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题型五　应用文写作
第二节　策略实战总动员
一、 三大策略先保分
1　言之有心审题定裁
审题不清，全盘皆输。一篇作文，一定要首先确保审题正确，
才能拿到基本分。审题首先要把握两个要点：话题和体裁，其次是
要点和语言。
典例分析 审题四要素
　　（2023·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，
内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 写作词数应为80左右。 审话题 对课后练习口语的分组的看法并提出自己的一些建议
审要点 第一段：先开门见山提出分组存在问题
第二段：具体指出问题所在
第三段：提出一些建议
审语言 时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：第一人称和第三人称
语气：外教属于师长，语气上应该表
示尊敬，但说明问题时也要不卑不亢
[范文]
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I don’t think it’s a good idea to randomly pair
up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as
follows.
To begin with， randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced
language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students
as the more advanced one in a group may dominate the conversation，
leaving little room for the other student to improve.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to
let students choose their own partners. This way， everyone can feel more
comfortable practising and improving their spoken English together. Thank
you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[点评] 本文思路清晰，要点齐全。第一段直接提出了这种分组方法存在
问题，第二段具体指出了问题所在，最后一段提出了一些建议。文章使
用了较多高级词汇，如randomly、 pair up、 unbalanced、 hinder、
advanced、 based on等。此外，文章句型丰富，第一段中使用了it作形式
主语，第二段第一句中使用了动名词作主语，第二段第二句中
“leaving ...improve”为现在分词作结果状语，最后一段第一句使用了
不定式作表语和过去分词作状语。
2　言之有理谋篇布局
结构松散、层次不清是写作的大忌。严谨、清晰的文章结构是一篇
优秀作文的典型特征，确认了体裁、话题、要点和语言之后，紧接着就
是要合理安排段落和层次，目前应用文最有效的就是三段式写作。
结　构 内　容 形　式
篇头 提出写作意图 可用功能性句子体现写作
目的
篇中 叙述要点信息 要点齐全，传递写作意义
篇尾 表示祝福、期待、感谢等 回扣写作目的
典例分析 三段谋篇
　　（2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷）假
定你是校广播站英语节目Talk
and Talk的负责人李华，请给
外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做
一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 先审要点
1. 邀请Caroline参加英语节目Talk and
Talk的访谈
2. 向Caroline介绍节目
3. 与Caroline约定访谈的时间和话题
三段谋篇
第一段：点明目的（邀请对方做一次访
谈）
第二段：介绍节目（节目的内容、成立
的目的、取得的成绩等）并与老师约定
访谈的时间和话题
第三段：简短结尾，也可以表达期盼、
感谢，并希望得到回复
[范文]
Dear Caroline，
I’m writing to invite you to participate in Talk and Talk， an English
programme of our school’s radio station.
This programme is mainly about English learning， with the purpose of
improving students’ English level and broadening their horizons. This time，
we’d like to conduct an interview with you about “How to learn English
well” on this programme， which is scheduled to be from 6：00 p.m. to
8：00 p.m. on June 10th.
All of us are looking forward to your participation. We would appreciate
it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[点评] 本文思路清晰、简洁明了。第一段提出了写作目的是邀请外教参
加访谈，第二段提到了节目的内容、成立的目的以及这次访谈的话题和
时间，最后一段表达了期盼和感谢。
文章使用了较多高级词汇，如participate in、 with the purpose of、
broaden one’s horizons、 conduct an interview、 be scheduled to等。第一
段结尾使用了同位语，第二段结尾使用了which引导的定语从句。
3　言之有物遣词造句
表达无错误、语言规范地道是高分作文的重要特点。在没有错误、
保证先“写对”的基础上增加亮点表达可以提升文章的层次。我们常常
可以利用一些词汇升级途径，如高级词汇替换，替换为短语来升级词
汇。句式中可以掌握一些常用的写作句式、高级句型，写作时有意识用
到这些句型会为文章增彩。
典例分析
　　（2023·浙江卷）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边
的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。
注意：
写作词数应为80左右。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
★ 三档作文 Getting to Know the Plants
Around Us Last weekend， I went to an
activity“Getting to Know the
Plants Around Us”. ★ 五档作文（注意黑体部分的升级）
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend， I participated in a
“Getting to Know the Plants Around
Us” activity organized by our
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist. He taught us something about various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to watch and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event， I was surprised by the plants that exist in our world. We learned about their medical purposes， and we realized that they provide food and shelter for
animals. They are very
important in our life. Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist， who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event， I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world. Not only have we learned about their medical purposes， but also we are aware that they provide food and shelter for animals. They are playing a significant role in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
I think it was an interesting
experience. Overall， it was a valuable and
enriching experience.
