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【广东省】书面表达-- 2022-2024年中考一模真题分类汇编（含解析）
1．（2024·广东珠海·一模）我们都向往积极健康、乐观向上的生活，通过自我学习和自我提升，我们都能遇见更好的自己。下周是学校英语周，广播站以“How to Become a Better Self”为主题，面向全校学生征稿。请你根据下图提示，完成一份完整的英文稿件。
作文要求：
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数70词左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to Become a Better Self
My favorite saying is “Do your best, and be a little better than you are!” __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2023·广东惠州·一模）近年，国家提出将劳动教育纳入中小学国家课程方案，要求中学生应该树立劳动观念，培养热爱劳动的意识。为响应国家号召，你校正积极开展劳动课程(labor course)，假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据下面提示，以“Labor Courses in Our School”为题写一篇短文鼓励同学们积极，参加劳动课程。
内容包括：
1.学校开设劳动课程的意义；
2.简单介绍你们学校开设了哪些劳动课程；
3.号召同学积极参与劳动课。
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor Courses in Our School
I am glad to see that labor courses have been set up in our school.
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3．（2023·广东清远·一模）假如你叫李明，你所在学校准备宣传书写的重要性，你作为一名书写爱好者，你将给同学们进行经验介绍。介绍的内容包括：
1) 简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
2) 书写的重要性(至少两点) ；
3) 鼓励同学们练好书写。
注意：写作词数80词左右；请在答题卡相应位置作答。参考单词：handwriting书写。
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4．（2023·广东中山·一模）近20年来，各方面的调查表明：青少年的视力不断下降。假如你是李华，请你以“How to protect our eyes”为题向英语报纸《Teens》投稿，说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
主要内容包括：
（1）视力下降的原因（至少2点）。
（2）如何保护眼睛的建议（最少3点）。
（3）呼吁大家要保护我们的眼睛。
How to protect our eyes
Nowadays students’ eyesight is getting poorer year by year. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2022·广东珠海·一模）习近平总书记强调：雷锋是时代的楷模，雷锋精神是永恒的，三月是学雷锋月，你的学校开展了一系列轰轰烈烈的学雷锋活动。请你写一篇通讯稿，简要介绍你校的学雷锋活动情况，并号召大家践行雷锋精神、弘扬社会正气。
1. 简单介绍你们学校具体开展了哪些学雷锋活动。（至少两项）
2. 你们从中学到了什么？感想如何？
3. 青少年应该如何在学习生活中践行雷锋精神？（至少两点）
4. 号召同学们在今后的学习生活中继续践行雷锋精神。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
（参考词汇：做好事情：do good deeds 弘扬：carry forward 高尚的：noble 美德：virtue）
The Spirit of Lei Feng Goes on
In order to remember Lei Feng, our school organized all kinds of activities in March. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022·广东茂名·一模）生活的方方面面都需要我们注意安全，我们作为中学生，在日常生活中应当时时注意安全，请你以安全为主题，写一篇关于安全的文章，要点如下：
1. 简述你或你朋友、家人看到过或碰到过的一次事故。
2. 你对那次事故的感觉。
3. 对中学生如何在日常生活中保持安全给出至少两点建议。
作文要求；
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。
There is no doubt that safety is very important in our daily life. Sometimes accidents happen to people.
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7．（2022·广东东莞·一模）刚刚过去的2022年北京冬奥会再次让体育运动成为人们关注的社会话题之一，奥运精神和热爱运动的精神也一直在中国传递，学校也提倡同学们积极参加体育运动。请你以此为话题写一篇短文，内容包括：
（1）谈谈体育运动的好处（不少于两点）；
（2）下个月就要体育中考了，你准备好了吗？你是怎么备战的？（两点）
（3）呼吁同学们积极参加体育运动，祝福同学们中考体育取得好成绩。
作文要求：①不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
②语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022·广东中山·一模）近年来，随着科技发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假定你是你们学校书法协会的会长，为了让同学们重视书写，减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手记笔记，写日记等，写一封倡议书，内容包括：
（a）汉字书写能力的重要性。
（b）让同学重视书写的策略与建议（至少2点）。
（c）提倡同学养成练书法和写日记的习惯。
参考词汇：calligraphy / handwriting书法
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，字数80个左右，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
I’m the president of the school calligraphy Association（书法协会）
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Yours,
Li Ming
参考答案：
1．范文：
How to Become a Better Self
My favorite saying is “Do your best, and be a little better than you are!” Because of it, I made great progress during my junior high. On the one hand, with planning ahead, I am able to do things faster and better. On the other hand, I focus more in class and listen to the teachers carefully. I feel really proud of my improvement.
How did I become better Firstly, making more friends helped me. It not only offered me opportunities to learn from them, but it gave me more chances to help others. Secondly, reading more books was important to me. Because reading can help me open my eyes to see the world and enrich my knowledge. More importantly, I always believe in myself that I can be a better person.
Action speaks louder than words. Let’s spare no effort to become a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍取得的进步以及感受；
第二步，介绍怎样做到的；
第三步，呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①proud of以……为骄傲
②spare no effort不遗余力
[高分句型]
①Because reading can help me open my eyes to see the world and enrich my knowledge.（并列结构）
2．例文：
Labor Courses in Our School
I am glad to see that labor courses have been set up in our school. It’s reported that education on the hard-working spirit will be included into the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it is important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future. Our school offers cooking, planting, and gardening classes.
