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2024年高考写作正确对待失败 克服缺乏自信的英语作文
你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言(famous quote)，写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”的征文。
“A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else."
J. Burroughs
内容包括:
你对该名言的理解，2.生活中的例子3.你的感悟
范文一 My Understanding of Failure
As a famous saying goes, "A person can fail many times, but it is only when they start blaming others that they truly fail." In my view, even though we may encounter various failures, we are not truly failures if we strive to surpass others.
Take my own experience as an example. I still remember a badminton competition I participated in during middle school. My opponent had spent many years practicing badminton, which meant she might have had more skills than me. However, I gave it my all on the court, exerting myself to defeat her, feeling exhausted. It was my courage and determination that kept me going until the very last moment. Unfortunately, I ended up losing the match.
范文二My Understanding of Failure
As the saying goes, "Failure is not the end until you start blaming others." In my perspective, facing diverse failures does not define us as failures as long as we strive to surpass ourselves.
Allow me to share a personal experience. I vividly recall a badminton competition I took part in during my middle school years. My opponent had dedicated years to perfecting her badminton skills, potentially surpassing my own abilities. Nevertheless, I poured every ounce of energy into the game, determined to overcome her, feeling utterly drained. It was my unwavering courage and resilience that pushed me through until the final second. Sadly, victory eluded me in the end.
我的对失败的理解
正如一句著名的名言所说：“一个人可以失败很多次，但只有在开始责怪别人之前才是失败。”在我看来，即使我们必须面对各种各样的失败，只要我们尽力超越他人，我们就不会真正成为失败者。
以我的经历为例，我还记得我初中时参加的一次羽毛球比赛。我的对手花了很多年时间练习羽毛球，这意味着她可能比我掌握更多的技巧。然而，我在球场上全力以赴，竭尽所能去击败她，疲惫不堪。正是我的勇气和决心让我坚持到了最后一刻。然而，最终我还是输掉了比赛。
范文一与范文二 优化改写理由供参考
1、更地道的英语表达,将原文中的"even though"改为"As"，使句子更加自然和流畅。
2.将文中的"if we try our best to defeat others"改为"as long as we strive to surpass ourselves"，使句子更具表达力和深度。
3.改进词汇选择,将文中的"beat"改为"overcome"，增强表达的内涵和复杂度。
4.优化句子结构,将文中的"feeling exhausted"放置在句子末尾，使句子结构更加清晰和连贯。
5.将文中的"kept me going"改为"pushed me through"，突出表达作者的坚持和决心。
6.将原文中的"ended up losing the match"改为"victory eluded me in the end"，使表达更加精确和富有文采。
第二篇 如何克服缺乏自信
范文一
Dear Amy,
Hearing about your lack of confidence, I'm writing to share my perspective on the problem. Stepping into senior high school, which is a completely different environment, often produces problems like a lack of confidence. This common issue, which you don't need to worry about too much, has a simple solution. It is to set goals step by step. The goals shouldn't be too difficult at first. As you gain more confidence and improve your abilities, your aim should become higher. With achievements successfully made, you can build confidence with remarkable effectiveness.
My days of lacking confidence lasted a long time. In the past, when I first set a goal for myself, I hesitated. However, I gave myself a little nudge. Maintaining this method finally made me passionate about pursuing my goals. Soon, I was pushing myself in everything I paring grades, notes, or homework added color to my studies. And I became more confident than ever before. Hopefully, I can persuade you to try my method too.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二
Dear Amy,
I understand that stepping into a new chapter at senior high school has stirred a sense of uncertainty within you. It's a common transition that often invites self-doubt, but it can be navigated with grace. The strategy is simple: set incremental goals. Initially, these objectives should be modest, within your grasp. As you notch up small victories and your skill set grows, you can raise the bar bit by bit. This methodical approach is bound to bolster your confidence with impressive results.
Reflecting on my own experience, I remember well how self-doubt once cast a long shadow over my school days. When I first endeavored to set personal milestones, hesitation took hold. Yet, with a bit of self-encouragement, I pressed forward. This consistent effort kindled a passion for personal growth. In time, I actively sought out challenges, turning every academic comparison, from grades to study habits, into an opportunity for personal development. This, in turn, cultivated a robust confidence that I had previously thought unreachable. I hope my story inspires you to give this method a chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
亲爱的艾米，
我理解进入高中新篇章在你心中引起了不确定感。这是一个常见的过渡期，经常会带来自我怀疑，但我们可以优雅地应对。策略很简单：逐步设定目标。起初，这些目标应该是适度的，容易达成的。随着你不断取得小胜利，技能也在成长，你可以逐渐提高目标。这种有条不紊的方式肯定会以令人印象深刻的结果增强你的信心。
回想我自己的经历，我清楚地记得自我怀疑曾经如何给我的学校生活蒙上长影。当我第一次努力为自己设定里程碑时，犹豫占据了上风。然而，在一点自我鼓励后，我继续前进。这种持之以恒的努力点燃了我对个人成长的热情。随着时间的推移，我积极寻求挑战，将每一个学业上的比较，从成绩到学习习惯，都转变为个人发展的机会。这反过来培养了一种坚定的自信，这是我之前认为无法达到的。我希望我的故事能激励你尝试这种方法。
最美好的祝愿，
李华

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