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2024年高考英语作文热点话题 保护野生动物
假定你是李华，你校国际部所有交换生将开展主题为“野生动物保护”的交流会，你将作为学生代表发言，请写一篇发言稿。要点提示:
1野生动物的现状;
2.造成野生动物减少或灭绝的原因
3保护的措施
范文二
Hello, everyone:Today, wildlife is in danger. Some of them are shot by hunters. Some of them lose their homes.I think the reason why wildlife is reducing is that some people hunt them illegally and damage their natural habitats. We must take measures to protect them! Here, I have some measures that I want to share with you. First of all, we should stop those who hunt them illegally. Secondly, we should establish reserves for them. Finally, we can design posters to inform people all over the world about the importance of protecting wildlife. It's crucial for us to work together in protecting wildlife. Why not take action now
范文二
Greetings, everyone:Presently, numerous wildlife species are facing imminent peril. Some fall victim to the relentless pursuits of hunters, while others are displaced from their habitats.In my perspective, the dwindling wildlife populations can be attributed to the unlawful activities of poachers and the consequential destruction of their natural habitats. It is imperative that we take effective measures to safeguard these invaluable creatures. Allow me to propose a series of strategies for your consideration. Firstly, we must actively apprehend and deter individuals engaged in illegal hunting practices. Secondly, it is essential to establish dedicated reserves to provide safe havens for wildlife. Lastly, a global awareness campaign through thoughtfully designed posters can effectively educate and rally people worldwide to join the cause of wildlife conservation. It is of utmost importance that we unite in our efforts to protect these magnificent creatures.Why not seize the moment and initiate action
大家好：如今，许多野生动物物种正面临着紧迫的危险。一些动物成为了猎人无情追捕的目标，而另一些动物则失去了它们的栖息地。我认为野生动物数量减少的原因是非法偷猎者的活动以及由此导致的栖息地破坏。我们必须采取有效措施来保护这些宝贵的生物。让我提出一系列策略供大家考虑。首先，我们必须积极抓捕和阻止从事非法狩猎行为的人。其次，建立专门的自然保护区为野生动物提供安全的栖息地至关重要。最后，通过精心设计的海报进行全球宣传活动，有效地向全世界的人们普及保护野生动物的重要性，并号召大家加入这项事业。我们团结一致，共同努力保护这些壮丽的生物是至关重要的。为什么不抓住机会，立即行动呢？
范文一与范文二优化改写理由供参考
1.Greetings, everyone，使用 "Greetings" 来代替 "Hello"，使开头更正式和富有礼貌。
2.Presently, numerous wildlife species are facing imminent peril.
使用 "Presently" 表示目前的情况，使用 "numerous" 表示大量的野生动物物种，使用 "imminent peril" 表示临近的危险，增加文章的表达力和紧迫感。
3.Some fall victim to the relentless pursuits of hunters, while others are displaced from their habitats.使用 "fall victim to" 表示成为...的受害者，使用 "relentless pursuits" 表示无情的追逐，使用 "displaced from"表示被迫离开，使用这些短语增强描述的强度和准确性。
4.In my perspective, the dwindling wildlife populations can be attributed to the unlawful activities of poachers and the consequential destruction of their natural habitats.使用 "In my perspective" 代替 "I think"，使表达更加正式，使用 "dwindling wildlife populations" 表示减少的野生动物种群，使用 "can be attributed to" 表示可以归因于，使用 "unlawful activities" 和 "consequential destruction" 表示非法活动和相关的破坏，使句子更具准确性和专业性。
5.It is imperative that we take effective measures to safeguard these invaluable creatures.使用 "It is imperative that" 表示必须，使用 "take effective measures" 表示采取有效措施，使用 "safeguard" 表示保护，使句子更加强调保护野生动物的紧迫性和重要性。
6.Allow me to propose a series of strategies for your consideration.使用 "Allow me to" 表示请允许我，使用 "propose a series of strategies" 表示提出一系列的策略，使句子更加礼貌和清晰。
7.Firstly, we must actively apprehend and deter individuals engaged in illegal hunting practices.使用 "Firstly" 表示首先，使用 "actively apprehend and deter" 表示积极逮捕和阻止，使句子更具条理性和强调行动的必要性。
8.Secondly, it is essential to establish dedicated reserves to provide safe havens for wildlife.使用 "Secondly" 表示其次，使用 "essential" 表示必要的，使用 "establish dedicated reserves" 表示建立专门保护区，使句子更加明确和突出保护区的重要性。
9.Lastly, a global awareness campaign through thoughtfully designed posters can effectively educate and rally people worldwide to join the cause of wildlife conservation.使用 "Lastly" 表示最后，使用 "a global awareness campaign" 表示全球意识活动，使用 "thoughtfully designed posters" 表示精心设计的海报，使用 "effectively educate and rally" 表示有效教育和动员，使句子更具描述力和动员力。
10.It is of utmost importance that we unite in our efforts to protect these magnificent creatures. Why not seize the moment and initiate action 使用 "It is of utmost importance" 表示极为重要，使用 "unite in our efforts" 表示团结一致，使用 "seize the moment and initiate action" 表示抓住机会，采取行动，使句子更加强调保护野生动物的迫切性和行动的必要性。

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