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2024年河南中考英语写作话题——校园生活的变化
Simon是三年前来过我们学校的丹麦交流生。在最近一次的“空中课堂”中，他听说了国内实行了“双减”政策来减少学生的学习负担。他非常想知道国内学生校园生活的变化。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.学校课程，时间或设施等发生的变化
2.学校开展的活动
你对学校生活的看法
范文一
Dear Simon,
I'm a middle school student named Li Hua. It's my great honor to tell you about my school.
In recent years, the government has implemented a Double Reduction policy. This has brought about significant changes to our school.
Firstly, we have more courses such as Mental Health and Label. These lessons help us develop the ability of being diligent. Moreover, it's an effective way for us to maintain a balance between study and rest. Secondly, we now have more time to work on our homework together in the afternoon as it allows us to review the knowledge efficiently. A new sports centre has been added where we often play various ball games.Thirdly, an art festival is held annually. We can broaden our horizons through these activities and cultivate an appreciation for art.
I'm very satisfied with these changes as they have helped to reduce our stress.
范文二
Dear Simon,
My name is Li Hua, and as a middle school student in China, I am delighted to share updates about my school with you.
In response to the government's recent Double Reduction policy, my school has adopted several changes to enhance our educational experience.To begin with, we have introduced new courses, including Mental Health and Label, which are instrumental in fostering our diligence. This balanced approach ensures we have ample time for rest and relaxation outside our academic commitments.Secondly, we now dedicate more time in the afternoon to collaborative homework sessions, promoting efficient knowledge review. Moreover, our school has inaugurated a sports centre, serving as a venue for us to engage in a variety of ball games.Lastly, we organize an annual art festival, an avenue for us to expand our cultural perspectives and nurture our artistic sensibilities.
I find these changes quite beneficial, particularly in reducing academic stress, rendering school life more enjoyable and fulfilling.
亲爱的Simon:
我叫李华,作为一名中学生,我很高兴与你分享我学校的最新情况。
为响应政府最近的“双减”政策,我的学校采取了几项措施来提升我们的教育体验。
首先,我们开设了新的课程,包括“心理健康”和“爱心标签”,这些对培养我们的勤奋很有帮助。这种均衡的方法确保我们在学业之外有充足的时间休息和放松。
其次,我们现在在下午专门花更多时间进行合作作业,促进有效的知识复习。此外,我校还建立了一个体育中心,作为我们参与各种球类运动的场所。
最后,我们每年组织一次艺术节,这为我们扩展文化视野和培养艺术素养提供了一个途径。
我发现这些变化非常有益,特别是在减轻学业压力方面,使学校生活更加愉快和充实。
范文一与范文二优化润色理由
1."I'm a middle school student named Li Hua. It's my great honor to tell you about my school." 改为"My name is Li Hua, and as a middle school student in China, I am delighted to share updates about my school with you." 增加了邮件的亲切感和表达的自然性。
2."we now have more time to work on our homework together in the afternoon" 改为"we now dedicate more time in the afternoon to collaborative homework sessions" 使表达更准确和专业。
3."I'm very satisfied with these changes as they have helped to reduce our stress." 改为"I find these changes quite beneficial, particularly in reducing academic stress, rendering school life more enjoyable and fulfilling." 增强了对学校生活积极变化的赞美。

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