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16.3
I go to school.
I go to school _______. (加副词）
I go to school happily ______________.(加介词短语）
I go to school happily with my friends________. （加方式状语）
I go to school happily with my friends by bike_________.
(加时间状语）
I go to school happily with my friends by bike every day
_________________________.(加目的状语）
happily
with my friends
by bike
every day
to gain/ acquire knowledge
I go to school happily with my friends by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge，______________________________________________.
(使得我们被重点大学录取）(加结果状语）
_________________________, (加with的复合结构）I go to school happily with my friends by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge，thus making us admitted to key university.
With my homework finished，I go to school happily with my friends，______________________（加同位语）,by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge，thus making us admitted to key university.
thus making us admitted to key university
With my homework finished
Xiao Ming and Xiao Hong
With my homework finished, I go to school happily with my friends , Xiao Ming and Xiao Hong, by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge, thus making us admitted to key university,___________________________________.
(举例说明）
such as Tsinghua and Peking University
_______________, （加状语从句）, I go to school happily with my friends, Xiao Ming and Xiao Hong, by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge，thus making us admitted to key university.
With my homework finished, I go to school happily with my friends , Xiao Ming and Xiao Hong, by bike every day to gain/ acquire knowledge，thus making us admitted to key university,________________________________.(定语从句）
which is important/ significant to me
If it doesn’t rain
添加修饰成分
1添加单词（形容词、副词）
2 添加短语
3添加从句（定语从句、状语从句）
方式/ 时间/目的/结果状语
同位语短语
With的复合结构
举例说明
试题要求：你是一名中学生，请以My colorful school life为题，写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。
要点提示：1认真听讲
2完成作业
3经常参加体育锻炼
4在图书馆阅读
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard. ____________________________________________
May there always be colorful life around my school.
步骤一：列要点
1认真听讲
listen carefully/ attentively
2完成作业
finish homework
3经常参加体育锻炼
often take part in exercise
4在图书馆阅读
read in the library
步骤二：造简单句(适当增加内容）
1 I listen _____________ attentively __________.
2 I finish my homework ____________.
3 I often take part in exercise_________________.
4 I do some reading in the ______library.
in the class
after class
with my classmates
school
to the teacher
步骤三：扩展句子
1. I listen to the teachers attentively in the class_________________________________________ .
(以至于我能听懂老师说了什么) 增加目的状语从句
2. I finish my homework after class, ____________________________（这对我来说很容易）增加定语从句
so that I can understand what the teachers say
which is a piece of cake for me.
3. I often take part in exercise with my classmates, ______________________________________________________________（例如踢足球，游泳，打羽毛球等的）举例说明
4. I often do some reading in the school library ________________________________.(当我课后无事可做时。） 增加时间状语从句
such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.
when I have nothing to do after class
步骤四：润色句子
高考英语作文评分细则，第五档（21-25分）要求：
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
用高级词汇
句式多样化
1. I listen to the teachers attentively inn the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.
用it作形式主语
____________________(对我来说有必要）listen to the teachers attentively in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.
倒装
I listen to the teachers so attentively in the class that I can understand what the teachers say.
So _______________listen to the teachers in the class that I can understand what the teachers say.
It is necessary for me to
attentively do I
2.I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.
认真对待
take sth. seriously
_______________________and finish it ______, which is a piece of cake for me.
I take homework seriously
in time
3.___________________________（目的状语）, I often take part in ___________exercises with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.
In order to build up my body
a variety of
4. I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.
养成了…的习惯
develop/ form/ get into the habit of
____________________________________and do some reading ____________________when I have nothing to do after class.
________________________________________(原因状语从句）I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on achieving success.
________________________ (分词作状语）I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on achieving success.
Because I am interested in reading books,
I get into the habit of going to the library
on achieving success
Interested in reading books
步骤五：连句成篇
过渡词
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.（原文已给）
First of all(过渡词), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. What’s more(过渡词), I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(过渡词), In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally(过渡词), Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.
May there always be colorful life around my school.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：1. 词数100左右；短文题目和首句已为你写好。
There are many respectable people around us. I have great admiration for Mr. Zhong, my head teacher, a middle-aged man of few words. The reasons are as follows.
1 他帮助我们。
He came to our aid.
2 他是希望的灯塔。
He is a beacon of hope.
3他经验丰富。
He has rich experience.
4 他专心于工作。
He is devoted to his work.
1He came to our aid.
2He is a beacon of hope.
3He has rich experience.
4He is devoted to his work.
1添加词汇（形容词、副词）
2 添加短语（方式/ 时间/目的/结果状语、
同位语短语、With的复合结构、举例说明）
3参考句型：让步状语从句，非限制性定从，名词性从句，强调句型，倒装，虚拟，独立主格结构
参考词汇：don’t hesitate to do sth; indeed; give sb. access to…使某人接触到…；shape our character ; devotion; in some sense; on top of that; most importantly
First of all, his helpfulness and kindness win him great popularity and a good reputation among us. Whatever difficulties we come across, he doesn't hesitate to come to our aid. In some sense, he is indeed a beacon of hope, encouraging us never to give up. On top of that, it is his rich experience and devotion to teaching that not only give us easy access to professional knowledge but most importantly shape our character.
Such is Mr. Zhong that I have the highest respect for him.
Homework
Swap your composition with your partner and polish it.

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