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Unit 5 Amazing Things
单元话题满分范文必背
1．上周五，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆 (the Amazing Museum)， 你发现了很多神奇的事情。回来后，你用英语写了一篇日记记述这次神奇之旅。
要点：
(1) 了解了三明治的历史；
(2) 知道了长颈鹿的长脖子里仅有七块骨头；
(3) 自拟另—件神奇的事；
(4) 你的感受…… (1-2点)
注意：
(1) 日记须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使日记连贯、通顺；
(2) 词数不少于60，日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, April 22nd, 2022
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Friday, April 22nd, 2022
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. At the museum, I found a lot of amazing things. I learnt about the history of sandwiches, and I knew that giraffes have only seven bones inside their long necks. Also, I learnt that fish sleep with their eyes open.
We live in a world with so many wonderful things. When we think of these things, we will feel that our life is getting more and more colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，以日记的形式记录一次博物馆之旅；
②时态：时态为一般过去时结合一般现在时；
③提示：题干要求写一篇日记，内容是参观神奇博物馆的经过和感受。提示中给出了简单的要点，写作时注意描述齐全，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明事件的要素；
第二步，详细阐述参观收获；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learnt about了解
②think of想起
③get more and more colourful变得越来越多彩
[高分句型]
①Also, I learnt that fish sleep with their eyes open.（that引导宾语从句）
②When we think of these things, we will feel that our life is getting more and more colourful.（when引导时间状语从句）
2．假设你是李雷，今天早上，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆（Amazing Museum）。回来后，你写了一篇文章记叙这次神奇之旅。旅游经过及感受如下：
1.早上八点在校门口集合，然后乘公共汽车前往神奇博物馆；
2.在神奇博物馆，你了解了很多神奇的事情，知道了是谁发明（invent）了电视，了解了三明治的历史，知道了一些神奇的动物，如：一条蛇在寒冷的冬天可以几个月少吃或不吃东西；一头长颈鹿的长脖子里有七根骨头；
3.你们玩得非常开心。你感觉这个世界真是太神奇了。
要求：1.注意人称和时态；2.不要逐字翻译，词数80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
We met at the school gate at eight this morning and went to the Amazing Museum by bus.
In the Amazing Museum, we learned about many amazing things. We knew who invented the TV. We also
learned about the history of sandwiches. The guide introduced some amazing animals to us. For example, the snake eats little or nothing for a few months in cold winter. There are seven bones in a giraffe’s long neck.
We had a good time in it. I think the world is full of amazing things.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出去神奇博物馆参观的主题；
第二步，介绍在博物馆学习到的知识；
第三步，书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
① introduce...to...给……介绍……
② be full of充满
[高分句型]
① We met at the school gate at eight this morning and went to the Amazing Museum by bus.（and连接并列谓语）
② There are seven bones in a giraffe’s long neck.（there be句型）
3．假设上周你们班组织了一次旅游，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，记录这次旅游的情况。内容要点如下：
1.上周五，我们班步行去参观了奇妙世界博物馆(Funny World Museum)；
2.我看见一只小猴子，它只有11厘米高，我也了解了一些其他奇奇怪怪的事情；
3.我知道了我们住在一个精彩的、充满了许多令人惊叹的事情的世界里；
4.我们在博物馆里花了两个半小时，我拍了很多照片；
5.我们大约在下午两点返回学校，大家都玩得很开心。
注意：
1.文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.词数80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Friday, our class went to visit the Funny World Museum on foot. I saw a small monkey. It’s only 11 centimetres tall. I also learned about some other strange things. I knew we live in a wonderful world and it is full of amazing things. We spent two and a half hours in it and I took a lot of photos. We came back to school at about 2 o’clock in the afternoon. We all had a great time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应先介绍旅行的地点和时间，然后介绍旅行遇到的事情，最后介绍什么时候返回学校以及感受，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍这次旅游时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
4．书面表达
这个世界有很多神奇的事情。请根据下列信息，以The amazing world为题，写一篇短文。
▲鱼睁着眼睛睡觉。 ▲我们的眼睛从出生开始大小不变。
▲长颈鹿脖子很长，但是脖子里只有七根骨头。▲蚂蚁虽小，但嗅觉很好。
▲蛇在冬天里很少或不吃单项。 ▲骆驼不喝水可以生存很长时间。
▲有的小猴子只有10厘米高。 ▲有些人可以一只手写字，另一只手画画。
要求：语言通顺，条例清楚，词数80左右。
【答案】There are many amazing things in the world. Fish sleep with their eyes open . Our eyes are the same size from birth. The giraffe has a long neck but there are only seven bones in it. The camel can live without water for a long time. The snake eats little or nothing for months in cold winter. The ant is small but it smells well. Some small monkeys are only 10 centimetres tall. Some people can write with one hand and draw with the other hand at the same time. Don’t you think they are amazing.
