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和母亲一起参加生日会讲义
I wanted to go to a party. Especially it was a beach party. It had
been almost the only thing my friends had been talking about for the
last couple of weeks. But My mom had said no. The more
desperately I pleaded her case, the more forcefully my mother said no.
“I don't care who's going," said coldly my mother, "you are not
going." I was heartbroken. This was my best friend's party.
我想去参加一个聚会。尤其是海滩派对。在过去的几周里，这几
乎是我朋友们谈论的唯一一件事。但我妈妈说不。我越是拼命地为她
辩护，我妈妈就越是坚决地说不。“我不在乎谁去，”我妈妈冷冷地说，
“你不去。”我很伤心。这是我最好朋友的聚会。
Sunday dinner came around and my grandmother joined the
family for the meal. Gran noticed my depression but didn't say a
word. It was my turn to wash up and Gran said, “Let me help
you."“What's up ” asked Gran as I dumped the dishes into the
foaming water. Gran wiped a plate with a tea towel. “Mom won't let
me go to my best friend's party." I said sadly. “Has mom explained
why she doesn't want you to go " asked Gran. “No." I replied.
“Then for a moment, put yourself in her position.” said Gran.
“If you were mom, what would your objections be ”
星期天的晚餐来了，我的祖母和家人一起吃饭。奶奶注意到了我
的沮丧，但一句话也没说。轮到我洗碗了，奶奶说：“我来帮你。”
“怎么了？”我把盘子倒进泡沫水中时，奶奶问道。奶奶用茶巾擦了擦
盘子。“妈妈不让我去参加我最好朋友的聚会。”我悲伤地说。
“妈妈解释过她不想你去的原因了吗？”奶奶问道。“没有。”我回答。
“那你就设身处地想一想吧。”奶奶说。“如果你是妈妈，你会有什么反
对意见？”
I hadn't stopped to think about my mom's side.
“Well," I answered, "it's a beach party. Maybe she doesn't trust us or
thinks we'll get into trouble.”
我没有停下来思考我妈妈的一面。“好吧，”我回答，“这是一个海
滩派对。也许她不信任我们，或者认为我们会遇到麻烦。”
“Are there going to be any adults there ” asked Gran.
“No," I said, “who wants their parents hanging around when you're
trying to have fun ”“Might it just be," said Gran, “your mother
doesn't want anything unfortunate to happen to you." "Nothing will
happen." I objected. “Maybe you're right," said Gran, "but maybe
mom's worried in case it could."
“那里会有成年人吗？”奶奶问道。“不，”我说，“谁想让他们的父
母在你玩得开心的时候陪在你身边？”“也许只是，”奶奶说，
“你妈妈不希望你发生任何不幸的事情。”“什么都不会发生。”我反对。
“也许你是对的，”奶奶说道，“但也许妈妈很担心，以防发生这种事。”
Gran looked at me gently, seeming to expect my agreement. For
a minute or so, I kept silent, pondering for a while about my
eagerness for the party. “Maybe, you are right, however, is there no
hope " I inquired. “Not necessarily." answered Gran, lost in thought.
奶奶温柔地看着我，似乎期待着我的同意。有一分钟左右的时间，
我保持沉默，思考了一会儿我对派对的渴望。“也许，你是对的，但是，
没有希望吗？”我问道。“不一定。”奶奶沉思着回答。
注意:
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Paragraph 1: “Then maybe think of a compromise." suggested Gran.
Paragraph 2: The long-awaited beach party finally came.
文本分析：
故事大意--我想去参加一个最好朋友举办的海滩派对，可妈妈一直不同
意。晚餐时，奶奶注意到了我的沮丧，提出帮我洗盘子并让我站在妈
妈的角度思考一下。经过一番交流，我问奶奶还有希望去吗，奶奶说
还是有可能的。
续写情节发展：
第一段--妈妈提出让她跟我一起去，她会答应的。我不得不妥协。奶奶
微笑让妈妈保证不会打扰我们。妈妈终于向我屈服了。我的情绪逐渐
好转，给了奶奶一个大大的拥抱。令人期待这场精彩的聚会终于来了。
第二段--我和朋友们一起去玩。我们高兴又兴奋，唱歌、跳舞、聊天。
妈妈拿着一本书，靠在不远处的树上。聚会结束后，天就黑了。我和
朋友们道别，然后转向妈妈。幸福的泪水模糊了我的双眼，我紧紧地
拉着她的手，回家去了。
官方范文，
"Then maybe think of a compromise." suggested Gran. But I sobbed
uncontrollably and couldn't say a word."Well, if you could let me go
with you, I'd say yes." My mom added. I wasn't fond of my mom
hanging around like a bodyguard, but to get to the party I had to a
compromise. “I suppose your mother won't disturb your party, will
she ”Gran looked at mom with a kind smile. “Well, I promise I
won't.” Mom finally gave in to me. My mood gradually improved. I
ran to my grandmother and gave her a big hug. I was looking
forward to the wonderful party desperately.
