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There once was a stray dog (流浪狗) named Rufus who was the most amazing dog on Kumquat Street. He could hear a ladybug blowing its nose. He could see a pill bug eating a black licorice candy at midnight. Rufus could even smell a caterpillar that hadn’t washed its feet.
You would think that Rufus, being so amazing, was also happy. But he wasn’t. You see, there was one thing that kept Rufus from being adopted by his favorite human. And that was …Rufus barked backward. Here’s what he sounded like:"Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”
Rufus could stand being laughed at by every squirrel and cat in the neighborhood. What he couldn’t stand was that his bark kept him from living with Janie Johnson.
Janie never laughed at Rufus when he barked. More than anything else, Rufus wanted to be her pet. He wanted to play catch in her yard every day and sleep at the foot of her bed each night.
But Janie’s father, Mr. Johnson, wouldn’t hear of it. "What A dog that barks backward We’d be the laughing stocks of Kumquat Street! We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by adopting dogs that bark backward. No, Janie. It’s out of the question."
“I’m sorry,” Janie told Rufus one morning as they sat on her front porch.” I keep telling Daddy how great you are. He just won’t listen."
“Krab-krab!”said Rufus.
“Yes, sometimes he is bad-tempered," said Janie "I’ll keep trying, though. Don’t worry.”
But Rufus did worry. That evening he talked it over with his friend Bill Bulldog. "I don’t think Mr. Johnson will ever like me," Rufus said. "As long as I bark backward, he’ll never let me live in his home."
“Have you tried treatment ” asked Bill.
Rufus said, "I’ve tried everything. Nothing helps. It’s just the way I bark."
“You’re a great dog Roof. Anyone can see that," said Bill. "It just takes some humans longer to figure it out, that’s all. Hey, want to go with me to Succotash Street I’ve heard that their garbage is fantastic.”
Rufus yawned. "No, thanks," he said. "I’ll take a nap."
When Rufus woke up, it was late afternoon. As he was lying there, his sharp ears heard Mr. Johnson saying, “It’s almost suppertime. Is Janie still roller-skating We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by being late for supper.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. __________________
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Paragraph 2:
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up.__________________
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试题分析
1.主要人物:
①Rufus: a stray dog, the most amazing dog on Kumpuat Street, barking backward, not liked by Mr. Johnson but liked by Janie
②Janie: a girl who liked Rufus
③Mr. Johnson: Janie’s father, didn’t like Rufus
④Bill Bulldog: Rufus’s friend
2.视角：第三人称
3.主题：人与自然
4.前文故事梗概:
流浪狗Rufus有一个美好的愿望：有一个家，跟Janie住在一起，成为她的宠物。因为它的往后叫的声音很特别，Janie的父亲并不喜欢它，这让它很苦恼。它跟Janie谈过，也请好朋友Bill Bulldog帮忙。这都没办法实现它的愿望。终于，机会来了。…
5.故事线分析：
①Rufus线：unhappy→worried→寻找机会获得信任（如何发挥它的amazing能力）
②Mr. Johnson（父亲）线：不接受→接受（口头禅：We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by…）
6.续写安排:
第一段: Rufus ran down Kumpuat Street to look for Janie.
①（与前一句衔接）Rufus有哪些举动
②（过渡）在寻找Janie的过程中，遇到了哪些困难
③（承上启下）找到了Janie后，Rufus是什么表现
第二段: At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up.
①（与前一句衔接）Mr. Johnson是哪些表现
②（过渡）因为Rufus的超凡表现，Mr. Johnson接纳了它
③（收尾）皆大欢喜（以Mr. Johnson的口头禅结尾）
下水作文
Rufus ran down Kumpuat Street to look for Janie. Nothing could be more important than finding his owner-in-future. Sensing this, Rufus felt it was his duty to accomplish such a glorious mission, running as fast as he could. Just as usual, his barking backward “Wob-wow, … Krab-krab” brought him the ridicule from the animals in the neighborhood. But this time he ignored them, barking loud just for the search of Janie. It was his great senses that helped him find Janie, who lay in the ditch, moaning. Rufus ran over, and dragged her to the roadside. waiting for help. Soon came Janie’s father. (94 words)
At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up. Relief came to Mr. Johnson after a quick check. Nothing was wrong with Janie, though her left ankle hurt a bit. Before her father could scold Rufus, Janie told him the fact that her carelessness led to such an incident and that Rufus’s timely help eased her worry. On the way home, Janie shared with her father what Rufus did for her. When all came to the surface, Mr. Johnson showed sincere apology to Rufus, saying, “We Johnson didn’t get where we are today by not accepting such a wise companion!” (91 words)
参考范文
Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. He listened for the clickety-click of Janie’s skates. He sniffed for her special bubble-gum-and-peaches scent. He looked for her sky-blue helmet. But he didn’t hear, smell, or see her anywhere. Rufus started baking as loud as he could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!” A squirrel giggled in a tree, “I’ve never heard anything so silly in my life!” “You don’t even sound like a dog!”, yowled a cat. Rusfus ignored them all and kept on barking. Soon all you heard in the neighborhood was his bark. Suddenly, Janie skated up to Rufus. “Oh, Rufus, I knew I heard you!” cried Janie. (100 words)
At sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr. Johnson ran up. “Janie,” he said. “Where on earth have you been ” Janie explained, “I took wrong turn and got lost, Daddy! Then all of a sudden, I heard ‘Wob-wow, fra-fra-fra.’ It was Rufus! I knew if I followed the sound of his bark, I’d find my way back home.” Mr. Johnson knelt in front of Rufus and held out his hand. “Rufus, I owe you an apology,” he said. “We Johnson didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you to come live with us.” Rufus happily gave Mr. Johnson his paw and licked his cheek. “We Johnson didn’t get where we are today by letting dogs lick us on the cheek.” Said Mr. Johnson. “Hmph! Well, I guess that wasn’t so bad!” (133 words)

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