【分析】本文是说明文，需要分别介绍各种神奇的事情，记住要写得有条理，简单句和复合句合理搭配。
【详解】短文第一句There are many amazing things in the world.开门见山告诉我们神奇的世界；第三句用the same as和……一样描述我们的眼睛；第四句则用复合句使文章丰富多彩；在描述人的神奇才能时候，用情态动词can，短语one…the other…意为一个……另一个……；最后用反问句，加强语气。通篇长短句合理搭配，写得很好。
5．根据提供的信息，写一段文字，不少于80字。题目为“An amazing animal”。
camel :
1. go without water for a long time
2.store food in its hump(驼峰)
3. change the food into fat
4. live in the desert(沙漠)
5. not store the fat all over its body just in its hump
6. not want to be warm during the day
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【答案】范文：
An amazing animal
Camel is a kind of amazing animal. It is very strong and has brown fur. It lives in the desert. I found it very interesting because it can go without water for a long time. Each camel has two humps on its back. It usually stores its food in its hump. It changes the food into fat and stores it in its hump too. It doesn’t store the fat all over its body because it doesn’t want to be too warm during the day in the desert.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍神奇的动物是什么；
第二步，具体介绍骆驼的一些知识以及特征等；
[亮点词汇]
① a kind of一种
② for a long time很长时间
③ all over遍及
[高分句型]
① It doesn’t store the fat all over its body because it doesn’t want to be too warm during the day in the desert.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② It changes the food into fat and stores it in its hump too.（and连接并列的两部分）
6．假如你是 Simon,你在写信给你的好友 Lisa,告诉她一头叫 Alice 的鲸鱼（whale）的事：它 被称为世界上最孤独的鲸,原因是这只鲸说话的频率有 52 赫兹,而正常鲸的频率只有 15～25 赫 兹,所以说话的时候没有人听见,难过的时候也没有人理睬。请你根据下列描述,写一篇关于它 的小短文,不少于 100 字。
1. 人们在 1989 年首次发现了 Alice, 它长 39 英尺。
2. 人们很惊奇地发现Alice 用不同于其他鲸鱼的频率(HZ)说话。(speak at a different HZ from…) 3. 没有鲸鱼能听到 Alice 说话, 它找不到它的家人和朋友。
4. Alice 独自游过了太平洋 (the Pacific Ocean)。幸运的是,Alice 看起来很健康。 5. 但是人们在 2004 年失去了 Alice 的消息。
6. 谈一谈你的感受。
Dear Lisa
How are you Have you heard about a whale called Alice
Best wishes
Simon
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa
How are you Have you heard about a whale called Alice It is called the loneliest whale in the world. Alice, 39 feet long, was first discovered in 1989. People were surprised to find that Alice spoke at a different frequency
(Hz) than other whales. No other whales could hear it. It couldn't find its family and friends. It swam across the Pacific Ocean by itself. It was lucky that Alice seemed healthy. But people lost Alice's news in 2004.
I hope people can pay more attention to it. It needs our care. Would you like to help it with me
Best wishes
Simon
【详解】1.题干解读：这里是一篇书信作文，对鲸鱼Alice的介绍。本文时态主要是一般过去时。根据文中所给提示，认真审题，并根据提示要点去完成写作。注意语言要规范，叙述清楚条里。
2.例文点评：这里是一篇不错的文章，文中主要描述了鲸鱼Alice的基本情况。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be surprised to do；spoke at a different frequency；swam across
句型：It was lucky that Alice seemed healthy. I hope people can pay more attention to it.
