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《2024年新高考英语二轮复习》（八省专用）
专题60 应用文写作最新真题模拟25篇（技法+模拟）
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英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
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1．（2024·广东韶关·二模）假设你是育才中学高三学生李华，上周六你参加了学校举办的大学生返校分享活动。请为校英语报写一篇英文报道。内容如下：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
College Students’ Sharing
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【答案】
To enrich our school life and improve the learning atmosphere, our school launched College Students’ Sharing last week.
Students who graduated from our school actively participated in this event. The event contained a variety of exciting activities including lectures, book donations and celebrity recommendations for must-readbooks. Some outstanding graduates were also invited to share their learning experiences with us.
The event has produced a great influence, greatly enhancing our appetite for knowledge and fostering a love of reading, which is conducive to facing the college entrance examination with ease and confidence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校举办的大学生返校分享活动为校英语报写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提升：improve→promote
开展：launch→carry out
参加：participate in→take part in
各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：To enrich our school life and improve the learning atmosphere, our school launched a College Students’ Sharing event last week.
同义句：Our school launched a College Students’ Sharing activity last week, which aimed to enrich our school life and improve the learning atmosphere.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students who graduated from our school actively participated in this event. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The event has produced a great influence, greatly enhancing our appetite for knowledge and fostering a love of reading, which is conducive to facing the college entrance examination with ease and confidence.(运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2024·广东汕头·一模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，为了提高学生安全意识，学校决定于下周一开展紧急疏散演练。请你用英语写一份活动通知，告知学校的留学生，内容包括：
1.参加人员、时间、路线；
2.注意事项。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：紧急疏散演练urgent evacuation drill
Notice
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the Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
We are pleased to inform you that our school will be conducting an urgent evacuation drill next Monday in order to enhance safety awareness among our student body. Your participation is crucial for the success of this exercise, and we want to ensure that you are well-informed about the details of the drill.
All students, including international ones, are expected to take part in the evacuation drill scheduled for next Monday at 9:00 a.m.. To ensure your prompt arrival, please make sure to be at your designated spot at least 10 minutes early. During the drill, trained staff will be present to guide you along the marked evacuation routes. In the event of an actual emergency, it is imperative that you utilize the nearest exists. Therefore, we strongly advise you to familiarize yourself with the evacuation routes outlined in your building beforehand. Also, English guidance will be available for our international students, and should you require further assistance, do not hesitate to seek help from your classmates or staff members.
If you have any questions or concerns regarding the evacuation drill, please feel free to contact us through the school office or your respective international student advisor.
the Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语写一份活动通知，告知学校的留学生，学校决定于下周一开展紧急疏散演练的相关细节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
至关重要的：crucial→vital
参加：take part in→participate in
寻求：seek→search for
建议：advise→suggest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To ensure your prompt arrival, please make sure to be at your designated spot at least 10 minutes early.
拓展句：In order that you can arrive in time, please make sure to be at your designated spot at least 10 minutes early.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
We are pleased to inform you that our school will be conducting an urgent evacuation drill next Monday in order to enhance safety awareness among our student body.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
In the event of an actual emergency, it is imperative that you utilize the nearest exists.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
3．（2024·广东·一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”，并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件，邀请他在线观看。内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.观看时间 、方式；
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.
The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage. The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
I’m looking forward to having you virtually with us for this enriching experience. Your participation will surely add to the enjoyment of the event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，邀请外国笔友Hans在线观看学校“经典文化探索展”的网络直播，内容包括：活动介绍、观看时间及方式和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
参加：join in→participate in
参与：participation→involvement
必定：surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
拓展句：The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, when you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.（运用了that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
4．（2024·广东梅州·一模）假定你是李华，你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。请给外教David写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 简述你的英语水平；
2. 请他推荐一些读物。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am reaching out to seek your guidance regarding my English language improvement efforts.
Currently, I would describe my English skills as above average, often scoring around 85% on tests. However, I sometimes struggle to express my thoughts using ordinary words effectively. I am eager to further advance my English abilities and I believe reading novels can be an effective method to achieve this goal. I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly suggest some books that are well suited for my level.
Thank you in advance for your time and assistance.
Yours;
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。要求考生给外教David写封邮件简述自己的英语水平和请他推荐一些读物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有关：regarding→concerning
渴望做某事：be eager to do → desire to do
目标：goal→aim
建议：suggest→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am reaching out to seek your guidance regarding my English language improvement efforts.
