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专题12 应用文之慰问信
首段：知悉困境，表示同情
1. I'm sorry to know that you are having a hard/tough time at the moment.
获悉你目前身处困境，我深表遗憾。
2. I'm sorry to hear about your difficulties in..... I know it can be really tough at times.
听说你在…方面遇到困难我很难过。我知道，这件事有时候真的很难。
3. On behalf of.....，I would like to express our sincere concern and care for you.
我谨代表……，对表示诚挚的关心和关怀。
主体部分：表示理解与同情，给予安慰和劝导
1. As we all know，failure is the mother of success.I do hope you won't lose heart and will get ready to
try again. 众所周知，失败是成功之母。我真希望你不要灰心，做好准备再试一次。
2. You shouldn't/are not supposed to do sth. 你不应该做某事。
3. Be brave/Pull yourself together.You will surely overcome the difficulty.
勇敢一些/振作起来。你一定能克服困难。
尾段：表达期望、祝愿
1. I hope things will get better soon. 希望事情会很快好起来。
2. I'm sure you will get over your difficulties in a short while. 我相信你很快就会克服困难。
Dear ___人名____,
I’m shocked/ sorry to hear that you__________________（对方遇到的不好的事情）. I quite understand how you feel now. / It's understandable that you sink into sadness. （表示能理解对方处境）
My suggestions are as follows: First and foremost, we should _________________（建议1）. In addition, _____________（建议2）. Only in this way can we ________________（解决问题并且取得成功）. / Therefore , if your dream endeavors to rise above the disadvantage, you will win sooner or later.
I hope that you______________________（祝愿对方）. Let’s go all out together to turn our dreams into reality. / If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me. We shall be happy when you are back.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing1:2021·天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
Writing2: 2022·浙江卷
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends
then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
1.(2020·海口调研)
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack因爸爸过度饮酒而感到非常苦恼，就此请你用英语给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括：
1．表示安慰；
2．给出建议；
3．寄予希望。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.
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Best wishes. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking. I can understand how you feel. It must be a big problem for your family, and it may disturb your daily life. As his son, it's normal for you to give him your concern. However, you shouldn't become upset about it. Certainly, you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinking little by little. Meanwhile, you can ask some doctors and experts for more professional help. Making some rules for him to follow is another way you can try.
We know quitting drinking is very difficult, so you should give him time and care. I wish your father could give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier.
Best wishes. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2024届广东省高三年级10月份大联考)
假定你是李华，高三学习压力大，外教让同学之间以写纸条的方式互相鼓励，你选择写给你的同桌Ryan，因为他最近有些焦虑。内容包括：1.安慰对方；2.给予鼓励。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Ryan,
It seems that you've been anxious lately. As a senior three student, actually, it is not unusual to embrace the very challenging year with anxiety. Therefore, just take it easy for all of us feel the same way you do.
I am lucky enough to be your deskmate. At the most critical moment of my high school, it is your company and humorous personality that guide me forward, with the hardship and tiredness of learning escaping me.
In the last six months, Let’s go hand in hand and create brilliant and highlight moments of our own. Let's refill ourselves together and go for the bright future, my dear deskmate!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为安慰信；
（2）因两人是同桌关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为安慰+鼓励，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）it is not unusual for sb to do sth对某人而言做某事是很常见的；
（2）embrace the very challenging year迎接极具挑战性的一年；
（3）take it easy别慌，慢慢来；
（4）it is ... that ...运用强调句型；
（5）with ... escaping me运用无灵主语结构，表达某人忘记某事；
（6）go hand in hand携手并进；
（7）of one's own某人自己的。
3.(浙江A9协作体2023年9月高二暑假返校联考)
假设你是李华，假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时受到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意，内容包括：1.写邮件目的；2.得到好友的哪些款待；3.表达谢意。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Judy,
I have arrived home. I’d like to extend my sincere thanks to you for your splendid hospitality during my visit to your hometown.
Memories came flooding back to me. I still remember the wonderful time when you led me to get around and visit the most famous attractions, enabling me to have a good view of the exotic scenery and expose myself to the traditional customs. I still remember the wonderful time when you led me to taste the local delicacies, bringing me a feast for my appetite.
Words fail to express my gratitude to you, and I sincerely invite you to visit my hometown. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作三步法：
（1）仔细审题，确定本文为感谢信；
（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为回忆Judy的热情款待，确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）extend one's sincere thanks to sb表达某人的诚挚谢意；
（2）splendid hospitality盛情款待；
（3）Memories came flooding back to me过去的回忆历历在目；
（4）have a good view of饱览；
（5）expose oneself to体验；
（6）bringing me a feast for my appetite让我大饱口福；
（7）Words fail to express my gratitude to you千言万语难以表达我的谢意。
4.(2021·全国卷)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days I’m writing to ask you some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school
is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on. I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
Thank you for your help. I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。
1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
提高：heighten→ promote
各种各样： all kinds of→ a variety of
选择：select→ choose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.
拓展句：We can choose a variety of themes, which include calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.
5.(2020年7月，浙江卷)
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now ）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。
Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。
As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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