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如何形成精彩的“动作链”
概述：在读后续写中，为了写出一个传神的动作，刻画人物的心理状态或行 为反应，可以运用“动作拆解法”，将一个简单的动作分解成2个甚至是3个一连串的细微的动作。一般采用以下几种方法，
1. 谓语动词三连：A、B and C
2. 谓语动词二连：A and B,（非谓语C...）
3. 谓语A， 非谓语 B (and C）
4. Doing/Done, 主谓...，doing/done
5. Having done A, 主谓...
6. Seeing/Hearing/Thinking..., 主谓...
一 “动作三连”法
提示：用一连串细微动作拆解简单动作。
示例1：他上了出租车。
简单：He jumped into the car.
拆解：“拦车”--“上车”--“说出目的地”
升级：He stopped a taxi, jumped in and told the driver, “Go to the airport, please.”
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例2：（2024年1月浙江卷）她找到了学校的各种设施。
简单：She found the school’s various facilities.
拆解：“利用...穿行”--“找到”--“定位”
升级：She used the shadows to navigate the school hallways, find her classes, and even locate the school's various facilities..
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例3：这位歌手开始唱歌。
简单：The singer began to sing.
拆解：“扫视观众”--“深呼吸”--“开始唱歌”
升级：The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例4：Jane挥动她的衬衫。（浙江卷）。
简单：Jane waved her blouse.
拆解：“站起来”--“喊叫”--“挥动”
升级：Jane stood up, screamed at the top of her lungs and waved her yellow blouse with every bit of her strength.
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
Once upon a time there was a king who often thought, “Nothing good can come to a nation whose people only complain and expect others to solve their problems.” One day, he had an idea.
Early one morning, the king disguised himself and went to a local village. He placed a large stone in the middle of the main street and hid gold coins under the stone. Then he hid behind a huge maple tree and watched.
The first person down the street was a milkman with his cart. He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere, “What fool put this stone here ” he shouted. He picked himself up and angrily went away.
After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. Neither she nor her friends thought about moving the stone out of the road.
The king watched all day as many people complained about the stone, but he found nobody making an attempt to move it. The king was in despair. “Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbours from harm ”
Just then, the king saw a young girl coming along. She was the daughter of a local farmer. She had been working all day and was very tired. But when she saw the stone, she said to herself, “This stone is a danger to anyone who comes down the street after dark. I’ll move it out of the way.”
The girl pushed the stone with all her might. After a great deal of effort, she finally succeeded in moving it to the side of the street. Imagine her surprise when she saw the gold coins where the stone had been!
Just then, the king stepped out from behind the tree. “Oh sir,” the girl said, “does this gold belong to you If not, we surely must find the owner, for he will certainly miss it.”
The king said, “My dear, the gold is mine. I put it in the road and moved the stone over it. Now the gold is yours, because you are the only person who has learnt the lesson I wanted to teach my people.”
tear [t (r)]n. 眼泪; 泪水 v. 撕裂/掉/碎/破/开
burst into tears 突然大哭起来
= burst out crying
be close to tears 快流泪了
in tears 流着泪；含着泪
tear up 撕裂
我告诉他们这一消息时，他们都快要哭出来了。
They were close to tears when I told them the news.
despair [d 'spe (r)] n. 绝望 v.绝望;感到无望
in despair 处于绝望中
desperate adj.绝望的
be of great harm 危害极大的
do sb/sth harm=do harm to sb/sth 对某人/物有害
be harmful to 对……有害
There is no harm (in) doing sth 做某事无害处
harm [hɑ m] n./v. 伤害; 损害
harmful adj.有害的 harmless adj.无害的
熬夜对我们的健康有害。
Staying up late does harm to our health.
(1)a great deal of＋n.[U]大量的……
(2)a great deal 大量，非常
尽管困难重重，我付出的努力和她给予的鼓励最终帮我渡过难关。
Despite/In spite of a great deal of hardship, my efforts as well as her encouragement carried me through at last.
He has grown up a great deal (=much) over the past year.
经过过去这一年，他长大了许多。
a great deal (of)大量的（时间/钱/精力/努力）
+ 不可数名词
many, many a, several (几个), a couple of (几个，两三个), (a) few (一些), a good/great/large number of +可数名词
much, (a) little, a large amount of, amounts of, a great deal of +不可数名词
a lot of, lots of, a quantity of, quantities of (谓语用复数), plenty of +可数/不可数
根据后接可数还是不可数的量词总结分类
flexible ['fleks bl] adj. 灵活的;可变通的
flexibly adv. 灵活地
flexibility n.灵活性
inflexible adj.（材料）坚硬的，不能弯曲的
income [' nk m] n.收入;收益
outcome n.结果
旅游业是这个地区的主要收入来源。
Tourism is a major source of income for the area.
tension ['ten n] n.紧张关系; 紧张; 焦虑
tense adj.紧张的
tension between A and B A和B之间的矛盾
International tensions 国际紧张局势
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