拓展句：I am reaching out to seek your guidance which is about my English language improvement efforts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Currently, I would describe my English skills as above average, often scoring around 85% on tests.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】I am eager to further advance my English abilities and I believe reading novels can be an effective method to achieve this goal.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句以及动名词作主语）
5．（2024·湖南益阳·三模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校计划定于6月 10 日在体育馆举办高三毕业典礼，请写封邮件邀请你校外教 David 参加，内容包括：
1.典礼时间与地点；
2.典礼内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear David,
How is everything going With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony, which is scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
There are many significant activities, which will never fail to impress you. At the beginning, the headmaster will deliver a speech to express his sincere congratulations on our graduation. After that, to recall our unforgettable experiences in high school, some elaborate shows will be performed. Besides, don’t miss the golden moment when we will gather together to take photos.
We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at the ceremony and we are looking forward to your coming. Please reply to me at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外教 David写封邮件，邀请他参加学校于6月10日在体育馆举办的高三毕业典礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜悦：delight →joy
表达：express →convey
此外：besides → what’s more
特别：particularly →in particular
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony, which is scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
拓展句：With great excitement and delight, I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony, scheduled to be held at 9:00 am on June 10, 2024 in the school gym.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many significant activities, which will never fail to impress you.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】After that, to recall our unforgettable experiences in high school, some elaborate shows will be performed.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语）
6．（2024·湖南邵阳·二模）假定你是校报英语版总编李华，你邀请到了美国环保专家White教授作主题为“Livingin Harmony with Nature”的讲座。请你在讲座前简要发言，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；2. 注意事项。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】Dear fellow students.
So privileged are we that today Professor White will deliver a lecture themed Living in Harmony with Nature for us. Therefore, please allow me to represent us students to express our heartfelt gratitude and warm welcome to him. During this lecture, not only will Professor White share with us how to cause less pollution to the world, but he will also lead us to live a greener life. Most importantly, while enjoying this lecture, we will undoubtedly have a brand-new understanding of our earth.
What’s more, everyone attending this lecture is required to listen carefully, take notes if necessary and positively follow his instructions as requested. Hopefully, we will have a pleasant time together.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华，你邀请到了美国环保专家White教授作主题为“Livingin Harmony with Nature”的讲座。要求考生在讲座前简要发言进行相关介绍并提醒注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：represent→be on behalf of
感谢：gratitude→appreciation
无疑地：undoubtedly→surely
此外：what’s more →besides/moreover
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What’s more, everyone attending this lecture is required to listen carefully, take notes if necessary and positively follow his instructions as requested.
拓展句：What’s more, everyone who attends this lecture is required to listen carefully, take notes if necessary and positively follow his instructions as requested.
【点睛】[高分句型1] So privileged are we that today Professor White will deliver a lecture themed Living in Harmony with Nature for us. (运用了部分倒装结构和过去分词短语作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Most importantly, while enjoying this lecture, we will undoubtedly have a brand-new understanding of our earth.(运用了状语从句的省略结构)
7．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）你校学生会计划面向国际交流生招募山区小学英语支教志愿者。请你写一则招募启事，内容包括：
1. 介绍招募目的；
2. 说明工作内容和要求。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Volunteers wanted
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【答案】Volunteers wanted
To ease the burden of the teacher shortage in remote areas, volunteers are needed to teach English there.
As a volunteer, you will be responsible for giving English classes and caring for the kids, especially the left-behind ones. The programme will last for one year. There is no doubt that these activities will leave you with unforgettable memories for the rest of your life.
You need to be over 18 and able to communicate well both in spoken and written Chinese and English. Similar experience is not a must, but you should be friendly and outgoing. If interested, please contact 123456@.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校学生会计划面向国际交流生招募山区小学英语支教志愿者，要求考生写一则招募启事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
减轻：ease→reduce
被需要：be needed→be wanted
活动：activity → event
应该：should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a volunteer, you will be responsible for giving English classes and caring for the kids, especially the left-behind ones.
拓展句：As a volunteer, you will be responsible for giving English classes and caring for the kids, especially the left-behind ones, which is really beneficial and meaningful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To ease the burden of the teacher shortage in remote areas, volunteers are needed to teach English there.（运用了不定式作状语的结构）
【高分句型2】 If interested, please contact 123456@.（运用了状语从句的省略结构）
8．（2024·湖南衡阳·二模）上周你校组织学生去四川卧龙大熊猫自然保护区参观，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to Wolong Giant Panda Nature Reserve
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【答案】One possible version:
A Visit to Wolong Giant Panda Nature Reserve
Last week, our school organized a remarkable trip to Wolong Giant Panda Nature Reserve.
