资源简介 第21讲 书面表达之建议信(讲义)目录一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向二 考情分析 建议信中考考情分析三 建议信 的考向 1.精选写作话题,紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳四 真题感悟 中考建议信经典考题精选【复习目标】1.精选写作话题,紧扣核心目标。2.提升语言质量。3. 强化高效训练。【网络构建】【考情分析】建议信命题规律【名师解难】建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分:(1)开头;开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。(2)主体;说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。(3)结尾;对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。建议信高分策略之词汇:一 单词建议 advice v. 建议 suggestion n.帮助 help v. 有帮助的 helpful adj.收到 receive 推荐 recommend v.提供 offer/provide/supply 发展 develop v.实用的 practical adj. 考虑 consider v.二 短语考虑 take...into account/consideration也,和 as well as除...之外 in addition to征求某人的建议 ask for sb.’s advice在…方面给某人建议 give sb. advice/ suggestions on…提出一些建议 make/offer some suggestions/advice接受我的建议 adopt/accept/follow/ take up my advice/ suggestions在我看来,就我而言 in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/personally表达某人的观点 express one’s views/opinions对某人有益 be beneficial/be of benefit to sb.觉得我的建议有益/实用 find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical一个有效的方式 an effective way记住 keep… in mind振奋某人的精神 lift one’s spirits对…有坏影响 对…有坏影响培养好的习惯 develop good habits涵括各种各样的… cover a wide variety of一.篇首句1.I’m very glad to receive your letter. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to…我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信给你一些如何…的建议。2.I’m sorry to know that…. I’d like to share with you some ways of ...很抱歉的知道…我想给你分享一下…的方法。3. I have learnt that…. Here are some suggestions that help you.我知道…这里是我给你的能帮到你的建议。 运用了定语从句4.How's it going You asked me about … in your last letter. Here are some good suggestions for you.最近好吗?在你上一封信中,你问我…这些是给你的建议。二.篇中句1.You’d better…你最好…2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我认为,如果你…将会大有裨益。 高级句型3.You’re supposed to…你应该…4.Most important of all,you should…最重要的是,你应该…三.篇尾句1. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.、我希望我的建议对你做决定有一定帮助。2.I believe that you will take my suggestions into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。3.Whatever you decide to do,good luck with your studies/work.不管你做怎么决定,祝你学业/工作好运!4.I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!我希望这些方法对你有用,并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。典型模板Dear …I’m very glad to receive your letter. You asked me about______________(引出主题) Here are some good suggestions for you.First,it’s important to_________.(建议一)Besides,it should be a good idea to__________.(建议二)You can also__________.(建议三)As to__________, I suggest______________.(可具体到某一方面给出建议).In addition,___________(其他建议).I’m sure______________(预测可能的结果,给对方行动的信心和决心).I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!Yours【模板范文】Dear Bob,Learning that you want to know the ways to prevent Covid-19, I'm glad to share some good ideas with you.Firstly, you should wear a mask if you have to go out. Don't go to crowded places, like supermarkets. Secondly, you should wash your hands with running water or soap whenever you touch something. Remember to wash them slowly and carefully. And never fail to open the windows regularly to let in some fresh air and do keep your room clean. Besides, cover your nose and mouth when sneezing. If you don't feel well, go to see a doctor. Most important of all, you should form a good habit. Go to bed early and get up on time. Be sure to have enough sleep, and take more exercise!I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua(2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模)假如你是九年级一班的李力,这周六下午你要参加学校英语俱乐部举办的活动——演讲。请你根据以下信息给你的外教David写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的相关信息并请他对你的演讲内容提出建议。写作要点:(1)英语俱乐部活动主题:携手创建优美校园环境(Together for a Better School Environment)(2)本次俱乐部活动形式:①海报(poster)展示②讲述发生在你身边的故事③演讲(3)谈谈你在演讲中对创建优美校园环境如何“从我做起”的具体建议。写作要求:(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。(3)字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。(4)至少80词。Dear David, I’m writing to tell you something about our club activity which will be held this Saturday afternoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Li【答案】例文:Dear David, I’m writing to tell you something about our club activity which will be held this Saturday afternoon. The theme of this English Club activity is: Together for a Better School Environment. The activities include poster displays, telling stories happening around you and speeches.I will give a speech, and the following is the content. As a middle school student, we should take good care of our campus environment. We should not tread on the grass, or climb trees. We should throw the rubbish into the dustbin. Finally, we shouldn’t spit anywhere. Sputum is full of bacteria, don’t bring your own germs to others. Let’s work together to create a civilized campus. Do you have any suggestions for my speech I look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Li【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:材料已给出,写作时注意表述清晰,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写邮件的目的,介绍本次活动的主题与形式;第二步,详细介绍演讲内容,望对方给出建议,并期待回复。