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选择性必修第三册 Unit 2单元写作指导与演练
Write a story of aliens
单元写作 早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一个外星人的故事，讲述偶遇外星人的经历属于想象类作文,主要记述遇到外星人的背景,整个事件的过程并简单发表一下对该事件的感想。体裁以记叙文为主。
常用表达 (1)事件及过程 ①alien n.外星人 ②creature n.生物 ③planet n.行星,地球 ④mysterious adj.神秘的 ⑤intelligent adj.聪明的,智商高的 ⑥exist vi.存在 ⑦witness v.&n.目击,见证;目击者 ⑧land vi.&vt.(使)着陆 ⑨catch sight of 看见 (2)感受 ①unforgettable adj.令人难忘的 ②fantastic adj.奇妙的,极好的
该篇书面表达要求考生以“偶遇外星人”为主题写一遍记叙文， 重点写偶遇外星人的精彩，难忘的时刻。文章属于记叙文，主要使用第一人称，一般过去时。
考生应当仔细阅读题干所列要点，确保写作时不遗漏；然后在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可分为三段写作。首段简述事件，引入文章主题；第二段详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景）；第三段表达感受。在遣词造句上，应当注意使用较复杂的句型和高级词汇，并注意合理使用连接成分，增强文章的逻辑性。
段落 内容 句子设计
第一段 简述事件 I was doing sth. when I caught sight of … Out of the UFO came…
第二段 详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景 Frightened by…, I … Hardly had … seen … when… UFO It flew so fast that… So fascinated was … by…
第三段 表达感受。 What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was! …never forget this fantastic experience.
开始部分 ①I was having supper when I caught sight of a shining UFO flying in the sky. 我正在吃晚饭,突然看见一个发光的不明飞行物在天空中飞行。 ②Out of the UFO came a strange creature with a big head and eyes. 从不明飞行物里出来一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。
主体部分 ①Frightened by the strange creature, I ran away as fast as I could. 我被那个奇怪的生物吓坏了,尽可能快地跑开了。 ②Hardly had he seen me when he smiled and walked toward me. 他一看见我就微笑着向我走来。 ③It flew so fast that I was almost scared to death. 它飞得那么快,差点把我吓死了。 ④So fascinated was I by the beautiful scene of space that I forgot to return to the earth. 我被太空美丽的景色迷住了,以至于我忘记了回到地球。
结尾部分 ①What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was! 这是一次多么美好和难忘的经历啊! ②I’ll never forget this fantastic experience. 我永远不会忘记这次奇妙的经历。
假定你是李华,请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记,记述你遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下:
　　1.周四晚上遇到一个外星人(个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤);
　　2.乘坐UFO,遨游太空,欣赏夜景;
　　3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题
1. 文体：记叙文。
2. 时态：一般现在时
3. 人称：第一人称为主
谋篇
第一段：简述事件，引入文章主题；
第二段：详细记述过程（乘坐飞碟；遨游太空；欣赏夜景）；
第三段：表达感受。
遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1．catch sight of 看见
2．UFO 不明飞行物
3．land on the ground 登上陆地
4．alien 不明飞行物
5．wave 挥手
【连词成句】
1.我正在做作业的时候,突然我看到一个闪闪发光的UFO在天空中越来越近,最终降落在地面上。(be doing...when...)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.然后一个长着大脑袋和大眼睛,棕色皮肤的很矮的外星人从里面出来了。(with)
____________________________________________________________________________________________3.(一句多译)他一看见我,就向我挥手,邀请我乘UFO去旅行。
(1) ______________________________________________________________________________________.(as soon as/the moment)
(2)________________________________________________________________________________(on/upon doing sth.)
4.它飞得如此快,以至于我们很快就进入了太空。 (so...that...倒装句)
____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.从UFO向外看,我看到了我们生活的美丽的蓝色地球和其他闪亮的星星在黑暗的空间里转动。(分词作状语;定语从句)
____________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.大概过了一个小时,我请求外星人把我送到地球上去。(what)
____________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.这是一次多么精彩和难忘的经历啊! (感叹句)
____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
1. I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground.
2. Then a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin came out of it.
3.(1)As soon as/The moment he saw me, he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO.(as soon as/the moment)
(2)On/Upon seeing me,he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO.(on/upon doing sth.)
4. So fast did it fly that we were in space in a short time.
5. Looking out of the UFO, I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space.
6.After what seemed an hour, I asked the alien to send me to the earth.
