2024届高考英语读后续写:一起照看玫瑰花 任务单素材

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2024届高考英语读后续写:一起照看玫瑰花 任务单素材

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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The peaceful little town Cherrywood Dale was made up of colorful houses, each one home to a warm-hearted family. The neighbors were the salt of the earth, always ready to lend a helping hand to one another. However, among them was an exception, an old man named Mr. Johnson, who lived alone in a small cottage.
宁静的小镇Cherrywood Dale由五颜六色的房子组成,每栋房子都有一个热心的家庭。邻居们是地球上的盐,总是乐于互相帮助。然而,其中有一个例外,一位名叫约翰逊先生的老人,他独自住在一间小屋里。
Mr. Johnson was known for his excellent gardening skills. His gift for gardening had turned his backyard into a beautiful rose garden. However, his passionate devotion to gardening had left him with little time for personal life. His only company was his beloved roses.
约翰逊先生以其高超的园艺技巧而闻名。他的园艺天赋把他的后院变成了一个美丽的玫瑰园。然而,他对园艺的热情投入使他几乎没有时间进行个人生活。他唯一的伙伴是他心爱的玫瑰。
Not far from Mr. Johnson’s cottage lived a young couple, Tom and Emily. They were the complete opposite of Mr. Johnson—lively and sociable, always up to something new and exciting. Their home was always filled with the sound of laughter and good cheer. They had a young son named Charlie, who was Mr. Johnson’s favorite neighbor. Charlie’s infectious laughter and boundless energy brought some life to Mr. Johnson’s quiet existence.
约翰逊先生的小屋不远处住着一对年轻夫妇,汤姆和埃米莉。他们与约翰逊先生完全相反——活泼、善于交际,总是做一些新的、令人兴奋的事情。他们的家里总是充满了欢声笑语。他们有一个小儿子,名叫查理,是约翰逊先生最喜欢的邻居。查理富有感染力的笑声和无穷的能量给约翰逊先生平静的生活带来了一些活力。
One day, Charlie decided to surprise Mr. Johnson by decorating his front yard for the upcoming Harvest Festival. He knew how much Mr. Johnson loved autumn and the changing of the leaves. Charlie enlisted the help of his parents and set to work, painting pumpkins(南瓜)and hanging decorations. They were so caught up in their creation that they ended up accidentally stepping on Mr. Johnson’s prize-winning roses.
一天,查理决定给约翰逊一个惊喜,为即将到来的丰收节装饰他的前院。他知道约翰逊先生是多么喜欢秋天和树叶的变化。查理在父母的帮助下开始工作,画南瓜(南瓜)和悬挂的装饰品。他们全神贯注于创作,结果不小心踩到了约翰逊先生的获奖玫瑰。
The next morning, Mr. Johnson came out of his cottage and saw the beautiful display, his face shining with delight. But his smile quickly turned into a frown(皱眉)when he saw the destroyed roses. He called over Tom and Emily, who were equally displeased by what had happened. They apologized sincerely, promising to replace the roses, but Mr. Johnson was unmoved. The once friendly neighbors became locked in an uneasy standoff. Charlie was heartbroken, not understanding why Mr. Johnson wouldn’t accept their apology.
第二天早上,约翰逊先生走出小屋,看到了美丽的展品,脸上露出喜悦的光芒。但他的笑容很快变成了皱眉(皱眉)当他看到被毁的玫瑰时。他把汤姆和埃米莉叫了过来,他们对所发生的事情同样感到不快。他们真诚地道歉,承诺更换玫瑰,但约翰逊先生不为所动。曾经友好的邻居陷入了令人不安的僵局。查理心碎了,不明白约翰逊为什么不接受他们的道歉。
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then one afternoon,Emily decided to make the first move.
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Mr.Johnston was moved by the three 's sincere understanding.
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【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了小镇上住着独居老人Mr. Johnson,终日与心爱的玫瑰花作伴,他的邻居Tom和Emily夫妇很喜欢社交,在丰收节快来临时,这一家人想要给Mr. Johnson一个惊喜,却不小心毁坏了玫瑰花,Mr. Johnson与这一家人的关系也冷淡了许多。Emily主动更换了这些玫瑰并精心打理,Mr. Johnson也为自己的不当行为道歉,最终Mr. Johnson也敞开心扉的故事。
详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一天下午,艾米丽决定迈出第一步。”可知,第一段可描写Emily替换并打理玫瑰,Mr. Johnson意识到错误并道歉。
②由第二段首句内容“约翰逊先生被三人真诚的理解所感动。”可知,第二段可描写约翰逊先生和这家人互动,敞开心扉。
2.续写线索:寻找并替换玫瑰——Johnson意识到问题并道歉——一起照顾玫瑰直到开放——与这家人互动——敞开心扉
3词汇激活
行为类
①.意识到:realize/be aware
②.决定:make up one’s mind/be determined to do
情绪类
①.喜爱:love/be fond of /adore
②.快乐:happiness/cheer/joy
【点睛】[高分句型1]. However, what the family cared most was whether what they did could make for his loss and cheered him up.(由连接词what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]. As the Harvest Festival approached, the flowers unfolded smiles gradually, which revived his garden.(由as引导的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
参考答案:
Then one afternoon Emily decided to make the first move. She went to local florist’s and asked around for the roses that looked like Mr. Johnson’s. Immediately she managed to replace the destroyed roses and tended the delicate flowers cautiously with the help of Tom and Charlie. Seeing the thoughtful acts, Mr. Johnson finally realized that he overreacted that day and made an apology for his misbehavior. However, what the family cared most was whether what they did could make for his loss and cheered him up.
Mr. Johnson was moved by the three’s sincere understanding. He made up his mind to take care of the roses together with the family. As the Harvest Festival approached, the flowers unfolded smiles gradually, which revived his garden. Mr. Johnson expressed how he loved the works of art Charlie created. He even invited the whole family to dinner in his cottage where laughter and happiness had never existed before. The roses, though once destroyed, brought Mr. Johnson something more precious—kindness and genuineness as well as an open heart.
默写版:
Then one afternoon Emily decided to make the first move. She went to local florist’s and asked around for the roses that looked like Mr. Johnson’s.__________________
_____________________________她立刻设法把被毁的玫瑰换回来,并在汤姆和查理的帮助下小心翼翼地照料着娇嫩的花朵. Seeing the thoughtful acts, ________
_________________________________约翰逊终于意识到自己那天反应过度,并为自己的不当行为道歉. However, what the family cared most was whether what they did could make for his loss and cheered him up.
Mr. Johnson was moved by the three’s sincere understanding. _________________
_________________________他下定决心和家人一起照料玫瑰. As the Harvest Festival approached, the flowers unfolded smiles gradually, which revived his garden. Mr. Johnson expressed how he loved the works of art Charlie created. __________
________________________________________________________他甚至邀请全家人在他的小屋里吃饭,那里以前从未有过欢笑和幸福. The roses, though once destroyed, brought Mr. Johnson something more precious—kindness and genuineness as well as an open heart.

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