资源简介 (共25张PPT)新闻报道应用文写作★德保高中 LISA分析周测考试应用文写作存在的问题:每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(World Water Day),上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。1. 审题不清。一些作文写成了活动倡议、建议信、通知告示或者是演讲稿。2. 时态错误。很多同学用一般将来时或一般现在时,还有时态混乱多种时态掺杂的情况3. 对主干要点的陈述存在:漏述、主题认识偏离4. 表达多样性差,书写不美观,卷面不整齐。Part1 认识新闻、活动报道★时态:人称:语言风格:要点:以一般过去时为主以第三人称为主体人称正式,严谨,简明新闻报道概述活动的目的、内容、反响新闻、活动报道是典型的高考应用文体裁,也是新高考常考体裁,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。导语(活动简要概述)5W: When (时间), Where (地点),Who (人物),What (事件)和Why(目的或原因)主体(活动主要内容和开展过程)总起句+活动的内容及过程结语(活动的感受、反响和评价)活动具体益处+总体评价新闻报道结构structurePara 1Para 2Para 3以周测考试应用文为例学习新闻报道写作:每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(World Water Day),上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。一审体裁:二审人称:三审时态:四审要点:新闻报道以第三人称为主体人称以一般过去时为主世界水日、上街宣传、活动目的、内容、反响四审解决难点:活动的内容有哪些?现场演示Live demonstration说唱表演(rap))播放视频Play some videos发传单hand out the leaflet比赛competetion演讲/讲座speech/lecture.)相片展Photo Exhibition )........What can we do in World Water DAY Part2 研读范文,制作模板★With the purpose of improving the awareness of saving water, The School Union held an compaign about World Water Day on the Street last Sunday .The compaign started at 6 o’clock and lasted 8 hours, during which we enjoyed a variety of meaningful activities.Firstly, they handed out leaflets to the citizens to introduce World Water Day. Later, public speeches about the importance of protecting water resources were given by some volunteers. Finally, The compaign ended with a demonstration showing how to save water in our daily life, which made all of us realize the significance of taking action.Not only did these activities aroused people’s great interest in World Water Day, but also raised their awareness of water resources protection. This activity turned out to be a huge success.Activity 1: 读范文,形成模板Activity 1: 替换词汇、句式, 升级模板(3mins)1.With the purpose of...2.The School Union held an campaign about World Water Day on the Street last Sunday .3.The campaign started at 6 o’clock and lasted 8 hours, during which we enjoyed a variety of meaningful activities.4.This activity turned out to be a huge success.整体评价可替换句式: (think highly of等)In order to/Aiming to.../which aimed at...改为被动式:An compaign/activity about...(主题) was launched(held) by the School Uniont...(时间+地点)改为无灵主语句:Last sunday witnessed an extaordinary activity about...(主题), organized by..., which aimed at ...替换划线词:As schedualed, The campaign/activity kicked off (开始) from...to..., which attracted thousands of paticipant to come.The activity was highly praised./was well received./ was thought highly of.This activity proved to be a succes.This activity benefited us a lot.Activity 3: 小组讨论,制作自己的模板(5mins)With the purpose of ...(主题), our school Union held an campaign about...,(地点+时间).The campaign started at ... o’clock and lasted ... hours, during which we enjoyed a variety of meaningful activities. Firstly, sb.did sth.Later, sth be done. Finally, The campaign ended with a..., which made all of us ...Not only did these activities ..., but also... This activity turned out to be a huge success.小组讨论,制作模板新闻报道写作步骤总结:四审一审体裁二审人称三审时态四审要点一写导语句二写总起句三写活动过程和内容四写益处与评价四写Part3 链接高考,应用写作★(2023年1月高考英语真题)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”(Getting to Know the Plants Around Us)活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:1.活动的过程;2.收获与感想。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Activity 3: 小组讨论,四审+四写,合作完成写作(10mins):一审体裁二审人称三审时态四审要点一写导语句二写总起句三写活动过程和内容四写益处与评价目的?内容和过程?益处?小组合作,构思参考选择恰当的活动A.ExhibitionB.PerformanceC.Have a lectureF.Do a queeseG.pay a visitD.Handed out leafletsE.Make a speechF. Arrange a courseH.garbage classificationI. post some pictures online .J.PloggingO.Held an English classic recitation competition选择恰当的益处A.offered us chance to exerciseB.contributed to a close bond between studentsC.enriched our school lifeF.leave an unforgettable memory between usG.build up our body/immunityD.enables us to learn a lot that is beyond our textbooksE.promote the friendship among usaroused people’s great interest inraised their awareness ofF.enhance students’confidence in our national culture新闻报道Show time范文展示:Getting to Know the Plants Around UsLast Sunday witnessed the meaningful activity “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”, organized by the Student Union, which has a great effect on us.As schedualed, The campaign kicked off from 8:00 to 12:00, which attracted thousands of paticipant to come. At the begining, Stuents gathered at the entrance of the botanical garden at 9:00 am, after which the guide led us to visit the garden, introducing the plants to us one by one.The signs hung on the tree gave us more detailed imformation. At last, we did some quiz about the plants we had seen.The activity was a great success. The participants benefited a lot from it, expecting more activities like this in the future.Part4 历年高考真题★昨天你参观了学生举办的国画作品展,请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:(2021浙江6月高考)1.展览时间,地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。(2021浙江6月高考)(2020年全国新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷):假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。(2020·海南·高考真题)(2020·山东卷):星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文报道此次活动。内容包括:1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山;2. 活动的过程;3. 你对于这次活动的评论。(2013年江西卷)Part5 Conclusion★一段导体二段主体三段结体四审四写新闻报道认识新闻体裁特点及结构写作的步骤了解新闻体裁高考真题结构时态、人称、语言风格、要点总结回顾:一审体裁二审人称三审时态四审要点一写导体句二写总起句三写具体活动四写益处与评价Part6 Home work★润色你的文章,选择以上其中一篇真题再写一篇新闻报道。新闻报道应用文写作“THANKS”★2023/04/25四月月考分析 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览