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English Continuation Writing
2021年浙江省高考真题
Do you have your pocket money？
Except your parents,where do you usually get your pocket money？
Your pocket money comes from……
living expenses from parents
part-time jobs
scholarship
red envelope
lucky money
真题再现
Part1
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P1 My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses(费用，开销）
01
父亲沉默寡言，这个人设要立住，后面最好别写父亲讲了一大对话
父亲似乎不理解我的校园生活
1.作者一家生活很艰苦
2.作者家庭传统，赚钱上交帮助家庭开支
3.父亲与后面自己打工挣钱但是不想上交形成鲜明对比
P2 I didn't really understand his world either：He was a livestock （牲畜）trucker, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished（实现，完成） by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
01
为什么要特地提到父亲是牲畜运输司机且立志要超过父亲？
觉得父亲平凡普通甚至是看不起
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback（指挥） on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
03
1.点明了我与父亲的不同，父亲是司机而我有自己的梦想。
2. 动作链的使用
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor(拖拉机） fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray(喷洒） with chemicals.
04
点燃：通过点火开始（某物）
启动：使（某物）开始工作
激励：使（某人）充满活力或热情
After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.（鸡耳草、羊蹄草、狐尾草和杂草之王——漂亮的紫蓟。） It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
05
n.数量，量；金额，钱数；
v.达到，总计（amount to）；
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings（收入） might not be mine to do with as I wished.
05
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
06
冲突出现
父亲：打工意味着长大成人，意味着责任
我: 打工就是能获得我能随意支配的钱
作者不愿意把钱交给父亲
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
1. 我的态度发生了变化：从一开始不愿意把钱交给爸爸到愿意交。
2.为啥？ 他们在担忧啥？
1.收到钱我的反映
2. 父母担忧啥？
A.开心，人生第一笔工资
B.难过，才这么点钱
得知真相后我的反应？
我会怎么做呢？
The pay day arrived at last.
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Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
许多硬币在我眼前的，这绝对是一笔巨大的财富!
1.0 Numerous coins were in front of me, which were absolutely a great fortune!
2.0 In front of me were numerous coins, which were absolutely a great fortune!
表示地点的介词短语放句首
非限定性定语从句
numerous
完全倒装
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
我几乎无法掩饰我的兴奋，我只是一遍又一遍地数着这些硬币!
1.0 I almost couldn't hide my excitement, just counting all these coins over and over again.
2.0 Hardly could I conceal my excitement, just counting all these coins over and over again.
could hardly conceal
conceal v.掩饰
hardly adv.几乎不
否定副词放句首
部分倒装
情绪描写
动作描写
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
然而，父亲的话一直萦绕在我的脑海里。
1.0 However, father’s words was lingering
over my head.
2.0 However, what father said was lingering over my head.
linger v.围绕，萦绕
主语从句
心理描写
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
我谢过农夫，小心翼翼地把钱放进口袋，带着既高兴又焦虑的心情回家了。
2.0 Delighted and anxious, I thanked the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, going back home.
1.0 I thanked the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, going back home with a mixture feeling of delight and anxiety.
形容词做状语
动作描写
情绪描写
Paragraph 1
我谢过农夫，小心翼翼地把钱放进口袋，带着既高兴又焦虑的心情回家了。
3.0 Having thanked the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, I went back home, delighted and anxious.
2.0 Delighted and anxious, I thanked the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, going back home.
读后续写中，动作1和动作2前后发生，且主语一致 ，动作1翻译为“已经……”，可以用：
having done
动作1
动作2
Paragraph 1
在银行排队等了一个小时后，这位女士开始变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman got impatient and left.
动作1
动作2
接连经历了那么多次失败，她也没有放弃成功的希望。
Having experienced so much failure one after another, she didn’t give up the hope of success.
动作1
动作2
2. 父母担忧啥？
没钱上学！！！！！！
当我穿过走廊时，我听到父亲说“我们必须尽快把儿子
的学费凑出来。”
1.0 While passing through the corridor, I heard my father saying, “We have to scrape together our son's school fee as soon as possible".
corridor
scrape together
他站在一边，深深叹了口气。
sigh
1.0 He stood aside, sighing deeply.
Paragraph 1
The pay day arrived at last.
