资源简介 中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台【广东省深圳市】书面表达- 2023-2024中考一模真题分类汇编(含解析)1.(2024·广东深圳·一模)假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter即将来到你校做交换生,他想了解你们学校有哪些体育活动,请你根据提示写一封回信。要点如下:(1)常规活动:①每天一节体育课;②各类体育赛事;(2)活动感受:①强健身体;②……;(3)推荐一项中国传统运动。注意:(1)词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;(4)条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。参考词汇:sprint(v.短跑;冲刺跑)martial arts(n.武术)Dear Peter,Hearing that you are very interested in the sports activities of our school, I’d like to_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua2.(2024·广东深圳·一模)为促进学生身心健康成长,深圳市教育局于 2023年底发布《关于义务教育阶段学校实行每天一节体育课的通知》,要求各学校开展“每天一节体育课活动”。假如你是李华,请你以“运动与健康”为主题向学校英语报投稿,号召同学们运动起来,健康生活。内容要点:运动的意义 强健体魄、愉悦心情等。运动的方式 推荐有益身心的运动项目并简述原因(至少两项)。你的呼吁 ……要求:1.80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数内);2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;4.标点正确,书面整洁。Sports benefit people in many ways.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.(2024·广东深圳·一模)随着5G、大数据、物联网、人工智能等的广泛运用,我们的生活将发生翻天覆地的改变。假设你是阳光中学的学生李华,你校英语报正在举办主题为“Our life in 20 years”的征文比赛 ,请你根据以下要点写一篇征文,要点包括:1. 高科技的广泛运用将使我们的未来生活越来越智能化;2. 畅想未来生活在以下方面的变化:①出行方式;②智能家居;③……3. 中学生应努力学习,更好地迎接未来的智慧生活。写作要求:1. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总字数)。2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。3. 可适当增加细节,使语句通顺,条理清晰、意思连贯。参考词汇:家用电器 electrical appliance 自动化 automatically(adv.) 无人驾驶交通工具 self-driving vehicleOur life in 20 yearsWhat will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.(2024·广东深圳·一模)假如你是李华,你的学校从本学期开始每天安排一节体育课。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章来介绍学校“每天一节体育课”的开展情况,包含以下内容:体育课的安排 体育课的具体活动,请举例说明。每天一节体育课的好处 1. 减轻学习压力,保持身体和心理健康(psychological health); 2. 培养(develop)更多的体育兴趣爱好; 3. 培养终身运动的习惯; 4. ……你的建议 提出你对改进体育课的建议(至少两点)。要求:1. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内);2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺,条理清楚,意义连贯;4. 书写规范,卷面整洁。Since the beginning of this term, my school has offered a daily PE class for students. In the class, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopefully we can enjoy ourselves better in future PE classes.5.(2024·广东深圳·一模)假设你是李华,学校阅读周将举办题为“Reading Can Make a Difference”的中英双语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,包含以下内容:你担心的问题 学生不读书现象,分析原因读书的重要性 读书对于学习和生活的重要性,请举例说明建议、号召 .........要求:1.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内);2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;3.可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯;4.书写规范,卷面整洁。Reading Can Make a DifferenceDear teachers and fellow students, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!6.(2024·广东深圳·一模)假设你是李华,学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life(生活中的AI)”的中英双语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,包含以下内容:AI的好处 AI在生活中的应用,请举例说明。AI的影响 人类对AI过度依赖带来的影响,请举例说明。你的看法 ……要求:1. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内);2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;3. 可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯;4. 书写规范,卷面整洁。AI in Our LifeDear teachers and fellow students,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!7.(2023·广东深圳·一模)深圳是座现代化的花园城市,致力于率先实现碳中和。为了实现这个目标,我们每个人都应该为此尽一份力。假如你是李华,请你写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿,写一封倡议信,介绍你的想法和做法并号召大家都积极行动起来,为保护环境而贡献自己的力量。要点:1)保护环境的意义。2)我们能够做些什么:比如①做环保型消费者;②节约水电……3)号召大家参加此活动。要求:1)词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;3)条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;4)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dear follow students,We have only one Earth, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua8.(2023·广东深圳·一模)为丰富校园生活,学校的英语俱乐部决定举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。请你根据以下提示,写一则活动通知。要点:1. 参赛对象:全校学生2. 提交时间:下周五上午12:00前3. 绘本内容:选择深圳这座城市的任一方面,如发展历程、景点、文化、志愿服务等。4. 参赛要求:①绘本必须原创;②……(至少补充一点)参考词汇:内容content;原创的original要求:1. 词数80左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;3. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。NoticeIn order to enrich students’ campus life, the school English club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English Club9.(2023·广东深圳·一模)《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市,也积极响应公约(Wetlands Convention)号召。假如你是学生李华,是学校环保俱乐部一员,你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”(Wetland Protection Festival)。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件,介绍此次活动。要点:1.目的:见证深圳湿地建设的成就;提升环保意识2.