happened. Just as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and a man bounded out.
Ending: … . At that very moment, a flood of warmth ran through my heart, changing my original (最初的)thought “I was sick of(受够了) the fact that most people were unwilling to offer help. ” and bringing back my confidence in others again. Anyway, there are nice people who are always willing to bother themselves to give others a hand.

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