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The wind blowing the willow,
the river flowing,
the woman is hurrying home,
she wearing a bright red coat,
she wearing a flower on her head,
she having make-ups on her cheeks,
she having a chicken in her left hand,
she having a duck in her right hand,
she having a chubby baby on he
with a bright red coat on her
with a flower on her head
with make-ups on her cheeks
with a chicken in her left hand
with a duck in her right hand
with a chubby baby on her back
The wind blowing the willow,
the river flowing,
the woman is hurrying home,
with
a bright red coat on her,
a flower on her head,
make-ups on her cheeks,
a chicken in her left hand,
a duck in her right hand,
and a chubby baby on her back
--with的复合结构做状语在读后续写中的应用
“With” Compound Structure
with复合结构在续写中的运用
在读后续写中，“with复合结构” 多用作原因、时间状语或伴随状语等，使得语言更加精炼，情节更具体；同时，在细节描写上使用该结构能形象、生动地营造画面。
Why do we use it
We are having
English class
at present,
___________________
___________________
__________________
_________________________
_________________________
_________________________
with the windows open.
with the lights on.
with teachers sitting behind us.
with some exercise done.
with some questions to discuss.
What is it
With的复合结构可在句子中充当______成分
二、意义
with books on my desk.
一、观察基本结构
状语
三、位置
With的复合结构可在主句____________
之前或之后
v-ing
done
to do
形容词
副词
介词短语
with + 名词或代词 +
with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语
1. With birds singing and the air filled with laughter, everyone was in the best of moods.
2. She stormed out of the room, with the door wide open.
3. However, Lulu shook her head with a stubborn look in her eyes.
4. A smile lit up his face and his eyes were sparkling with excitement.
观察并找出读后续写句子中常用的with结构类型
with + n. + 非谓语（doing/done/to do）
with + n. + adj.
with + n. + 介词短语
with+ n.
读后续写常用的with结构：
1. with + n. + 非谓语（doing/done/to do）
2. with + n. + adj./adv./介词短语
3. with + n.
How do we use it
句型一：主谓……, with+sb/sth+非谓语（doing/done/to do) ;
With+ sb/sth+非谓语（doing/done/to do), 主谓……
1
1. With tears ________(stream) down his cheek, he replied, “ I did try. I really tried.”
2. With all the things ______(buy), she headed for home joyfully.
3. With so much work _______(finish), he had a tight schedule.
Summary：非谓语doing 表达的动作与with后面的宾语之间构成逻辑上的________关系；done 表达动作与宾语之间的________关系；to do 多表示该动作_________。
。
streaming
bought
to finish
主动
被动
将要去做
observe：
1. The madam made an explanation calmly, with a bright smile appearing on her face.
2. With tears rolling down his cheeks, John hugged Tom tightly.
3. She choked, with her voice trembling.
4. He lowered his head, with his face flushing and heart beating wildly.
5. She laughed, with her eyes filled with excitement.
6. Jane hugged her son, with a surge of pleasure rising up.
summarize:
描写表情/情绪的伴随状语时，可使用 with+____________________
_______________________________________________+ doing/done
smile,tears,voice,face
eyes,heart或a surge/burst/flood/wave of+情绪名词
Brainstorming
【翻译】 眼睛凝视着家庭相册, 他想到了他和祖父母的在一起的快乐时光，一阵温暖涌上心头。
________________________________, he thought of the fun he had when he lived with his grandparents,__________________.
With his eyes fixed on the family album
with a surge of warmth flooding over him
句型二：主谓……with+sb/sth+adj./adv./介词短语
1.他这次摔倒了，背部着地，双腿叉开。
He fell over this time, flat on his back _______________.
2.他的妻子躺在床上，脸色苍白。
His wife lay in bed _________________.
3. 她的女儿离开了家，她很担心。
________________________________, she was worried.
4. 他用喷雾向狼喷过去，其中一只手扶着栏杆。
He fired the spray at the wolf_________________________.
