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环境保护类投稿
1978年，福岛第一核电站曾经发生临界事故，东京电力选择隐瞒真相
nuclear power station
hide/conceal the truth
2002年，因为大规模篡改和伪造核电厂安全记录，东京电力公司董事长、总裁、两位顾问和副社长相继宣布辞职
falsify v.篡改，伪造
2005年，里氏7.2级地震导致福岛两座核电站中核废料存储池池水外溢。
earthquake
2006年，福岛第一核电站6号机组发生放射性物质泄漏事故。
nuclear leakage
2013年开始，日本就开始将存储的核污染水排入大海
2020年9月，日方称经过处理并且稀释的核污染水可以饮用
2023年8月23日，日本批准了700亿的日元公关
2023年8月24日，日本将核废水排入大海
2023年10月5日，日本正式排放第二批次的福岛核废水
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应用文写作
之
【投稿----环境篇】
【2022 年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题, 举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
真题再现
你们学校正你们学校正举办主题“用英文讲中国故事”征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写 一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1. 人物简称及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 题目已为你写好征文活动。
【2022 年全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,
内容包括: 1. 学习活动状况描述; 2. 简单评论; 3. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数100 左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well,
【2023 年全国甲卷】
考频
你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Youth and Me
【2023 年全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：
1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
【2021 年新高考Ⅰ, Ⅱ卷】
考频
当前，我市正全力创建全国文明城市。请你根据以下要点向学校英文报投稿，呼吁大家为“创文”活动贡献一份力量。要点如下：
1.环境保护；
2.绿色出行；
3.文明礼貌。
要求：
1.字数100词左右；2.要点完整，可适当发挥；
【23-24陕西榆林高三模考】
你校将以全国生态日（National Ecology Day）为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.生态环境的重要性；
2.保护生态环境的倡议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目已为你写好。
【23-24山东聊城高二期中】
考频
【2022 年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题, 举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
真题再现
目录 / Contents
谋篇布局
01
遣词造句
02
词句拓展
03
句型仿写
04
PART.01
谋篇布局
投稿 基本框架
投稿
2.主体
1.开头
3.结尾
背景+目的
保护海洋的倡议
再次呼吁号召
个人层面
政府层面
社会层面
海洋的重要性
P1
投稿背景
这是一个非常有意义的日子，它强调了海洋的重要性并提醒了人们去保护它。
It is a rather meaningful day, which stresses the significance of the ocean and reminds people to protect it.
stress/ emphasize/ highlight
【套路句】
P1-投稿背景
remind sb to do
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
2009年6月8日被联合国正式命名为世界海洋日。
是不是要解释一下海洋日？
P2
海洋重要性+倡议
提到海洋，它在地球环境中扮演了一个很重要的角色。
When it comes to the ocean, it plays a vital role in the earth’s environment.
when it comes to
当提及，当涉及
【套路句】
引出话题
P2-倡议内容【海洋重要性+倡议】
to是介词，
后加n./doing
There is no doubt that…
What seems beyond dispute is that
毋庸置疑
There is no doubt that the ocean plays a vital role in the earth’s environment.
It is widely/ universally/ generally acknowledged/ recognized/believed that…
众所周知
概括性话语
海洋不仅为我们提供了充足的食物，而且还维持了生态平衡。
The ocean not only offers us sufficient food, but also maintains the
balance of nature.
sufficient
adequate
abundant
【套路句】
P2-投稿内容【海洋重要性+倡议】
maintain the balance of nature
maintain ecological balance
句子不够高级？
为什么重要呢？
The ocean not only offers us sufficient food, but also maintains the
balance of nature.
倒装
Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food, but it also maintains the balance of nature.
P2-倡议内容【海洋重要性+倡议】
not only+助动词+主语+V原型+其他， but it/they also.+V（s/ed）
真题再现
【2018全国II卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1.短片内容：学校的发展；
2.放映时间、地点；
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
活动意义
这不仅会唤起我们学校所有学生的自豪感，也会成为每个人努力学习的动力
It will not only arouse the pride of all the students in our school, but also become a motivator for everyone to study hard.
It will not only arouse the pride of all the students in our school, but also serve as a motivator for everyone to study hard.
not only+助动词+主语+V原型+其他， but it/they also.+V（s/ed）
Not only will it arouse the pride of all the students in our school, but it also serves as a motivator for everyone to study hard.
部分倒装：前倒后不倒
因此，为了保护海洋，采取有效措施势在必行。
Therefore, aiming at protecting the ocean, it is imperative to take effective measures.
aiming to do
aimed at doing
for the purpose of
with the aim to do
【套路句】
P2-投稿内容【海洋重要性+倡议】
take effective measures
it is imperative/ necessary to do
thus
hence
therefore
P2-投稿内容【海洋重要性+倡议】
When it comes to the ocean, it plays a vital role in Earth’s environment. Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food, but also maintains the balance of nature. 【重要性】Therefore, aiming at protecting our oceans, it is imperative to take effective measures.【衔接句】
Next step！
首先，我们需要注意日常的行为举止。
first of all
first and foremost
to begin with
In the first place
pay close attention to
P2-投稿内容
【海洋重要性+倡议(个人/集体/政府)】
你是不是想写这个？
To begin with, we should pay close attention to our daily actions.
怎么做？
个人层面
首先，我们需要注意日常的行为举止。
P2-投稿内容
【海洋重要性+倡议(个人/集体/政府)】
To begin with, we are supposed to pay close attention to our daily actions.
