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读后续写：拾钱包的JENNY
一、助人有关的环境描写：
二、助人有关的情绪描写：
一、助人有关的环境描写：
二、助人有关的情绪描写：
题目：
Jenny stared at the store window longingly (渴望地) . There was
nothing in this world that she wanted more than a happy Hanah doll
and all that currently separated her from the hottest doll of the
holiday season was a thin piece of glass and 29.95 plus tax.
Unfortunately, Jenny didn't even have the 95 cents, so she let out a
deep sigh and continued walking home.
Suddenly, a pink rectangle (矩形) in the snow caught her eye.
Jenny walked over and realized it was a leather wallet She removed
it from the snow, and opened the wallet to find a thick pile of folded
green bills and two plastic cards. One was a credit card and the other
an ID.
Jenny stared at the old woman in her ID photo. The woman had
a beautiful smile that reminded Jenny of her grandma. Jenny sighed
and then she put the wallet into her purse. She turned around and
walked in the direction from which she came.
Jenny's heart beat quickly as she entered the store. She had long
dreamed about this moment, but something didn't feel right about it.
As she approached a neat pile of Happy Hannah dolls, she pushed
away her feelings.She grasped one Happy Hannah doll.
As Jenny approached the register,the Happy Hannah Show theme
song began playing. It was her mobile phone. It was her grandma. In
one hand she held the Happy Hannah doll and in the other she held
the phone on which her grandma was calling. Jenny's heart was filled
with love and appreciation as she thought of her sweet old grandma.
She put the doll down and picked up the phone call.
"Hi,Grandma I'm going to be a little bit late tonight. I've got to
drop something off…Yeah, it was good……OK…Alright… I love you
too." Jenny left the store and walked through the melting snow all the
way to the other side of the town. She thought of her grandma as
she rang the bell at 301 West Street.
P1:The woman who answered the door had been crying recently
and looked upset and anxious.
P2 The woman took the wallet smilingly.
情节设计：
范文：
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The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious.
? “Are you Mrs. Green ” Jenny asked politely with some certainty,
recognizing the face from the ID card instantly.
? The woman nodded in confusion and let the girl come in. After
a brief conversation, it turned out that Mrs. Green lost her wallet
on her way to the store with the money to buy gifts for some poor
children.
? Feeling her face burning with a sense of guilt as well as
somewhat relief, Jenny took out the pink leather wallet, rejoicing to
see Mrs. Green's eyes rounding in surprise and sparkling with hope
in a flash.
笔记：现在分词做状语；根据常识合理设置情节；句型”it turned out
that…原来“；心理活动+动作+对方反应
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The woman took the wallet smilingly.
? She held it to her chest tightly and then pulled Jenny into her
arms, tears streaming down her face. “You are the real angel. No
one knows what the wallet means to the children.” She sobbed out
her heartfelt gratitude.
? Jenny's soft heart was touched because her grandma often called
her little angel, all her previous inner struggle giving way to the
pure pride in her right choice.
? That night, she darted across the streets, eager to tell her
grandma that today she got a present more meaningful than Hannah
doll—she was a real angel!
笔记：动作+表情描写；呼应词angel；心理转变句型；结尾句：人物离
场+全新自我
最终自测：
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“你是格林太太吗？“珍妮礼貌地问道，立刻认出了身份证上的那张脸。
The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious.
女人困惑地点了点头，让女孩进到家里来。简短交谈几句之后，原来
格林太太在去商店的路上丢的钱包，里面有给一些贫苦孩子买礼物的钱。
珍妮感到脸上滚烫，有内疚也有一点如释重负，她拿出那个粉红色皮钱
包，很高兴看到格林太太的眼睛惊讶地睁大了，一瞬间闪起了希望。
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她把它紧紧地放在胸前，然后把珍妮拉进怀里，眼泪顺着脸流下来。
“你是真正的天使。没人知道这个钱包对孩子们意味着什么。”她哭着表达
了她衷心的感激之情。
珍妮柔软的心被感动了，因为她的奶奶经常称她为小天使，她之前所
有的内心挣扎都让位于她对自己做了正确选择的纯粹骄傲。
那天晚上，她飞奔过一条条街道，急切地想告诉她的奶奶，今天她得
到了一个比汉娜娃娃更有意义的礼物——她是一个真正的天使！
The woman took the wallet smilingly.
语料默写：
1.立刻认出了那张脸 ________
2.困惑地点头________
3.简短交谈几句之后________
4.原来… ________
5.感到脸上滚烫________
6.有内疚感也有一点如释重负________
7.很高兴看到________
8.眼睛惊讶地睁大了________
9.一瞬间闪起了希望________
10.把它紧紧地抱在胸前________
11.把某人拉进怀里________
12.眼泪顺着脸流下来________
13.哭着表达某人衷心的感激 ________
14.某人柔软的心被感动了________
15.所有之前的内心挣扎________
16.让位给了一种纯粹的骄傲之情 ________
17.飞奔过一条条街道________
读后续写分话题语料库整理：助人篇
背诵单
一、助人有关的环境描写：
1.助人有关的困难环境描写：
1. As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the
town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to
make ends meet (使收支平衡). (2020.7高考山东卷)
2. There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care
of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.
3. But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he
lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) .
4. The icy wind howled across the empty street (在空旷的街上呼啸)
and it was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on
December twenty-fifth.
5. At the sight of the Christmas tree, the kids were lost in the
happiness(沉浸在快乐之中). They feasted their eyes on (尽情欣赏着)
the green Christmas tree decorated with appealing gifts and twinkling
lights(装饰着诱人的礼物和闪烁着灯). They were too amazed to move
an inch (过于惊奇以至于一动不动).
6.I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke
poured (黑烟冒出来)from the back of my car.
7. The darkness was gathering (黑夜慢慢降临)as she wobbled
(颤颤巍巍)in high heels along the side of the highway.
8. The lights of a truck shone from behind (卡车的车灯从后面照过
来)as it approached.The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next
instant, the cab door opened.
二、助人有关的情绪描写：
1.助人有关的感谢描写：
1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping
hand(伸出援手).
2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn't thank
him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did
for her.
3. “It was nice to meet him and thank him, because I wouldn't be
here if it weren't for him (如果不是他的话，我不会在这里),” Molly
said. “He and Adam are the ones that jumped in and saved me, and
they deserve all the praise in the world as far as I'm concerned.”
4. Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note
(一封感谢信)for helping me.
5. The mother nodded her head(点点头), and murmured, “Thank you!”
2.助人有关的感动描写：
1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了),
especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his
family.
2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about
him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched
beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were
nine suns in my chest.
4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears
(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).
5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a
pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were
indifferent.
6. Having spent a tough year littered with severe hardship, I cried my
heart out(号啕大哭)in my Jeep on this deserted road for the kindness
from some strangers.
7. I sincerely thanked them for their kind help(由于他们善意的帮助).
8. “My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I
would never have made it home(不可能回到家) in my high heels. "
she continued, exposing her blistered(起泡的)ankles.
9. Then through my blurred vision(通过我模糊的视野)I saw a lady
stepping out of the car.
10. Surprised and moved, the mother stood rooted to the ground, and
then bowed low to us, weeping tears of joy(流下开心的眼泪).
11.Tears stingingmy eyes(眼泪刺痛了我的眼睛), I threw open the
door,pulled her inside and hugged her tightly.

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