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专题04 10类应用文热门话题(二)
06运动健康
【教考衔接】
体育运动话题
compete for 为……而竞争
compete against 与……竞争
a close game 势均力敌的比赛
indoor/outdoor sports 室内/室外运动
break the record 打破纪录
set a new world record 创造新的世界纪录
win a gold/silver/copper medal 赢得金/银/铜牌
folk activity 民间活动
mass sports 群众运动
a close game 势均力敌的比赛
健康话题
build up one’s strength/body 强身健体
take an active part in physical exercise 积极参加体育锻炼
take regular exercise 经常锻炼
have enough sleep 拥有充足的睡眠
physical and mental health 身心健康
pay more attention to your diet 更加注意你的饮食
develop/form healthy eating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯
be closely related to health 与健康息息相关
do harm/damage to physical health 有害身体健康
keep a balanced/healthy diet 保持均衡/健康饮食
keep the balance of nutrition 保持营养平衡
【技巧指导】
并列结构：不仅...而且...not only ...but also...
Taking exercise regularly can not only build up our body but also help us relieve stress.有规律的运动不仅可以强身健体，而且可以帮助我们释放压力。
话题引入：When it comes to...当谈及...
When it comes to health, what most people think of first is healthy body.提到健康，大部分的人首先想到的是身体健康。
观点表述：it 做形式主语；It’s necessary for us to...
It’s necessary for us to keep healthy both physically and mentally.对于我们来说保持身心健康是必要的。
it 做形式主语；It’s high time that...
It’s high time that we stayed away from junk food and led a healthy life.
现在是我们远离垃圾食品、过上健康生活的时候了。
我认为:In my opinion，...
In my opinion, doing sports is good for my health, with the advantage of strengthening my body and keeping the illness away.
我认为运动对我的健康有好处，不仅可以让我强身健体，还能让我远离疾病。
我认为:As far as I’m concerned,...
As far as I’m concerned, we should develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.
我认为，为了增强体质，我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
结论：From the above，we can draw a conclusion that...
From the above，we can draw a conclusion that a healthy body helps to improve the quality of our life.
根据以上情况我们可以得出结论：健康的身体有助于提高我们的生活质量。
【范文点评】
【2020年新高考全国Ⅰ &Ⅱ卷（山东卷）】
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【素材运用】
（湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2024届高三一模）
假定你是李华，你校英文校报“体育”版正在征集稿件，主题为“我喜爱的一项体育运动”，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.介绍该体育运动；2.喜欢它的理由；3.呼吁更多同学参与该运动。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
My Favorite Sport
Preferences for sports differ from person to person, and my favorite sport is Tai Chi.
Having been listed as the world intangible cultural heritage, Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese boxing with a combination of maintaining the temperament, strengthening the body and fighting against others. I like Tai Chi not only because it benefits my health a lot, but also because it enables me to keep a peaceful mind from inside, enjoy the tranquility of nature, and relieve myself from the pressure of my study.
Let's practice Tai Chi together and enjoy the inexhaustible fun and benefits that Tai Chi brings us!
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为投稿；
（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动并说明理由，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）differ from person to person因人而异；
（2）with a combination of ...集...于一体；
（3）relieve oneself from使某人自己缓解某事；
inexhaustible不知疲倦的，无穷的。
07学校生活
【教考衔接】
◆有关校园方面的词语
a sports ground运动场
campus校园
stadium体育场
canteen餐厅
be addicted to .对.....上瘾
dining room餐厅
deserve应得
cafeteria自助餐厅
get along进展
accommodations住宿
be on good terms关系好
dormitory学生宿舍
sociable好交际的
teaching building 教学楼
punctual准时的
lecture theatre阶梯教室
◆活动类词语
auditorium礼堂
sign up for报名参加
laboratory/lab实验室
quit drop a course 放弃- -门课程
students' union 学生会
pick up学会
society社团,协会
take notes记笔记
◆学习类词语
stay awake保持清醒
assignment工作，任务
cancel/call off 取消
semester/ term学期
postpone/put off推迟
mid-term exam期中考试
concentrate on集中注意力于.....
final exam期末考试
pay attention to注意
course课程，讲座
make progress 取得进步
curriculum全部课程
fail in the exam考试不及格
required compulsory courses必修课程
stay up late熬夜
optional/ elective/ selective courses选修课程
make up the exam补考
science courses理科课程
cheat in the exam考试作弊
arts courses文科课程
participate in/take part in参加
reference books参考书
make sense of理解,明白
◆描述类词语
review/go over复习
lack confidence in ....缺乏信心
take a break休息一下
be strict with/in 对....要求严格
come up with想出，提出
restless坐立不安的
extra-curricular activities课外活动
like a cat on hot bricks 像热锅上的蚂蚁
surf the Internet 网上冲浪
have butterflies in one's stomach心慌,紧张
further study进修
get confused/ puzzled迷惑不解
a letter of recommendation推荐信
think highly of...高度评价
a high score/ 'mark高分
【技巧指导】
◆活动的意义
1. Extra curricular activities played a very significant role in my growth.
课外活动对我的成长起到了非常重要的作用。
2. Out-of class activities help cultivate students' social, communication and leadership skill.
课外活动有助于培养学生们社交、交流和领导技能。
3. Being part of the program as a team in the past year has made a big difference to my high school life.
过去一年内我是这项工程的一个成员,这对我的高中生活产生了巨大的影响。
4. We should not confine ourselves to the classroom. We ought to go out of the classroom, see the outside world and become a well-rounded student.
