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小升初话题写作
之人与社会
A Letter to
the Teacher
教学目标
通过趣味视频，学生能够回忆自己最难忘的一位老师，
引出本课的写作主题；
通过四格法及问题引导，学生能够构建写作框架并组织语言；
通过修改打磨及复习书信格式，学生能够更好地掌握书信写作。
Engage
part 1
Let’s watch.
Answer the questions:
1.Do you like the teacher in the video Why
2.Do you have a teacher that impressed you
a lot(让你印象深刻)
3. If you can write a letter to your favourite
teacher, what will you say
Brainstorm
A Letter to
the Teacher
写信的原因
写信的目的
美好的祝愿
…
Study
part 2
先按照四格法把想写的内容进行分类。
圆圈图已经帮助我们打开了思维，接下来要怎么做呢？
对啦！ 那你来试试吧。
Let’s think.
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
信件开头
写信的原因
写信的目的
美好的祝愿
Let’s think.
是用提问的方式。
还记得我们是如何引出内容的吗？
没错！接下来试着提问吧。
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1.Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter？
3. What’s your purpose (目的)
4.What’s your wish
信件开头
写信的原因
写信的目的
美好祝愿
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1. Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter？
3. What’s your purpose (目的)
4.What’s your wish
Let’s answer.
Which teacher do you want to write to
I want to write to Miss White.
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1.Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter？
3. What’s your purpose (目的)
4.What’s your wish
Let’s answer.
Why do you write this letter
I heard that she is ill. I feel worried about her.
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1.Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter？
3. What’s your purpose (目的)
4.What’s your wish
Let’s answer.
What’s your purpose
I want to tell Miss White to have a good rest and drink some hot water.
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1.Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter？
3. What’s your purpose (目的)
4.What’s your wish
Let’s answer.
What’s your wish
I wish she could get better soon. We want to have her class.
Let’s answer.
接下来，我们把回答放进每个格子看看。
OK.
Let’s think.
A Letter to
the Teacher
1.Which teacher do you want
to write to
2.Why do you write this letter
3. What’s your purpose？
4.What’s your wish
I want to write to Miss White.
I heard that she is ill. I feel worried about her.
I wish she could get better soon. We want to have her class.
I want to tell Miss White to have a good rest and drink some hot water.
Let’s answer.
想一想，我们能够直接按照回答来写吗？
不能。
为什么？
因为这是一封信件，文中应该把“她”换成“你”。
那我们试着写一写吧。别忘了信件的格式哦。
Let’s draft.
Dear Miss White,
I heard that you are(she is) ill. I feel worried about you(her). I want to tell you(Miss White) to have a good rest and drink some hot water.
I wish you(she) could get better soon. We want to have your(her) class.
Yours,
Sarah
Let’s polish.
Dear Miss White,
I heard that you are ill. I feel worried about you. Do you see a doctor I would like(want) to tell you to have a good rest and drink some hot water.
I hope(wish) you can(could) get better soon. We are looking forward(want) to having(have) your class.
Yours,
Sarah
增加细节内容丰富情节
表达建议可以用较委婉的语气
hope比wish实现得可能性更大
can比could的语气更强，可能性更大
使用高级词汇为文章增色（have需要变形哦）
Activate
part 3
What do you want to say to your dad or mom Could you write a letter to him/her
Language points.
Let’s check.
Assessment Contents Excellent (9-10) Good (7-8) Fair 6 Improvement required
(1-5)
Spelling
Punctuation
Fluency

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