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My first experience of riding a bicycle
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!
My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, “Your own car." Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didn't think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals（踏板）so that I would not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because l refused to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.
After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.
The park was empty when we arrived. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people，but I was proud to have such an omnipotent（全能的）person as my dad.
We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didn't fell. He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
Paragraph2: I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
Steps for continuation writing
Narration：（记叙文）
Step1: Read for the theme.（确定主题）
Step2: Read for the plot.（定位线索：plots and key words)
Step3: Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph.
（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架）
Step4: Writing based on the outline and using words, phrases, sentence patterns.
（运用用句型模板，落笔成文）
The plotting
Who: My father, I
Where: backyard, park
When: when I was 7
What: recalling good old times, I was told by my father that I first rode a bicycle for 50 yards alone. Father put together a small bicycle for me, but I didn’t dare to ride such “a big thing”. Inspired by my father, I eventually decided to try it in a park. I felt proud of father and prepared to try due to having dad’s protection behind.
How/why: Father gave me a lecture and encouraged me to be a man. Dad promised to protect me from behind.
The plotting
Brief introduction/Background info: Dad and I recalled an object and experience in my childhood, being cheated to learn riding.
The beginning: Father made a small bicycle for me, but in my eyes it’s a monster and I didn’t dare to ride it.
The development: father lectured me and encouraged me to be a man. I changed my mind and decided to try.
One Climax: we chose a space in the park. I felt proud of my dad, who promised to hold the rear part of the bike and run behind to protect me .
The bigger climax: I began to pedal…
3. What are the plots given in the reading part
（给出信息）和父亲回忆起小时候的一样东西，单车，7岁的时候被父亲“骗”着独自骑了50码；→父亲为我组装了一台在他眼里最小的单车，与我而言是个庞然大物，我害怕不敢骑它，成了后院的装饰品→父亲教导我真男人应该如何做，我答应尝试和父亲去了公园；→公园无人，似乎特意为我这次尝试而清空，为父亲自豪→父亲承诺会hold住单车后座，在后面跟着跑保护我不摔倒，…
Paragraph1: I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
Paragraph2: I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
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The quality and status of the roles
My father
versatile
educative
wise
far-sighted
author
childish
concerned
worried
nervous
coward
curious
Key Words
These words or information deserve to be in your continuation task.
1. bicycle
2. try
3. ride
4. behind
5. man
这些词值得在你的续写中出现，让前后文连贯。
1.把握内容要点
所给首句：阅读每一段中的首句，进行布局、解读。在布局第一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的首句：第二段的首句决定着第一段的走向。
Para1: I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
Para2: I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
Step 2
审题与构思
注意：第一段续写要巧妙衔接第二段，应该是有点小收获了，看看
父亲还在不在后面。
Step 3: Outline the possible plots or events
in each paragraph.
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右,主线清楚;
2. 关键人物和角色随故事情节逻辑发展转变自然，注意人称;
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 确定好续写情节，用合理句型和直接引语表达;
Tip 5:Predict the ending of paragraphs based on the two given sentences.
What to write:
Paragraph1: I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
1. my initial performance in the first attempt
2. How did I feel at the moment
3. What were my dad’s guidance and instructions
4. Did I succeed or not
5. connect the next paragraph.
Core Content: the process of the first try
What to write:
Paragraph 2: I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
1. my instant reaction when finding dad’s absence
2. How did I feel at the moment
3. What happened to me without father’s protection behind
4. How did father educated me
5. my final decision and try
6. lessons I learnt
Content: 1. my performance and my attempt without without father behind
2. lessons I learnt
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. With butterflies in my stomach, my shaky hands gripped the handles tightly and my heart pounded as the bike’s acceleration increased. The moment I thought my dad was on guard behind, I felt a great sense of security, gradually easing my mind. However, the bike was wobbly and maneuvered in a zigzag pattern and I barely managed to keep control. Soon a familiar voice sounded from behind, “Shift your weight on your pedal alternately and look straight ahead.” Following my dad’s instructions, I eventually learnt how to maintain a balance on it. The previous monster-sized material now turned into a fun toy in my hand. Intoxicated with ecstasy, I couldn’t wait to share the feelings with dad.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. Suddenly a thrill of nervousness and helplessness ran through me, leaving me wrong-footed. In no time, I lost my balance and control of the bike, tumbling down onto the hard concrete road and scraping my knees. I burst into tears and complained bitterly to dad about his absence. Dad came over and said, “No one can protect you for long. As a man, you have to learn to depend on yourself.” Struggling inward for a while, I wiped away tears and jumped to the bicycle again. This time, I rode it alone for 50 yards. Most importantly, the riding experience bubbles to the surface of my memory when I hesitate to try something new, which often turns out to be fascinating and refreshing.
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. Sweat welling on my forehead, I tried my utmost to keep the balance by controlling the handle. Sort of afraid as I was, I made myself calm down because I knew my dad would keep protecting me. What I needed to do was holding the bars and keeping pedaling. With it moving, I felt it wasn't as difficult as I had expected and even began to speed up. So delighted was I that I wanted to yell out and share my feelings with my dad.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. A great sense of shock and scare seized me and my mind suddenly went blank. My body began shaking and I fell off the bicycle. Lying on the ground, I felt great pains on my legs. Then Dad approached and said, “Be manly.” Regaining my courage, I climbed onto the bicycle again. I held the bars tightly and made efforts to balance my body. My father commented I was one of the quickest learners he had ever seen. But he didn't realize it was the almighty sense of security and trust from him that played the best part.
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. “Look straight forward and keep hold of the handle tightly!” My father emphasized. With palms sweating and legs trembling, I made every effort to keep the balance and the bike was winding forward slowly. Deeply convinced that my dad was holding my back seat, I was much in relief and wobbled off down the road. All of a sudden, I stumbled on the uneven ground and fell flat on my face. A sharp pain swept across my whole body and I couldn't help bursting into tears.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. In a fit of anger, I blurted out, “Dad, you promised to hold my back seat, why did you let it go ” My dad ran up to me, carefully checked my situation and comforted, “Dear, actually you have pedaled for about 50 yards, by yourself!” Rooted to the spot, I almost couldn’t believe my ears. Everything is difficult before they are easy. Try again ” Inspired by his words, I picked up my courage and had a second try, finally realizing what being a man was all about.
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. I hesitated by the bicycle, with fear lingering in my mind. Seeing my unwillingness, dad said, “Trust me! As you jump on and pedal off, then I will follow you behind, serving as your guard.” Taking a deep breath, I got on the bike but I had no idea what I was doing. It seemed that everything went wrong. The handlebars were backwards, and so was my helmet. Before I began to pedal, dad instructed me in the right posture on the bike and demonstrated the proper pedaling to me in case I had an awful first experience. With several drills done, dad thought I had got the hang of riding and ordered, “Time to go.”
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. My adrenalin was pumping and I kept pedaling faster and faster. To my surprise, my fear of falling gave way to excitement soon after I started pedaling. Then it occurred to me whether dad was holding the rear part of the bicycle behind, I subconsciously looked back and found nobody behind. And what I did finally led to my failure in control of the bike. With a loud bang, I lay flat on the road and grazed my leg. I was about to whine when dad came up and said, “Fifty yards! Well done. Now you have become a true man.” Holding back my tears, I stood up and took pride in myself. As for me, it’s the first taste of pedaling that shapes my personality and instill confidence in me for years to come.

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