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第二节（满分25分）2024届高三第二次学业质量评价T8联考英语试题（读后续写）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we were finally dismissed from the last class of the day, the students streamed out of the classrooms. It was another boring day after school. I dragged my feet home as I sighed. Yet another uneventful day, I thought. Little did I know that the day would take a turn for the worse
The lift lobby （电梯间） of my flat was old and dirty. The walls, which were painted white, had been dirtied over many years. I reached my flat’s lobby, and pressed the lift button and went in. Just then, Mrs Lim, my elderly neighbour, hobbled （蹒跚） in. She looked ancient with tissue paper white hair, wearing a faded old-fashioned dress. I held the lift door open, flashing a friendly smile, and politely greeted her. I asked her how she felt that day and pressed the buttons. She thanked me for being so polite, then we were silent for the rest of the ride.
The lift fell down increasingly fast. There were loud clanking sounds here and there while the lift grew slower and slower. My heart beat hard and fast as my hands turned cold and wet with sweat. Unfortunately, the lift came to an abrupt stop at the fifth floor. I pressed the buttons hard several times, but it was of no help. The lights on the buttons had gone out. It soon dawned on me that we were trapped. An icy fear crept up my spine. Mrs Lim was hysterical （歇斯底里）.
“We will never get out!” she cried with her face pale. It had become a colourless mask. I had no time to lose. I pressed the bell in the lift immediately. The sound was surely deafening, but what other choice did I have Mrs Lim burst into tears. I tried my very best to comfort her, telling her that everything would be all right and that we needed to find out how to get out safely. Mrs Lim began having trouble breathing, and I immediately helped her sit down and loosened her collar.
Paragraph 1: Several minutes passed, but no help came. _______________________
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Paragraph 2: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. __________________
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试题分析
1.主要人物:
①I: a student
②Mrs. Lim: my elderly neighbor
2.视角：第一人称
3.主题：人与社会（被困电梯，如何与邻居老太太一起脱险）
4.前文故事梗概:
放学回家，感觉又过了无聊的一天。哪里知道，后来的事情，让人感觉更糟糕。在老旧电梯碰到老邻居Mrs. Lim，蹒跚走进电梯。跟她打了招呼，然后就安静地等电梯上行。突然电梯快速地下坠，后来在五楼停了下来。接着，电梯里一片漆黑。邻居老太太吓得歇斯底里地哭喊。虽然我也感到恐惧，但我还是不断安慰她，帮助她镇定下来。……
5.续写安排:
第一段: Several minutes passed, but no help came.
①（与前一句和前文衔接）当时电梯里的场景
②（过渡）我们的表现
③（承上启下）自救无果，等待救援
第二段: Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door.
①（与前一句衔接）我们的反应
②（过渡）消防员是怎样救我们的
③（收尾）事后回想
下水作文
Several minutes passed, but no help came. The lights flashed now and then. But it wasn’t long before they died out thoroughly. The darkness swallowed us entirely, which brought us more fear. I attempted to press the buttons that seemed to be available but in vain. The result brought me the thought that we might have no way to get out. I began to shout for help as I banged on the doors and calmed down my elderly neighbor, saying nothing would be wrong. That was the darkest and excruciating moment in my life, which seemed to be a decade, waiting for rescue. (96 words)
Bang! My hopes were lifted when I heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. We sprang to our feet, overjoyed. Lucky enough, rescue finally came to us! They spared no efforts to break the door open. Stepping out of the lift, we could clearly see beads of sweat sliding down their heads and sense their gasping for breath. Nothing could be better than seeing the beautiful world outside! We offered our heartfelt appreciation to them. My elderly neighbor, Mrs. Lim, even came over, hugging them tightly as if reuniting with once-lost family members. It turned out to be the best class, which brought me the warmth, care and dedication of people. (97 words)
试题呈现：20240423广州二模
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was seven years old, my family moved from Mexico to America. In Mexico, I was a cheerful girl who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fine games to play with my friends. However, when I arrived in America, I found it hard to fit in, and I became quieter.
We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables -my responsibility. While I took pride in watching them grow, there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate Luella's, with its delicate tulips(郁金香). Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me, we barely knew each other.
It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon. The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind, and thick gray clouds filled the sky. Gradually, the tornado took shape starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel(漏斗). My entire family gathered in the bathroom, seeking shelter from the storm. Terrified, I sat close to my mom, knees in my chest. After the storm had passed, our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged.
As I stepped outside, I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood. Across the street, a tall tree had fallen, crushing Luella's garden in front of her yellow house. We hurried over to check on it. Fortunately, her family seemed to be away at the time, and no one was injured, However, her once-beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris(碎片) spread everywhere. I could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this.Then my mom's usual words rang in my ear, “It is more blessed to give than to receive,” and my family started to think about how we could help.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden.
下水作文：114+141
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. The moment they stepped off the car, they were really taken aback by the mess the tornado had made of the garden, obviously unprepared for the severity of the damage. Luella dashed towards what was her beautiful garden and stroked those weathered flowers, sadness written all over her face. Seeing this, I approached her, trying to comfort her. To cheer Luella up, my parents and I joined in the cleaning work, putting the fallen tree back in place, clearing all the debris out of the garden and repairing all the gardening supplies. With our joint efforts, what was just now a land of ruins now turned into a garden on its way to recovery.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. Seeing her suffering so much, I knew I should do something. “We can plants some tulip seeds in the garden. And soon your garden will be a beautiful again with a sea of tulips,” I suggested. Seemingly infected by my idea, she beamed and nodded in approval. The next few days witnessed the two families working together, digging holes, planting the seeds and putting the soil back in place. It seemed that the garden started to revive itself and was getting back on its feet. Day after day, Luella and I watched the tulips growing and flowering, swaying elegantly in the breeze. Day by day, we embraced the friendship and closeness growing in our hearts. Never could I have imagined that it was these tulips that helped me fit into a foreign country and find back the sunshine version of me.
参考范文1：90+96
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as I saw their shock and disbelief. Approaching Luella, I tightly held her hands and said, “I’m sorry for your loss, but thankfully you're all right.” She weakly nodded, still puzzled by the devastating scene. My family volunteered to help clean up the mess, cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees. To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. My heart went out to her, knowing her devotion to those tulips she had nurtured. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden, which Luella delightedly embraced. With each bulb carefully planted, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again, which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was was right: It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give, you may receive something unexpected in return.
参考范文2：106+109
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as I saw the shock and disbelief on their faces. I couldn't help but approach Luella, tightly holding her hands and saying,“I'm so sorry for your loss, but thankfully you're all right." She weakly nodded at me, still appearing puzzled by the devastating sight. My family volunteered to help her clean up the mess , cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees from the yard. To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. My heart went out to her, knowing how much she had cherished those tulips that she had devoted so much energy to. Yet now, they were all gone. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden. Luella agreed delightedly. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again, which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us, as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right: It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give, you may receive something unexpected in return.

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