二、 八大实战得满分
1　求助和建议
（1） 求助信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.
我写信给您是想问您能否帮我个忙。
I’m terribly sorry to bother you， but Ihave some difficulties here and
need your help.
很抱歉打扰您，但我在此有些困难，需要您的帮助。
　　引人入胜篇中句
I’m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice
as you have organized similar activities.
我被难住了，我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议，因为你组
织过类似活动。
Confronted with so challenging a problem， I have no alternative but
to turn to you for help.
面对如此具有挑战性的问题，我别无选择，只得向你求助。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Thank you for your time and patience， and I’m looking forward to
your early reply.
感谢您的时间和耐心，我期待您的早日答复。
I would appreciate it if you could spare some time to polish my
application letter and resume.
假如您能抽出些时间来润色我的申请信和简历，我将不胜感激。
[实用模板]
Dear 　　　　，
I’m writing to ask for your assistance in the hope that you can help
me 　　　　（写信的目的）. Will it be convenient for you if I ask you to
aid me in 　　　　？/I wonder if you could spare some time to help
me 　　　　.（求助的具体内容）
I will be more than glad if you could consider my request./I will be
grateful if you can take my request into consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[写作架构]
　　（2） 建议信
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I’m pleased to receive your letter seeking for advice on how to get
along well with your classmates.
我非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中你就如何与你的同学好好相处征
求建议。
Hearing that you have difficulty with the scientific experiment class，
I’m writing to make some useful/helpful/practical suggestions/tips here.
听说你在科学实验课上有困难，在此，我致函提出一些有用的/有
帮助的/实用的建议。
　　引人入胜篇中句
If I were you/Were I you， I would work out regularly in order to keep
healthy.
如果我是你，我会经常锻炼以保持健康。
From where I stand， it would be a wise choice if you stay at home
and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.
在我看来，除非必要，你待在家里并避免出门是明智的选择。
With the combination of the three points， the popularity of the
website will be definitely enhanced among target readers.
结合这三点，该网站在目标读者中的受欢迎程度一定会得到提高。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Personally， it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have
faith in yourself.
就我个人而言，如果你采纳我的建议并对自己有信心的话会有
益处的。
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会觉得这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
[实用模板]
Dear 　　　　，
You have asked me for my advice with regard to 　　　　（需寻求建
议的问题）， and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following
steps： 　　　　（建议的内容）.
I hope you will find these proposals useful， and I would be ready to
discuss this matter with you for further details. Good luck with
your 　　　　（祝愿）.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
2　申请和推荐
　　（1） 申请信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I’m extremely glad to learn that a guide for your Chinese relic
exhibition is needed andI’m writing to beg for a chance to get involved.
得知中国文物展览需要一名导游，我非常高兴，我写信是想恳求一
个参与的机会。
Seeing your advertisement for an English tutor in the newspaper， I’m
gladly writing to apply for the job.
看到你在报纸上招聘英语家教的广告，我很高兴写信来申请这
份工作。
　　引人入胜篇中句
I can express myself freely in fluent English， which enables me to
communicate well with foreign visitors.
我能用流利的英语自由地表达自己，这让我能和外国来访者很好地
交流。
Active and sociable， I believe I’m perfectly qualified for the job as a
volunteer.
我很活跃，好交际，我相信我完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
I believe I am qualified for the job. First， I have extensive knowledge
of our school’s history and culture.
我相信我能胜任这份工作。首先，我对我们学校的历史和文化有广
泛的了解。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Hopefully， I could be offered the chance to join your summer
camp/be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
希望我有机会加入你们的夏令营。
Attaching great importance to the chance， I would be extremely
grateful if I have the honor of being given this job.