[亮点词汇]①give a speech演讲②tread on the grass踩踏草坪③spit吐痰④Sputum痰⑤is full of充满⑥civilized文明的⑦throw into扔进[高分句型]①The activities include poster displays, telling stories happening around you and speeches.(非谓语动词:动名词作定语修饰stories)②Let’s work together to create a civilized campus.(祈使句)(2023·福建福州·三模)假如你是李华,你收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,他针对学校将要开设的特色选修课 (elective courses) 的选课问题征求你的看法和帮助,请根据邮件内容给他回复,词数80左右。信件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。To: LiHua2023@ From: Harry@.Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that our school is planning to offer us some elective courses, including Chinese, designing, photography and some other subjects. Many of my friends decide to choose Chinese. Is it necessary for a foreigner to learn Chinese Do you think I should also take the course And I hear Chinese is difficult for foreigners. So if I take it, could you give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well Looking forward to hearing from you! Yours, HarryDear Harry,I’m glad to hear that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua【答案】例文:Dear Harry, I’m glad to hear that your school is planning to offer you some elective courses. I think it’s good for you. Here is my advice.I think it is necessary for a foreigner to learn Chinese because Chinese is being used more and more widely in the world. So you had better take the course.But how to learn Chinese well First, you had better believe in yourself and try to read Chinese loudly. What’s more, it’s a good way to take part in a Chinese club to practise speaking Chinese. Last but not least, I think you should learn Chinese by listening to Chinese poems and watching movies about Chinese culture.I hope my advice is helpful to you.Yours, Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“关于学习中文的建议”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的学校开设选修课,希望得到对方的建议;第二步,具体阐述自己需要得到哪方面的建议;第三步,书写结语,希望尽快得到回复。[亮点词汇]①offer sb. sth.给某人提供某物②decide to do sth.决定做某事③give sb. some advice给某人一些建议④look forward to doing sth.期待做某事[高分句型]①Do you think I should also take the course (含有宾语从句的复合句)②So if I take it, could you give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well (if引导条件状语从句)(2023·吉林·统考一模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Frank是一个中国迷,他计划在中秋节期间到中国旅游。这是Frank第一次来中国,他希望你能写一封e-mail为他提供一些建议。内容包括:(1)中秋节的习俗。(2)最适宜出游的城市及原因。(3)推荐适合带回英国的礼物。写作要求:(1)语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥。(2)词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。(3)书写规范, 卷面整洁。(4)文中不得出现真实学校名称和个人姓名。Dear Frank,I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my reply will help you and you will have a good time in China.All the best, Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Frank,I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We often eat moon cakes and admire the moon. Chengdu is a city where you can feel relaxed. There are many teahouses in which you can chat with friends or do business. In addition, Chengdu is also the hometown of the pandas. Guangzhou is a modern city with numerous snacks, making it a great place to taste food. If you want to buy gifts, tea and Chinese knots are good choices.I hope my reply will help you and you will have a good time in China.All the best, Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封电子邮件,属于电子邮件写作;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:邮件开头、结尾以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接邮件开头,介绍中秋节的习俗;第二步,推荐最适宜出游的城市,并说明原因,可列举具体的事例;第三步,推荐适合带回英国的礼物并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①chat with friends和朋友闲聊②have a good time玩得愉快[高分句型]①Chengdu is a city where you can feel relaxed.(where引导的限制性定语从句)②There are many teahouses in which you can chat with friends or do business.(which引导的限制性定语从句)③If you want to buy gifts, tea and Chinese knots are good choices.(if引导的条件状语从句)(2023·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·统考二模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。提示词语: 社交的 social;礼仪 manners;握手 shake hands;礼貌 polite;礼物 gift;筷子 chopsticks。提示问题: 1. What do we do when we meet people for the first time 2. How do we behave(行为) properly at table 注意事项: 1. 词数90词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步,点题,说明中国有很多风俗礼仪。第二步,介绍日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。第三步,总结全文。[亮点词汇]①a country with a long history历史悠久的国家②be supposed to应该③for the first time首次[高分句型]①Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. (when引导时间状语从句)②And don’t make noise when you have your soup. (祈使句否定式)(2023·浙江温州·校考三模)假如你是李华,近日你收到英国笔友Joe的来信,他和你一样,也是一名九年级的学生,面对升学感到压力很大。请你给他写封回信,安慰他,参考所给信息,为他提出至少2条减压的建议。