7. What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was!
【句式升级】
1.用倒装句改写句2
____________________________________________________________________________________________2.用hardly...when...改写句3
__________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
1. Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin.
2. Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO.
组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
　On Thursday evening, I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground. Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin.
Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO and I agreed. So fast did it fly that we were in space in a short time. Looking out of the UFO, I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space. What a fantastic scene! After what seemed an hour, I asked the alien to send me to the earth.
What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was!
A
假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇周记，记述你在太空探索时候遇到外星人的一次经历。内容如下：
1.周四晚上遇到一个外星人（个子矮、头和眼睛很大、棕色皮肤）；
2.乘坐UFO，遨游太空，欣赏夜景；
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【佳作欣赏】
On Thursday evening, I was doing my homework when suddenly I caught sight of a shining UFO in the sky coming nearer and nearer and eventually landed on the ground. Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin.
Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO and I agreed. So fast did it fly that we were in space in a short time. Looking out of the UFO, I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space. What a fantastic scene! After what seemed an hour, I asked the alien to send me to the earth.
What a wonderful and unforgettable experience it was!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生用英语一篇周记，记录在太空探索时候遇到外星人的一次经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最后：eventually→finally
美丽的：beautiful→pretty
快地：fast→swiftly
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then out of it came a very short alien with a big head and eyes and brown skin.
拓展句：Then out of it came a very short alien, who had big head and eyes and brown skin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hardly had he seen me when he waved to me and invited me to go travelling in the UFO and I agreed. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句，部分倒装句。）
【高分句型2】Looking out of the UFO, I saw the beautiful blue earth on which we live and other shining stars circling in dark space.（运用了“介词on+which”引导限定性定语从句）
B
（2024山东青岛·高二上学期期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mrs. White, the English teacher, gave the class a writing task. “Write about your summer vacation,” she said. “Be. as creative as you can. But make sure you use proper spelling and grammar.”
That night Sam stared at a blank sheet of paper at his desk. What could he write about his boring summer vacation He’d actually been happy to get back to school.
So he wrote what he wanted. Not an essay (短文) but a short story, science fiction. It was about a distant planet that didn’t have summer - it was spring all the time. And it didn’t have vacations either. The aliens (外星人) just worked 24 hours a day!
Sam handed in the story soon. However, later that night he lay awake until 3A．m. , thinking. “ How will Mrs. White like my writing ” English was his favorite. Maybe he would ask Mrs. White for a chance to write another one she wanted.
The next morning, Sam got to school, only to know Mrs. White had already read and graded the essays.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为80左右；
2. 续写部分的开头已为你写好。
Worried and nervous, he saw Mrs. White came in and the English class began.
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【佳作欣赏】
Worried and nervous, he saw Mrs. White came in and the English class began. Sam thought he might get an F. However, to his surprise, Mrs. White read out loud his story to the class, and praised him for his creativity and originality. She said that she was impressed by how he had combined science fiction with the topic of summer vacation. Sam felt like he was dreaming. He never expected his story to be so well-received. He was beaming with pride and happiness, and looked at his classmates, who were nodding in agreement.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Sam的暑假返校后，老师让他们写一篇和暑假相关的文章。Sam没有选择写真实的暑假经历，反而创作了一篇科幻小说。在上交了作业后，Sam有点后悔，认为自己不该写那样的话题。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由段首句内容“他又担心又紧张，看到Mrs. White进来了，英语课开始了。”可知，本段可描写Sam认为自己的等级会很低，但结果却出乎他的意料，老师表扬了他的创新。
2.续写线索：
老师已经评分——Sam认为作文可能等级很低——老师当众读Sam的文章——表扬Sam的创新——Sam的感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①认为：think/believe
②.期待：expect/anticipate
③.结合：combine/connect
情绪类
①.让某人吃惊的是：to one’s surprise/to one’s astonishment
②.表扬：praise/commend
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She said that she was impressed by how he had combined science fiction with the topic of summer vacation.（运用了that和how引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. He was beaming with pride and happiness, and looked at his classmates, who were nodding in agreement.（运用了who引导非限制性定语从句）
C
（2024四川泸州高二上学期期末）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Writing Task
The summer vacation was over, so Tim and his classmates came back to school happily.