我非常看重这次机会，如果我有幸得到这份工作，我会非常感激。
[实用模板]
Dear Sir/Madam，
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised
in 　　　　（信息来源） on 　　　　（信息发布时间）.
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job， but I also have the
right personality for a（n） 　　　　（职位名称）， because 　　　　
（原因）. Should you grant me a personal interview， I would be most
grateful. If you need to know more about me， please feel free to contact me
at any time at 　　　　（联系方式）.
Thank you for considering my application， and I am looking forward
to meeting you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
　
[写作架构]
　（2） 推荐信
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Knowing you are in need of a student assistant， I happily recommend
Li Mei to you.
得知您需要一位学生助理，我很乐意向您推荐李梅。
I strongly recommend that you watch the film Chang’an， which is
well worth watching.
我强烈推荐你去看电影《长安三万里》，这很值得观看。
　　引人入胜篇中句
I guarantee he will be well qualified for the job./He is the most suitable
person for the job.
我保证他会十分胜任这项工作。/他是最适合（做）这项工作的
人。
Her academic record is constantly maintained at the top level， which
results from her devotion to her studies and intelligent nature.
她的学习成绩始终保持在顶尖水平，这源自她对学业的投入和她聪
慧的天资。
The most important reason for my recommendation is that the Great
Wall is regarded as a symbol of China.
我推荐长城的最重要的原因是它被看作中国的一个象征。
Chinese classic literature works are highly recommended， and
through these you’ll acquire a glimpse of Chinese traditions and culture.
（我们）强烈推荐中国的经典文学作品，通过这些（作品）你可以
一窥中国的传统和文化。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration， we
would highly appreciate it.
如果这项推荐能得到您的认可，我们将不胜感激。
I’ll be extremely delighted if you can take my recommendation into
consideration.
如果您能考虑我的推荐，我将会非常高兴。
[实用模板]
Dear 　　　　，
I am so delighted to know that 　　　　（对方需要推荐的事宜）.
With reference to your requirements， I shall recommend 　　　　（推荐
的人/物） to you.
To begin with， 　　　　（推荐理由一）. In addition， 　　　　
（推荐理由二）. What’s more， 　　　　（推荐理由三）.
I’d be extremely grateful if you could take my recommendation into
consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3　告知和邀请
（1） 告知信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Learning you are so interested in the speech contest， I’m writing to
give you a brief introduction.
得知你对这次演讲比赛很感兴趣，我写信向你简要介绍（比赛的情
况）。
As for your last letter asking about the Dragon Boat Festival， I would
like to inform you of some details.
至于在上一封信中提及的端午节，我想告知你一些细节。
引人入胜篇中句
As scheduled， the match will take place in our school gym on the
afternoon of July 4 and we will play against the team from Hongxing High
School.
按照计划，比赛将于7月4日下午在我们学校体育馆举行，我们将与
红星高中的球队比赛。
On July 20， we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which
you are interested in in the lecture hall.
7月20日，我们将在阶梯教室学习你感兴趣的唐诗。
The team will hold a range of activities， including some training and
matches. And some world-famous players will be invited to give lessons.
该队将举行一系列的活动，包括一些训练和比赛。一些世界著名的
球员将被邀请来上课。
画龙点睛结尾句
Hopefully， you will come to China and enjoy the authentic traditional
festival.
希望你能来到中国体验正宗的传统节日。
If you have any other question， please contact me at any time.
如果您有任何其他问题，请随时和我联系。
[实用模板]
Dear 　　　　，
Learning that you are interested in 　　　　（活动名称）， I’m
writing to tell you something about it.
In order to 　　　　（活动目的）， we will 　　　　（活动内容
一）. Besides， 　　　　（活动内容二）. Anyway， 　　　　（其他活
动细节）.
If any further information is needed， please don’t hesitate to contact
me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
　　（2） 邀请信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Knowing that you are crazy about classical music， I’m writing to
invite you to experience the music festival to be held in our school.
得知你对古典音乐着迷，我写信邀请你体验将在我们学校举办的音
乐节。
A classical music concert will be held in the music hall of our school on
November 8th. It’s my great honour to invite you to join in the concert on
behalf of our school.