我们不应把自己束缚在教室内，我们应当走出教室，见-见外面的世界，成为一个全面发展的学生。
◆活动的内容
1. When they take part in an international camp, Chinese students are given the chance to go abroad, meet new people and get involved in all sorts of activities.
当中国学生参加国际夏令营，他们会得到出国的机会，见- 见新面孔，参与各种各样的活动。
2. The volunteer program provides us with a platform to practice and learn.
志愿者工程给我们提供了实践和学台。
3.Li Hua, aged 18, started the campaign to decorate the school with vivid paintings.
李华,18岁,发起了一项运动，用生动的绘画装饰学校。
◆学习生活中的困难和成绩
1. Every student, no matter how talented or hard-working, will come across difficulties in his or her study.每位学生，不管他或她有多么聪明,多么努力,在学习中总会遇到困难。
2. Every time before an examination, I am so upset. I'm afraid I may fail in the exam and can't live up to my teacher's expectations.每次考试前,我非常烦躁，害怕考不及格,辜负了老师的期望。
3.It has been many years since I started learning English, but only recently do I make some progress. 我学英语有许多年了,但是,最近我才取得了一些进步。
◆学习和实践的重要性
1. It's very important for us to acquire excellent English language skills.
获得精通英语的能力对我们来说非常重要。
2. Only by making good preparations may you succeed.
只有做好充分的准备你才可能会成功。
3. Slowly I built up my confidence to express myself during our group discussion.
慢慢地,我树立了自信,能够在我们的小组讨论中表达自己了。
【范文点评】
【2023 新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English
training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
【素材运用】
【2023 浙江1月卷】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around US
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
08文学艺术
【教考衔接】
1．be honored as　 被誉为
2．be popular in 流行于
3．be set in 以……为背景
4．inspire sb.to do sth. 激励某人做某事
5．appreciate poetry 欣赏诗歌
6．on exhibition 在展示中
7．win the Nobel Prize in Literature 获得诺贝尔文学奖
8．traditional culture 传统文化
9．have an influence on 对……有影响
10．a variety of 各种各样的
11．benefit a great deal from ... 从……中获益匪浅
12．entertain oneself 自娱自乐
13．provide sb.with great fun 为某人提供极大的乐趣
14．stand for 代表
15．have great calm in mind 思维冷静
16．devote all one’s lifeto 奉献一生于……
17．translate...into 翻译成
18．leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
19．express feelings 表达情感
20．a book review 书评
【技巧指导】
1．Peking Opera is popular in China with a history of more than 200 years, dating back to Qing Dynasty.
京剧在中国很流行，有200多年的历史，始于清朝。
2．More and more people in China show a great interest in literature, which can enrich their life.
越来越多的中国人对文学有浓厚的兴趣，它可以丰富他们的生活。
3．Mo Yan has made a great contribution to the development of China’s literature.
莫言对中国文学的发展做出了巨大的贡献。
4．Traditional art should be passed down, such as Peking Opera and paper cutting and so on.
传统艺术像京剧、剪纸等应该传承下去。
5．Mo Yan is the first Chinese to win the Nobel Prize in Literature, who has left a deep impression on the people all over the world.
莫言是第一个获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国人，给全世界的人们留下了深刻的印象。
6．I hold the view that if we students want to know as many great works of literature as we can, we had better read the original work.
我认为我们学生如果想尽可能多地了解伟大的文学作品，最好还是读原著。
【范文点评】
【2023 安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷】
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容
包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【素材运用】
（2022~2023学年度苏锡常镇四市高三教学情况调研（二））
假如你是李华，你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”的展览，请为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：1.展览概况；2.观展感受；3.意见建议。
注意：
写作词数应为80左右；
2.为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。
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【答案】
This exhibition is absolutely fantastic! The museum showcases the works of some of the
most renowned painters at home and abroad, such as Picasso, Da Vinci, Qi Baishi and Xu Beihong, to name just a few. Everywhere you look, there is nothing but surprise. Each work is a feast for the eyes. Of course, if the museum can provide visitors with interpretation services while displaying beautiful paintings, it will give visitors a deeper insight into the greatness of the works!
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为发表评论；
（2）因发表评论格式要求，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分是就参观博物馆发表评论，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）showcase展览；
（2）renowned著名的；
（3）to name just a few仅列举几例；
（4）Everywhere you look, there is nothing but surprise.仿写地震单元Everywhere survivors look, there is nothing but ruins.