On the first day of school, Mrs Green, Tim’s English teacher, gave the class a writing task. “Boys and girls, today’s homework is to write something in some way that is related to your summer vacation, ”she said. “Be as creative as you can. But” the teacher added, “make sure you use proper spelling and grammar. ”
That night, Tim sat at his desk and decided to go about this writing homework. He stared at the blank sheet paper for quite a few minutes, thinking what to write about. To tell the truth, this time, he didn’t want to write about his summer vacation as usual. What could he write about, except a dog, a water park, a visit to his grandma with his father, two weeks of camp, and … Boring … He’d actually been happy to get back to school. But he made up his mind to write what he really wanted. It was not an essay(短文) at all but a short story, a science fiction(科幻小说). It was about a distant planet that didn’t have summer — it was spring all the time. And it didn’t have vacation either. The aliens(外星人) on the planet worked 24 hours a day. They wished they had vacations one day.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1
The next morning he handed in the story, but later that night he lay awake until I am, thinking, “Why did I write such a story ”
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Paragraph 2
But when he got to class the following day, what the teacher said was a great surprise to him.
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【佳作欣赏】
The next morning he handed in the story, but later that night he lay awake until I am, thinking, “Why did I write such a story ” He worried that the teacher might not like it and give him a low score. He couldn’t help but regret not writing about something real. But he reminded himself that he had followed his heart and had fun writing the story. The aliens he had imagined might be unrealistic, but the lesson they taught him was not. He realized that there are always people who work hard and hope to have a better life, just like the aliens he created. He felt a sense of relief that he had written down his thoughts, and decided to keep writing stories in his own way.
But when he got to class the following day, what the teacher said was a great surprise to him. Mrs Green read out loud his story to the class, and praised him for his creativity and originality. She said that she was impressed by how he had combined science fiction with the topic of summer vacation. Tim felt like he was dreaming. He never expected his story to be so well-received. He was beaming with pride and happiness, and looked at his classmates, who were nodding in agreement.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tim的暑假返校后，老师让他们写一篇和暑假相关的文章。Tim没有选择写真实的暑假经历，反而创作了一篇科幻小说。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，他把故事交了上来，但那天晚上他躺在床上一直睡不着，一直想：“我为什么要写这样一个故事 ””可知，第一段可描写Tim辗转反侧，担心老师不会喜欢自己的文章。
②由第二段首句内容“但是当他第二天去上课时，老师说的话让他大吃一惊。”可知，第二段可描写老师对他的文章大加赞许。
2.续写线索：Tim返校后，老师布置了写作任务——Tim不想写暑假里的经历——Tim决定写出自己想要写的东西——Tim有点担心老师不喜欢他的文章——老师非常喜欢Tim的文章
3.词汇激活
行为类
①忍不住：can’t help but do/can’t help doing
②决定：decide/determine/make up one’s mind
③称赞：praise/applaud
情绪类
①担心的：worried/concerned
②幸福：happiness/pleasure/felicity
【点睛】【高分句型1】 He worried that the teacher might not like it and give him a low score. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】He was beaming with pride and happiness, and looked at his classmates, who were nodding in agreement.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
D
根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以“Meeting an alien”为题写一篇150词左右的英语短文，想象一下外星人带你参观的外星科技生活。写作要点如下：
1. 遇见外星人并被带到外星球；
2. 参观了他们的智能化房子；
3. 房子是如何为人服务的；
4. 外星人邀请你留下来，但你还是选择回到了地球与家人和朋友团聚。
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【佳作欣赏】
Meeting an alien
One day, on my way home, something amazing happened. I met an alien and he invited me to visit his planet. With excitement in my heart, I got on the UFO and it took me to the dark space.
When landing, I was taken to a house. To begin with, controlled by computers, the house will learn about the master’s likes and dislikes and communicate with him. For example, it will send the master messages to inform its master there is a lack of daily goods. Besides, the instant it senses its master is exhausted, the house can adjust itself to make the surroundings comfortable. In addition, a solar-powered system will recycle water and turn waste into fuel, which is of great benefit to the environment.
In the end, an invitation to stay was sent to me. Out of my affection to my family and friends, I refused his kindness and returned to the Earth.
What an unforgettable experience!
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。要求考生根据所给内容，通过合理的想象，以“Meeting an alien”为题写一篇150词左右的英语短文，想象一下外星人带你参观的外星科技生活。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发生：happen→ take place
交流：communicate→ interact
喜爱： affection→ passion
拒绝：refuse→ decline
2. 句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：I met an alien and he invited me to visit his planet.
拓展句：I met an alien who invited me to visit his planet.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, a solar-powered system will recycle water and turn waste into fuel, which is of great benefit to the environment.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, the instant it senses its master is exhausted, the house can adjust itself to make the surroundings comfortable.（the instant引导的时间状语从句）

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