7．作文：
Mike将在班上介绍一些奇异的事儿，他在网上找到有关大象的信息，请你根据中文提示，帮助他写一篇文章，介绍大象的稀奇古怪的事。字数：不少于60字。
1. 大象是世界上最大的陆地动物，重大约两万多公斤;
2. 喜欢吃草，能够活到大约七十岁；
3. 鼻子长，耳朵大，鼻子帮助它喝水；
4. 脚尖走路，脚背上都是脂肪；
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【答案】An Elephant is the largest animal on land today. It weights some two million kilograms and is about one metre high it was born. It likes grass.It can live to 70 years old.It has a long nose and large ears .Its nose can help it drink water.Elephants walk on their toes, with fat on their backs.When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more. Elephant is usually grey in color, having a long trunk with large ivory tusks protruding from each side of its mouth. Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephants are known to be very and gentle animals. For many years people have used the strength of these poweful animals to move trees and heavy logs.
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍大象的稀奇古怪的事。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
8．根据下面的提示以"Amazing animals"为题写一篇短文。词数在80左右。
1.世界上最大的动物不是大象，是蓝鲸(blue whale) ;
2.世界上最大的动物在海洋里，但不是鱼;
3.它们很久以前就生活在地球上;
3.它们通常有30米长，重1000千克。
4.它们是世界上最聪明的动物之一，它们可以相互交谈。当然，我们是听不懂的。
Amazing animals
【答案】One possible version
Amazing animals
Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world's biggest animals are in
the sea-but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They're usually 30 metres long and 1，000 kilos heavy. They're one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don't know what they are saying. What are they They're called blue whales.
【详解】本文叙述了世界上最大的动物是蓝鲸，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称，叙述蓝鲸现在的情况用一般现在时，叙述它们过去住在陆地上应该用一般过去时。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：one of the cleverest animals in the world世界上最聪明的动物之一；talk to sb给某人交谈；用了what引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。
9．你听说过一头叫Alice的鲸鱼（whale）吗？它被称为世界上最孤独的鲸，原因是这只鲸说话的频率有52赫兹，而正常鲸的频率只有15～25赫兹，所以说话的时候没有人听见，难过的时候也没有人理睬。请你根据下列描述，写一篇关于她的小短文。
1. 人们在1989年首次发现了Alice, 它长39英尺。
2. 人们很惊奇地发现Alice用不同于其他鲸鱼的频率(HZ)说话。
3. 没有鲸鱼能听到Alice说话, 它找不到它的家人和朋友。
4. Alice独自游过了太平洋 (the Pacific Ocean)。幸运的是，Alice看起来很健康。
5. 但是人们在2004年失去了Alice的消息，我…….
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【答案】People found Alice the first time in 1989. It was 39 feet long. People were surprised to find that Alice spoke at a different HZ from other whales. No other whales could hear it. It couldn’t find its family and friends. It swam across the Pacific Ocean by itself. It was lucky that Alice seemed healthy. But people lost Alice’s news in 2004. I hope
it is still healthy/ it found its family and friends at last/I’m sorry to hear that news.
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。短文中用短语be surprised to,swim across,by oneself,at last等短语增加了文章的亮点。
10．假设你是动物园的导游，请你根据下面的中文提示向来动物园的学生作介绍。60词左右。
1.欢迎来动物园，动物园里有许多有趣的动物；
2.熊！这些是树袋熊，它们来自澳大利亚，非常可爱，吃树叶( leaves)，喜欢白天睡觉；
3.这些大象来自非洲，又大又强壮，它们吃草，而且和家人生活在一起，非常友好；
4.这些熊猫来自中国四川，它们有点害羞、因此请保持安静。
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【答案】例文：
Welcome to the zoo. I’m the guide of your trip.
There are many kinds of animals in the zoo. Look! These are koalas. They are from Australia. They are cute, aren’t they They eat leaves. They sleep in the day. The elephants are from Africa. They are big and strong. They eat grass and live with their families. They are very friendly. The pandas are from Sichuan, China. They are a little shy. So please keep quiet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎，引出动物；
第二步，详细描述树袋熊、大象和熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of许多种
②in the day在白天
③keep quiet保持安静
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of animals in the zoo.（句型：there be句型）
②They are cute, aren’t they （反意疑问句：前肯后否，谓语动词为be动词）

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