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小升初话题写作
之人与社会
Keep Healthy
教学目标
通过观看视频，学生能够了解一些常见的健康卫生习惯，并反思自己的日常生活，有哪些习惯是健康的，哪些是不健康的；
通过画圆圈图，学生能够发散思维，具体说明如何保持健康;
通过四格法搭建写作框架，学生能够更好的组织语言，进行主题仿写。
Engage
part 1
Let’s watch.
小思考：视频中的日常生活习惯有与你一样的吗？你的日常习惯是健康的吗？
Let’s think.
Study
part 2
Let’s think.
我们应该如何保持健康呢？
我们可以多做运动、多吃健康的食物。
很好。我们已经大致确定了写作的内容。接下来，你能用四格法写出作文大纲吗？
我来试试吧。
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
运动
食物
结论
开门见山，点题
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Let’s think.
在写说明文时，我们常常在文章开头就点名主题。这句话是文章的主旨句，起到总领全文的作用。
Health is very important to us.
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Let’s answer.
We can play football after school.
We can swim in the summer holiday.
We can run in the morning.
What sports could we do
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Let’s answer.
What food can we eat
We can eat vegetables and fruit.
Let’s think.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Let’s think.
在说明文的结尾，我们可以综合前面所写的内容，得出一个合理的结论，使文章前后呼应，圆满结束。比如：
If we follow these tips,
we will have a heathier body.
总结前文
再次点题
Let’s answer.
OK.
接下来，我们把刚刚的回答放进四格里面吧！
Let’s answer.
Keep Healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports. How
Secondly, we should eat healthy food. What food
The conclusion(结论).
Health is important.
Health is very important to us.
Firstly, we should do some sports to keep healthy.
We can play football after school.
We can swim in the summer holiday.
We can run in the morning.
Secondly, we can eat vegetables and fruit.
If we follow these tips,
we will have a heathier body.
Let’s draft.
Health is very important to us.
Firstly, we should do some sports to keep healthy.
We can play football after school. We can swim in the summer holiday. We can run in the morning.
Secondly, we can eat some vegetables and fruit.
If we follow these tips, we will have a heathier body.
思考：这篇文章虽然是完整的，但读起来是不是有点生硬呢？
Let’s polish.
Health is very important to us. Do you know how to keep healthy
Firstly, we should do some sports to keep healthy. For example, we can play football after school; we can swim in the summer holiday; we can run in the morning. Doing sports can make us stronger.
Secondly, we can eat healthy food, like vegetables and fruit, because they are good for our body.
If we follow these tips, we will have a heathier body.
Let’s make it together.
添加过渡句，引出下文
段落小结
因果关系句，使文章更有逻辑
呼吁读者，使读者也有参与感
Activate
part 3
下面这个小视频展示了平常生活中的小习惯会对我们的身体产生多大的影响。观看视频后，反思一下自己的日常习惯，然后写一篇作文，说明如何保持健康的习惯。
Words and phrases you may need.
play basketball
play football
play ping pong
Words and phrases you may need.
do morning exercises
do some cleaning
go swiming
Let’s check.
Assessment Contents Excellent (9-10) Good (7-8) Fair 6 Improvement required
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