11月8日在我们学校音乐厅将举办一场古典音乐会。我非常荣幸代
表我们学校邀请您参加音乐会。
　　引人入胜篇中句
As scheduled， the activity is to be held at 8：00 a.m. on January 20th
in the lecture hall and its theme is “Differences Between Eastern and
Western Customs”.
按照预定时间，活动将于1月20日上午8点在阶梯教室举行，主题为
“东西方习俗的差异”。
Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities， including
musical drama performances， playing musical instruments， as well as a
singing contest.
我们的音乐节将包括各种各样的活动，包括音乐剧表演、演奏乐器
以及一场歌唱比赛。
This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese culture
that it can’t be missed.
这是体验中国传统文化的绝佳机会，不容错过。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient for you.
如果你方便的话，我真心希望你接受我们/我的邀请。
We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your
earliest convenience.
如果你能尽早确认参加，我们将不胜感激。
[实用模板]
Dear 　　　　，
Knowing that you’re fond of 　　　　（感兴趣的事物）， I’m
writing to invite you to join in 　　　　（邀请参加的活动）.
As scheduled， it will be held at/in 　　　　（地点） on 　　　　
（时间）. This will be followed by a（n） 　　　　（活动安排一），
after which we will 　　　　（活动安排二）. I’m sure you can not
only 　　　　（活动益处一） but also 　　　　（活动益处二） through
the activity.
I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation as early as
possible. Hopefully， you’ll accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
4　演讲和倡议
　　（1） 演讲稿
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Today I am more than glad to have the opportunity to deliver this
speech.
今天我很高兴有机会发表这个演讲。
It’s my honour to stand here and say something about friendship.
我很荣幸站在这里，谈谈关于友谊的话题。
　　引人入胜篇中句
As is known to us all， failure is the mother of success， but few
people can really understand what the saying means.
众所周知，失败是成功之母，可是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的
含义。
What I want to stress is that we should attach importance to teenagers’
education.
我想强调的是我们应该重视青少年的教育。
As students， we’d better walk or use public transportation and try our
best to arouse people’s awareness of environmental protection.
作为学生，我们最好步行或乘坐公共交通工具，并尽我们最大的努
力唤起人们的环境保护意识。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to
speak here today.
我从心底里感谢你们今天给了我这个机会在这里讲话。
I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you！Thanks for
your listening.
我希望上面提到的可能对你们有所帮助！感谢你们的倾听。
[实用模板]
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen，
It’s a great honour for me to stand here and give my speech. My name
is 　　　　（自我介绍）. The topic of my speech is 　　　　（演讲主
题）.
To begin with， many people suggest that 　　　　.
Secondly， 　　　　. Thirdly， 　　　　.（列举话题或现象） What I
want to stress is that 　　　　（重申主题）. For one thing， 　　　　.
For another， 　　　　. Besides， 　　　　（列举原因或重要性）. In a
word， 　　　　（总结）.
Thank you for your listening./Thank you.
　　（2） 倡议书
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
As is known to all， volunteering is very helpful to both those in need
and society.
众所周知，志愿活动对那些需要帮助的人和社会都有好处。
I am Li Hua， the chairman of the Students’ Union. I’d like to call
on/appeal toall the students to protect our living environment by living a low-
carbon life.
我是学生会主席李华。我想要呼吁全体学生通过过低碳生活来保护
我们的生活环境。
　　引人入胜篇中句
To start with， it is vital for us to raise awareness of environmental
protection.
首先，对我们来说至关重要的是要提高环保意识。
Only when we attach great importance to our actual action can our
campus be more beautiful.
只有当我们非常重视自己的实际行动时，我们的校园才会更美丽。
To encourage us students to develop the habit of reading， our school
is carrying out an activity whose theme is “Making Reading a Way of
Life”. We call on everybody to take part in it.
为了鼓励我们学生养成阅读的习惯，我们学校正在开展一项主题为
“使阅读成为一种生活方式”的活动。我们呼吁大家都来参加。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
It’s high time that we took measures to change the situation.