补充：What we can do is…(主语从句)
To begin with, what we can do is to pay close attention to our daily actions.
人做主语：
1.sb should/ought to/are supposed to/had better/may as well do/are expected to/are encouraged to do sth
2.Not only should you do A, but also do B.
3.Apart from doing A, you should also do B.
it做形式主语：
It is necessary/essential/a must for sb to do sth.
It is highly advisable/ recommended that sb should do sth.
It is even better if you…
措施做主语：
1.Doing sth is the key to doing sth/is also a good choice/is a powerful weapon to fight against sth
2.Doing sth also proves to be an effective method/ also plays a critical role in doing sth.
TIPS — 提“建议”的 几种方式
For example, plastic products should be used less.
P2-投稿内容
【 海洋重要性+倡议(个人/集体/政府)】
？如何通过日常的行为之中保护海洋呢
减少塑料产品的使用
绿色海上出行
减少捕捞
例如，我们应当减少塑料产品的使用。
加原因（定语从句）
For example, plastic products, which is a disaster for the ocean, should be used less.
主动不如被动好！
此外，政府应当出台相关法律法规提升公众对于环境保护的意识。
P2-投稿内容
【海洋重要性+倡议(个人/集体/政府)】
introduce/enact
raise one’s awareness of
In addition, it is highly recommended that the government should introduce some relevant laws and regulations to raise public awareness of environmental protection.
what’s more
in addition=additionally
moreover
furthermore
委婉一点！
laws and regulations
P2-投稿内容
【海洋重要性+倡议(个人/集体/政府)】
When it comes to the ocean, it plays a vital role in Earth’s environment. Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food, but also maintains the balance of nature. 【重要性】Therefore, aiming at protecting our oceans, it is imperative to take effective measures.【倡议】To begin with, plastic products, which is a disaster for the ocean should be used less. In addition, it is highly recommended that the government should introduce some relevant laws and regulations to raise public awareness of environmental protection.
P3
呼吁号召
综上所述，现在是我们该努力的时候了。
As has been mentioned above, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to it.
P3-投稿结尾
【重申倡议】
It is high time that we should do /did….（该是我们的时候了）
As has been mentioned above
In summary
In conclusion
devote/apply/dedicate oneself to
越多人参与海洋环境保护，海洋环境就越好。
the more……，the more……
The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment will be.
be involved in
P3-投稿结尾
【重申倡议】
主将从现～
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009as World Oceans Day. It is a rather meaningful day, which stresses the significance of the ocean and remind people to protect it.
When it comes to the ocean, it plays a vital role in the earth’s environment. Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food, but also maintains the balance of nature. 【重要性】Therefore, aiming at protecting our oceans, it is imperative to take effective measures.【衔接句】To begin with, plastic products, which is a disaster for the ocean should be used less. In addition, , it is highly recommended that the government should introduce some relevant laws and regulations to raise public awareness of environmental protection.【倡议】
As has been mentioned above, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to it. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment will be.
范文
PART.03
词块拓展
生活垃圾
工业废料
汽车尾气
化石燃料
温室气体排放
过度依赖不可再生能源
污染来源
household waste
industrial waste
car fumes
fossil fuels
greenhouse gas emissions
rely too much on non-renewable energy resources
提高环保意识
垃圾分类
合理利用水资源
节约并珍惜资源
回收利用课本
禁止滥用塑料袋
污染处理措施（个人/ 集体）
raise one's environmental awreness
make proper use of water resources
save(conserve) and treasure resources
recycle textbooks
garbage/ refuse classification
ban the abuse of plastic bags
加强监管
实施惩罚
加大环保投入
节约并珍惜资源
促进可持续发展
污染处理措施（政府）
strengthen supervision
increase the inputs in environmental protection
save(conserve) and treasure resources
promote sustainable development
carry out punishment
密切注意
努力做某事
采取行动/措施做
阻止...做...
对... 负责任
号召 / 呼吁某人做
污染处理措施实用短语
pay close attention to
take action/ steps/ measures to do
prevent...from...
take responsibility for
make an effort to do
call on / appeal to sb to do
PART.04
句型仿写
仿写1（not only... but also）
【23-24陕西榆林高三模考】
你校将以全国生态日（National Ecology Day）为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.生态环境的重要性；
2.保护生态环境的倡议。
Not only should we back up garbage classification, but it also make proper use of water resources.
部分倒装
我们不仅要做好垃圾分类，还要合理利用水资源
仿写2（the more... the more）
【2023 年全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：
the more (现在时)...the more (将来时)...
The harder one works, the closer he will be to success.
一个人越努力，他就会离成功越近。
仿写3（what we can do is to...）
【2023 年全国甲卷】
你们学校正你们学校正举办主题“用英文讲中国故事”征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写 一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 人物简称及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
What we can do is to learn his spirit and put it into practice.
我们能做的就是学习他身上的精神，并付诸实践。
what we can do is to...
仿写4（it is high time that ...）
【2023 年全国甲卷】
当前，我市正全力创建全国文明城市。请你根据以下要点向学校英文报投稿，呼吁大家为“创文”活动贡献一份力量。要点如下：
1.环境保护；2.绿色出行；3.文明礼貌。
It is high time that we should make a contribution.
这是我们贡献一份力量的时候了。
it is high time that sb should do/ did
你校将以全国生态日（National Ecology Day）为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.生态环境的重要性；
2.保护生态环境的倡议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目已为你写好。
PART.05
Thanks

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