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小升初话题写作
之人与自我
An Unlucky Day
主讲人
教学目标
通过图片情景导入，将Unlucky Day的经历创编成情境，激活学生相关经历的记忆;
通过思维引导，学生能够掌握写作要素，学会构思写作框架;
通过范文指导，学生能够进行主题仿写。
Engage
part 1
Last Friday was an unlucky day for Leo. Do you have an unlucky day, too
Let’s think.
1.What happened to you on that day
2. How did it happen
Let’s answer.
我们要描述某件事，这属于什么体裁的文章呢？我们应该用什么时态呢？
这是一篇记叙文。我们用一般过去时描述。
非常棒，那我们先用圆圈图把要写的内容整理一下吧。
好的。
Brainstorm
An Unlucky Day
时间
地点
人物
起因
经过
结局
高潮
Study
part 2
Let’s answer.
很好，现在大致确定我们要写什么内容了，那么接下来我们把这些信息进行分类吧。
好的。
Let’s think.
An Unlucky
Day
When did it happen
What happened
What is the end
How did you feel？
What happened
Let’s think.
An Unlucky
Day
When did it happen
What is the end
How did you feel？
Let’s answer.
When did it happen
It was last Friday.
What happened
Let’s think.
An Unlucky
Day
When did it happen
What is the end
How did you feel？
Let’s answer.
What happened
In the morning, I got up late.
BUS STATION
BUS
Let’s answer.
I ran to the bus stop, but I missed it. Then it started to rain, and I didn’t take the umbrella.
Let’s answer.
I ran to school. I was
late. The teacher was very angry.
Let’s answer.
In the afternoon, the class was over. I went
home.
Three children played football on the street and the football hit me.
I was hurt.
What happened
Let’s think.
An Unlucky
Day
When did it happen
What is the end
How did you feel？
Let’s answer.
What is the end
I got home and got sick.
How did you feel
I felt sad./I felt unhappy./I felt bad.
Let’s answer.
接下来我们把每部分的答案放进格子里看看吧。
好的！
What happened
Let’s think.
An Unlucky
Day
When did it happen
What is the end
How did you feel？
It was last Friday.
In the morning, I got up late. I ran to the bus stop, but I missed it. Then it started to rain, and I didn’t take the umbrella. I ran to school. I was late. The teacher was very angry.
In the afternoon, the class was over. I went home. Three children played football on the street, and the football hit me. I was hurt.
I got home and got sick. I felt unhappy.
Let’s draft.
It was last Friday. In the morning, I got up late. I ran to the bus stop, but I missed it. Then it started to rain, and I didn’t take the umbrella. I ran to school. I was late. The teacher was angry. In the afternoon, the class was over. I went home. Three children played football on the street and the football hit me. I was hurt. I got home and got sick. I felt unhappy.
Let’s polish.
It was last Friday. In the morning, I got up late. Then I ran to the bus stop, but I missed it. After that, it started to rain, and I didn’t take the umbrella. I had to run to school, but I was late. The teacher was very angry. In the afternoon, the class was over. I went home. Three children played football on the street. Suddenly, the football hit me. I was hurt. When I got home, I got sick. I felt very bad.
I was really unhappy! What an unlucky day!
Tips: 注意动词过去式的变形哦，尤其是不规则变形
Activate
part 3
根据我们今天所学内容, 在A(n) ________ Day 横线上填上合适的词，并依照本节课的思路，独自完成一篇记叙文。
Language points.
Let’s check.
Assessment Contents Excellent (9-10) Good (7-8) Fair 6 Improvement required
(1-5)
Spelling
Punctuation
Fluency

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