Our journey began early in the morning. Once we arrived, we were led to the house of the pandas. We learned about some of their living habits. We also participated in a series of interactive activities, including a lecture on panda conservation. The highlight of the day was the opportunity to volunteer in feeding pandas.
Our visit is an eye-opening experience. It has left us all deeply moved and enlightened. It not only allows us to get close to these adorable creatures but also emphasizes the importance of biodiversity conservation. As students, we carry a responsibility to act and ensure that these beautiful creatures and their habitats are protected for generations to come.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周你校组织学生去四川卧龙大熊猫自然保护区参观的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感动的：moved→touched
可爱的：adorable→cute
强调：emphasize→stress
重要性：importance→significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We also participated in a series of interactive activities, including a lecture on panda conservation.
拓展句：We also participated in a series of interactive activities, which included a lecture on panda conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Once we arrived, we were led to the house of the pandas. (运用了once引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As students, we carry a responsibility to act and ensure that these beautiful creatures and their habitats are protected for generations to come. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
9．（2024·湖北武汉·一模）假如你是某中学学生会的主席李华，你们学校将接待来自美国一所中学的访问代表团，你将代表学生会在欢迎会上发言。请你写一篇发言稿，内容要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 表达对两校交流的期待；
3. 祝愿访问成功。
注意：1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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【答案】Dear friends,
On behalf of our student union, I would like to extend a warm welcome to the visiting delegation from the United States! We are delighted to have you here and are excited about the opportunity for cultural exchange between our two schools.
This visit presents a wonderful chance for us to learn from each other, as we share our unique perspectives and experiences. We hope that through this interaction, we can broaden our horizons and deepen our understanding of different cultures and educational systems.
We sincerely believe that this visit will be a great success and that it will create lasting friendships between our students. Let us seize this opportunity to build bridges of understanding and cooperation, as we work towards a brighter and more connected global community.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你们学校将接待来自美国一所中学的访问代表团，你将代表学生会在欢迎会上发言。要求考生写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：extend→express
愉快的：delighted→pleased
激动的：excited→thrilled
真挚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We are delighted to have you here and are excited about the opportunity for cultural exchange between our two schools.
拓展句：We are delighted to have you here and are excited about the opportunity for cultural exchange between our two schools, which is greatly meaningful to all of us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This visit presents a wonderful chance for us to learn from each other, as we share our unique perspectives and experiences. （运用了as引导状语从句）
【高分句型2】We sincerely believe that this visit will be a great success and that it will create lasting friendships between our students. （运用了that引导的宾语从句同时构成并列结构）
10．（2024·湖北·二模）假定你是学生会主席李华。请为校英文报写一则招新启事, 欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团，启事内容包括：
1. 介绍社团的活动；
2.参加社团的好处；
3.加入社团的方式.
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Our English Club
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English club!
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English Club
【答案】Welcome to Our English Club
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English Club! It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.
You can participate in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on. These after-class activities could offer you abundant opportunities. First, your active participation is helpful in strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations. Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English. A good command of English will undoubtedly give you a competitive advantage over your peers.
You can file a written application to our staff office or email us via englishclub@. The deadline for entries is April 9. Come on, and join us now!
English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一则招新启事, 欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团。
【详解】1.词汇积累
杰出的：outstanding→remarkable/distinguished
参加：participate in→ take part in
提供：offer→provide
首先：first→ first of all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can participate in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on.
拓展句：You can participate in a variety of activities which include staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English.（运用了过去分词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】A good command of English will undoubtedly give you a competitive advantage over your peers.（运用了一般将来时的结构）
11．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）假定你是李华。你校英文报《新校园》（New Campus）计划增加新栏目，向学生征集建议。请你用英语给编辑写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 建议增加的栏目；
2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3. I am writing to offer a suggestion for the upcoming new column in our school’s English newspaper, New Campus.
I propose the addition of a column titled “Cultural Spotlight”, which would focus on introducing diverse cultures from around the world. This column would not only enhance our understanding of global cultures but also foster cross-cultural awareness and appreciation among students. Through feature articles, interviews, and cultural snapshots, we could explore the traditions, festivals, and unique aspects of various cultures, thus broadening our horizons and enriching our school life. I believe this new column would be a valuable addition to New Campus and contribute to a more inclusive and culturally diverse learning environment.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校英文报《新校园》（New Campus）计划增加新栏目，向学生征集建议。要求考生用英语给编辑写一封邮件，内容包括建议增加的栏目以及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
提高，增进：enhance→increase
相信，认为：believe→hold a belief
考虑：consider→take…into consideration
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for considering my suggestion.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I propose the addition of a column titled “Cultural Spotlight”, which would focus on introducing diverse cultures from around the world. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through feature articles, interviews, and cultural snapshots, we could explore the traditions, festivals, and unique aspects of various cultures, thus broadening our horizons and enriching our school life. (运用现在分词短语作状语)
12．（2024·山东德州·一模）假定你是李华，从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，你觉得活动很好，但存在不足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你对活动的评价；
2．说明问题并提出改进建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which boosts our speaking skills and confidence. However, I’ve noticed some problems needing to be solved.
