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你校计划举办主题为“极简电子产品生活方式﹣A lifestyle of digital minimalism”的英语作文比赛，请你写一则通知，内容包括：
(1）介绍比赛目的；
(2）说明参赛要求。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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三思后行
准备开写，首先思考：1.你觉得本文应该写几段？二段？还是三段？
2.该活动主题的比赛能有什么目的？
3.参赛要求可以从那几个方面写
调兵遣将
这篇文字可能会用到哪些词汇？你是否熟悉本文语境下这些单词的确切意思？
announce
theme
purpose
engage
initiative
productivity
well-being
requirement
submit
submission
contribution
entry
deadline
谋篇布局
三段式
写作建议
现在回到本次通州区2024届高三4月份诊断测试
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
1. 首段 要点1：活动通知+比赛目的
“活动通知”和“比赛目的”是否需要用下列上次学过的句式整合成一句话表达？
...（过去时间）, our school launched a weekly English Literature Reading class, aimed at (doing) ... 我们学校（+过去时间）推出了每周一次的英语文学阅读课，旨在……
或者Aimed at (doing) ... , our school launched a weekly English Literature Reading class +
...（过去时间）旨在……，我们学校（+过去时间）推出了每周一次的英语文学阅读课。
个人认为，不需要。分来写即可。通知不需要多么复杂的句式，而且本文适合上来先以通知的格式通知一下。目的待会说，我先告知大家该活动以及主题。
我们先写要点小1“活动通知”，顺带着把主题代入进去，重点学习模仿以下句式：
We are pleased/thrilled/excited/delighted to announce our upcoming English writing competition themed “A Lifestyle of Digital Minimalism”.
或者带有点邀请意图在里面：
We are excited to invite all students to participate in an English writing competition themed “A Lifestyle of Digital Minimalism”.
然后，第一段紧接着写该比赛的目的。
主题为“极简电子产品生活方式”的活动能有什么目的？
以下方向供参考：
1) 提高意识：通过探讨极简主义的概念，参与者可以更深入地了解数字技术如何影响个人和社会的生活。
2) 促进自省：鼓励个人反思自己的数字设备使用习惯，考虑如何通过减少不必要的数字消费来提高生活质量。
3) 增强专注与生产力：探讨通过减少数字干扰，特别是来自社交媒体和连续通知的干扰，如何帮助人们提高专注力和生产力。
表达“目的”可以使用的句式有：
The aim/purpose of this contest is to ...
或者
This competition aims to ...
结合该主题可能的目的，可以采用以下表达：
The purpose of this contest is to encourage students to reflect on and discuss the potential benefits of minimalism in our digital interactions in their lives.
或者
This competition aims to provoke thought and discussion among students about the impact and implications of reducing digital consumption.
上期有位读者“雪糖有点填”留言提到我平时给出的表达过多，而且最好要有层次性。一语中的！本期安排。该目的上述的两种表达，其实只是总起，紧接着可以稍微具体地谈谈极简电子产品生活方式可能会给学生们带来的影响。如：
By engaging with this theme, participants are expected to explore how embracing fewer digital products can enhance clarity, reduce stress, and lead to a more focused lifestyle.
或者
Through this initiative, we encourage students to consider how adopting a minimalist approach to technology can enhance personal productivity, focus, and overall well-being.
这么一看，是不是层层递进了。
另外，同学们有没有发现今天从一开始我就没有给出太多的表达？我宣布，今后写作我也会践行“极简主义minimalism”，每个写作要点我会精选再精选，打磨再打磨，尽量只提供两种表达，最多不超过3个。给你的选择太多，你反而难于选择。正所谓，最难的选择不是没有选择，而是有选择。
2. 第二段 要点2：参赛要求
参赛能有哪些要求，无非就是“语言”“字数”“原创”“交稿方式”“截止日期”“参赛对象”等。
其中，“语言”和“字数”可以整合为一句。“原创”单独成句。“交稿方式”和“截止日期”放在一句。一共三句，基本搞定。至于“参赛对象”本文我选择放该段最后写。（我为什么这么干？）
好，先写“语言”和“字数”。等下，我问你：该段第一句先写什么？
对，中心句，或者含有中心的开头句。比如
Regarding/In terms of the participation requirements, each essay/all essays must be written in English and maintain a limit of approximately 500 words.
或者
For your submissions, please ensure that your essay is written in English and does not exceed 500 words.
再写第二个要求“原创”
Each submission/entry should be an original, unpublished piece.
或者
Please ensure that your work is original and has not been previously published.
整合“交稿方式”和“截止日期”
Submissions should be forwarded to...(email地址） by... (deadline).
或者
Submit your entries to ...(email地址） by ... (deadline).
参赛对象
这个比较好写 “The competition is open to all students.” 问题是，我为什么第二段最后一个小要点才写它？我为什么不放在参赛要求中的第一点写？你猜猜看。
The competition is open to all students.该句之后，我立马可以自然引入该段收尾句：
We encourage everyone to express their unique perspectives and experiences related to digital minimalism. 同时，这句收尾句也可以自然引出末段。
3. 末段 简短收尾：鼓励参与
可采用以下高分实用表达句式:
We look forward to your participation and insightful contributions!
或者
We eagerly anticipate your participation and the diverse viewpoints you will bring to this topic.
（官方范文）
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school will organize an English essay competition themed “A lifestyle of digital minimalism”, which aims to encourage students to share their insights into digital devices.
All students are welcome to participate in this competition. Every competitor is required to submit an original essay of approximately 300 words, expressing their opinions about digital minimalism and its benefits. Their essays should be well-structured, with clear arguments and specific examples to support their views. The deadline for submission is April 30th. Winners will be awarded prizes and their essays will be published.
Let’s work together to promote a healthier digital lifestyle. Looking forward to your active participation.
（下水作文）
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are pleased to announce our upcoming English writing competition themed “A Lifestyle of Digital Minimalism”. The purpose of this contest is to encourage students to reflect on and discuss the potential benefits of minimalism in our digital interactions in their lives. By engaging with this theme, participants will explore how embracing fewer digital products can enhance clarity, reduce stress, and lead to a more focused lifestyle.
In terms of the participation requirements, all essays must be written in English and maintain a limit of approximately 500 words. Please ensure that your work is original and has not been previously published. Submissions should be forwarded to by April 30th. This competition is open to all students. We encourage everyone to express their unique perspectives and experiences related to digital minimalism.
We look forward to your participation and insightful contributions!

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