2
with his legs wide
with her face pale
With her daughter away from home
with one hand on the bars
句型三: 主谓……with+n.
3
observe：
1. Sarah came forward with a tight and angry face.
2. The fierce wolf stared at Mac with its hungry red eyes.
summarize:
描写细节时，如果想强化某个动作的主体，可以用 with+
___________+__________+______________.
a/an/one’s
adj.
身体部位的名词
【比一比】
1. 他举起了一块大石头。
He lifted a big stone.
2. 他用他的手臂举起了一块大石头。
He lifted a big stone with his arms.
3. 他用他强壮的手臂举起了一块大石头。
He lifted a big stone with his strong arms.
用他强壮的手臂举起
用它锋利的牙齿咬
用两只颤抖的手打开
用她那苍白的嘴唇亲吻
lift with his strong arms
bite with its sharp teeth
open with two trembling hands
kiss with her pale lips
句型三:主谓……with+n.
3
observe：
1. A smile lit up his face and his eyes were sparkling with excitement.
2. With pride and joy, she explained that these were specialties from Mexico.
3. With her eyes full of fear, he turn to me.
summarize:
展现人物情绪最直接的一种方式，可以用 with+__________来修饰动作，相当于其__________形式。也可以把该结构扩充为______________________________________。
情绪类名词
副词
with one’s eyes full of + 情绪类名词
B
【高兴】delight/joy/thrill/excitement...
【悲伤】sadness/sorrow/grief
【生气】anger/rage/annoyance
【害怕】scare/fear/horror/terror/fright
【惊讶】surprise/astonishment/shock
...
A
shake/tremble with
be frozen/numb with
dance/be wild with
be dead with
be overcome/overwhelmed with
be seized with
...
Matching exercise
【翻译】 看到如此可爱的一只兔子， 我欣喜若狂，跟着追了过去，但意外摔了一跤。
At the sight of such a lovely rabbit, I was wild with joy and followed it, but fell down accidentally.
【翻译】 当他打开信的时候，他的手激动地发抖。
As he opened the letter，his hands were trembling with excitement.
with结构升级法宝
1. He sighed disappoingtedly at the sight of his test result.
2. He cast us a glance, and his face wearing a warm smile.
3. As all the things were equipped, they headed for the forest.
4. He embraced me. His arms were open wide. His eyes were shining like diamonds.
a. 变换副词: He sighed with disappoinment at the sight of...
b. 升级并列句: He cast us a glance, with his face wearing a...
c. 变换状从: With all the things equipped, they headed for...
d. 合并简单句: He embraced me, with his arms open wide and his eyes shining like diamonds.
【Practice】用with的结构润色以下段落：
As the Middle Autumn Festival approached, we set off for my grandparents’ home delightedly. As soon as we stepped into the house, my grandparents warmly greeted us and their eyes were full of happiness and excitement. They had prepared plenty of food for us in advance and they had been looking forward to our arrival. The round moon was high up in the sky. We had dinner, talking and admiring the moon. Laughter filled the house.
【reference】：
With the Middle Autumn Festival approaching, we set off for my grandparents’ home with delight. As soon as we stepped into the house, my grandparents warmly greated us with their eyes full of happiness and excitement. With plenty of food prepared for us in advance, they had been looking forward to our arrival. With the round moon high up in the sky, we had dinner, talking and admiring the moon, (with) laughter filling the house.
【Homework】
用with结构改写丰富以下段落：
It was daybreak when Jane woke up____________________(head). She pick up her confidence and slowly walked along the stream___________________(insects and birds). To her great joy, she eventually arrived at an open air. Jane sat down________
___________(eyes), praying that the helicopter will come back again. After what seemed a long time, she could hear a voice somewhere at a distance. __________________(eyes), she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I’m here!” To her surprise, Tom was in the helicopter. ___________________(friends). Upon seeing Jane, Tom immediately rushed out to her, folding his arms around her.

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