The long-awaited beach party finally came. I made it at the beach
with my mom. At a tree near the destination, mom stopped suddenly,
taking out a red mat to sit on and signaling to me to join my friends.
I rushed for the crowd. Joyful and excited, we sang, danced and
chatted. Occasionally, the red mat in the near distance caught my
eye.Mom held a book, leaning against the tree. The moment my eye
fell on her, a wave of appreciation surged through me. It became dark
when the party was over. I said goodbye to my friends and turned to
mom. Under the tree sat mom waiting patiently. Tears of happiness
blurring my eyes, I took her hand tightly, heading home.
参考范文一，
“Then maybe think of a compromise." suggested Gran. I lowered
my head and began to think how to fix it. After a long thought, I
made up my mind and went to find mom. “Mum, I want to…”
before I could finish it, mom snapped, “no, you can't go!” I softened
my voice and put on a smiling face, “this is my best friend's birthday
party and I really want to go. Can you come with me I know you're
worried about me.” Mom hesitated and then nodded. I jumped with
joy and hugged mom.
The long-awaited beach party finally came. Getting the present I had
chosen and mom, I couldn't wait to have a great time. Seeing me, my
friend's eyes lit up and greeted me warmly. I gave her the present
and wished her “happy birthday!” Getting inside, many friends were
already there, accompanied by their own moms. It turned out that all
moms were worried about their kids. Soon, the party began, we ate
and played, enjoying ourselves. Mom talked with other mom, sharing
their experiences in raising children. I was grateful that the
compromise set both of us free and happy.
参考范文二，
“Then maybe think of a compromise." suggested Gran. "What kind of
compromise " I asked Gran, eager for a solution. Gran smiled
knowingly. "Perhaps you could propose a plan to your mother that
assures her of your safety while still allowing you to enjoy the party,"
she suggested. The idea sparked a glimmer of hope within me. I
thought for a while and then approached my mom once again. This
time, instead of pleading and arguing, I calmly invited her to come
with me, assuring her that I would behave myself with her company.
To my surprise, my mother listened attentively and agreed to my
proposal. It was at that moment that I felt a sense of gratitude
towards Gran for her wise counsel and a newfound appreciation for
the power of compromise.
The long-awaited beach party finally came. As we arrived, the vibrant
music and the scent of salty sea air filled the evening. My friends
greeted us eagerly, surprised to see my mom in tow. With my mom
by my side, I felt a sense of security and responsibility that I hadn't
anticipated. Throughout the party, I made sure to introduce my friends
to my mom and kept her informed of my whereabouts. We joined in
the activities together, playing beach volleyball and building
sandcastles. It was heartwarming to see my mom laughing and
enjoying herself in this party. As the evening wore on, we sat
together by a bonfire, roasting marshmallows and sharing stories. It
was a birthday party like no other, filled with laughter, friendship, and
the reassuring presence of my mom.
“那也许考虑一下妥协。”奶奶建议道。“什么样的妥协呢？”我问道，渴望找到解
决方案。奶奶神秘地微笑着。“也许你可以向你妈妈提出一个计划，向她保证你的
安全，同时还能让你享受派对。”她建议道。这个想法在我心中点燃了一丝希望。
我思考了一会儿，然后再次接近我的妈妈。这一次，我不再哀求和争论，而是平
静地邀请她和我一起来，向她保证我会在她陪伴下循规蹈矩。令我惊讶的是，我
的母亲认真地听着，并同意了我的提议。正是在那一刻，我感到对格兰的感激之
情，感受到了妥协的力量的新认识。
期待已久的海滩派对终于来了。当我们到达时，活力四射的音乐和咸咸的海风充
满了夜晚。我的朋友们急切地迎接我们，惊讶地看到我带着妈妈来了。有了妈妈
在身边，我感到了一种安全感和责任感，这是我没有预料到的。在整个派对期
间，我确保向妈妈介绍我的朋友们，并告诉她我的行踪。我们一起参加活动，打
沙滩排球，筑沙堡。看到我的妈妈在派对中笑得开心，我感到很温暖。夜晚渐渐
深了，我们一起坐在篝火旁，烤着棉花糖，分享着故事。这是一个与众不同的生
日派对，充满了笑声、友谊，还有妈妈令人放心的存在。

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