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2023-2024学年译林版七下Unit 3 Welcome to Sunshine Town！话题作文写作练习
写作主题：介绍家乡、城市
一、话题分析：
本单元以“介绍家乡、城市”为话题，围绕家乡或者城市的地理位置，地方特色，地标建筑，风土人情，气候等内容展开写作。
二、写作步骤：
1.文章通常分为三个部分：
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明推荐的城市。
第二步，介绍这个城市的位置、景点以及食物等。
第三步，书写结语，最后表达期待。
2.人称：第一/三人称
3.时态：一般现在时
三、句型积累：
1、Lucy likes living in the city very much because there are many interesting places, such as supermarkets, big stores and parks. (because引导原因状语从句)
2、When you come to Yancheng, you can go to different parks. (when引导时间状语从句)
3、If you go to different places in Yancheng, you can take a bus. (if引导条件状语从句)
4、If you come here, you will definitely fall in love with it. (if引导条件状语从句)
5、If you walk inside, you will learn more about traditional Chinese culture and the history of Nanshan. （if引导条件状语从句）
6、What a nice place! （感叹句）
四、写作训练
1．假如你是李华，你发布了一条和朋友正在武汉度假的朋友图。你的英国朋友Dave看到后很感兴趣，想简单了解一下你度假的情况。请你根据以下提示信息给它写一封邮件。
How’s the weather here
What are you and your friends doing
What do you think of your vacation in Wuhan
Something more about it.
注意，文中不得透露个人真实信息， 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Dave,
How’s everything going My friends and I are on a vacation in Wuhan. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
See you then.
Yous
Li Hua
2．假如你的笔友Kangkang和Lucy都居住在大城市，可他们一个喜欢住在大城市，一个却不喜欢。请根据下面表格里的提示内容，描述一下他们喜欢和不喜欢的原因。80个单词左右。内容可适当发挥。
Lucy like living in the city many interesting places, supermarket, store, park, sports center, zoo
Kangkang doesn’t love living in the city heavy traffic, high cost of living, noisy, no fresh air
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3．疫散花开，春归如约！假如你是张伟，你在上海学习的英国笔友Jack要来你家乡盐城游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
What do you think of the environment (环境) in your hometown
What are the people like there and why do you think so
What activities can Jack do in Yancheng
要求：1.词数90词左右，开头己给，不计入总词数；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yancheng._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to see you soon in Yancheng.
All the best!
Zhang Wei
4．假如你的朋友李辉——在英国泰晤士国际学校学习的一个笔友，经过你给他的关于我们所在城市天气的介绍后，对来中国游玩兴趣渐浓，你要帮他寻找一个你所熟悉的城市，或者你认为你喜欢的，拿起笔来写下一篇80—100 词的简短介绍，让他知道那个城市的位置，它的重要景点等等，让他在你所推荐的城市开心地游玩而加油吧！
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5．南山区正在举办“Discover Nanshan 外国人看南山”系列活动。在寒假来临之际，你作为鹏城的一名中学生，受邀担任深圳市南山区的旅游小助手。请依据以下要点提示，为南山的旅游宣传片写一段英语解说词，将南山介绍给外国游客，带领他们品味南山古城，畅游山海南山!
要求：
1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
要点：
Nantou Ancient Town 1. Location: in the west of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① learn about traditional Chinese culture ② enjoy delicious food
Shenzhen Talent Park 1. Location: in the centre of Nanshan 2. Activities: ① … ② …
Welcome to Nanshan, Shenzhen! In this video, I’ll introduce Nanshan to you.
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Thank you for watching.
6．有的人喜欢住在城里，有的人喜欢住在乡下，你呢？请根据以下要点和要求？以“I like living _____________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的相关情况。要点：
(1)你喜欢住在城里还是乡下？
(2)为什么你喜欢住在这里？
(3)你喜欢住的地方有什么美中不足？
参考词汇：乡下countryside
要求：
(1)请先将题目补写完整；
(2)词数不少于60 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I like living _____________
Different people like living in different places.
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7．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite city”. (以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇作文，词数不少于60 个)（11%）
Suggested questions
1.Which city do you like best
2.Where is it
3.Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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8．请以Welcome to my hometown for a visit为题，写一篇英语作文，从气候、景色、美食和人等方面介绍你的家乡。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，文章通顺连贯，书写规范整洁；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称，80词左右。
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Dear Dave,
How’s everything going My friends and I are on a vacation in Wuhan.
It is sunny here. Wuhan is a beautiful city located in the central part of China. It is known for its rich cultural heritage, delicious food, and stunning scenery. We are visiting the Yellow Crane Tower, one of the most famous landmarks in Wuhan. The tower has a long history and is said to have been built over 1,700 years ago during the Three Kingdoms period. What’s more, people in Wuhan are friendly. I think I will never forget this vacation in Wuhan.
See you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍自己的度假情况。注意要点衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候朋友，题干已给出；
第二步，介绍介绍自己在武汉的度假情况；
[亮点词汇]
① is known for因为……出名
②spend…doing花费……做某事
③What’s more此外
[高分句型]
① Wuhan is a beautiful city located in the central part of China.（过去分词作后置定语)
②I think I will never forget this vacation in Wuhan.（宾语从句）
2．【参考范文】
Lucy and Kangkang are both my good friends. Both of them live in a big city. They often tell me something about the city.
