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读后续写练习写作训练
续写题目(202404台州二模)
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused(收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron's cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted.Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.“I did, Aaron.”“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag(抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part.“Take care of it!” Aaron turned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake.“More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.Paragraph 2: After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words.
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I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “What's up ” he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me. Feeling the weight of my mistake, I stammered nervously, “I need dry rags to ...clean...” Upon hearing this, Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail,” he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn’t just about reacting; it’s also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!” Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two. With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron's words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work. Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron’s words in mind. With every dish washed and every table cleared, I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
勘误——Girls can be anything(202404杭州二模)
“I’ll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don’t you show us since you’re the star student,” Deepak taunted(奚落).
Anjali was confused. She wasn't trying to show off. She was just playing tabla(印度塔不拉鼓)，like everyone
else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy’s thing She didn't care that people thought it was a boys’ instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She danced her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion. "Ugh!" Anjali heard someone groan, and she stopped playing.
“I guess I don’t know it that well after all,” Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher. Mr. Zakir. Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn’t true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir’s eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everyone. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!” Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked away and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary.
“People are only interested because she’s the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She’s not that good…”Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn't relax. Her heart was pounding.
“It's not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too, but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more.”
“If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
“I don’t want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
Paragraph 2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
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Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall. One of them illustrated with several instruments and a quote“Never dim your light”.For that very moment, Anjali thought about how she was mesmerized the first time she saw someone playing tabla, by the beautiful sounds he was creating with his hands. She knew that tabla was meant for her. When the day of the recital finally arrived, Anjali was determined to do her very best, regardless of the outcome. She was not going to let anyone make her feel bad, whether it was for being good at something or for being a girl. And as expected, she delivered a flawless performance.(103w)
After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali. “Very impressive,” he remarked awkwardly that he was just jealous because tabla should be a boy's instrument.Anjali shrugged, "You know there is no such thing." As Anjali took one last look at the stage, she felt such a relief. Under the spotlight was the set of tabla, glittering on the stage just as she did a few minutes earlier. Among countless compliments and congratulations from the audience,Anjali heard a little sweet voice, "Bravo, Anjali!!" She turned to find a little girl looking up at her. "I didn't know girls could play tabla,"she said.“Girls can do everything boys do,"Anjali beamed,"Never dim your light.”(107w)
读后续写-Find back my dog-Spider
试题呈现：
My family moved from Toowoomba, Canada to London in 1950. My mother was in great pain from the 1950s epidemic of polio(小儿麻痹症). She wished to visit specialists in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father bade a tender farewell to his five-year-old “friend” at the dock(码头), an Australian cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas.
Six weeks later, a letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had two run away weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father's face crumbling and his eyes glistening as he read the letter. We tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was, Sandy has advertised constantly on ABC radio and other local newspapers. Despite some "sightings”, in the dock at first, the dog was never found later. It seems Spider decided to search for us elsewhere.
We sailed back two years later and reestablished our home in Toowoomba. My father immediately began his own searching tor Snider. Several months passed but there was still no news concerning Spider. The dog was gone, possibly shot or dead from starvation or exhaustion.
One cold morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from an old lady who said she was putting food out “for a very old dog". In the night the food disappeared. This had been going on for a few weeks. That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework and we set off immediately. When we arrived at the old lady's house, she invited us into an old bush. Sadly, she then told us that the “dingo dog" hadn't been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eye. He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle(哨) for Spider.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly there was a bark in the bush.
From then on, Spider and my father would hang out at the dock.
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Suddenly there was a bark in the bush. “It must be Spider!” my father yelled excitedly. And the next moment he was out in the bush, following the sound of the bark. Curiously, I followed my father’s footsteps, praying that some miracle would come up. Yes, there in the bush lay a dog, skinny and hungry, And it was our Spider, the dog we had been missing badly and looking for madly. He struggled to his feet, approached us and threw himself into my father’s arms, which made his eyes moisten. As if finding back his long-lost treasure, my father scooped up the dog, put it into the car and, with heartfelt gratitude to the old lady, headed back home.
From then on, Spider and my father would hang out at the dock. Both my father and Spider enjoyed the moments together. Every morning, they would greet the new day together, watching the sun rising beyond the horizon and the ships sailing out of the hustling harbor. And towards the evening, they would embrace the last ray of the sunlight disappearing behind the horizon and watch ships coming in for a quiet night. Day in and day out, Spider was gradually back on his feet with my father’s care and their bond seemed to be strengthening. Deep down at heart, my father promised to himself that he would never leave his Spider alone again no matter what happened. And he would accompany Spider till the end of the world.
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Suddenly there was a bark in the bush. My father jumped out of his seat and ran outside.We heard him calling Spider's name, We waited nervously inside, praying that Spider would come back to us, After a few minutes, we heard my father's voice again, louder and more excited this time. He came back inside, holding a thin and ragged-looking Spider in his arms.The dog had a few cuts and scratches on his face and legs, but he was alive. We were overjoyed to see Spider again.
From then on, Spider and my father would hang out at the dock. They would walk along the beach and watch the ships come in and out of the harbor. Spider enjoyed this routine and my father would tell him stories about all the experiences he had while he was away. Spider was always by his side, faithful and loyal as ever. They had been through so much, but years and vast distances couldn't break their bond. Spider found his way back to us against all odds. We were grateful to have him back, and we knew that he would always be a cherished member of our family.
I was eight years old and wasn't aware of all the arrangements being made for our journey as a family to London in 1950. My mother was in great pain and wished to visit specialists in London. My father reluctantly had to sell our property in Queensland. The day before we boarded the ship, Father unwillingly said goodbye to his five-year-old cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas, as he had been getting to know Spider for many weeks.
Six weeks later, an airletter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC and other regional newspapers. Despite many "sightings", the dog was never found. It seems Spider just kept running and searching for us. As he was cattle dog, my father thought he would shoe or dingo-trapped, because of his appearance. But our family thought that Father held a secrets hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and re-established our home. My immediately began his own search for Spider. One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from an elderly lady living on her own on the outskirts of the town. As she told my father on the telephone, it was "just glimpses of a dingo-type dog in the shadows" of her disused tennis court. That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework.
We set off in his blue and black Jensen car which he had brought back from England. It was hardly the right vehicle for the rough roads we travelled that day. Five and a half hours later, we found the run-down old property. Sadly, she told my father that the "dingo dog" hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eye. He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles (刺) off him.
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Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back. He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles off him. Before he was put in a tin tub, we gently cleaned him up with soap. Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears. Spider spent the rest of his days years on the front porch, content and satisfied, always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right. He then waited for my father by the garage door. We never left him anywhere alone again.

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