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Whenever I spread marmalade, I am reminded of my mother, a five-foot-tall angel who even befriended a skunk.
One day, while she was busy picking beans in the backyard, she came across a skunk no more than a meter away.
The skunk's embarrassment was evident as he had undoubtedly been rummaging through the garbage. He still had a marmalade jar stuck on his nose.
Mom took pity on him. Instead of worrying the creature would spray something smelly all over her and the beans, she smiled compassionately at the little thing and extended a helping hand.
Kneeling on the ground, she inched across the grass, reached out, and twisted the jar—very carefully.
The jar slipped off. The skunk nodded a thank-you before slipping away into the woods at the back of the garden. Obviously, there was no spraying incident, thanks to my remarkable mother.
She repeated this tale numerous times, always calling the skunk Marmalade. However, that was not the end of the story.
Three summers later, when I was about twelve, another encounter occurred.
It was a rainy morning, and both my mother and father had gone to work. My friend Rob came over to play and we decided to run the electric train in my room.
Suddenly, a scratching sound emerged from the attic. Rob assumed that it might be some kind of animal. Curiosity got the better of us, and we ventured towards the source of the sound.
I cautiously opened the attic door in the hall. The noise ceased abruptly.
I climbed up the stairs, Rob following my lead. There behind the toy box near the chimney stood the animal-black with a distinct white stripe down his back.
Was he scared and trembling I believe so, at least that's what I remember.
Instinctively, I retreated, fearing the potential spray or bites from the creature. "Hey, Rob," I whispered urgently, "It's a skunk. Let's go to the kitchen and figure out a way to get him out of here."
续写第一段:In the cupboard, several paper cups and a jar of marmalade caught our sight.
续写第二段:Rob and I followed the skunk as he ate his way down the stairs.
文本分析：
故事大意：
我的朋友Rod与我一起在阁楼上玩，发现异样的噪音。原来是一直黑白相间的臭鼬。通过使用母亲过去的经验和橘子酱来安全地引导臭离开了我家，成功地帮助了困在阁楼中的臭鼬。
续写情节发展：
续写第一段：一筹末展之际，想到一个好主意。受母亲地启发，决定用橘子酱吸引臭鼬。臭鼬被橘子酱吸引，逐步地沿着放置橘子酱的纸杯路径走下楼梯。臭鼬在吃完最后一个放在后门口的纸杯后，安全地离开了家，消失在后院的灌木丛中。
续写第二段：罗布和我松了一口气，清理了空纸杯，感到自豪能以一种和平且智慧的方式解决了问题，这也让我觉得母亲会为我们感到骄傲。主旨升华。
高分句型积累：
想到解决方法的场景描写
Scratching my head,a brilliant idea popped into my mind: if the skunk was anything like Marmalade from my mother's story, it might be tempted by the scent of the marmalade. Therefore, we could use the marmalade to lure the skunk out of the attic.
As I held this jar, a clear memory of my mother meeting a skunk flashed through my mind. She affectionately named the skunk orange jam. Can this be the same skunk I murmured.
3.Seeing the orange jam jar, I remembered my mother once helped a skunk with a similar jar. In an instant, a great idea flashed in my mind.
如何开展行动的场景描写
We filled each paper cup halfway with marmalade, carefully lining them up to create a visible trail from the attic to the backyard.
Rob carefully placed the last cup at the edge of the open door,ensuring the skunk would find its way outside."
I carefully opened the jar and scooped some of the sweet, sticky spread into several cups. Rob and I tiptoed back upstairs, and we spaced the cups out every few meters along the stairway.
吃橘子酱的场景描写
We retreated to a safe distance and waited with bated breath. Slowly, the skunk emerged from behind the box, sniffing the air curiously. He cautiously approached the cup and began to lick the marmalade, seeming to relish the treat.
The familiar smell aroused his curiosity, and he slowly crawled towards the first cup, carefully sniffed it, and then took a sip. He moved from one cup to another and gradually walked down the stairs.
To our delight, after a few nervous minutes, Marmalade cautiously walked up to the plate, took a sniff, and then started eating.
解决后的心情描写
1 .Seeing the skunk safely exit the house, l felt a rush of relief
and a sense of accomplishment wash over me and Rob.
2. The skunk vanished into the garden without harm, leaving us with a feeling of satisfaction and a memorable story to share.
3.Looking at each other, Rob and I breathed a sigh of relief, grateful that no unpleasant incidents had occurred. I can't help but wonder if this might have been the very same skunk or, perhaps, a descendant of Marmalade.
【参考范文】
P1: In the cupboard, several paper cups and a jar of marmalade caught our sight.The sight of the marmalade triggered a fond memory of my mother, who had once shared a heartwarming story about her own encounter with a skunk. "I have an idea," I turned to Rob as I grabbed the paper cups and the jar of marmalade. Rob's face registered surprise, but he didn't question my plan, and just silently followed me upstairs. Back to the attic, I cautiously filled a paper cup with the marmalade and placed it near the skunk's hiding spot. To our astonishment, the skunk inched towards the offering and began to eat. This unexpected success encouraged me to place more marmalade-filled cups along the path leading downstairs, hoping to guide our striped friend out safely. Sure, it kept working.
P2: Rob and I followed the skunk as he ate his way down the stairs.
The skunk, now visibly less afraid, continued to consume the marmalade while occasionally glancing up at us with a mix of trust and curiosity. As we descended, I whispered the story of my mother's encounter with Marmalade to Rob, explaining how she had compassionately helped a skunk in need. Amidst Rob’s shock and my pride, the skunk finished the final cup and, with a grateful look back at us, gracefully exited our home. "That's incredible," Rob exclaimed, his voice still tinged with disbelief. "No spray at all. Your mom was right; it's truly remarkable!" That evening, as I shared the story with my mother, she beamed with pride and confidently stated, "It must be Marmalade, come back to remind us of the kindness we once shared."

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