是我们采取措施改变这种情况的时候了。
Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference. Let’s make joint efforts
to make the world a better place.
每一份努力都很重要/都有作用。让我们共同努力使世界变得更
好。
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Dear 　　　　，
In recent years， we have to face 　　　　（社会现象）. As we all
know， 　　　　（危害性）. In order to 　　　　（倡议的目的）， it is
high time that we took action to change it.
Faced with the problem， we should take some effective measures.
Firstly， 　　　　（倡议措施一）. Secondly， 　　　　（倡议措施
二）. What’s more， we should 　　　　（倡议措施三）.
Let’s 　　　　（倡议者的决心和希望）.
The Students’ Union
5　感谢和道歉
　　（1） 感谢信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I am writing to extend my thanks/convey my gratitude/appreciation to
you for your help.
我写这封信是向你表达我对你的帮助的感激。
On behalf of my whole family， I would like to extend my heartfelt
thanks for your help.
我谨代表我全家对你的帮助表示由衷的感谢。
　　引人入胜篇中句
If it had not been for your guidance， I wouldn’t have won first prize.
如果没有你的指导，我就不会获得一等奖。
You don’t know how excited I was to get first place in the English
speech contest held in my school last Friday and I owe it to your kind help.
你不知道上周五在我校举行的英语演讲比赛中我获得第一名时是多
么激动，我把这归功于你友好的帮助。
Under your professional guidance， the participants gave such an
impressive performance.
在您的专业指导下，参加者的表现令人印象深刻。
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Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes once again.
请再次接受我诚挚的感谢和最美好的祝愿。
Words fail to express my sincere gratitude deep in my heart./No words
are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
言语无法表达我内心深处的诚挚谢意。/没有言语足以表达我的感
激之情。
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Dear 　　　　，
I am writing to convey my gratitude for 　　　　， without which I
wouldn’t have 　　　　.（写信的目的；感谢的原因）
At the beginning of my 　　　　， it was your 　　　　that made
me 　　　　.（对方给予的帮助一） Moreover， guided by you，
I 　　　　（对方给予的帮助二）. It was your generous help that enabled
me to have a better understanding 　　　　（给予帮助的效果）.
Thanks again for your kind help. I will be more than pleased to have the
opportunity to repay your kindness by 　　　　（表达回报意愿）.
Yours，
Li Hua
　　（2） 道歉信
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I am terribly/truly sorry that I didn’t show up at your home to discuss
the coming English speech contest as planned.
非常抱歉，我没有按计划去你家讨论即将到来的英语演讲比赛。
I’m writing to sincerely make an apology for having broken your rare
vase.
我写信是为打碎你那只稀有的花瓶真诚地向你道歉。
　　引人入胜篇中句
The reason why I failed to show up is that I had something urgent to
attend to.
我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。
I really want to accept your invitation and take advantage of this
chance to introduce the traditional Chinese paintings to foreign friends， but
I can’t because I am occupied in preparing for the performance for the
coming National Day.
我真的很想接受您的邀请，并借此机会向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘
画，但我不能（参加），因为我忙于为即将到来的国庆节表演做准备。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Once again， I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次感到抱歉。
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my
situation.
我真心希望你能接受我的道歉，并理解我的处境。
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Dear 　　　　，
I am writing to apologize to you for 　　　　（写信目的） as
planned.
The reason why I will fail to go there for our appointment is
that 　　　　（失约原因）. Shall we fix another time？ I’m available any
time after 　　　　（补救措施）. I hope the adjustment won’t put you to a
lot of trouble.
Once again， I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
6　报道和通知
　　（1） 报道
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Our school witnessed a “Campus Labor Week” activity from May
15th to 19th.
5月15日至19日，我们学校举办了一场“校园劳动周”活动。
An activity， whose theme was protecting the environment/with the
theme of protecting the environment， was held by the Students’ Union.
学生会举办了一场以“保护环境”为主题的活动。
　　引人入胜篇中句
Teachers and students who are interested in traditional Chinese culture
will join in/participate in/take part in the activity.
对中国传统文化感兴趣的老师和学生将参加这场活动。
The activity seemed to be a precious opportunity for participants to
donate their clothes， books and schoolbags to the students in need.