The students crazy about English are always seizing the opportunity to present themselves, leaving shy students no chance. So I suggest making some adjustments. First, students can take turns giving presentations to guarantee everyone an equal chance to express themselves. Moreover, you can require students to review each other’s speeches in groups, which will not only greatly reduces the error rate but also improves their writing skills.
I'd appreciate it if my advice could be considered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，考生觉得活动很好，但存在不足之处，要求考生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
欣赏：appreciate→ admire
提高：boost→ promote
解决：solve→ settle
抓住：seize→ grasp
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, I’ve noticed some problems needing to be solved.
拓展句：However, I’ve noticed some problems, which need to be solved.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which boosts our speaking skills and confidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The students crazy about English are always seizing the opportunity to present themselves, leaving shy students no chance.（运用了现在分词leaving作状语）
13．（2024高三下·福建·专题练习）假定你是李华，近日参加了学校的创意手工作品展，外籍笔友David对你的作品很感兴趣。请用英语给他写封邮件，介绍你的作品及感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Delighted to know you are interested in the exhibition of creative handmade works held in our school last week, I am writing to share it with you.
All works were made by us students, which were created from waste and used materials. I made a shopping bag from a pair of worn-out jeans, spending countless minutes designing, decorating and perfecting it. My works has received lots of likes.
I find it enjoyable and meaningful to make handmade works from recyclables. And I’ve developed my innovative ability as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，近日参加了学校的创意手工作品展，外籍笔友David对你的作品很感兴趣。请用英语给他写封邮件，介绍你的作品及感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
举办、组织：hold→organize
许多：lots of→plenty of
有意义的：meaningful→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I find it enjoyable and meaningful to make handmade works from recyclables.
拓展句：I find that it is enjoyable and meaningful to make handmade works from recyclables.
【点睛】[高分句型1] All works were made by us students, which were created from waste and used materials. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I made a shopping bag from a pair of worn-out jeans, spending countless minutes designing, decorating and perfecting it. (运用了现在分词作状语)
14．（2024·福建漳州·三模）近期哈尔滨成为网红旅游打卡地，假定你是李华，想在寒假期间邀请美国交换生Tom一起去哈尔滨游玩。请你给他写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括：
(1) 邀请同行，商议出行日期和方式；
(2) 询问御寒措施和注意事项。
注意：(1) 写作词数应为80左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m thrilled to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin. It would be fantastic to have you accompany me and create unforgettable memories together.
I propose we visit Harbin from 20th to 27th in January, but I am flexible and open to your availability. As for transportation, we can consider taking a train or a flight depending on what works best for both of us.
As we will visit the city during the winter season, I want to ask about the cold weather precautions and any special considerations we should keep in mind to stay warm and safe.
Looking forward to your reply and hoping we can make this trip happen!
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给美国交换生Tom写一封英文电子邮件,邀请他一起去哈尔滨游玩，需涵盖发出邀请、商议出行日期和方式、询问御寒措施和注意事项。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
极好的：fantastic→wonderful, incredible
提议：propose→make a proposal
至于：as for→in the matter of, with respect to
考虑：consider→think about, give thought to
记住：keep sth. in mind→bear sth. in mind
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m thrilled to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin.
拓展句：It gives me a thrill to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As for transportation, we can consider taking a train or a flight depending on what works best for both of us. (运用了what引导名词性从句作depending on的宾语)
[高分句型2] As we will visit the city during the winter season, I want to ask about the cold weather precautions and any special considerations we should keep in mind to stay warm and safe. (运用了As引导原因状语从句、关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略)
15．（2024·福建泉州·三模）假定你是李华，请给你校交换生James写一封信，告知他泉州市正向外国友人开展题为“Quanzhou in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动以宣传推介“世遗泉州文化”，内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.视频要求；
3. 鼓励参加。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：世遗泉州文化the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou
Dear James,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I can hardly wait to share an exciting opportunity with you! A short video collection activity called “Quanzhou in My Eyes” is being launched to display and promote the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou.
