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Unit4 History and traditions
Writing
Learning objectives
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analyze the structure and language feature of the introductory sentences with different senses;
04
understand a descriptive paragraph about Ireland;
write your own description of an interesting, exciting or surprising place;
By the end of this class, you will be able to:
employ five senses and sentence patterns to perfect your writing.
Let's enjoy our trip to Ireland!
Q:Have you ever been to Ireland
Lead -in
Activity 1:
Please watch a video and then describe your first impression of the country.
What can you see in the video And what’s your feeling
Warming Up : Enjoy a video about Ireland
What’s your first impression of Ireland’s countryside
beautiful
amazing
fascinating
breathtaking
impressive/attractive
charming
Emerald Isle
绿宝石岛
Introductory sentence:
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Ending sentence:
And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Activity 2：Please identify and underline the paragraph’s
introductory and ending sentences to get your second impression of the country.
Activity 3：Please read the passage and then describe your third impression of the country.
Try to use the words or phrases in the reading passage to describe these pictures.
rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
起伏的绿色山丘上点缀着牛羊
beautiful countryside美丽的乡村
green counties 绿色城乡
peaceful landscape
宁静的风景
Emerald Isle
翡翠岛
What can you see in Ireland’s countryside
the roar of the ocean waves
海浪的咆哮声
the cries of the seabirds
海鸟的鸣叫声
the music of the coast
海边音乐
What can you hear in Ireland’s coast
delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew
爱尔兰式百里香炖牛肉
traditional music and dancing
a glass of wine
local beer
What can you taste, see and hear in Ireland’s village pub
Irish dance –
Hard shoes dance
爱尔兰式踢踏舞
The paragraph talks about different senses in different places.
Why does the author describe Irish countryside from different senses
It makes the description more vivid and detailed.
sensory details(感官细节）
(details that you can observe through your senses)
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
2. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
3. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
4. … stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
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The peaceful landscape(风景/景色) of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
Activity 4 Reading for writing
“绿宝石岛”风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，牛羊点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
a true feast for the eyes 视觉的盛宴
rolling green hills 连绵起伏的青山
be dotted with 布满；点缀着
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
仿写：大理风光秀美，青山连绵起伏，白云点
缀其中，堪称一场真正的视觉盛宴。
... is a feast for the eyes, with ...
The beautiful landscape of Dali is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with white clouds.
Appreciation
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And down by the sea, the roar(咆哮) of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up(组成) the music of the coast.
Reading for Details – sentence 5
海边波浪咆哮，海鸟鸣叫，奏响了海岸交响乐。
the roar of the ocean waves 海浪的咆哮声
the cries of the seabirds 海鸟的叫声
music of the coast 海岸交响乐
2. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of
the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
By the sea, the roar...and cries... make up the music...
仿写：风的低语，海浪的叮咚和鸟鸣声奏响了自然交响曲。
And down by the lake,the ______of the wind, the tinkling （叮咚）
of the lake waves and the ______ of the birds __________ the
music of the nature.
whisper
cries
make up
Appreciation
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On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin,
and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Reading for Details – sentence 6
在山里宁静的早晨，感受阳光洒落在你身上，呼吸着鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
feel the sun on your skin 感受阳光照在脸上的感觉
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers 闻鲜花香甜的气息
greet...with...以...来欢迎/迎接
What is the meaning of “On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”
在一个安静的早晨，在山间感受太阳照在皮肤上，呼吸新鲜的花香，而鸟儿们用它们的晨歌迎接新的一天。
What rhetorical device (修辞手法）does the writer use
The writer uses personification （拟人）as a rhetorical device.
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
在阳光明媚的早晨，骑行于古城，感受阳光抚摸你的皮肤，呼吸着鲜花甜美的芬芳，鸟儿在欢快地歌唱，好像在热情地迎接我们。
On a Sunny morning, _________around the ancient city,
_______ the sunlight on your skin and ______ in the sweet scent of fresh flowers. Birds are _______happily as if they were warmly ________ us.
cycle
feel
breathe
singing
greeting
Appreciation
With this all beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing and dining.To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
Reading for Details – Sentence 7,8,9
To have a chance of experiencing this 为了有机会感受
relax with a glass of wine or a local beer 喝上一杯葡萄酒或本地的啤酒放松一下
Better yet 更为美妙的是
这般美景，造就了爱尔兰音乐、舞蹈及菜肴等独有的民间传统也就不足为奇了。要想体验这一切，可以去一家乡村酒吧，喝上一杯葡萄酒或本地的啤酒放松一下。更为美妙的是，可品尝美味的爱尔兰传统炖牛肉。
Appreciation
To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
仿写：为了有机会感受大理的传统和风俗，可以去茶馆(teahouse)，喝一杯三道茶(3-course tea of Bai)放松一下。更为美妙的是可品尝美味传统的的菌汤火锅(mushroom hot pot)
Care for the environment! Because we have only one earth,this is our commom home.
Let’s act together to protect our homeland
Homework
Use what you have learnt in this class to describe an interesting, exciting, or surprising place.

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