该活动似乎是一个宝贵的机会，参与者可以捐赠他们的衣服、书籍
和书包给有需要的学生。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
Everyone thinks highly of this activity， for it is a good chance to get
close to nature.
每个人对该活动的评价都很高，因为这是一个亲近大自然的好
机会。
It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of
respecting the old should be raised.
正是通过这场活动，我们充分认识到应该加强尊老意识。
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　　In order to 　　　　（组织活动的目的）， our school
organized 　　　　last Sunday（活动名称）， whose theme
was 　　　　（活动主题）.
Over 150 participants from 　　　　got involved in it actively（活动
细节一）. Then， we had an opportunity to 　　　　（活动细节二）.
Besides， we 　　　　（活动细节三）.
Through the activity， not only can we 　　　　， but also 　　　　.
（活动意义） Therefore， we all think highly of it， and expect more
activities like this in the future.
　　（2） 通知
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Attention， please！ I have something important to inform you of.
请注意！我有重要的事要通知你们。
To promote cultural exchanges between China and other countries，
the local TV station will organize a Chinese character dictation competition.
为了促进中国和其他国家之间的文化交流，当地电视台将举办汉字
听写比赛。
　　引人入胜篇中句
There is a wide variety of out-of-class activities in our school， which
we can take part in after class.
在我们学校有种类繁多的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。
As scheduled， the conference is to be held in the school lecture hall at
7：00 p.m. next Sunday.
会议定于下周日晚7点在学校阶梯教室举行。
All the students are requested to attend the meeting to be held in the
meeting room on the third floor at 6：30 p.m.this Wednesday.
要求所有的学生都要参加这周三晚6：30在三楼会议室举行的会
议。
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Those who want to take part in/join in the activity please sign up at the
Students’ Union.
想参加活动的人请在学生会处报名。
Please get everything ready ahead of time. Don’t be late.
请提前把一切准备好。不要迟到。
Those who are interested in the activity are welcome.
欢迎那些对这项活动感兴趣的人。
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NOTICE
In order to 　　　　（目的）， 　　　　（活动） will be
held 　　　　（时间、地点）.
Each student is encouraged to 　　　　（活动详情一）. Those who
would like to participate in the competition are supposed to 　　　　（活动
详情二）. All the students in our school 　　　　（活动详情三）.
Looking forward to your active participation.
The Students’ Union
7　社会现象和人物描写
　　（1） 社会现象
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
With the rapid development of the economy， repeated heavy smog，
which has been interrupting production activities and affecting people’s
everyday lives， has caused considerable concern.
随着经济的快速发展，反复的重度雾霾屡屡打断生产活动，影响人
们的日常生活，引起了极大的关注。
With the development of science and technology， there is an
increasing need for people to know how to ensure information security.
随着科技的发展，人们越来越需要知道如何确保信息安全。
　　引人入胜篇中句
Several factors could account for the constant existence of smog.
有几个因素可以解释雾霾的频繁出现。
The problem is caused by the lack of clean energy as well as more
efficient heating systems.
这个问题是由缺乏清洁能源及更加高效的供暖系统引起的。
Secondly， emissions from automobiles are another primary source of
urban pollution.
其次，汽车排放物是城市污染的另一个主要来源。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
From my point of view， the advantages far outweigh the
disadvantages.
在我看来，利远大于弊。
Therefore， my suggestion is that we teenagers should not wear
headphones for too long each day.
因此，我的建议是我们青少年不要每天戴耳机太久。
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In recent days， there has been 　　　　， which is
becoming 　　　　.（说明问题及其现状） First， 　　　　.
Second， 　　　　.（进一步阐述现状及发生的原因）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.
For one thing， 　　　　. For another thing， 　　　　.
Finally， 　　　　.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally， I believe that 　　　　./Consequently， I’m confident
that a bright future is awaiting us because 　　　　.（指出“我”的信心及
理由）
　　（2） 人物描写
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
Although there are many respectable people around us， the person I
respect most is my physics teacher.
虽然我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人，但我最尊敬的人是我的物
理老师。
Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history， Zhuge Liang is
my favourite， who had a great gift for military strategy.
