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高考二轮复习应用文体---道歉信
写作架构
道歉信是要向对方陈述自己的不恰当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意，或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托而给出原因的一种信件。通常写作结构为：
第一段：表明写作意图，对某事表示歉意；
第二段：说明具体原因；
第三段：再次表示歉意，请求谅解，并提出补救措施。
提分必背句式
1、首段常用语
① I am writing to express my sincere apology for my failing to ... as scheduled.
我写信的目的是表达我未能按计划 ......的真诚歉意 。
② I'm writing to apologize to you because I cannot make it to ... with you this weekend.
我写信向你致歉因为我无法在周末和你一起去 ...... 。
2、主体部分常用语
① The reason why I can't ... is that I have to make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
我无法 ...... 的原因是我必须要为周末将要举行的英语演讲比赛做好准备。
② I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
我刚刚发现那天下午我有个重要会议要参加。我希望这个改变不会给你带来太多麻烦。
3、结尾常用语
① Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.
对于我的缺席给您带来的不便再表歉意。
② I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Wish you a safe and happy journey!
我真诚地希望您能接受我的歉意并理解我的处境。祝您一路顺风、旅途愉快！
练习一
（华附、省实、广雅、深中2024届高三四校联考）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往，请你回信表达歉意，内容包括：1.谢绝的理由；2.提议暑假去拜访他。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般将来时。
2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山交代写作目的——为不能赴约表达歉意；第二段说明原因（要点1）；第三段再次道歉，同时另约时间（要点2）。
下水作文原创版
Dear Jerry,
Thank you for your invitation to London during the winter vacation. However, I am terriblysorry that I will fail to make it.
As a high school senior with only five months left before the big exam, I must go all out to prepare for it, which means I will be admitted into my ideal university and have the potential to find a better job in the future. After all, the current employment is really a big challenge for the youth, so is it for those in your country, I believe.
My apologies again and I wonder if we could postpone our schedule until this summer vacation Looking forward to your reply. (112 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的杰瑞：
非常感谢你邀请我寒假期间去伦敦游玩，但是我非常抱歉地告知你，我无法成行。
我现在就读高三，在离6月份的大考只有5个月的时间里，我必须全力以赴复习迎考，以考取自己的理想大学，因为好的大学意味着我将来有实力能找到一份更好的工作。毕竟，现在的就业形势对于高三学子来说具有极大挑战性，我相信你们国家的高三学生应该也是如此。
再次向你道歉。不知我们是否可以把原定计划推迟到今年暑假，届时我刚好毕业？期待你的回复。
李华
下水作文原创版解析
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为道歉信；
（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为道歉+解释原因+另约时间，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）be terribly sorry非常抱歉；
（2）will fail to do sth将无法做某事；
（3）the big exam重要的考试；
（4）go all out to do sth全力以赴做某事；
（5）have the potential to do sth有可能做某事；
（6）is really a big challenge for sb对某事而言是件难事；
（7）My apologies again再次道歉。
练习二
假定你是李华, 你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”, 但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件, 内容包括：
1.表示歉意：
2.解释原因：
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Caroline,
I’m writing to tell you I cannot attend the China Space Exhibition to be held next Saturday with you.I am so sorry about my absence of the visit.Please excuse me for the inconvenience caused by me.
I was really excited when I got two tickets for the wonderful exhibition.I’ve already searched much information about this show to equip myself as a guide to you.Unfortunately, yesterday my English teacher invited me to take part in a Speech contest to be held next Saturday.
To make your trip there more fulfilled,I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry. I hope you enjoy the trip yourself.
Apologize for my absence again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华, 你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”, 但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件。
1.词汇积累
不便: inconvenience
参加: take part in / participate in
不幸：unfortunately / unluckily
充实的：fulfilled / contented
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
To make your trip there more fulfilled, I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry.
拓展句：
I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry so that your trip can more fulfilled.
【点睛】
高分句型1
I’m writing to tell you (that)I cannot attend the China Space Exhibition to be held next Saturday with you.
运用了省略that的宾语从句;
运用了不定式的被动语态
高分句型2
I was really excited when I got two tickets for the wonderful exhibition.
运用了when引导时间状语从句

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