内容:①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类;②深圳湿地摄影展;③……3.你的感受:①……②……要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;4.标点正确,书面整节。参考词汇:witness 见证;awareness 意识;mangrove forest红树林;Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park深圳红树林生态公园;Dear Mike,As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10.(2023·广东深圳·一模)深圳正成为一座体育之城,健身文化浓厚。为增强学生们的锻炼意识,你所在的学校将举行“奥运冠军进校园”(Olympic Champions Entering Campus)活动。假定你是校英文报的编辑李华,请你代表校学生会写一则通知发布在校英文报上,预告此次活动。要点:1.时间地点:下周五下午,学校田径场;2.活动内容:①冠军成长故事分享;②冠军体育课;3.注意事项:①穿运动装;②……提示词:track-and-field ground田径场 sportswear运动装要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名;3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;4.标点正确,书面整洁。NoticeShenzhen is becoming a sports city with a strong fitness culture. To enhance the students’ awareness of exercise, our school plans to___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The Students’ Union11.(2023·广东深圳·一模)深圳是一座有温度的城市。3月是学雷锋月,假如你是学生李华,是深圳市某国际学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动,请根据以下提示,写一个倡议书,介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加,要点:1.目的:培养社会责任感,提高交流技巧,帮助有需要的人2.内容:①看望敬老院老人 ②帮助照顾流浪动物 ③……(补充一点)3.你的号召与倡议要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;参考词汇:social 社会的Dear friends,Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!参考答案:1.例文:Dear Peter,Hearing that you are very interested in the sports activities of our school, I’d like to tell you some of our school’s sports activities. We have one physical education class every day. At the same time, we hold various sports events every semester. We have various ball and running competitions, such as sprints. Doing exercise not only helps us strengthen our bodies, but also increases our team awareness.Tai chi is a traditional Chinese exercise that emphasizes slow, flowing movements and deep breathing. It is believed to improve physical balance, flexibility, and overall well-being. This activity is widely practiced by people of all ages and is often performed in public parks or other open spaces.I’m looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点”中的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。主要写出“朋友对我们学校体育活动的喜爱”来引出重点内容的介绍;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。主要介绍“我们学校的体育活动以及活动感受”并且推荐了“中国的传统体育运动”以此来感受中国的传统运动的魅力;第三步,书写总结。期待朋友尽快到来。[亮点词汇]①emphasize 强调②awareness 意识③of all ages 所有年龄段的④flexibility 灵活性[高分句型]①It is believed to improve physical balance, flexibility, and overall well-being.(and表并列)②Doing exercise not only helps us strengthen our bodies, but also increases our team awareness.(动名词短语做主语)③Tai chi is a traditional Chinese exercise that emphasizes slow, flowing movements and deep breathing.(that引导定语从句)2.例文Sports benefit people in many ways. Doing sports can help us build a strong body and keep us fit. Besides, sports can raise our spirits.There are many kinds of sports which are fun and healthy. For example, playing badminton is a good start. It’s not difficult and it can help you exercise nearly every part of your body. Swimming is also a good choice. When you swim in the water, you can leave all worries behind. It can also exercise your body and is good for your heart and lung. We all should keep the habit of taking exercise. Let’s do sports every day and live a healthy life.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:根据提示内容号召同学们运动起来,健康生活,适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍运动的意义;第二步,推荐有益身心的运动项目并简述原因;第三步,呼吁同学们运动起来。[亮点词汇]①many kinds of很多种类的②leave behind抛下③be good for对……有好处[高分句型]①There are many kinds of sports which are fun and healthy. (which引导的定语从句)②When you swim in the water, you can leave all worries behind. (when引导的时间状语从句)3.例文Our life in 20 yearsWhat will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will become more and more intelligent with the rapid development and wide application of high technology.There will be lots of dramatic changes in our life. Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. We can go anywhere by self-driving vehicle. Subsequently, our home will be more comfortable. Robots and smart electrical appliances can work automatically and provide personalized services for the owners. Moreover, schools will have a high-tech makeover. With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience.The remarkable changes in 20 years are not just the above. As students, we should study hard for the future smart life.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯,注意无单词及语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍未来的生活将是什么样的;第二步,具体介绍未来生活的变化;第三步,书写结语,表达中学生应努力学习,迎接未来的智慧生活。