在中国历史上杰出的人物中，我最喜欢的是诸葛亮，他在军事战略
方面极有天赋。
The person I would like to interview most is Yang Liwei， who is not
only the first Chinese person to go to space but also one of the greatest
astronauts in the world.
我最想采访的人是杨利伟，他不仅是第一个去太空的中国人，还是
世界上最伟大的航天员之一。
　　引人入胜篇中句
Optimistic and energetic， he often takes an active part in after-class
activities.
他乐观、精力充沛，经常积极参加课外活动。
Whenever people around get into trouble， she is willing to help
them， which makes her respected by all the neighbours.
每当周围的人遇到麻烦，她都愿意帮助他们，这使她受到所有邻居
的尊重。
Not only did Einstein devote all his life to scientific research， but also
he cared about human beings’ peace and development.
爱因斯坦不但毕生致力于科学研究，而且他还关心人类的和平
与发展。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
He is a confident and independent young man with a positive attitude
towards life.
他是一个自信且独立的年轻人，拥有积极乐观的生活态度。
Having set a good example to us students， she fully deserves my
respect.
她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样，完全值得我的尊敬。
I am deeply influenced/moved by his selflessness and devotion to the
country， and I also want to be a man of value.
我被他的无私（精神）和对国家的奉献（精神）深深影响/打动，
我也想成为一个有价值的人。
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The person who impresses me most is 　　　　， who 　　　　.（点
明要描写的人物） As a young boy， I 　　　　. It was 　　　　who
often 　　　　， after which 　　　　. Then such activities
as 　　　　were also of great help to build me up. What’s more，
I 　　　　.（所描写的人物及其事迹对自己的影响）
　　　　（简要总结所描写的人物的品质）， for which I admire
him most.
8　叙事短文和图表分析
　　（1） 叙事短文
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the
summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
我很高兴听到你计划在暑假期间环游中国。我想邀请你到我的家乡
福建来参观。
I’d like to tell you something about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival
and how I spent it this year.
我想告诉你一些关于中国端午节的事情，以及我今年是如何度过它
（该节日）的。
　　引人入胜篇中句
With various facial expressions， the clay figures are lifelike， each
telling an interesting story.
这些泥塑像表情各异，栩栩如生，每一个都在讲述着一个有趣
的故事。
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
People all across China eat zongzi and dragon boat races are held in many
places to remember a great ancient person Qu Yuan.
端午节适逢农历五月初五。中国各地的人们都吃粽子，许多地方都
举行龙舟赛来纪念伟大的古人屈原。
It is one of the best-selling magazines， covering fitness， nutrition，
travel， technology， fashion and finance.
它是最畅销的杂志之一，涉及健身、营养、旅行、技术、时尚
和金融。
As you know， it is important for us Chinese to decorate our homes
with Chinese paintings in Chinese New Year.
如你所知，在中国新年里用中国画来装饰家对我们中国人来说是重
要的。
　　画龙点睛结尾句
The more I learn about the sport， the more interested I get in it.
我对这项运动了解得越多，我对它就越感兴趣。
This is a rewarding experience， from which I have benefited a lot.
这是一次有益的经历，我从中受益良多。
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In order to encourage the students to 　　　　（目的）， 　　　　
（举办者） organized 　　　　（活动）. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 　　　　（时间）， we gathered at 　　　　
（地点） and set out for 　　　　（目的地）. 　　　　（活动详细介
绍）.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it 　　　　（活动的意义
一）， but it also 　　　　（活动的意义二）. What a wonderful time！
　　（2） 图表分析
[写作架构]
[经典佳句]
　　先声夺人开头句
As can be seen from the diagram， great changes have taken place in
our hometown.
从图表中可以看出，我们的家乡发生了巨大的变化。
Recently， a survey of students’ after-class physical exercise has been
conducted in our school. The results are as follows.
最近，我们学校对学生进行了课后体育锻炼的调查。调查结果
如下。
　　引人入胜篇中句
More than half of the students， about 65％， choose running as their
regular form ofexercise， while only 15％ would play basketball after class.
