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Unit11 How was your school trip
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
旅行
描述旅行的情况
单元话题：旅行
本单元的话题是学校旅行，主要谈论旅行期间发生的事情以及感受。此类文章以记叙文为主，要求写明事情发生的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果，同时也要正确地运用一般过去式。
习作要点:
1. 能正确使用句型介绍自己旅行的地方；
2. 体裁为记叙文；
3. 能正确使用时态和人称代词，以一般过去时、第一人称为主。
（以思维导图的形式呈现）
【短语积累】
cow 牛
horse 马
quiet 相当
feed喂养
farmer农民
farm农场
worry担心
countryside乡下
yesterday 昨天
grow种植
exciting令人兴奋的
station站,站点
expensive昂贵的
guide导游
dark 黑暗的
fast快的
gift礼物
pick摘
ride 骑
visit参观
buy买
slow缓慢的
robot机器人
hear 听见
luckily幸运地
cheap廉价的
paintings 油画
excellent优秀的
【短语积累】
go on a school trip进行一次学校旅行
on Saturday morning 在周六上午
first of all 首先
climb the mountain爬山
quite a lot of许多
in the end 最后
all in all 总的来说
go for a walk去散步
ride a horse 骑马
talk with somebody和某人谈话
pick strawberries摘草莓
milk a cow给奶牛挤奶
feed the chickens喂鸡
take photos拍照
show somebody around带领某人参观
grow apples种植苹果
go to the farm去农场
on the countryside在乡下
climb the mountains爬山
visit my grandparents拜访我的祖父母
come out出来
go fishing去钓鱼
have fun玩得开心
play games做游戏
school trip一次学校旅行
go to the zoo去动物园
visit a fire station参观消防站
go to the countryside去乡下
visit a museum参观博物馆
draw pictures画画
boring day无聊的一天
make a model robot制作一个机器人模型
dark rooms昏暗的房间
be interested in... 对......感兴趣
a gift shop一家礼品店
hear the guide听见导游说话
a terrible school trip一次糟糕的学校旅行
【句式积累】
※ 开头句
We went on a school trip last week. 上周我们进行了一次学校旅行。
Last week, I went to... with ... 上周,我和......一起去了......？
We saw quite a lot of... and take many photos . 我们看到了很多......并排了很多照片
It was sunny/ cloudy/ windy/ rainy... 天气晴朗/多云/有风/下雨...
We visited... 我们参观了......
We met at... 我们在......碰面。
※ 中间句
First of all teacher told us some rules. 首先老师给我们讲了一些规则。
It's kind of hard to climb the mountain. 爬山有点难。
We got there by... 我们乘......到那儿
I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts. 我去礼物店买了一些可爱的礼物。
We visit the farm, which was great fun. 我们去了农场非常有趣。
We didn't see many animals because of the rain. 因为下雨我们没有去看动物。
There are.... 这里有......
We ate... 我们吃了......
They were sold out. 他们卖完了。
We wanted ... 我们想要......