How do you relieve pressure ① talk to others ② do some exercise ③ ask the psychology teacher for help ……要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数:110词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Joe,Happy to receive your letter, but I’m sorry to hear that you have to face a lot of pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Joe,Happy to receive your letter, but I’m sorry to hear that you have to face a lot of pressure. Don’t worry too much about it, and just take it easy. As your friend, I’d like to offer you some suggestions to help you relieve your pressure.First, you should learn to relax. If you are feeling stressed out, you can talk to others face to face or by chatting on QQ or WeChat. Doing some exercise regularly can help you relax yourself and build up your body as well. Secondly, it’s a good idea to ask the psychology teacher for help when you are under pressure. The teacher will give you helpful advice so that you can easily find a way out.I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封回信,属于电子邮件写作;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:信件开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“你体会”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接书信开头,对Joe进行安慰;第二步,按照要点给Joe提出减轻压力的建议,可列举具体的事例;第三步,希望提出的建议能对Joe有所帮助并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①take it easy放轻松②offer sb sth向某人提供某物③feel stressed out感到压力过大④as well也,又,还[高分句型]①If you are feeling stressed out, you can talk to others face to face or by chatting on QQ or WeChat.(if引导条件状语从句)②Secondly, it’s a good idea to ask the psychology teacher for help when you are under pressure.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)(2023·安徽·校联考三模)假如你是校英语报编辑李华,收到了九年级学生××的电子邮件,邮件中她诉说了她最近遇到的两个问题。请你根据以下提示,针对她的问题给她回一封电子邮件,给出合理的建议。提示:1. 上课容易犯困。建议:每天早睡,保证至少八个小时的睡眠;2. 英语口语不好。建议:参加英语社团,多用英语与他人交流等。要求:1. 习作包括提示要点,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺、条理清晰;3. 词数100左右(邮件格式及开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Dear ××,I’m sorry to hear that you’re in trouble. I’m to give you some advice on your problems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文:Dear Han Mei,I’m sorry to hear that you’re in trouble. I’m to give you some advice on your problems.For your first problem—you get sleepy in class easily, I think maybe you don’t get enough sleep the night before. So why not stop staying up late Try to go to bed early and make sure you get at least eight hours’ sleep every night. And you can drink some coffee when you feel really sleepy.For your second problem, I think you shouldn’t be afraid to speak in English. To improve your spoken English, you can join the English club and communicate with others in English as much as possible. What’s more, you can watch some English talk shows to learn how to speak English well.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的关键信息,回复电子邮件,就对方的问题给出合理的建议。[写作步骤]第一步,点明邮件的主题;第二步,针对两个问题分别给出建议;第三步,希望自己的建议有用。[亮点词汇]①make sure 确保②at least 至少③be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事④in English 用英语[高分句型]①So why not stop staying up late (表建议的常见句型)②And you can drink some coffee when you feel really sleepy.(when引导时间状语从句)③What’s more, you can watch some English talk shows to learn how to speak English well.(动词不定式表目的状语;疑问词+动词不定式)(2023·江西吉安·统考一模)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike因为父母工作地点的改变而转到新的学校就读,但一直苦于没有适应新的校园生活,于是发来邮件向你请教。请你根据表格要点提示和要求,给Mike 回一封邮件:提出你的建议并表达期待(各补充一点)。写作要点 具体内容Your advice 1.Make more friends; 2.Attend school activities. 3. ...Your wishes ...要求: 1.邮件应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数80-120。邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,I am sorry to know that you still can’t get used to the life in your new school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes for you!Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Mike,I am sorry to know that you still can’t get used to the life in your new school. I’d like to give you some advice.Firstly, you can make some new friends. As you know, friendship can keep you away from loneliness and help you to get used to the new school life. Secondly, you can take part in different school activities. That will not only make your life interesting but also help you to make more new friends. Besides, you can also try to develop some hobbies. Hobbies can make you feel happy and relaxed from busy school life. And they usually lead to a meaningful life.I am sure you will get used to your new school life soon by doing these things.I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes for you!Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏表格给出的建议,可适当提出自己的更多建议并添加细节使文章更通顺。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。可以给对方一些建议;第二步,详细阐述自己的建议并表达期待,希望他早日适应新学校生活;第三步,书写结语,表达“希望收到他的好消息”。[亮点词汇]① as you know 正如你所知道的② keep away from 远离③ get used to 习惯④ develop hobbies 发展爱好⑤ lead to 导致[高分句型]I am sure you will get used to your new school life soon by doing these things.(省略that的宾语从句)(2023·安徽阜阳·统考二模)假定你是李华。你的加拿大朋友Mike发来邮件说他即将转入新班级,他担心和新同学相处时会遇到困难。请你用英文给他回复一封邮件,提几点建议,帮助他与新同学愉快相处。要点:1.尊重他人;2.乐于助人;3.乐于分享。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:respect (v. 尊重)Dear Mike,How is everything going You asked me how to get along well with other classmates in your new class. Here are some ways that might help.