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【2024级成都二诊 书面表达】
你校英文报正举行以“The Power of Smile”为题的征文比赛，请结
合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。
注意：
1.词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
The Power of Smile
审题
体裁：短文(夹叙夹议文)——微笑的力量
时态：一般过去时/一般现在时
人称：第一人称/第三人称
谋篇布局
结构：1. 事例→观点；2. 观点→事例；3. 观点→事例→观点
写作难点：
1.smile一词是指微笑这个表情动作还是引申含义？(eg.面对困难、挫折
等不轻易放弃，乐观勇敢面对 )
2.power是一种什么力量？(不能泛泛而谈，要具体化)
3.写亲身经历时叙述部分容易写得平淡乏味怎么突破？(添加关于心理
活动、表情动作等描述)
4.写感悟时要合情合理、恰如其分，不要言过其实(微笑不是万能的)。
重难点突破
1.写亲身经历时可以选哪些场景？如何切入？
A.社交场合——结识新朋友、参加社交活动等(微笑代表友好、开放，
能缓解尴尬、紧张情绪等，给对方留下好的印象)；
B.人际关系——与家人或朋友产生矛盾冲突、心情低落时(微笑代表宽
容、理解等，起到减少矛盾冲突，缓解人际冲突等作用)
C.身处逆境、遭遇挫折时——比赛或考试失利等；(微笑代表了安慰、
鼓励，告诉我们要坚强勇敢面对困难、挫折，对未来充满希望等)
D.成长或成功时——通过努力成绩取得进步或认真准备比赛取得成功
(微笑代表了认可、喜悦、自豪、充满信心等)
E.自己失意却帮助他人被感谢时等(微笑代表了喜悦、感激之情，能帮
助我们改善心情、振作精神)
A possible version
There are times when a small action can make a big difference.
Smile is just one of them and my recent experience has deepened my
understanding of its magical power.
The Power of Smile
There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do
wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the
soul.
Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance,
I was on the verge of breaking down. Noticing my frustration, Shelly,
my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in
such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran
away weeping. Regrettably, I was too ashamed to apologize and I
couldn't feel worse, which threw me into a world of darkness. The
moment I saw her approaching the next day, I lowered my head
immediately, trying to shun her/avoid her deliberately. However, she
stopped me and gave me a hug. When I looked up, I met a smiling
face, as sweet as flowers in the spring /as gentle as a summer breeze.
At that moment, all my anxiety and depression melted away.
When words fail, smile speaks.
Useful expressions
1.boost one's mood/cheer sb. up
2.establish/forge a close relationship/rapport/ties with sb. 与某人建立亲
密的关系
(①connect with sb./bond with sb. ②build/create/forge a special bond
with sb. )
3.strengthen the bond between… and…
4.reduce feelings of anxiety and depression 减少焦虑和抑郁
5.make/leave a good first impression on sb.
6.overcome/get over embarrassment/awkwardness 消除尴尬、局促不安
7.relieve/ease tension and stress 缓解紧张和压力
8.take/draw comfort from one's words 从某人的话中得到安慰
9.offer a few words of comfort 说上几句安慰的话语
e into conflict with sb. (resolve conflicts with sb. )
情绪情感描写
11.I was on the verge/brink of breaking down.
12.Tears streamed/rolled down my cheeks. / Tears welled up in my eyes.
13.I was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into
hopelessness.
14.With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I am very
nervous and in low spirits because I am afraid of letting my parents
down.
15.Overcome with bitter disappointment, I couldn't help weeping with my
face buried in my hands.
16.Informed of the bad news , I was seized by a burst of sadness and
sank onto the chair, my eyes wet.
17.The instant I set my eyes on the result, I felt a lump in my throat
如哽在喉/ my throat tightened, sorrowful tears blurring my vision.
18.A terrible pang of grief enveloping me, I burst into bitter tears,
feeling as if…
19.I felt like all my energy had been drained, feeling empty and
despaired.
20.Gloom and depression clouded/enveloped me, like a black hole,
swallowing me up from the inside.
21.With so many eyes fixed on me, embarrassment take hold of me
so firmly that my palms were sweating and my legs trembling/ my
knees got weak
22.Standing on the platform/stage, I became increasingly embarrassed
and could feel my heart beating/pounding wildly, my face burning.
安慰、鼓励
23.Pull yourself together. 振作起来。
24.Don't let it get you down. It will be over with soon. 别为此烦恼。
事情很快就会过去的。
25.Don't be so miserable! 别这愁眉苦脸的。
26.Cheer up! Things will work out for the best. 高兴点儿。事情会有
好结果的。
27.Take heart- we'll find a way out. 振作起来，我们会有办法的。
28.It's not as bad as all that. 事情没有那么糟。

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