[亮点词汇]①more and more越来越……②subsequently其次③provide sth for sb提供某人某物[高分句型]①Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. (动名词作主语)②With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience. (with表伴随)4.例文Since the beginning of this term, my school has offered a daily PE class for students. In the class, our PE teacher always guides us to exercise patiently. He teaches us to run and jump. He also teaches us to play balls and even dance.Actually, it’s necessary for us to have daily PE classes. It not only reduces the pressure of study and maintains physical and mental health, but also develops more interests in sports and the habit of lifelong exercise. Apart from these, it also makes us sleep better at night.However, there are some points that we should pay attention to. We should emphasize the safety of PE class. What’s more, it is also very important to have a full rest after exercising. Hopefully we can enjoy ourselves better in future PE classes.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍体育课的安排;第二步,介绍每天一节体育课的好处;第三步,提出你的建议。[亮点词汇]①not only…but also不但……而且②Apart from除了[高分句型]However, there are some points that we should pay attention to.(定语从句)5.例文Reading Can Make a Difference Dear teachers and fellow students, books are our best friends. As we all know, reading is the stepping stones to human progress. It can bring us not only wisdom of the wise people in history but also the progress and development. Reading books can provide us with rich knowledge. Also, reading can open our eyes. We can improve ourselves by reading. My concern is that students don’t read books because they have little interest in reading. How can we read wisely There is no doubt that we should read some books that help with our growth, such as some classics, history books and so on. To improve our reading skills, we’d better take notes while reading. After that, it’s a good idea to write a book report and share it with friends. As long as we want to read, we can do it at any time and any place. There is no end to learning. Let’s enjoy reading and keep reading! That’s all. Thank you!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,介绍读书的重要性;第二步,表明自己担心的问题并分析原因;第三步,给出建议、号召。[亮点词汇]①not only…but also…不仅……而且……②provide sb. with…给某人提供……③have little interest in…对……没有什么兴趣④there is no doubt that毫无疑问⑤classics名著⑥take notes记笔记[高分句型]My concern is that students don’t read books because they have little interest in reading.(that引导表语从句;because引导原因状语从句)6.例文AI in Our LifeDear teachers and fellow students,As we all know, AI changes our lives greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient while cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.That’s all. Thank you!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节,使表述内容更完整。[写作步骤]第一步,举例说明AI在生活中的应用;第二步,举例说明人类对AI过度依赖带来的影响;第三步,总结上文,表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①With the development of随着……的发展②efficient有效率的③rely on依靠[高分句型]①I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.(if引导条件状语从句)7.例文:Dear follow students,We have only one Earth. Earth is our only home. As we all know, our earth faces many challenges, such as global warming, environmental pollution, natural disasters and so on. These things are making our earth worse and worse. Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. So we must do something to protect it.First, be environmentally friendly consumers. We should try to go to work by bike or on foot instead of by cars. Secondly, save water and electricity in our daily. In addition, we can work as volunteers to tell people the importance of protecting the environment.Let’s take active action to contribute our efforts to protecting the environment. I am sure our city will become better and better.Li hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:这是一篇材料作文,为应用文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:3个写作要点已经给出,需要具体化;这是一篇倡议信,所以“能够做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情态动词来表达。[写作步骤]第一步,描写保护环境的意义;第二步,描写为了保护环境我们能够做的事情;第三步,号召大家积极行动起来保护环境。[亮点词汇]①be environmentally friendly consumers 成为环保型消费者②in addition 另外③tell people the importance of protecting the environment 告诉人们保护环境的重要性④contribute our efforts to 为……做出贡献[高分句型]I am sure our city will become better and better. (宾语从句)8.One possible version:NoticeIn order to enrich students’ campus life, the school English club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. The following is something you should pay attention to.All the students can take part in the competition. Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday. You can finish your English picture books from any aspect of Shenzhen, such as its development history, scenic spots, culture, volunteer services and so on. Remember that your works must be original and the contents should be positive.We hope all of you can take part in the competition.English Club【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇通知,介绍英文绘本大赛。②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。③提示:题目要求根据提示写一则通知,内容为举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。写作时注意适当增加细节,补充要点,同时不要遗漏所给要点。[写作步聚]第一步,先简单介绍活动内容。(开头已给出)第二步,根据所给要点,依次介绍活动的具体内容以及要求。第三步,最后号召大家积极参加。[亮点词汇]①pay attention to注意②take part in参加③hand in上交[高分句型]①Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday.(含情态动词的被动语态)②Remember that your works must be original and the contents should be positive.(肯定祈使句)9.例文Dear Mike,As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness. We went to Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park to watch mangrove forests and birds. We also visited the Shenzhen Wetland Photography Exhibition. We have also singed the Convention on the Protection of Wetlands. We are committed to maintaining wetlands. Through this activity, we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍活动目的;第二步,介绍活动内容;第三步,介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①make efforts to do努力做某事②the purpose of……的目的③need to do sth需要做某事[高分句型]①The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness.(动词不定式作表语)②we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.(that引导的宾语从句)10.例文NoticeShenzhen is becoming a sports city with a strong fitness culture. To enhance the students’ awareness of exercise, our school plans to organize an activity, Olympic Champions Entering Campus. Here are some details.The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground, where three excellent athletes will share their inspiring growth stories, giving students some useful suggestions on how to deal with stress from daily life and study. What will be the most impressive and exciting part is the P. E lessons specially designed by the champions, which is a perfect opportunity for us students to have a close interaction with them.For convenience and comfort, please make sure to wear sportswear. Besides, it is highly expected that we all interact with the champions actively to show our warmest welcome and respect.The Students’ Union【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,是一篇通知;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:写作要点提示已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,同时注意适当补充和发挥注意事项,使用正确的词汇和句型,注意语法正确。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,以“这是一些细节”来引出后文;第二步,具体介绍活动的时间和地点,并介绍活动内容,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性;第三步,介绍并补充注意事项。[亮点词汇]①deal with处理②a perfect opportunity一个完美的机会[高分句型]The activity is scheduled to be held next Friday afternoon on our school track-and-field ground.(被动语态)11.例文Dear friends,Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”. The following is some detailed information about it.This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility. At the same time, students can improve their communication skills and help people in need.There are a series activities during the event. Firstly, we will go to old people’s homes and help them clean their rooms. Secondly, some of us will go to take care of homeless animals. We can feed them or play with them. Thirdly, we will hold a book fair to raise money for the poor. Each student need to bring some books that they don’t need any more.I think this event will be really educational and meaningful. With every effort we make, we can make a big difference! Hope everyone can take part in it!That’s all. Thank you!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇倡议书;②时态:时态为“一般将来”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍活动的目的;第二步,介绍活动的内容。[亮点词汇]①at the same time同时②make a big difference有很大的影响③take part in参加[高分句型]①This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility.(动词不定式作目的状语)②I think this event will be really educational and meaningfuls.(省略that的宾语从句)21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 (共 2 页)21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com) 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览