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Mike,How is everything going You asked me how to get along well with other classmates in your new class. Here are some ways that might help. First of all, you should respect others. For instance, say hello to anyone around you, which can make them familiar with you as soon as possible. In addition, be friendly to people. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. What’s more, it is better for you to take an active part in the activities after-class where you can show your talent and can make more friends who have the same interest with you. Finally, you should be willing to share the sadness and happiness with others.I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,开头已给出;第二步,介绍如何与新同学愉快相处的建议;第三步,表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①get along well with与……友好相处②for instance例如③be friendly to对……友好[高分句型]If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better.(if引导条件状语从句)(2023·江西抚州·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack要在暑假期间回国,打算为他妈妈准备几件富有特色的礼物,特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。写作要点:1.建议礼物:旗袍和中国结。 2.说明礼物原因,表达祝福。提示语:旗袍:cheonsam 中国结:Chinese knot作文要求:1.短文应该包括以上全部信息,可以适当发挥,要求条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。3.词数不少于80词。Dear Jack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday and you want to bring a few gifts for your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture.In my opinion, you can buy the following two presents. First of all, cheongsam, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman, thus I am sure that your mother will like it very much. What’s more, the Chinese knot, which is pretty decoration popular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting room of our home. It stands for unity and good luck. Meanwhile, I’m convinced that it will bring good luck and happiness to your family.Have a good vacation and remember me to your mother. YoursLi Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,未电子邮件;② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图;第二步,建议买旗袍和中国结作为礼物,并说明该礼物的意义;第三步,书写结语,表达祝福。[亮点词汇]①in my opinion依我之见②first of all首先③what’s more另外[高分句型]①What’s more, the Chinese knot, which is pretty decoration popular with Chinese, is usually hung in the sitting room of our home.(which引导的定语从句)②Have a good vacation and remember me to your mother.(祈使句肯定形式)(2023·广西·统考三模)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生,中考将至,她写邮件询问你,如何缓解学习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容,用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点:How to relieve (缓解) study pressure listen to some soft musicwatch some interesting moviesask your parents or teachers for help……写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可以适当发挥;2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;3. 字数80左右,开头不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,How are you these days _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Lucy,How are you these days In your e-mail, you asked how to relieve study pressure. I have some advice to tell you.First of all, you can listen to some soft music. Music can make you relaxed. You can also watch some interesting movies which will make you feel happy. Then you can learn much better. Besides, it’s a good idea to ask your parents or teachers for help if necessary. At last, exercise is a good way, too.Everything will be OK. I hope these suggestions can be helpful.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封电子邮件,要求就如何减轻学习压力给好友提些建议。②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主③提示:题目要求根据所给提示,就好友关于缓解学习压力的问题回一封电子邮件,给出一些建议,并进行适当的内容扩展。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。[写作步聚]第一步,开篇点题。第二步,根据所给要点,给出一些建议,并进行适当补充。第三步,表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①first of all首先②ask...for help向……寻求帮助③at last最后[高分句型]①You can also watch some interesting movies which will make you feel happy.(which引导的定语从句)②Besides, it’s a good idea to ask your parents or teachers for help if necessary.(it作形式主语)(2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题)眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平,你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件,说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求:(1)不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。(2)根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥。(3)内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。(4)词数:80~100词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。近视原因 长时间使用电子产品; 读书时间过长。建议 控制使用电子产品时间; 养成好习惯(如饮食、做眼保健操) ……希望 ……参考词汇:视力 eyesight;近视 myopia;电子产品 electronic deviceDear Mike,How is it going with you ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ping【答案】例文:Dear Mike,How is it going with you I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause myopia.But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy.I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.Yours,Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:根据提示信息给对方一些建议,适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题,介绍对方近视的原因;第二步,针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议;第三步,表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①would like to do sth.