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
1. 我的态度发生了变化：从一开始不愿意把钱交给爸爸到愿意交。
2.为啥？ 他们在担忧啥？
1.收到钱我的反映
2. 父母担忧啥？
A.开心，人生第一笔工资
B.难过，才这么点钱
得知真相后我的反应？
我会怎么做呢？
情绪描写又可以登场了！
愧疚！
be seized by guilt
be overwhelmed with guilt
a sense of guilt well up inside one’s heart
加上动作
低头
be immersed in guilt
一动不动地站着
Overwhelmed with guilt，I lowered my head and stood still.
Guilty and regretful，I ducked my head and stood still.
形容词作状语
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
经过几轮心理斗争，我踏进房间，把书包递给爸爸，然后说：“不要担心，爸爸，我刚刚从农场主那里拿到了工资”
构造动作链+语言描写
After rounds of inner struggle, I stepped into the room, delivered the bag to my dad and said, “Don’t worry, dad, I just got my payment form the farmer.”
after rounds of inner struggle
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
惊讶！感动！
听到这个，父亲瞪大了眼睛，盯着我，热泪盈眶。
widen one’s eyes
tears well up inside one’s eyes
tears mist one’s eyes
Hearing this, dad widened his eyes, staring at me with tears misting his eyes.
此时的心情？
Hearing this, dad widened his eyes, staring at me with tears misting his eyes，moved and relived.
形容词作状语补充情感
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
老父亲总要说点什么
“你是我的骄傲！”
“I am proud of you，my son!”
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
那是父亲第一次夸我，这会永远刻在我的脑海中。
it is the first time that...(现在完成时)
be engraved in
It was the first time that my father had praised me
, which would be engraved in my mind forever.
非限制性定语从句
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
主 旨
升 华
句型
Not until then did I realize that...
It was at that moment that I realized that...
直到那一刻我才意识到，我们应该主动为家庭贡献一份力量。
contribute to
It was at that moment that I realized (that) we ought to take the initiative to contribute to our family.
take the initiative to do
Paragraph 2
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
回填复习
The pay day arrived at last.__________ me ______numerous coins, which were absolutely a great fortune! _______________ I conceal my excitement, just counting all these coins over and over again.However, what father said was ______________ my head._______________ the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, I ____________ home, ____________________.While passing through the _______, I heard my father saying, “We have to figure out our son's school fee as soon as possible". He stood aside, sighing deeply.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.___________ with guilt，I lowered my head and stood still. _______________________, I stepped into the room, delivered the bag to my dad and said, “Don’t worry, dad, I just got my payment form the farmer.” Hearing this, dad _________ his eyes, ________ at me with _________________，moved and relived.“I am proud of you，my son!”__________________ that my father ________ me, which would _______________ my mind forever. __________________________we ought to ______________________ contribute to our family.
In front of
were
Hardly could
lingering over
Having thanked
delighted and anxious.
went back
corridor
Overwhelmed
After round of struggle
widened
staring
tears misting his eyes
be engraved in
Not until then did I realize that
take the initiative to
It was the first time
had praised
范文赏析
The pay day arrived at last.In front of me were numerous coins, which were absolutely a great fortune! Hardly could I conceal my excitement, just counting all these coins over and over again.However, what father said was lingering over my head.Having thanked the farmer and carefully put the money into my pocket, I went back home, delighted and anxious.While passing through the corridor, I heard my father saying, “We have to figure out our son's school fee as soon as possible". He stood aside, sighing deeply.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.Overwhelmed with guilt，I lowered my head and stood still. After rounds of inner struggle, I stepped into the room, delivered the bag to my dad and said, “Don’t worry, dad, I just got my payment form the farmer.” Hearing this, dad widened his eyes, staring at me with tears misting his eyes，moved and relived.“I am proud of you，my son!”It was the first time that my father had praised me, which would be engraved in my mind forever.Not until then did I realize that we ought to take the initiative to contribute to our family.
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