To participate, you are required to shoot a video of the unique cultural heritage of the city and post it on some given video-sharing platforms by the end of March. The video should be less than 5 minutes and can be presented in either Chinese or English.
It’s a golden chance to show your talent. Looking forward to your creative contribution.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校交换生James写一封信，鼓励他参加题为“Quanzhou in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
展示：display → show
要求：require → demand
呈现：present → take on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A short video collection activity called “Quanzhou in My Eyes” is being launched to display and promote the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou.
拓展句：A short video collection activity, which is called “Quanzhou in My Eyes”, is being launched to display and promote the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A short video collection activity called “Quanzhou in My Eyes” is being launched to display and promote the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou.（运用了过去分词作定语）
【高分句型2】To participate, you are required to shoot a video of the unique cultural heritage of the city and post it on some given video-sharing platforms by the end of March.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
16．（2024·福建漳州·二模）假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如下：
（1）你的态度；
（2）你的理由；
（3）你的建议。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Andrew,
Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons. However, I believe that it isn’t necessary.
Our focus should be on improving students’ English language skills. While learning about British culture is interesting, it may not be directly relevant to their language development. Therefore, I suggest we continue with our current lesson plan.
However, if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates to the language or culture, we can certainly incorporate it into our lessons. But overall, our primary objective should be to improve students’ language proficiency.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国外教Andrew写一封邮件，就是否需要在接下来的课程中介绍一些有关英国的历史知识表明态度并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→appreciate
应该：should→be supposed to
集中于：focus on→concentrate on
建议：suggest→advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons.
拓展句：Thank you for your asking me about whether you should introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
However, I believe that it isn’t necessary.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
However, if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates to the language or culture, we can certainly incorporate it into our lessons.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的定语从句）
17．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，本学期你校将为外籍学生开设一系列以中国传统文化为主题的研讨活动（workshop），请你写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动；
2. 阐明理由；
3. 邀请参加。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
Notice
To help international students adapt to the life here, our school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional culture.
As scheduled, the workshops are to take place every Thursday this semester, from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m.. During this period, you will be exposed to a selection of Chinese traditional cultures in daily life, gaining a better insight into Four Treasures of Study, Four Great Inventions, ancient music and lion dance, all these profound Chinese cultures. A certain amount of time will be set aside in each workshop for interaction, in which session a teacher will be available to clarify your doubts or offer some suggestions if necessary.
The workshops are supposed to expand your perspective of Chinese culture and meanwhile, make your campus life here easier and more fruitful. We sincerely hope to see you there!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。本学期你校将为外籍学生开设一系列以中国传统文化为主题的研讨活动，要求考生写一则通知。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举行：take place→occur
更好地了解：gain a better insight into→understand more deeply
提供：offer→provide
建议：suggestion→advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To help international students adapt to the life here, our school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：Our school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional culture, which are aimed at helping international students adapt to the life here.
【点睛】[高分句型1]A certain amount of time will be set aside in each workshop for interaction, in which session a teacher will be available to clarify your doubts or offer some suggestions if necessary.(in which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]To help international students adapt to the life here, our school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional culture.(不定式作目的状语)
18．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文报 “Student Voice”栏目投稿，内容包括：
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等);
2.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
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【答案】One Possible Version
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
I’m excited to share my experience with the weekly English Literature Reading class.
Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency. Each week this class unfolds with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to contemporary poetry. Through interactive discussions, group readings, and insightful analysis, we are able to explore the depths of literary. Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I’ve honed critical thinking skills.
Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters. It has undoubtedly been a highlight of this academic semester.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报“Student Voice”栏目投稿，介绍英语文学阅读课以及自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
提高：enhance→improve
另外：moreover→furthermore
无疑：undoubtedly→beyond doubt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
拓展句：The class, which started this semester, is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I’ve honed critical thinking skills. (运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
19．（2024·浙江·二模）你校英语报近期将推出一个主题为“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的专栏。你与美国教育专家Dr. Smith进行了交流后写一篇英语文章投稿，主要内容如下：1. 交流的主要内容：2. 交流后的收获。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, a renowned American education expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school students.
Dr. Smith emphasized the importance of maintaining a balance between academic pressure and personal wel-being. He highlighted the significance of self-care practices such as regular exercise, adequate sleep, and mindfulness techniques. According to Dr. Smith, cultivating hobbies and spending quality time with friends and family can also greatly contribute to a healthy mental state.
I came to realize that achieving academic success in high school shouldn’t come at the expense of mental health. Dr. Smith’s insights serve as a reminder for students to prioritize their well-being while striving for excellence.
