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讲评及训练
（Contiuation Writing）
高考英语
1） 短文内容：内容的丰富性、故事发展的合理性、续写 的完整性；
2） 词汇语法：使用语言的多样性、准确性和恰当性（语言为交际服务，不可一味使用所谓“高级”词汇，要与原文语言特点保持一致）；
3） 篇章结构：上下文的衔接（包括续写段落之间的 衔接）连贯性；
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4） 写作规范:
① 词数少于130的，扣2分；
② 拼写和标点符号错误多，将分数降低一个档次；
③ 书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
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四步答题法： 阅读—拟稿—润色—成稿
Step 1 Read（阅读）：
理清故事情节，找出5W+1H；画出关键词，预测后续故事。
1. Make sense of the main plots of the passage.
2. Analyze the two given sentences & underline the key words to predict what is to follow.
写作步骤
Step 2 Draft（拟稿）
Work out an outline.
Step 3 Polish（润色）
1. Use the key words and phrases in the passage.
2. Use different sentence structures.
写作步骤
① 复合句
（包括主语、宾语、表语、同位语、定语和状语从句）
② 倒装句
否定词置于句首
(2) Only + 状语置于句首
③ 强调句型
It is ... that (who) ...
1. 句式要丰富
④ 固定结构
too ... to ...
so ... that ...
not ... until ...
not only ... but also ...
neither ... nor ...
1. 句式要丰富
① 使用高级词汇
He is a good student.
(excellent, extraordinary)
② 使用短语
I like music.
(be fond of, be interested in)
③ 使用谚语
As the saying goes, “ … ”
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）
2. 使用高级词汇及短语
并列：and; also; too; as well as
选择：or; either…or
原因：because (of); owing to; due to; thanks to
结果：so ; therefore; thus; as a result
比较：on the contrary; compared to
转折： but; yet; however
递进： besides; moreover; in addition
举例： for example; such as; that is; take...for example
3. 使用连接词
使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺。
Check whether the verb forms and word spelling is correct.
Step 4 Present（成稿）
Produce the final work.
写作步骤
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挖空训练指导
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2024南昌一模）
Jumping Over Boundaries
When I was in elementary school, we had an annual sports day. Girls could do many things like hopscotch, jump rope, tetherball, and dodgeball, except high jumping. Only boys could do high jumping.
That’s what I wanted to do — high jumping. So I went to the coach.
“Girls don’t do high jumping,” the coach said. “Girls have all these other things they can do.” He excitedly described how much fun it would be.
I’d been high jumping in the backyard with my five brothers for years. Although I am a girl, I did high jumping pretty well. My brothers could rarely beat me. Whenever my back crossed the bar, that feeling is extremely wonderful. I went home and told my mother what the coach had said. My mother, a small, thin woman only four feet eleven inches tall, said, “I think we should go visit him.”
“Visit who ” I asked confusedly.
“The headmaster.”
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“Visit the headmaster ” I was terrified. Would I get in trouble Would my mother and I be crossing boundaries we shouldn’t cross
My mom and I went to Mr. White’s office. “Linda wants to do the high jump,” my mother said.
“Mrs. Martinez, you don’t understand. This is the tradition of our Annual Sports Day,” he said.
“But Mr. White, I don’t know where it says that girls cannot do this.”
The headmaster couldn’t find any rules that said girls couldn’t do the high jump. “I have to think about this,” he said at last.
When we got home, my mom told me something I would always remember: this wasn’t just about me. “Maybe other girls want to do this, too,” she said.
My mother waited a week, but still didn’t get the headmaster’s reply. So she walked over to the school again. “Mr. White, please. I ask you this not for me and not for Linda, but let’s just see how it works.” In the end, Mr. White agreed.
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I stood on the field of the high jumping competition.
__________________________________________________________________
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To my surprise, some of the cheers I got were from boys!
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I stood on the field of the high jumping competition. ___________________________________
_______________________________（我是唯一参加跳高比赛的女孩，这让我感到有点尴尬。）But ________________________________________________________（当看到我向往已久的橫杆时，所有的尴尬都消失了。） I was arranged the last to jump. I saw some boys failed, while some jumped over at a good height, but not higher than my ever record. Finally, ____________（轮到我了）_______________
_________________________ （我深吸一口气，跑上去，起飞，然后翻过身来。） ___________________
___________________（结果是我获得了第一名。）
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To my surprise, some of the cheers I got were from boys! _____________________________________________________
_______________________________（原先那个嘲笑我参加跳高比赛的男孩现在为我欢呼。）The girls ran over and hugged me. I instantly became the center of attention on the entire field of competition. ______________________________
__________________________（校长亲自给我颁奖。）
________________（更重要的是，） every year in the future, the school would allow girls to participate in high jumping competitions. My mother was right — ____________________
（这与我无关。） It was about making people think about what girls could do. ____________________________________
_________________________________（我不仅跳过了障碍，还跳过了偏见的界限。）
读后续写挖空训练
I stood on the field of the high jumping competition. ___________________________________
_______________________________（我是唯一参加跳高比赛的女孩，这让我感到有点尴尬。）But ________________________________________________________（当看到我向往已久的橫杆时，所有的尴尬都消失了。） I was arranged the last to jump. I saw some boys failed, while some jumped over at a good height, but not higher than my ever record. Finally, ____________（轮到我了）_______________
_________________________ （我深吸一口气，跑上去，起飞，然后翻过身来。） ___________________
___________________（结果是我获得了第一名。）
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I was the only girl who attended high jumping,
which made me feel a little embarrassed.
when I saw the bar I had been longing for, all the awkwardness disappeared.
it was my turn.
I took a deep breath,
ran up, took off, and crossed over!
As it turned out,
I won the first place.
To my surprise, some of the cheers I got were from boys! _____________________________________________________
_______________________________（原先那个嘲笑我参加跳高比赛的男孩现在为我欢呼。）The girls ran over and hugged me. I instantly became the center of attention on the entire field of competition. ______________________________
__________________________（校长亲自给我颁奖。）
________________（更重要的是，） every year in the future, the school would allow girls to participate in high jumping competitions. My mother was right — ____________________
（这与我无关。） It was about making people think about what girls could do. ____________________________________
_________________________________（我不仅跳过了障碍，还跳过了偏见的界限。）
读后续写挖空训练
The boys who had laughed at me for participating in high jumping were now cheering for me.
The headmaster personally
presented me with an award.
More importantly,
it wasn’t about me.
I jumped not only over the bar,
but also over the boundary of prejudice.
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