（5）a feast for the eyes视觉盛宴；
（6）give sb a deeper insight into使某人深刻理解某事。
09人际关系
【教考衔接】
1．be concerned for/about 对……担心/关心
2．be familiar to 为……所熟悉
3．be on good terms 与某人关系好
4．break up 分手；解散；结束
5．bring up 养育；抚养；教育
6．depend/rely on 依靠，相信，信赖
7．fit in with 与……相适应/合得来
8．get on/along well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
9．go wrong 出毛病；失败
10．have...in common 有共同之处
11．get in touch with 与……取得联系
12．make up 和解
【技巧指导】
1．“only＋状语”位于句首引起的部分倒装
Only in these ways can we win others’ respect and friendship.
只有通过这些方式我们才能赢得别人的尊重与友谊。
Only in this way can we make a great contribution to our family and our society.
只有通过这种方式，我们才能为我们的家庭和社会做出大的贡献。
2．祈使句＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句
Get along well with others，and you will enjoy yourself every day and succeed when you do anything.
与他人好好相处，你就会每天都过得很快乐，做什么事情都会成功。
Do as you’re told，otherwise/or you’ll be in trouble.
叫你怎么做就怎么做，否则你会有麻烦的。
3．过去分词(短语)作状语
Accompanied by his friends，he went to the teacher’s office to admit what he had done was wrong.
在朋友的陪伴下，他去老师的办公室去承认他所做的是错误的。
Employed/Buried in reviewing his lessons these days，he didn’t get in touch with you.
他这些天忙于复习功课，没与你取得联系。
4．现在分词(短语)作状语
In your last letter you talked about your recent worry about your studies，mentioning that your deskmate often interrupted you by asking questions.
你在上一封来信里谈到了你最近对学习的担忧，同时提到了你的同桌经常因为问你问题而打扰你的学习。
When the clerk saw a kind face wrinkled in an apologetic smile，she stood rooted to the ground，wondering whether to stay or leave.
那名店员看到一张友善的脸，脸上因歉意的微笑而布满了皱纹，这时她愣在了那里，琢磨着是走还是留
句式：
We are deeply grateful to you for your support. 我们深深感谢你的支持。
It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow. 我们明天必须离开，真是遗憾。
I feel it a great pleasure to work with so many volunteers from Beijing.和这么多来自北京的志愿者们一起工作，我感到非常高兴。
In common with the author, I also hold the view that keeping optimistic can help us achieve success.和作者一样，我也认为保持乐观可以有助于我们取得成功。
【范文点评】
(2020年7月，浙江卷）
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表
达祝愿。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now ）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【素材运用】
(2020年，全国卷I）
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.人物简介：
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;
第三步：连词成句
1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.
2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So
第五步：润色修改
10旅游交通
【教考衔接】
avoid traffic jams　避免交通堵塞
traffic signal/light 交通信号灯
obey/observe traffic regulations 遵守交通规则
be aimed at 针对，旨在
be/get stuck in 被困在
break the speed limit 超速
hold up 耽搁，推迟
speed up 加速
slow down 放慢速度
set off 出发
put one’s life at risk 使生命置于危险之中
run a red light 闯红灯
ensure people’s safety on the road 确保行人的安全
improve traffic safety awareness 提高交通安全意识
take strict measures 采取严厉的措施
get close to nature 接近大自然
make a journey 旅行
have a good time 玩得愉快
a dream trip 梦想之旅
traffic congestion 交通拥挤
places of interest 名胜
be known as 作为……而出名
be famous/well known for ... 以……著名
be the home of/be home to ... 是……之乡/乐土
25．enjoy the reputation of ... 有……美誉
【技巧指导】
With the development of economy, there are more and more private cars and traffic jams are getting heavier and heavier. As a result, traffic accidents occur frequently. Bear in mind that the traffic regulations are of great importance to road safety.随着经济的发展，私人小汽车越来越多，交通拥堵越来越严重。因此，交通事故频频发生。记住，交通规则对道路安全至关重要。
The traffic issue is a hard nut to track.It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives.交通问题是一个棘手的问题。它不仅影响着我们的日常生活，而且还可能威胁到人们的生命。
As is known to us all, Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.正如大家 所知道的，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。
4．It is aimed at stopping common traffic violations such as speeding, running a red light, drunk driving, driving without license and so on.其目的是阻止常见的交通违规，例如超速、闯红灯、酒后驾车以及无证驾驶等。5．Located on Yangtze River, this beautiful old city has a popular tourist attraction now.坐落在长江之畔，这座美丽的古城现在成了受欢迎的旅游胜地。
【范文点评】
(2019年，北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 交通出行；
2. 必备衣物。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.
Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】
红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【素材运用】
（2021·天津）
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is more
2.表转折关系：however
3.表示列举：such as, like

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