【导语】
本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求就“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的问题与教育专家进行交流后，写篇交流心得投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
著名的：renowned→prestigious
培养：foster→cultivate
强调：emphasize→underline
压力：pressure→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, a renowned American education expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school students.
拓展句：Recently, I had the opportunity to interview Dr. Smith, who is a renowned American education expert, on the topic of fostering a positive mindset among high school students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】According to Dr. Smith, cultivating hobbies and spending quality time with friends and family can also greatly contribute to a healthy mental state. （运用了动名词作主语）
【高分句型2】I came to realize that achieving academic success in high school shouldn’t come at the expense of mental health. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
20．（2024·浙江温州·二模）假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡(杭州)寻找外国友人结伴“城市漫步”。请通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；
2. 旅伴要求。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Join Me for a City Walk
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【答案】 Join Me for a City Walk
Hey, I’m Li Hua, and I have a great idea for this summer! I’m planning a city walk in Hangzhou this summer and looking for a foreign friend to join me! We’ll take a leisurely stroll through the city, admire the beautiful scenery, savor the local cuisine, and immerse ourselves in the local culture. If you’re a friendly and easygoing adventurer, let’s embark on this exciting journey together and create unforgettable memories! Let’s have a great time! Contact me now!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的帖文。要求通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，在家乡(杭州)寻找外国友人结伴“城市漫步”。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→ seek for
品尝：savor → enjoy/relish
令人兴奋的：exciting → thrilling
玩得开心：have a good time→ enjoy oneself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m planning a city walk in Hangzhou this summer and looking for a foreign friend to join me!
拓展句：I, who am looking for a foreign friend to join me, am planning a city walk in Hangzhou this summer.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Hey, I’m Li Hua, and I have a great idea for this summer!（运用了and连接的并列句）
【高分句型2】If you’re a friendly and easygoing adventurer, let’s embark on this exciting journey together and create unforgettable memories!（运用了if引导的状语从句）
21．（2023·浙江绍兴·模拟预测）按校劳动日程，下周一你班将和外籍学生一起乘坐校车去阳光农场(Shining Farm)进行秋季劳动日实践活动，现请你口头通知他们这一安排，内容要点包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 劳动项目安排；3. 相关提醒。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
May I have your attention, please
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】May I have your attention, please! As scheduled, the autumn labor day comes next Monday. So together we will engage in some farm work on the Shining Farm located in the suburb, some 20 miles away from here. There, in groups, we’ll, under the guidance of experienced farmers, help to get in rice, fertilize vegetables, pick fruits, tend livestock, etc. Also, we’ll prepare lunch in the farmhouse ourselves. Tiring but rewarding work, isn’t it Remember to get dressed properly and gather at 9:00 on Monday morning at the school gate. The school bus will take us to the farm.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的通知。要求向外籍学生口头通知下周学校的劳动日程，即前往阳光农场进行秋季劳动日实践活动，告知其时间地点、项目安排和相关提醒等。
【详解】1.词汇积累
按计划：as scheduled→ as planned
参加：engage in→ participate in
值得的：rewarding → worthwhile
适当地：properly→ appropriately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So together we will engage in some farm work on the Shining Farm located in the suburb, some 20 miles away from here.
拓展句：So together we will engage in some farm work on the Shining Farm which is located in the suburb, some 20 miles away from here.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As scheduled, the autumn labor day comes next Monday.（运用了状语从句的省略）
【高分句型2】There, in groups, we’ll, under the guidance of experienced farmers, help to get in rice, fertilize vegetables, pick fruits, tend livestock, etc.（运用了并列谓语动词）
22．（2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，一个月前你给校英文报专栏Interpersonal Relationships投稿，但尚未收到回复。请你写一封邮件问询，内容包括：
1.简述稿件内容；
2.询问稿件情况。
注意:
1.写作词敷应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在各题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I contributed to your “Interpersonal Relationships” column a month ago. Not having received any response yet, I am writing to inquire about it.
Titled “Strangers under the Same Roof”, my article explores various practical strategies for us teenagers to maintain a harmonious parent-child relationship. Does it ring a bell with you
I’m eager to know if my contribution has been selected for publication or if any further modifications are needed.
Thank you for your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校报编辑写封信询问自己投稿的情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
回复：response→reply/answer
各种各样的：various→all kinds of/a variety of
策略：strategy→tactic
渴望的：eager→keen/anxious
2. 句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：I contributed to your “Interpersonal Relationships” column a month ago.
