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Unit4 Growing up
Task
The person who
has influenced me most
Learning aims
1. To learn to describe and write about the person who has influenced you most.
2. To learn to be grateful to others and care for others.
Review
Spud Webb is small.
Spud Webb is also big.
How small
Why so big
He is only 170 cm tall.
He is much smaller than the other kids
at school.
He had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA.
He succeeded because he never gave up and worked hard.
His spirit influenced a lot of young people.
He is the person who has influenced
the Chinese people most.
in his eighties
be ready to help anyone in need
devote…to the medical research（n.研究）
to one’s surprise令某人惊奇的是
fight against novel coronavirus
新型冠状病毒
be honoured the Medal of the Republic
care for the patients
Task 1.Listen & Answer
1.Who has influenced the writer most
2. How old is her father
3. What is her father like
4.what does the writer think of him
Her father.
He is in his fifties.
He is kind and helpful.
He has a heart full of love .
Task 2 Read and fill in the blanks
Age in his ______
Job work in a local factory
Personality
Examples 1. ____our TV to a family who could not …
2. ____ ____the children who have lost …
3._____money to someone in need
4.______blood and blood cells
5. _____ _____ donate his body for …
My ideas When I was a little girl, ________________
why my father …
Now, I realize that ____________________
kind and helpful
fifties
give
care for
donate
decide to
give
I couldn't understand
he has a heart full of love
PartⅠ Introduction —General information
(para 1)
PartⅡ Main body—Personality&Example
(para 2-3)
PartⅢ Conclusion—My idea
(para 4)
How to write beautiful articles
structure
language
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
personalities
examples
Linking words
Good expressions
Compound sentences
Topic and supporting sentences
handwriting
结构
复合句
中心句和支撑句
clear
wonderful
beautiful
Linking words
1.结构顺序：first of all, firstly/first,secondly/second next ,finally/in the end/ at last　　
2.并列补充、关系：What’s more（甚至）/ What’s worse（更糟糕的是）, even, especially, besides（除此之外）, moreover, furthermore, not only …but also
3.转折对比关系的：However, but, although
4.因果关系的：because, as，since, so, therefore, as a result ，because of
5.举例说明: For example； such as…
6.表达自己观点： In my opinion ,As far as I know / as far as I am concerned ，to tell the truth 说实话，generally speaking.
My father is in his fifties. He has worked in a local factory for years.You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father has always been kind and helpful. He is ready to help anyone. Hegave our TV to a family who could not afford one; he cares for the children
who have lost their parents; whenever he has some money left, he gives it
to someone in need.
My father has donated blood many times since 1990. The blood he has
donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his
body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand why my father always
seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he
has a heart full of love.
Task3 Pre-writing: Useful expressions
...is the person who has influenced me most
...is in his twenties/thirties/forties
You will not find anything unusual about him until...
...has always been kind/helpful/...
To my surprise,...
When I was a little girl/boy,
I could not understand why …
Now I realize that…
你的班级上周举办了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见。请根据表格中的要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人－－王老师。
基本信息 语文老师；四十多岁；
从毕业开始就一直在学校教书。
事例 1.工作勤勉认真,……；
2.闲暇时间帮助学业上有困难的学生；
3.积极参加公益事业，(献血多次,……)；
4.志愿去贫困地区支教(……)
你的看法 1.富有爱心，热爱教育事业；
2.希望……（1－2点）
Task 4 while-writing
项目 写作评价参考标准 分值 （15）
结构 结构完整，段落分明，层次清晰 4
内容 内容齐全，逻辑性强, 擅用连接词和多变句式(将简单句变成复合句，如 if条件状语从句，because原因状语从句，定语从句，宾语从句等，两至三句） 9
书写 书写规范、优美 2
PartⅠ General information
in his forties,
has worked… since…
not …until …
PartⅡ Personality & Example
work to high standards, so careful that…
it is his duty to…
have problems with
take an active part in
PartⅢ My idea
have a heart full of love
I hope
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is my Chinese teacher, Mr. Wang. He is in his forties. He has devoted himself to teaching in this school since he graduated from university. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
Mr. Wang always works to high standards all day long because he thinks it is his duty to treat his students as his children. For example. he often helps students in his spare time if they have difficulty with their schoolwork. What’s more, he takes an active part in charity work. I admire him most not only because he has donated his blood many times but also because he has decided to volunteer to teach in the poor areas.
Mr. Wang has a heart full of love and he loves his teaching career. I hope I can become an excellent teacher like him.
A sample
Homework
1.Rewrite the composition and try to make it better.
2.Work hard and try your best to be the person who can influence others.
in one’s eighties 在八十多岁时
(eighties 前可插入 early, late, mid-）
类似表达：
in one’s teens/ twenties/ thirties/ forties/…

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