超过一半的学生，约占65％，选择跑步作为他们常规的锻炼方式，
而只有15％的学生会在下课后打篮球。
Many factors contribute to this situation.
造成这种情况的因素有很多。
It is clear that the increase in the percentage gets greater and greater.
很明显，百分比的增加变得越来越大。
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Hopefully， the result of the survey candraw the attention of our
parents and teachers.
希望调查结果能引起我们的家长和老师的注意。
Whatever physical exercise we choose， we should bear in mind that it
is the workout itself that matters.
无论我们选择什么体育锻炼，我们都应该记住，重要的是锻炼
本身。
More emphasis should be put on how tomake equal education
accessible to more students.
更多的重点应该放在如何让更多的学生得到平等教育上。
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As the bar chart shows， 　　　　（说明图表反映的问题）.
Several factors contribute to 　　　　. And 　　　　.
Furthermore， 　　　　. All these result in 　　　　.（分析问题产生的
原因）
However， 　　　　is faced with some problems. With 　　　　，
the effect of 　　　　is not only discouraging， but also challenging. So my
principle is to pay your attention to 　　　　， but not just to 　　　　.
（提出解决问题的措施）
随堂巩固
Passage 1
（2023·全国甲卷改编）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故
事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容
包括：
1. 人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　　　
　　　
　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　





　Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings
emphasize the importance of moral values， respect for elders， and
social harmony.　
　The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings
laid the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture， fostering
respect for authority， harmonious relation-ships， and the pursuit of
knowledge. Even today， his ideas continue to guide individuals and
communities in China and beyond.　





　Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-
cultivation， respect for elders， and the pursuit of knowledge， which
serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His
teachings remind us of the importance of integrity， compassion， and
social responsibility.　
Passage 2
（2023·全国乙卷改编）请你以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语
描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。







　To enrich my holiday life， I learned how to play the electric
organ this summer， which was of great benefit to me.　
　Firstly， I familiarized myself with every key on the instrument.
Then， I attended an online course to learn the basic techniques and
practiced diligently， even though I kept making mistakes. Finally， one
month of persistence paid off when I was able to be proficient in playing
“Twinkle， Twinkle， Little Star”.　




　I am proud of this experience because it not only enables me to
appreciate music from a brand-new perspective but also teaches me to be
more detail-oriented and patient. Overall， it is a wonderful experience
that I will always remember.　
Passage 3
（2023·湖北省二模）假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰网友Tom下周来你
市参加短期语言培训，他发来邮件请你帮忙推荐一家酒店，方便学习期
间入住。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，



　Welcome to my city for language training next week. I’d like to
recommend an affordable and comfortable hotel named Tower Hotel to
you.　
　Tower Hotel is an international hotel whose staff can
communicate with foreign tourists fluently. The reason why I
recommend you to choose the hotel is that it is well equipped. Not only is
free Wi-Fi available everywhere， but also a kind of wake-up call service
is provided. More importantly， located on a main road， the hotel is
close to the Language Training Center.　




　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　


Yours，
Li Hua
　I’ll be more than happy if you find my recommendation helpful.
Wish you a pleasant stay in the city.　
Passage 4
（2023·安徽省合肥市二模）假定你是李华，你得知China Daily
正在面向全球中文爱好者举办名为“Chinese Bridge—Calligraphy
and Painting Challenge”的书画征集活动。请你给你校外教Paul写
一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 告知此活动并建议他参加；
2. 说明活动目的及作品要求等；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Paul，
A contest named “Chinese Bridge—Calligraphy and Painting
Challenge” is being held by China Daily，


which calls for paintings
and calligraphy works from Chinese language lovers worldwide. I
suggest you participate in the contest.　









Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
　The challenge provides an ideal platform for Chinese language
enthusiasts across the globe to meet new friends， show their artistic
skills and gain deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
Wonderful landscapes， unique customs， or the excellent cultural
heritage of China must be reflected in the paintings and calligraphy
works. Not only should they demonstrate the beauty of China， but they
should also be helpful in spreading positive values.　
　I do hope you’ll win a big prize in the contest. Wish you the best
of luck！　

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