拓展句：It was a month ago that I contributed to your “Interpersonal Relationships” column.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not having received any response yet, I am writing to inquire about it.(使用了现在分词的完成式作状语、不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Titled “Strangers under the Same Roof”, my article explores various practical strategies for us teenagers to maintain a harmonious parent-child relationship.(使用了过去分词作状语、不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型3】I’m eager to know if my contribution has been selected for publication or if any further modifications are needed.(使用了不定式作原因状语、if引导宾语从句)
23．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）假如你是李华。你的英国朋友Ryan来信了解你校英语校本课程（the English language school-based curriculum）开设情况。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括：
1.课程简介；
2.开设情况；
3.学生反响。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
Glad to hear from you. Learning that you’re concerned about the English language school-based curriculum in our school, I’d like to give you a brief introduction.
Our curriculum is module-based with age-appropriate themes and topics that match with pupils’ development stages. Various reading booklets have been developed over the years, from elective modules in the senior forms to enhancement courses. They are available every Friday afternoon with an active involvement of the students.
The students now pay more attention to communicating and cultural skills in the language rather than focus on test-oriented learning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Ryan介绍你校英语校本课程的开设情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
课程：curriculum/ course→lesson
参与：involvement→engagement
集中：focus on→concentrate on
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Various reading booklets have been developed over the years, from elective modules in the senior forms to enhancement courses.
拓展句：Various reading booklets have been developed over the years, which include elective modules in the senior forms and enhancement courses.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you’re concerned about the English language school-based curriculum in our school, I’d like to give you a brief introduction. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Our curriculum is module-based with age-appropriate themes and topics that match with pupils’ development stages. (运用了that引导定语从句)
24．（2024·河北·二模）假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访。请你就此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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【答案】 The Benefits of Doing Housework
With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the benefits of doing housework.
According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving self-discipline, emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. Most students also pointed out that doing housework can help them learn about responsibility and understanding the value of hard work.
In conclusion, the benefits of doing housework are not only apparent in the physical labor, but also in the mental and emotional aspects of our lives. I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就自己做的关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
临近：approach→draw near/around the corner
看法，观点：opinion→perspective
明显的：apparent→evident
建议：recommend→advise/suggest
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句： I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
拓展句： I highly recommend that everyone should take some time to do housework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the benefits of doing housework.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving self-discipline, emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
25．（2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，打算参加你校即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国故事”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿。
1.介绍你要讲的中国故事；
2.你喜欢它的原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to
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【答案】Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to share with you the classic tale of the Monkey King.
The Monkey King is a well-known character from the Chinese literary masterpiece, Journey to the West. This story portrays the adventurous journey of the mischievous but courageous Monkey King, Sun Wukong. With his incredible strength and intelligence, he helps the Tang Monk on his quest to obtain Buddhist scriptures.
I’m drawn to this story because the Monkey King represents the spirit of perseverance and self-discovery. His pursuit of knowledge and self-improvement serve as a reminder never to stop exploring and challenging ourselves.
Thank you for your attention.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，用英语介绍要讲的中国故事，并陈述喜欢它的原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
名著：masterpiece→masterwork/classic
描写：portray→describe
顽皮的：mischievous→naughty
勇敢的：courageous→brave
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为强调句
原句：With his incredible strength and intelligence, he helps the Tang Monk on his quest to obtain Buddhist scriptures.