想要做某事②be good for对……有好处③play an important role in在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语)(2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题)青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题,为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏,倾听读者的心声,并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华,最近也遇上了些烦心事,请给该专栏发一封英文邮件,讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项:(1)邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;(2)词数在100左右,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。Dear Mr. Friend,I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】例文:Dear Mr. Friend,I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;②时态:时态为一般现在时;③提示:根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步,点明自己遇到了问题。第二步,讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。第三步,书写结尾。[亮点词汇]①argue with和某人争吵②care about关心③take painting lessons上绘画课[高分句型]①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)3.(2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题)假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件,向你诉说她最近的困扰;自己体型微胖,想通过节食减肥,以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件,谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)Dear Li Hua,I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan Can you give me some advice Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Amy要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2—3分;4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Amy, I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Amy, I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting. As you mentioned in the letter, I have some advice for you.Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident and positive, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Inner beauty is more important than appearance. Secondly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, doing proper exercise is necessary. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly.The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours, Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据邮件内容提出建议,并适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题,提出要给Amy的建议;第二步,具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议;第三步,总结全文,表达期望。[亮点词汇]①there is no need to do sth没必要做某事②stay away from…与……保持距离③have courage to do sth有勇气做某事[高分句型]①I hope my advice will be helpful to you.(宾语从句)②Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead.(祈使句)4.(2022·山东威海·中考真题)某英语杂志社Just Ask栏目收到一位青少年Claire的电子邮件,邮件中讲述了自己的困惑,并向大家寻求帮助。认真阅读这封电子邮件,假定你是Sarah或Kevin,请从不同角度给出合理化建议。From: Claire To: Just Ask Subject: Asking for advice Dear friends, I feel terrible and I really need your advice. The problem is that I’m not interested in clothes. I don’t know what’s in fashion and I don’t like going shopping for clothes. Some of my friends laugh at me and say that I haven’t got style. What do you think I should do Claire, 13要求: (1) 词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2) 文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。Dear Claire,I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Good luck!Sarah/Kevin【答案】Version 1Dear Claire,I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.First of all, just be yourself and stick to your own style. There is no need to care too much about what you are in others’ eyes. After all, your outer look is not as important as your inner beauty. Figure out what you are good at and work hard to make yourself better at it. Everyone will look up to you if you are outstanding enough.What’s more, you should know what true friends are. A true friend will always care about you, not your clothes. He will reach for your hand and touch your heart, but not laugh at you.In addition, wearing comfortably and conveniently is enough for a teenager. With the growth of your age and experience, you will develop your sense of fashion.Good luck!KevinVersion 2Dear Claire,I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions. First of all, the clothes we wear don’t need to be fashionable but suitable. Fashion can mean a lot, not just about clothes. For example, if you can speak beautiful English or volunteer to help others, you are in fashion.Next, a true friend should be someone who really understands you. You can have a talk with your friends laughing at you and tell them your feeling. I believe they will change.Most of all, different people can have different opinions even for the same clothes. The true fashion is to be yourself. Don’t care too much about what others say. Keep active, do what you are good at and improve yourself to be a better person.Good luck!Sarah【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据邮件的内容,写一封回信,给出建议。