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萤火虫仙女
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My little sister,Meg,said that she wasn't afraid of the dark anymore and she'd be OK staying with Auntthe country." As long as you're there,Mike,"she had said.Still,Mum was worried.Meg had never slept avfrom home, away from the city.So I told Mum I could handle everything.
Even though we were only staying overnight,Meg had brought six books-all about fairies(仙女). After we unpacked, Aunt Lily invited us to pick some flowers.As we followed her through the forest,Meg held my hand tightly.But once we reached the sunlit grassland,she let go."Butterflies!"whispered Meg.She screamed with delight when one flew near her.
Maybe I had nothing to worry about,I thought.I still remembered when I was here last summer,I found some amazing insects,like fireflies(萤火虫)and walking sticks which I'd never seen in the city.
"Fairies are magical.See these beautiful flowers they grow!"she kept telling absolutely everything she knewabout fairies.I was glad that if she kept it up until bedtime,then maybe she'd fall right to sleep.
Meg did keep chatting,right through supper.Then the sun began to set."Does it get really dark out here at night " she asked. Her eyes were fixed on the window.
"Sure,but we've got plenty of lights inside,"said Aunt Lily. She leaned over and gave Meg a warm smile. But I could tell she was still worried."I could read to you."
I hadn't even finished a page when her bottom lip started shaking slightly."Mike,"she said,her eyes starting tofill. "I want to go home."I quickly searched through her book for something to keep her from crying.The book fell open to a page that was dog-eared from use,a page that was obviously one of Meg's favorites.The text read: "Among the trees deep in the forest,the lights of fairies gleam(闪烁)."Aha!How could I forgetthose "tiny fairies" out there
"Meg, there's something outside I want to show you,"I whispered."Tiny fuiries,Mike!"she said,pressing her forehead against the window,"Everywhere!"
Cause&effect:
1.由于Meg从未离开家，母亲担心，因此我答应我来处理。
2.Meg喜欢读关于仙女的书，因此书中描述的仙女种花是真的。
3.由于太阳下山，天黑了，Meg哭着要回家。
4.由于我带她看了窗外的东西，Meg认为那些是仙女
What did she see outside the window, which made her excited
Clue&hint
1.城市小孩没见过萤火虫与步行虫。
2.为了哄哭着说回家的妹妹，我想起了“小仙女”
3.Meg看到乌漆麻黑的窗外到处都是的“小仙女”是什么
Para 1:"Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,"I whispered.
What would she see outside the window in the darkness
Fireflies.
What would she feel seeing the insects that she never saw in the city
Amazed.
What would she think about these insects
They were like magic fireflies.
Para 2 "Tiny fairies,Mike!"she said,pressing her foreheadagainst the window,"Everywhere!"
What would she say about the twinkling fairies
They were just like what the books described.
What would she feel after seeing them
Comforted.
Would she have a sound sleep
Yes.
Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,"I whispered.Meg quickly covered her eyes with her hands."I don't want to look,"She sniffled."Come to the window,OK It's something you will like.I'm here.You'll be all right."I promised.When we were finally reached the window,I quietly switched off the lamp.A whisper of cool,damp air sifted through the screen of the open window.Outside,thick chunks of trees reached up into black clouds of leaves andfireflies hovered around like twinkling stars.Meg pressed her hands against the window,pushingherself away.But then she noticed them.Her stiffened arms relaxed.
“Tiny fairies,Mike!"she said,pressing her forehead against the window,"Everywhere!”They weren't fairies,of course.But the winking lights really existed and were,in my opinion,better than magic.I wanted to tell Meg about these incredible insects that flashed in the dark, signaling to each other.Then I looked down into Meg's shining eyes,and I decided she could learn about fireflies some other time.Meg was so absorbed in the breathtaking scene that shecompletely forgot her homesickness and soon fell asleep against my shoulder.I guess it turnedout that I could handle everything-with a little help from the magical fairies.(216)
Possible version 1
"Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,"I whispered.With a tender smile and a touch of anxiety,I approached my little princess.Kneeling down,I wrapped my arm around her. Still fixing her eyes on the window,Meg whimpered,her voice quivering,"Mike, I don't like the dark.”"I know,I know,"I soothed,gently running my fingers through her hair."But hey, do you remember the tiny fairies we read about in the forest They are here to protect you!" She turned tome with watery eyes,her face etched with curiosity. Encouraged by my reassurance and steady voice, she followed me to the window.
"Tiny fairies, Mike!"she said,pressing her forehead against the window,"Everywhere!" Outside, a troop of fireflies twinkled like tiny fairies,casting a soft,magical glow in the darkness. Meg's excitement bubbled over as she watched the fascinating dance of light outside.The night enveloped us with its gentle embrace,wrapping us in a blanket decorated with diamonds and warmth.Together,we marveled at the beauty of nature's own miniature spectacle, feeling as if wehad stepped into a page of Meg's beloved fairy book. After a while, Meg's eyes grew heavy anE!she peacefully drifted off to sleep. I was quite certain she would meet her fairies in herdreams.(220)
Possible version 2
the world in Meg's eyes
1.Fairies grow flowers.
2.The darkness ofthe night was terrible.
3.Fairies exist inthe countryside.
下水文
“Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,"I whispered."But I'm afraid to see things in the darkness."Meg pouted miserably.Then I pretended toexclaim my excitement as though I had seen magic,with wide-open eyes."Look at these creatures! They were like twinkling little stars falling down from the sky,and flying between flowers."Meg's fear of darkness gave way to curiosity due to my description, and strode to the windowsill."Let me see what they are."
" iny fairies,Mike!"she said,pressing her forehead against the window, "Everywhere!" She even poked me in the ribs to get my attention."I told you they are diligent workers,doing their job to shake off magical dust onto the b udof the flowers,so that they can blossom tomorrow.”Seeing her eyes glowing andshe was immersed in her imaginary world, forgetting about the homesickness,was moved by the power of the books,saying"Yes,I believe you now. Fairies care out there in the forests, just as the books describe.”
下水文：融洽度分析
1. afraid of darkness
2. childish/naive expression
3. Fairies grow flowers.
4. the importance of fairy tales in a child's world.

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