拓展句：It is with his incredible strength and intelligence that he helps the Tang Monk on his quest to obtain Buddhist scriptures.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m drawn to this story because the Monkey King represents the spirit of perseverance and self-discovery.(使用了because引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】His pursuit of knowledge and self-improvement serve as a reminder never to stop exploring and challenging ourselves. (使用了不定式作后置定语和动名词作宾语)《2024年新高考英语二轮复习》（八省专用）
专题60 应用文写作最新真题模拟25篇（技法+模拟）
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英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
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1．（2024·广东韶关·二模）假设你是育才中学高三学生李华，上周六你参加了学校举办的大学生返校分享活动。请为校英语报写一篇英文报道。内容如下：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
College Students’ Sharing
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2．（2024·广东汕头·一模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，为了提高学生安全意识，学校决定于下周一开展紧急疏散演练。请你用英语写一份活动通知，告知学校的留学生，内容包括：
1.参加人员、时间、路线；
2.注意事项。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：紧急疏散演练urgent evacuation drill
Notice
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the Students’ Union
3．（2024·广东·一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”，并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件，邀请他在线观看。内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.观看时间 、方式；
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024·广东梅州·一模）假定你是李华，你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。请给外教David写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 简述你的英语水平；
2. 请他推荐一些读物。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·湖南益阳·三模）假定你是学生会主席李华，你校计划定于6月 10 日在体育馆举办高三毕业典礼，请写封邮件邀请你校外教 David 参加，内容包括：
1.典礼时间与地点；
2.典礼内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．（2024·湖南邵阳·二模）假定你是校报英语版总编李华，你邀请到了美国环保专家White教授作主题为“Livingin Harmony with Nature”的讲座。请你在讲座前简要发言，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；2. 注意事项。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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7．（2024·湖南岳阳·二模）你校学生会计划面向国际交流生招募山区小学英语支教志愿者。请你写一则招募启事，内容包括：
1. 介绍招募目的；
2. 说明工作内容和要求。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Volunteers wanted
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8．（2024·湖南衡阳·二模）上周你校组织学生去四川卧龙大熊猫自然保护区参观，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to Wolong Giant Panda Nature Reserve
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9．（2024·湖北武汉·一模）假如你是某中学学生会的主席李华，你们学校将接待来自美国一所中学的访问代表团，你将代表学生会在欢迎会上发言。请你写一篇发言稿，内容要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 表达对两校交流的期待；
3. 祝愿访问成功。
注意：1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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10．（2024·湖北·二模）假定你是学生会主席李华。请为校英文报写一则招新启事, 欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团，启事内容包括：
1. 介绍社团的活动；
2.参加社团的好处；
3.加入社团的方式.
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Our English Club
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English club!
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English Club
11．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）假定你是李华。你校英文报《新校园》（New Campus）计划增加新栏目，向学生征集建议。请你用英语给编辑写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 建议增加的栏目；
2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
12．（2024·山东德州·一模）假定你是李华，从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，你觉得活动很好，但存在不足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你对活动的评价；
2．说明问题并提出改进建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2024高三下·福建·专题练习）假定你是李华，近日参加了学校的创意手工作品展，外籍笔友David对你的作品很感兴趣。请用英语给他写封邮件，介绍你的作品及感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2024·福建漳州·三模）近期哈尔滨成为网红旅游打卡地，假定你是李华，想在寒假期间邀请美国交换生Tom一起去哈尔滨游玩。请你给他写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括：
(1) 邀请同行，商议出行日期和方式；
(2) 询问御寒措施和注意事项。
注意：(1) 写作词数应为80左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2024·福建泉州·三模）假定你是李华，请给你校交换生James写一封信，告知他泉州市正向外国友人开展题为“Quanzhou in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动以宣传推介“世遗泉州文化”，内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.视频要求；
3. 鼓励参加。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：世遗泉州文化the UNESCO World Heritage culture of Quanzhou
Dear James,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
16．（2024·福建漳州·二模）假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如下：
（1）你的态度；
（2）你的理由；
（3）你的建议。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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17．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，本学期你校将为外籍学生开设一系列以中国传统文化为主题的研讨活动（workshop），请你写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动；
2. 阐明理由；
3. 邀请参加。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
18．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文报 “Student Voice”栏目投稿，内容包括：
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等);
2.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
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19．（2024·浙江·二模）你校英语报近期将推出一个主题为“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的专栏。你与美国教育专家Dr. Smith进行了交流后写一篇英语文章投稿，主要内容如下：1. 交流的主要内容：2. 交流后的收获。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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20．（2024·浙江温州·二模）假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡(杭州)寻找外国友人结伴“城市漫步”。请通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；
2. 旅伴要求。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Join Me for a City Walk
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21．（2023·浙江绍兴·模拟预测）按校劳动日程，下周一你班将和外籍学生一起乘坐校车去阳光农场(Shining Farm)进行秋季劳动日实践活动，现请你口头通知他们这一安排，内容要点包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 劳动项目安排；3. 相关提醒。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
May I have your attention, please
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That’s all. Thank you!
22．（2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，一个月前你给校英文报专栏Interpersonal Relationships投稿，但尚未收到回复。请你写一封邮件问询，内容包括：
1.简述稿件内容；
2.询问稿件情况。
注意:
1.写作词敷应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在各题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
23．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）假如你是李华。你的英国朋友Ryan来信了解你校英语校本课程（the English language school-based curriculum）开设情况。请你用英语写一封回信。内容包括：
1.课程简介；
2.开设情况；
3.学生反响。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
24．（2024·河北·二模）假定你是李华，劳动节到来之际，你做了关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访。请你就此次采访写一篇报道，向校英文报投稿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Housework
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25．（2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，打算参加你校即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国故事”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿。
1.介绍你要讲的中国故事；
2.你喜欢它的原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to
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