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(共24张PPT)
Continuation Writing:
24届八省八校联考读后续写
Learning Objectives
By the end of this class, you will be able to:
1. sort out（梳理） the key information in the given story
2. predict the story by asking some questions about the given 2 first sentences
3.Learn three skills of Continuation Writing:
4. continue the story with expressive(富有表现力的）language
(合理度、融洽度、优美度）
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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。(总词数317)
My mother believed in using things up. Last year, our cornfield had a bad harvest because birds feasted on the crops. It was probably then that Mom’s frugality (节俭) became even more extraordinary. She began keeping everything that seemed useless in the attic (阁楼)—worn-out clothes, old sheets, broken umbrellas, and some other old items. Mom’s favorite saying was “waste not, want not”. My brother Josh and I weren't sure what that meant until the “Affair of the Scarecrow (稻草人)”, which, as it later became known, left a lasting impression on us.
The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun. However, Josh and I could see that Mom’s frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle. Mom really didn't want to get rid of the hat- it was new and had a lot of use left in it—but neither could she stand wearing it. She tried to take off the fancy decorations, but they were stuck on tight. She'd have to find some other solution.
Josh and I watched as Mom headed upstairs to the attic with the hat.“Waste not, want not,” she called back down. We heard boxes being moved around. Moments later, Mom leaned out, holding a flour bag full of straw, and with a mysterious smile, she placed the hat on it.
“What is that for ” I asked, confused. “A scarecrow!” Mom exclaimed. “But not a good one yet. It needs a strong body to stand firm in the field,” she said with a frown. “And it doesn’t look scary enough,” Josh remarked. I had to admit that Josh, though younger than I was, could sometimes be more imaginative. Josh and I turned to each other, searching for a good idea. Soon enough, Josh’s eyes lit up with inspiration.
The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun. However, Josh and I could see that Mom’s frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle. Mom really didn't want to get rid of the hat- it was new and had a lot of use left in it—but neither could she stand wearing it. She tried to take off the fancy decorations, but they were stuck on tight. She'd have to find some other solution.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Come with me!” Josh called out.
Paragraph 2: In the days that followed, the scarecrow stood tall
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My mother believed in using things up. Last year, our cornfield had a bad harvest because birds feasted on the crops. It was probably then that Mom’s frugality (节俭) became even more extraordinary. She began keeping everything that seemed useless in the attic (阁楼)—worn-out clothes, old sheets, broken umbrellas, and some other old items. Mom’s favorite saying was “waste not, want not”.My brother Josh and I weren't sure what that meant until the “Affair of the Scarecrow (稻草人)”, which, as it later became known, left a lasting impression on us.
Para. 1关注文章里的中文释义(test provider角度)
地点
品质
物品
Analyze the conflicts & theme
技巧1:伏笔+金句
The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun. However, Josh and I could see that Mom’s frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle. Mom really didn't want to get rid of the hat- it was new and had a lot of use left in it—but neither could she stand wearing it. She tried to take off the fancy decorations, but they were stuck on tight. She'd have to find some other solution.
Para. 2 矛盾冲突升级(问题2),注意续写呼应
Josh and I watched as Mom headed upstairs to the attic with the hat.“Waste not, want not,” she called back down. We heard boxes being moved around. Moments later, Mom leaned out, holding a flour bag full of straw, and with a mysterious smile, she placed the hat on it.
Para. 3 注意细节的前后呼应
升华点睛
A small creativity can make a big difference to our lives.
范文赏析
“Come with me!” Josh called out. Curious,we followed Josh to the attic. Together with Mom, we searched every corner in the attic. To our excitement, we found some broken umbrellas which could serve as the backbone of the scarecrow as well as some worn-out clothes and old sheets, suitable to be the dress of the it. A scarecrow came into being with our creativity and patience. Happiness welled up inside mom when she saw what we made.Ultimately, the scarecrow was planted in the middle of the cornfield.
In the days that followed, the scarecrow stood tall.Looking scary enough, it successfully scared away most birds and managed to protect our cornfield.The following autumn witnessed an extraordinary harvest in our cornfiled.It was then that the significance of mom's frugality came to my mind.Mom’s favourite saying that “waste not,wantnot" echoed in our hearts.It dawned on us that with imagination and patience, even something useless can be turned into somethiing valuable.
结尾升华还可以这样表达
It dawned on us that frugality is always an ever-shining quality.
范文2：
“Come with me !” Josh called out. The next instant, he raced upstairs with lightning speed. I hurried to follow him into the attic, where we began a thorough search. Mom was amused by our excitement when we found the broken umbrellas and used them as the backbone of the scarecrow. After that, we sorted out some old sheets and tied them on. The scarecrow now looked even scarier. We dragged our creation to the cornfield and planted it firmly in the mud, our hearts full of hope.
In the days that followed , the scarecrow stood tall. Serving as a silent guardian, it successfully scared the birds away. Under its watchful eyes, our cornfield flourished this year. To our amazement, Mom’s useless things from the attic had come together to create something extraordinary. As we enjoyed a good harvest, we figured out the true meaning of mom’s favorite saying, “waste not, want not，”which will always echo in our hearts.中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
24届八省八校联考读后续写
My mother believed in using things up. Last year, our cornfield had a bad harvest because birds feasted on the crops. It was probably then that Mom’s frugality (节俭) became even more extraordinary. She began keeping everything that seemed useless in the attic (阁楼)—worn-out clothes, old sheets, broken umbrellas, and some other old items. Mom’s favorite saying was “waste not, want not”. My brother Josh and I weren't sure what that meant until the “Affair of the Scarecrow (稻草人)”, which, as it later became known, left a lasting impression on us.
The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun. However, Josh and I could see that Mom’s frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle. Mom really didn't want to get rid of the hat- it was new and had a lot of use left in it—but neither could she stand wearing it. She tried to take off the fancy decorations, but they were stuck on tight. She'd have to find some other solution.
Josh and I watched as Mom headed upstairs to the attic with the hat.“Waste not, want not,” she called back down. We heard boxes being moved around. Moments later, Mom leaned out, holding a flour bag full of straw, and with a mysterious smile, she placed the hat on it.
“What is that for ” I asked, confused. “A scarecrow!” Mom exclaimed. “But not a good one yet. It needs a strong body to stand firm in the field,” she said with a frown. “And it doesn’t look scary enough,” Josh remarked. I had to admit that Josh, though younger than I was, could sometimes be more imaginative. Josh and I turned to each other, searching for a good idea. Soon enough, Josh’s eyes lit up with inspiration.
Paragraph 1: “Come with me!” Josh called out._______________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: In the days that followed, the scarecrow stood tall.__________________
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