Lucy likes living in the city very much because there are many interesting places, such as supermarkets, big stores and parks. There are also some sports centers and zoos. In her free time, she can do sports there with her friends.
However, why doesn’t Kangkang love living in the city Because he thinks the cost in the city is too high and the traffic is heavy. It is also very noisy and the air is not fresh. He really wants to move to the countryside one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的重点信息，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Lucy和Kangkang居住在城市里；
第二步，按照要点分别介绍Lucy喜欢住在大城市的原因以及Kangkang不喜欢住在大城市的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s free time在某人的业余时间
[高分句型]
①Lucy likes living in the city very much because there are many interesting places, such as supermarkets, big stores and parks. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yancheng.
It is a good place to visit. The air is fresh in Yancheng. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always take the initiative to give their seats to others, and they are especially enthusiastic to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully. When you come to Yancheng, you can go to different parks. There are also many interesting things to do here. You can do some shopping, eat delicious food and enjoy local opera here. Besides, you can also row a boat in the lake. If you go to different places in Yancheng, you can take a bus. There are buses to different places every day.
Hope to see you soon in Yancheng.
All the best!
Zhang Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的目的是邀请对方来参观游玩；
第二步，介绍家乡的环境、人们以及可以做的一些活动；
第三步，书写结语，希望能很快在盐城见到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①initiative主动性
②ask for directions问路
③do some shopping购物
[高分句型]
①When you come to Yancheng, you can go to different parks. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If you go to different places in Yancheng, you can take a bus. (if引导条件状语从句)
4．例文
If you travel to China, you must go to Beijing. It is located in the north of China and is the capital of China. There are many famous attractions here, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and so on. Of course, you must taste Beijing roast duck. The transportation here is also very convenient and developed. You can take the subway, taxi, etc. If you come here, you will definitely fall in love with it. I hope you have a pleasant time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据要求完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明推荐的城市。
第二步，介绍这个城市的位置、景点以及食物等。
第三步，邀请他来这个城市游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①in the north of China在中国北部
②many famous attractions许多著名景点
③take the subway乘坐地铁
[高分句型]
①If you come here, you will definitely fall in love with it. (if引导条件状语从句)
5．范文：
Welcome to Nanshan, Shenzhen! Let me introduce Nanshan to you.
At first, I’ll take you to Nantou Ancient Town. It is in the west of Nanshan. If you walk inside, you will learn more about traditional Chinese culture and the history of Nanshan. You can also enjoy delicious food here. What a nice place!
Now, we come to Shenzhen Talent Park. It lies in the centre of Nanshan. It’s good for you to have a rest and get close to the environment. People often have a picnic, take a walk or ride a bike here. If you want to enjoy beautiful sunset, you will love this park. If you come to Nanshan, you’ll have a good time here.
Thank you for watching.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中“外国人看南山”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍南山”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“位置、活动”几个方面重点介绍南头古镇和深圳人才公园的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎大家来到南山”的邀请。
［亮点词汇］
①have a good time玩得高兴
②be good for对……有好处
③have a rest休息
④get close to亲近
［高分句型］
①If you walk inside, you will learn more about traditional Chinese culture and the history of Nanshan. （if引导条件状语从句）
②What a nice place! （感叹句）
6．例文：
I like living in the city
Different people like living in different places. Some like living in the city. Some like living in the countryside. For me, I like living in the city.
I think life in the city is better. First, there are different kinds of shops for us to buy things and many ways for us to go out. Second, schools in the city are big and new, and it’s good for our study.
It’s a little noisy and the living cost is high in the city, but I like living in the city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意逻辑清晰、行文连贯、无拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己喜欢住在哪里；
第二步：阐述喜欢的理由；
第三步：写出居住地的美中不足。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①I think life in the city is better. (省略that的宾语从句)
②there are different kinds of shops for us to buy things and many ways for us to go out. (动词不定式作定语)
7．作文范文
My Favorite City
Shanghai is my favorite city. It is the biggest city in China. Shanghai is located in the eastern part of China. The reasons why I like Shanghai best are as follows. First, it is the central city of our country. It is the center of economy, technology, industry, finance and trade. What’s more, Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；
第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；
第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。
[亮点词汇]
①finance 金融
②emerging 新兴的
③profound 深刻的
④monument 遗址
[高分句型]
①Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. (with+短语，表示伴随)
②The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.(where引导的定语从句)
8．例文
Welcome to my hometown for a visit
Welcome to my hometown Henan for a visit, I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Henan is in the center of China. In summer, the weather is hot and the sun shines brightly. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes there is ice and snow. The weather is always fine in spring and autumn. There are many places of interest like Yellow River and Shaolin Temple. If you come here, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food. And people in Henan are very friendly, they welcome visitors warmly and always help them.
Henan is waiting for you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎大家来自己的家乡；
第二步，从气候、景色、美食和人等方面介绍你的家乡；
第三步，最后表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②places of interest名胜古迹
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
If you come here, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）

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