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每到毕业季，学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情，如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求，以“I Love You, My English Teacher”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1．What's your English teacher like
2．Why do you like him or her
要求：
1．短文须包括提示的两个问题，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years.
【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。本文适合四段式写法：第一段简要点明你喜欢的老师是谁；第二段介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况；第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因；第四段抒发你对老师的感谢之情。文章时态主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师的相关情况时，应使用第三人称。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一，对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲，易失分的地方主要有：
1．描述人物外貌时，be与has混淆不清；
2．不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句，句式简单枯燥，缺乏趣味性。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1．He is strict with every student.He cares about every student.(改为并列句，使句意保持不变)
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2．The students from poor families have trouble.He is always ready to help them.(用“when引导的从句”和“in trouble”升格，改为复合句)
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3．With the help of him，many students like English.(用“fall in love with”和“because of”升格，使句意更立体)
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【佳作欣赏】
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.
Mr.Huang is of medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair of glasses. He is very strict with us but cares about every student. When the students from poor families are in trouble, he is always ready to help them.
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively. Many students fall in love with English because of him.
I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you forever.
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2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
According to the law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestions for parents.
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【答案】参考范文
According to the Law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestions for parents.
First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us. For example, parents can teach us to do housework and play with us in spare time. Second, parents should help us to get into good habits, such as eating healthy food, doing sports and so on. What’s more, parents had better communicate with us more often. That’s because some misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication. Finally, I hope parents can trust us and protect our privacy. We children need more personal space.
In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点逐个进行阐述，对父母提出建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get into good habits养成良好的习惯
②had better do sth最好做某事
③communicate with sb和某人交流
④lack of……的缺乏
[高分句型]
①First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②That’s because some misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication.（because引导的表语从句）
③In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
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为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；
2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；
3. 你的感想。
写作要求：
1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
My Beautiful Hometown
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【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.
There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.
But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.
I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown为题，结合图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍家乡的过去；第三段介绍家乡的现在；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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予人玫瑰, 手有余香。你是否参加过志愿者活动, 帮助社会上需要帮助的人呢 或者曾经在某方面帮助过同学, 尽管是一件小事却给你留下了深刻的记忆 请你在志愿者活动和帮助同学的经历中选择其一描述过程, 并说说自己的感想。
Do volunteer work Help classmates
work as. . . hurt one’s leg while having a basketball game
have a strong feeling of satisfaction take him/her to the hospital
learn a lot from the experience feel happy to help others
. . . . . .
　　要求: (1)可适当增加细节和连接词, 使文章通顺连贯; (2)开头部分已给出, 不计入总词数; (3)词数: 100左右。
　　As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. _______
【写作范文】
Possible version 1:
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. In my spare time, I often work as a volunteer. I still remember that on a cold winter afternoon, I went to the Children’s Hospital to visit sick children. My classmates and I prepared some gifts for them. When the children got the gifts, they were so excited that they couldn’t help laughing happily. To make them happy, we also sang songs for them and played games with them. At that time, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think it’s quite meaningful to visit sick children because it not only brings them joy but also helps me learn a lot from the experience.
Possible version 2:
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. I am always ready to help others. Two months ago, one of my classmates Jack hurt his leg while having a basketball game. I found that he fell down on the floor and seemed painful. So I took him to the hospital nearby. Luckily, the doctor said it was not very serious but Jack couldn’t walk for several days. Therefore, I decided to take care of him at school. For example, I brought meals to him every day. And I felt quite happy to help him. In addition, our friendship was deepened in this way.
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你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗？请以“Colorful Weekdays”为题，并根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们学校的课外活动。内容包括：你们学校都有哪些课外活动、你喜欢哪些活动及你喜欢它们的原因。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Colorful Weekdays
It is my honor to show you our colorful weekdays. Today I mainly tell you something about the after class activities in our school.
Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every afternoon. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival groups the most. Because the activities are wonderful.
So I really hope that we can have less homework so that we can have more time to take the after class activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in our school!
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假定你是李华，请用英语给你的朋友 John 写一封邮件，分享你的兴趣爱好，内容包括：
1.介绍爱好（打篮球）；
2.喜欢的原因（增强体质，结交朋友）；
3.打篮球经历（从小训练，加入校队）；
4.个人的感受（学会合作，……）。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
How’s everything going It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
I like sports, especially basketball. Here are some reasons. On one hand, playing basketball is a good way to make me stronger. On the other hand, I can make friends with people who share the same interest. I have been a fan of basketball since I was five years old. I almost practice playing basketball every day and I’m a member of our school team. By playing basketball, I learn how to work with others and try my best to realize my goals.
So, how about your hobby Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容提示，写一封邮件，分享自己的兴趣，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称和一般现在时为主，介绍自己的兴趣时要包含所有提示要点，并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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亲爱的同学，你的生活中有烦恼吗？你有学习方面的压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼及有效缓解压力呢？请根据下列图表信息，以“How to Deal with My Stress”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：你有何烦恼/压力、你是怎样缓解它们的、呼吁同学们正确面对烦恼及压力。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Deal with My Stress
Problems_and_stress_are_normal_in_our_life. As a teenager, I have some problems and stress with my schoolwork. I have too much homework every day and I often feel very tired. Then, how can I deal with so much stress The following are some of my solutions.
To start with, I take more exercise. Sports can help me have a healthier body and study better. What's more, I talk with my teachers, parents and friends when I face problems. They may give me some useful advice. Last but not least, I listen to music and read books. They're good ways to relax myself.
All in all, we should not be afraid of the stress around us. Instead, we should be optimistic and brave to face our stress and learn to relax ourselves.
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为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
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【答案】例文：
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
We are supposed to show respect for our parents because they are the most trusted elders and help us solve problems when we are in trouble.
Here are some things we can do to show our respect. First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.
Small actions can make a great difference. Let’s show respect for our parents from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；
第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；
第三步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②such as例如
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.（as引导原因状语从句）
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假如你叫李明，是光明中学九年级三班的学生。你们班计划本周六去森林公园郊游。作为班长，你需要告知班上同学此次郊游的行程。请根据以下图示用英语写一则通知。
提示：1.文章应包括图示中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥；
2．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, boys and girls.Here's some information about our trip to the Forest Park on Saturday.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1．写作时以第一人称为主；
2．介绍的具体内容用一般将来时；
3．图表中的全部信息要一一列举，不要遗漏；
4．词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Hello, boys and girls.Here's some information about our trip to the Forest Park on Saturday.We'll go there by bus.It will be a long trip of four hours.So we have to start early.The bus will wait for you at the gate of Natural Museum
At 8:00 tomorrow morning.We'll take sandwiches for lunch with us and we will eat together in a park.After that we will climb the mountain.It will be a challenge for you.You'd better have a good rest this evening.On the top of the mountain, we will have time to fly kites there.The weather tomorrow will be sunny.I hope all of us will have a great time.If you have any questions, please call me at 1837500348.OK.See you tomorrow.
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现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多。为此，国家把每年的6月6日定为爱眼日。请根据下面的图表信息，以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：多吃有益于眼睛健康的食物、多做眼保健操、养成良好的用眼习惯。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Protect Our Eyes 1. eat foods that are good for eyes
2. do more eye exercises
3. develop a good eye using habit
How to Protect Our Eyes
Nowadays, more and more students are getting nearsighted, so National Sight Day is celebrated on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows of the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions to protect our eyes.
First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it's helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye using habit. Don't read books or use a cell phone in bed.
In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.

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