I think it’s our duty to share some labor. Besides, doing some labor is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the school!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文从三个方面介绍劳动的意义，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍劳动课程纳入了中小学课程方案；
第二步，介绍了课程的意义以及都有哪些课程；
第三步，号召大家参与劳动课程。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②in the future未来
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①It’s reported that education on the hard-working spirit will be included into the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.（宾语从句）
②I think it’s our duty to share some labor.（it固定句型）
3．例文
Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture. I really enjoy calligraphy, so I insist on writing a calligraphy post every day to practice calligraphy. At the same time, I also copy some calligraphy books. I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture. At the same time, it can also better promote China to the world. So we need to practice calligraphy well and contribute our own strength to the suggestions of our motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
第二步，说明书写的重要性；
第三步，最后鼓励同学们练好书写。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②at the same time同时
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture.（现在分词作状语）
②I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture.（that引导的宾语从句）
4．例文
How to protect our eyes
Nowadays students’ eyesight is getting poorer year by year. They watch TV or play computer games for too long. Some students read in low light.
But do you know how to protect our eyes First, take a short break after reading or writing for half an hour or so. Second, do more exercise, at least 2 hours a day. We should do eye-exercises every day, and take part in outdoor activities instead of playing with mobiles or computers. Third, keep a balanced diet. Eating more fruit and vegetables is also a good way to protect our eyes.
Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章以第一人称为主，提出怎样保护眼睛的方法，不要遗漏主要内容，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明视力下降的原因；
第二步，详细阐述怎样保护眼睛的方法。
第三步，呼吁大家保护眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
①for too long长时间
②take a short break休息片刻
④take part in参加
⑤at least至少
⑥instead of代替
⑦keep a balanced diet保持饮食均衡
[高分句型]
①Eating more fruit and vegetables is also a good way to protect our eyes.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above.（Let句型）
③We should do eye-exercises every day, and take part in outdoor activities instead of playing with mobiles or computers.（and连接的并列句）
5．例文：
The Spirit of Lei Feng Goes on
In order to remember Lei Feng, our school organized all kinds of activities in March. First, our teacher gave a lecture about the spirit of Lei Feng. Then we visited the old people’s home and talked with them, helped them do some cleaning. From these activities, we know that we should carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng and do good deeds in our daily life.
In my opinion, we should try our best to help others in our daily life. For example, when we meet someone who has difficulty in studying, we can help them improve their grades. What’s more, we can often visit the old and the sick so that they can feel the love from the society.
All in all, there are many ways to carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng. Let’s do good deeds from now on and be the people with noble virtue.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要介绍学校的学雷锋活动，题干中给出了相关的细节要点和提示词汇，写作时不要遗漏，可适当增加细节，使文章更加顺畅。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，描述学校的活动时以一般过去时为主，描述如何践行雷锋精神时用一般现在时。第一段主要介绍学校的活动以及感想；第二段介绍如何在生活和学习中践行雷锋精神；最后一段号召大家践行雷锋精神。写作时运用不同的句式和连接词使文章层次清晰，逻辑清楚。不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文
There is no doubt that safety is very important in our daily life. Sometimes accidents happen to people. Last week a car hit an old man when I went across the road. The old man fell down and couldn’t move at that moment. I called the emergency center at once. I was afraid that something bad would happen to the old man.
As a middle student, how should we ensure safety First, we must follow the traffic rules. Second, we had better master some knowledge of first aid. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“安全”写一篇短文。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时；采用第一人称叙述；文章的开头已给出，接着描述自己看到过的一次安全事故以及感受；第二段给出如何保持安全，给出自己的建议；第三段总结概括。写作时注意做到无标点和语法错误。
7．参考范文：
There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways. First, sports can make us fit and strong. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. Second, when were in a low spirit, taking part in sports can help us forget our sadness. I’m fond of sports because I not only gain a well balanced life through sports, but also I get more chances to make more friends. Next month will be the high school sports examination. I’m ready. I run every morning and evening. I go to the park to practice the long jump at the weekend. I hope the students will take an active part in sports. I wish the students good results in the high school entrance examination.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍体育运动的好处以及体育中考的准备情况等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．例文
Dear students,
I’m the president of the school calligraphy Association. Nowadays, numbers of students tend to use electronic products for learning, or taking notes, rather than writing on the paper. As a consequence, our handwriting is not as good and fluent as it was in the past. To address this problem, we’d better do as follows.
Foremost, electronic products should be used less or even put away while learning since only in this way, can we have a very good chance of improving our handwriting. The habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping a diary every day counts as well and it is also adoptable to go back to the way of writing letters by hand instead rather than via internet.
Beautiful and neat handwriting, as we all know, is of great benefit and help to us students, so it can never be overemphasized! Let’s take action right now! Our efforts and perseverance will be bound to pay off eventually!
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏重点内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍汉字书写能力的重要性。引入话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括至少2点的重视书写的策略与建议；
第三步，书写结语。提倡同学养成练书法和写日记的习惯。
[亮点词汇]
① tend to do sth.倾向做某事
② as a consequence因而；结果
③ as follows如下
④ have a chance of doing sth.有机会做某事
⑤ be bound to do sth.一定要做某事
[高分句型]
① Foremost, electronic products should be used less or even put away while learning since only in this way, can we have a very good chance of improving our handwriting.（since引导的原因状语从句；only位于句首的部分倒装。）
② Beautiful and neat handwriting, as we all know, is of great benefit and help to us students, so it can never be overemphasized!（as引导的定语从句。）
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