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小升初话题写作
之人与自我
My Family
教学目标
通过分类问题，学生能够搭建写作框架；
通过回答引导问题，学生能够梳理具体的写作内容，
通过评分及作文修改，学生能够赏析他人的作文并反思自己作文的不足，提高文章分析能力及写作能力。
Engage
part 1
We are a family!
Let’s singing.
Let’s think.
How many people are there in your family
Who are they
Study
part 2
如果要描写你家人的情况，你会写哪些方面呢？
可以写外貌、性格、喜好、职业等等。
很好！那我们把这些内容分别放进四宫格里进行梳理吧。
Let’s think.
Let’s think.
My Family
How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
Let’s think.
My Family
How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
Let’s answer.
There are three people in my family.
How many people are there in your family
Let’s answer.
They are my father, my mother and me.
Who are they
Let’s think.
My Family
How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
Let’s answer.
My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher.
I am a pupil.
What do they do
Let’s answer.
My father is tall.
My mother is beautiful.
I am short.
.
What do they look like
Let’s think.
My Family
How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
Let’s answer.
My father likes playing computer games. My mother loves singing and dancing. I love reading books.
What do they like
Let’s think.
My family
How many people are there in your family
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
Let’s answer.
I have an interesting/lovely/amazing family.
Do you like your family
I love my family.
I love them all.
I feel lucky to be with them.
很好，接下来我们把刚刚的回答放进格子里面。
OK.
Let’s answer.
Let’s think.
My family
How many people are there in your family
2. What do they do And what do they look like
3. What do they like
4. Do you like your family
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me.
My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher. I am a pupil. My father is tall. My mother is beautiful. I am short.
My father likes playing computer games. My mother loves singing and dancing. I love reading books.
I love my family.
Let’s draft.
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher. I am a pupil. My father is tall. My mother is beautiful. I am short. My father likes playing computer games. My mother loves singing and dancing. I love reading books.
I love my family.
Let’s polish.
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a driver while my mother is a teacher. I am a pupil. My father is tall but fat. My mother is beautiful but strict with me.
My father likes playing computer games after work. My mother loves singing and dancing during the weekends. I love reading books after finishing homework.
I am lucky to have such a happy family.
增加细节表达，可以使文章内容更加丰富，也更有真实感。
具体时间描述
多样化的细节描述
Activate
part 3
Ask your partner the questions we’ve discussed today and finish the form below. Then write a composition about your partner’s family.
family members jobs appearance hobbies
Words you may need.
1 7
2 8
3 9
4 10
5 11
6 12
one
two
three
four
five
six
seven
eight
nine
ten
eleven
twelve
Words you may need.
13 14 15 16 17 18 19
20 30 40 50 60 70 80 90
100
thirteen
fourteen
fifteen
sixteen
seventeen
eighteen
nineteen
twenty
thirty
forty
fifty
sixty
seventy
eighty
ninety
a/one hundred
Words you may need.
grandmother
grandfather
mother
father
aunt
uncle
sister
brother
aunt
cousins
daughter
son
Let’s check.
Assessment Contents Excellent (9-10) Good (7-8) Fair 6 Improvement required
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Spelling
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