※ 结尾句
I think today school trip was interesting. 我觉得今天的学校旅行很有趣。
All in all, we had a great time there.总之我们在那玩的很开心。
How time flies! 时间过得飞快！
It was time for us to leave. 到了该离开的时间了。
It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us. 这对我们来说，真是一次难忘而有意义的旅行。
We had fun doing... 我们......很高兴。
We had a good time. 我们玩得很尽兴。
We felt tired but happy. 我们虽然很累但很开心。
I didn't enjoy my school trip at all. 我一点也不喜欢我们的学校旅行。
【谚语积累】
All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。
Travel broadens the mind. 旅行开阔眼界。
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书，行万里路。
He who does not advance loses ground. 逆水行舟，不进则退。
The truth of the trip is not in the entry permit. 真理的旅行不用入境证。（或可理解为真正的旅行不在于目的地）
Travel can train people's stamina. 旅行能培养人的耐力。
A traveler without knowledge is a bird without wings. 一个没有知识的旅行者等于一只没翅膀的鸟儿。
People love to travel, not to reach their destination, but to enjoy the pleasure of the journey. 人之所以爱旅行，不是为了抵达目的地，而是为了享受旅途中的种种乐趣。
【万能写作模板】
模板①
My name is Jack. I'm from America. I went on a trip to Yunnan with my family last summer. We arrived there by plane on July 27th. （介绍事情发生的起因）
It was sunny and warm on that day.（介绍那天的天气状况）We study here for eight days. We visit some great places. Such as Stone Forest, Lijiang old town and Yulong snow mountain. Then we went to Lugu lake by bus. It was so beautiful. We took many photos and ate lots of delicious food. We bought many gifts there. They were beautiful but a little expensive. （介绍具体发生了什么事情，参观了哪些景点）
All in all, we had a great trip.（结尾升华感情，表达自己拥有一个好的旅行体验）
模板②
I had a school trip with my classmates yesterday. We went to the museum when we arrived. （介绍事情发展的时间，背景）
We took many photos in front of the museum. We was so happy and the photos were beautiful. Then we went in and visited the museum. We also went to the 4D cinema and watched a movie. At noon, we had lunch at a restaurant. I ate a bowl of beef noodles. They were delicious. At three oclock p.m., we went back to school. （介绍旅行中发生的事情，去了哪，做了什么，吃了什么等）
We were tired but we felt happy. I hope I can go there later. What about your school trip Can you tell me （结尾总结旅行的感受）
模板③
请根据以下表格中的信息以my school trip为题写一篇英文短文讲述一下上，周六你们班去黄山旅行的情况。
提示词：the sea of clouds云海， wondrous pines 奇松， unique rocks怪石
参加人员 全体师生
集合时间 早上7.30
集合地点 学校门口
交通工具 公交车
活动 爬山，看云海，拍照
感受 累，但快乐
要求：
1.语句通顺可适当发挥。
2.词数：60左右。
My school trip
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【审题思路】
1.说明事情发生的时间及天气状况。
2.具体描述出行的细节。
3.包括集合时间地点，出行工具，参加活动的项目。
4.表达出行的感受。
5.注意正确使用一般过去时和第一人称
【佳作欣赏】
It was sunny last Saturday. We went on a school trip. All the teachers and students of my class visited Moun Huang. We met at school gate at half past seven in the morning. We went there by bus and it took about two hours. We climbed the mountain and saw the sea of clouds, many wonders pines and unique rocks around us. They are really beautiful. We took many photos there. At noon we had a picnic. When we got home we felt tired but happy.
一、根据句意和首字母提示补全单词。
1. Please help me to f__________ the chickens.
2.Can I ride a h__________
3.My uncle is a f__________. He used to work on a farm.
4.Mary can play the guitar q__________ well.
5.The farmers g__________ all kinds of vegetables here.
【答案】
1.feed 2.horse 3.farmer 4.quite 5.grow
二、根据汉语提示完成下列句子。
1.我们去了博物馆，并且拍了照片。
We __________ to the zoo and __________ photos.
2.你昨天帮你妈妈拖地了吗？
Did you __________ your mother __________ the floor
3.我上个星期和弟弟一起骑马了。
I __________ a horse with my brother __________ week.
4.苏珊昨天去农场了吗？
Did Susan go to the __________ __________？
5.杰克和他的朋友们参观了消防站。
Jack __________ the fire station __________ his friends.
6.上个周末我喂了鸡，还和爷爷钓了鱼。
Last weekend, I __________ chickens and __________ fishing with my grandpa.
7.你昨天看到了什么？
What did you __________ last __________
8.农村的空气非常干净。
The air in the __________ is nice and __________.
9.你的梦想要实现了，你真幸运!
Your dream will __________ __________. __________ you!
10.你给父母买了什么
Whay did you __________ __________ your parents
【答案】
went, took
help, sweep
rode, last
farm yesterday
visited, with
fed, went
see, night
countryside, clean
Come true, Lucky
buy for
三、用所给词的适当形式填空。
1. __________(Luck), I was late for school this morning.
2.Did you __________(take) any photos yesterday？
3.Today is Friday and yesterday __________(be) Thursday.
4.Whhat time __________(do) you get home yesterday morning
5.It is a __________(sun) day today.
【答案】
1.Luckily 2.take 3.was 4.did 5.sunny
四、给下列句子选择相对应的答语。
1. How was your school trip last week
2.What did Jack do last night
3.Did you go to the park last Sunday
4.What did Gina buy
5. Where did he go last weekend
6.How was the weather yesterday
A.No, I didn't.
B.He went to the museum last week.
C.Jack watch a basketball game last night.
D.My school trip was great.
E.Gina bought a gift.
F.It's great.
【答案】
1.B 2. C 3. A 4. E 5. B 6.F
五、连词成句，注意标点和大写字母。
1. your, was, How, weekend ( )
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2.you, back, When, get, did ( )
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3.your, me, showed, Please, around, school (.)
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4. yesterday, What, home, get, did, you, time ( )
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5.Central, Did, to, Park, he, go ( )
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6. weather, terrible, The, was, yesterday (.)
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7. watched, TV, She, last, night (.)
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8.was, relaxing, The, very, trip
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9.flowers, trees, many, and, There, in, park, are, the (.)
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10.juice, this, She, orange, drank, some, morning (.)
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【答案】
1.How was your weekend
2.When did you get back
3.Please showed me around your school.
4.What time did you get home yesterday
5.Did he go to Central Park
6.The weather was terrible yesterday.
7.She watched TV last night.
8.The trip was very relaxing.
9.There are many flowers and trees in the park.
10.She drank some orange juice this morning.
六、按要求完成下列句子。
1. He came to school late because his mother was ill. (对划线部分进行提问）
_____ _____ he _____ to school late
He wanted to do something interesting.(改为一般疑问句 )
_____he _____ to do _____ interesting？
My trip was great last week. (对划线部分进行提问）
_____ _____ your trip last week
I helped mother fed chichens. (改为否定句)
I _____ _____ mother fed chichens.
I asked teacher some questions.(改为一般疑问句)
_____ you _____ teacher _____ questions
She eats some beef every day.(用yesterday改写句子)
She_____ some beef yesterday.
I couldn't do anything at that time. (改为同义句)
I could _____ _____ at that time.
The girls had a good time during the school trip.(改为同义句)
The girls_____ _____ during the school trip.
The science teacher cleaned the bus yesterday afternoon.(对划线部提问)
_____ _____ the science teacher _____ yesterday afternoon
The weather was bad. (改为否定句)
The weather _____ _____ bad .
【答案】
What did, come
Did, want, anything
How was
didn't help
Did, ask, any
ate, for
do anything
had fun
What did, do
was not
七、翻译句子。
1.Mary是个优秀的女孩。
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2.这个短裙既便宜又漂亮，所以我买了。
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3.爬山困难吗？
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4.你上周和你的朋友们一起去动物园了吗？
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5.他们昨天下午踢足球了。
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6.我们先去了公园，然后去了农场。
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7.学生们学到了很多关于农业的知识。
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8.农场里有奶牛吗？
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【答案】
1.Mary is an excellent girl.
2.The skirt is cheap and beautiful, so I'll take it.
3.Is it difficult to climb the mountains？
4.Did you go to the zoo with your friends last week？
5.They played soccer yesterday afternoon.
6.First, we went to the park. Then, we went to the farm.
7.The students learn a lot about farming.
8.Were there any cows on the farm
八、根据短文内容，从方框中选择恰当的单词填空，每词限用一次。
an, boy, wanted, and, bus, paper, drew, her,
Amy is 1 American girl. She is 13 years old. She is in Beijing with 2 parents. She doesn't know much about Chinese.On Sunday morning, Amy 3 to see pandas in the zoo. She waited for the 4 at the bus stop. She asked a 5 the way to the zoo. But the boy didn't understand her. Then she took out a pen and a piece of 6 . She 7 a panda on it 8 show the picture to the boy. The boy smiled and said :" I will go there, please follow me."
【答案】
1.an 2. her 3. wanted 4. bus 5. boy 6.paper 7.drew 8.and
（一）
上周末学校组织全体师生去爬山，是乘坐大巴车去的山里，爬到山顶花费了两个小时，看到了很多树，还有云朵，山顶的空气很清新，最后还在商店买了一些礼物。请根据以上内容写一篇60词左右的文章。
要求：词数60词左右，可适当发挥。
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【思路解读】
①题材：介绍学校旅行的记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，运用第一人称;
③提示：考生根据时机情况适当增添内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，简单去的地方及天气；
第二步，详细描述旅行时发生的事情；
第三步，总结，并表达感受。
【满分作文】
My school trip
It was sunny last Sunday. My school went to climb the mountain. The trip was really interesting.
We went there by bus. The mountain was very beautiful. It took us about two hours to the top. On the top of the mountain we were very excited and happy. We saw a lot of tall trees and clouds. And the air was clean. We took a great many photos there. In the end we bought some gifts in the shop.
All in all, it was an exciting day. We were very tired but happy!
【亮点词汇】
①climb the mountain 爬山
②on the top 在山顶
③a lot of 许多
【高分句型】
①It took us about two hours to the top.
②On the top of the mountain we were very excited and happy.
③All in all, it was an exciting day. We were very tired but happy!
（二）
今年5月11日，你的学校组织了一次郊游，去科学博物馆进行参观，请根据参观地点写一篇英语日记记录当天的经历和感受。
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文为记叙文，描述旅行的一天；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，人称为第一人称；
③提示：具体描述旅行时发生的事情。
【写作步骤】
第一步，阐述自己要描述旅行的地点及原因；
第二步，具体描述旅行的时间，地点，发生的事情等；
第三步，总结并表达看法。
【满分作文】
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. We went to the Science Museum by subway at seven o'clock a.m..
As soon as we reached the museum, we were surprised to see lots of pictures and science. Then we watch a video about different in inventions and inventors. From the video, we went about the rapid development of technology. In the afternoon we play chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them . Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today. I hope to go there again in the near future!
【亮点词汇】
①reach 到达
②watch a video 看视频
③wonderful time 快乐的时间
【高分句型】
① We were surprised to see lots of pictures and science.
② Then we watch a video about different in inventions and inventors.
③ I hope to go there again in the near future!
(一)
（2021·合肥·中考真题）旅游不仅仅是游山玩水那么简单，在旅游的过程中，我们可以领略湖光山色还可以，陶冶情操增长见识，一定有过许多难忘的旅游经历吧，请你描述你印象中最深刻的一次旅游，要包括以下内容：
1.Where did you go
2.When did you go there
3.How was the weather there
4.What did you do
5.How were the people and the food there
注意事项：
1. 根据所给提示进行描述，适当增添；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述旅行经历；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：可适当增添内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍旅行的时，背景及地点；
第二步，具体描述旅行时发生的事情；
第三步，总结表明看法。
【满分作文】
Last summer vacation, I went to Weihai with my parents. We went there by train. The weather was not very good. I walked along the beach and it was really beautiful. I went swimming and took many photos. I ate many different kinds of the food. They were delicious and I liked them very much. I liked to talk with the people there. Because they were very friendly. They told me a lot about Weihai and I made some new friends.
I had a great time in Wehai, and I hope I can go there again this summer.
【亮点词汇】
①by train 乘火车
②walk along the beach沿着海滩走
③took photoes 拍照片
④talk with... 和.....交谈
【高分句型】
①I walked along the beach and it was really beautiful.
②I liked to talk with the people there.
③I hope I can go there again this summer.
(二)
（2020·泾县·中考真题）假如你是李华，上周末你和你的同学一起去北山公园参加了郊游，你们骑自行车到达交易地点，爬山、照相、做游戏等。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1. 根据所给提示进行描述，适当增添；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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【思路解读】
①题材：本文是记叙文，写旅行记录；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”人称为第一人称；
③提示：可适当增添内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍旅行的时间和出行方式；
第二步，具体描述旅行中发生的事情；
第三步，总结表明看法。
【满分作文】
Last weekend, I went for a trip with my classmates at half past seven. In the morning we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we was so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there we start to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that we took some photos and had a rest. Later some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn't go back until four o'clock p.m.. We were tired but very happy. We really had a wonderful time .
【亮点词汇】
①go for a trip 去旅行
②start to... 开始做......
③arrived there 到达那里
④had a rest 休息
【高分句型】
①We didn't go back until four o'clock p.m..
② When we arrived there we start to climb the hill at once.
③On the way, we was so excited that we sang loudly.

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