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:以例文1为例,写作时要以第二和第三人称来行文,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二、三、四段就他人的看法,交友和穿着等方面给出建议。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。5.(2022·山东滨州·统考中考真题)假定你是李华,最近你的笔友刘明发来邮件,向你诉说他的困扰;他的父母不让他用手机APP给英文电影配音,认为会影响学习和休息。请你根据邮件内容用英语给他回封邮件,内容包括:1.表示理解,并予以安慰;2.提出合理的建议;3.希望情况有所好转。参考词汇:dub(v. 配音)Dear Li Hua, I’m in trouble now. Yesterday I argued with my parents because they didn’t allow me to dub foreign films by using mobile apps. They thought that it would have a bad influence on my study and sleep. I broke their hearts and made them angry. I’m sorry for that but I really think it helpful to learn English by dubbing the foreign films. Now I don’t know what to do. Could you help me Yours. Liu Ming要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名:3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2-3分;4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Liu Ming.I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours.Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Liu Ming,I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.I completely agree that it is a good way to learn English with interest. However, you shouldn’t make your parents angry, because they are the ones who love you all the time. Don’t be so upset. Go straight to your parents and tell them you are sorry for that. Then, listen to your parents patiently, and you will understand what your parents are worried about. At last, you can talk to your parents about the advantages of dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.I hope things will be better for you soon.Yours.Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件。针对刘明的困扰提出合理性建议。2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段开头已给出;第二段针对刘明的困扰提出合理建议;最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。 第21讲 书面表达之建议信(讲义)目录一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向二 考情分析 建议信中考考情分析三 建议信 的考向 1.精选写作话题,紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳四 真题感悟 中考建议信经典考题精选【复习目标】1.精选写作话题,紧扣核心目标。2.提升语言质量。3. 强化高效训练。【网络构建】【考情分析】建议信命题规律【名师解难】建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分:(1)开头;开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。(2)主体;说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。(3)结尾;对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。建议信高分策略之词汇:一 单词建议 advice v. 建议 suggestion n.帮助 help v. 有帮助的 helpful adj.收到 receive 推荐 recommend v.提供 offer/provide/supply 发展 develop v.实用的 practical adj. 考虑 consider v.二 短语考虑 take...into account/consideration也,和 as well as除...之外 in addition to征求某人的建议 ask for sb.’s advice在…方面给某人建议 give sb. advice/ suggestions on…提出一些建议 make/offer some suggestions/advice接受我的建议 adopt/accept/follow/ take up my advice/ suggestions在我看来,就我而言 in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/personally表达某人的观点 express one’s views/opinions对某人有益 be beneficial/be of benefit to sb.觉得我的建议有益/实用 find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical一个有效的方式 an effective way记住 keep… in mind振奋某人的精神 lift one’s spirits对…有坏影响 对…有坏影响培养好的习惯 develop good habits涵括各种各样的… cover a wide variety of一.篇首句1.I’m very glad to receive your letter. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to…我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信给你一些如何…的建议。2.I’m sorry to know that…. I’d like to share with you some ways of ...很抱歉的知道…我想给你分享一下…的方法。3. I have learnt that…. Here are some suggestions that help you.我知道…这里是我给你的能帮到你的建议。 运用了定语从句4.How's it going You asked me about … in your last letter. Here are some good suggestions for you.最近好吗?在你上一封信中,你问我…这些是给你的建议。二.篇中句1.You’d better…你最好…2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我认为,如果你…将会大有裨益。 高级句型3.You’re supposed to…你应该…4.Most important of all,you should…最重要的是,你应该…三.篇尾句1. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.、我希望我的建议对你做决定有一定帮助。2.I believe that you will take my suggestions into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。3.Whatever you decide to do,good luck with your studies/work.不管你做怎么决定,祝你学业/工作好运!4.I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!我希望这些方法对你有用,并且我相信一些都会很快好起来的。典型模板Dear …I’m very glad to receive your letter. You asked me about______________(引出主题) Here are some good suggestions for you.First,it’s important to_________.(建议一)Besides,it should be a good idea to__________.(建议二)You can also__________.(建议三)As to__________, I suggest______________.(可具体到某一方面给出建议).In addition,___________(其他建议).I’m sure______________(预测可能的结果,给对方行动的信心和决心).I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!Yours【模板范文】Dear Bob,Learning that you want to know the ways to prevent Covid-19, I'm glad to share some good ideas with you.Firstly, you should wear a mask if you have to go out. Don't go to crowded places, like supermarkets. Secondly, you should wash your hands with running water or soap whenever you touch something. Remember to wash them slowly and carefully. And never fail to open the windows regularly to let in some fresh air and do keep your room clean. Besides, cover your nose and mouth when sneezing. If you don't feel well, go to see a doctor. Most important of all, you should form a good habit. Go to bed early and get up on time. Be sure to have enough sleep, and take more exercise!I hope these ways are of some use to you, and I believe everything will be going well again soon!Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua(2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模)假如你是九年级一班的李力,这周六下午你要参加学校英语俱乐部举办的活动——演讲。请你根据以下信息给你的外教David写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的相关信息并请他对你的演讲内容提出建议。写作要点:(1)英语俱乐部活动主题:携手创建优美校园环境(Together for a Better School Environment)(2)本次俱乐部活动形式:①海报(poster)展示②讲述发生在你身边的故事③演讲(3)谈谈你在演讲中对创建优美校园环境如何“从我做起”的具体建议。写作要求:(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。(3)字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。(4)至少80词。Dear David, I’m writing to tell you something about our club activity which will be held this Saturday afternoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Li(2023·福建福州·三模)假如你是李华,你收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,他针对学校将要开设的特色选修课 (elective courses) 的选课问题征求你的看法和帮助,请根据邮件内容给他回复,词数80左右。信件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。To: LiHua2023@ From: Harry@.Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that our school is planning to offer us some elective courses, including Chinese, designing, photography and some other subjects. Many of my friends decide to choose Chinese. Is it necessary for a foreigner to learn Chinese Do you think I should also take the course And I hear Chinese is difficult for foreigners. So if I take it, could you give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well Looking forward to hearing from you! Yours, HarryDear Harry,I’m glad to hear that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua(2023·吉林·统考一模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Frank是一个中国迷,他计划在中秋节期间到中国旅游。这是Frank第一次来中国,他希望你能写一封e-mail为他提供一些建议。内容包括:(1)中秋节的习俗。(2)最适宜出游的城市及原因。(3)推荐适合带回英国的礼物。写作要求:(1)语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥。(2)词数80—100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。(3)书写规范, 卷面整洁。(4)文中不得出现真实学校名称和个人姓名。Dear Frank,I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my reply will help you and you will have a good time in China.All the best, Li Hua(2023·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·统考二模)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。提示词语: 社交的 social;礼仪 manners;握手 shake hands;礼貌 polite;礼物 gift;筷子 chopsticks。提示问题: 1. What do we do when we meet people for the first time 2. How do we behave(行为) properly at table 注意事项: 1. 词数90词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范; 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.Yours,Li Hua(2023·浙江温州·校考三模)假如你是李华,近日你收到英国笔友Joe的来信,他和你一样,也是一名九年级的学生,面对升学感到压力很大。请你给他写封回信,安慰他,参考所给信息,为他提出至少2条减压的建议。How do you relieve pressure ① talk to others ② do some exercise ③ ask the psychology teacher for help ……要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数:110词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Joe,Happy to receive your letter, but I’m sorry to hear that you have to face a lot of pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua(2023·安徽·校联考三模)假如你是校英语报编辑李华,收到了九年级学生××的电子邮件,邮件中她诉说了她最近遇到的两个问题。请你根据以下提示,针对她的问题给她回一封电子邮件,给出合理的建议。提示:1. 上课容易犯困。建议:每天早睡,保证至少八个小时的睡眠;2. 英语口语不好。建议:参加英语社团,多用英语与他人交流等。要求:1. 习作包括提示要点,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺、条理清晰;3. 词数100左右(邮件格式及开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Dear ××,I’m sorry to hear that you’re in trouble. I’m to give you some advice on your problems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua(2023·江西吉安·统考一模)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike因为父母工作地点的改变而转到新的学校就读,但一直苦于没有适应新的校园生活,于是发来邮件向你请教。请你根据表格要点提示和要求,给Mike 回一封邮件:提出你的建议并表达期待(各补充一点)。写作要点 具体内容Your advice 1.Make more friends; 2.Attend school activities. 3. ...Your wishes ...要求: 1.邮件应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数80-120。邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,I am sorry to know that you still can’t get used to the life in your new school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes for you!Yours,Li Hua(2023·安徽阜阳·统考二模)假定你是李华。你的加拿大朋友Mike发来邮件说他即将转入新班级,他担心和新同学相处时会遇到困难。请你用英文给他回复一封邮件,提几点建议,帮助他与新同学愉快相处。要点:1.尊重他人;2.乐于助人;3.乐于分享。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:respect (v. 尊重)Dear Mike,How is everything going You asked me how to get along well with other classmates in your new class. Here are some ways that might help.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua(2023·江西抚州·统考一模)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack要在暑假期间回国,打算为他妈妈准备几件富有特色的礼物,特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。写作要点:1.建议礼物:旗袍和中国结。 2.说明礼物原因,表达祝福。提示语:旗袍:cheonsam 中国结:Chinese knot作文要求:1.短文应该包括以上全部信息,可以适当发挥,要求条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。3.词数不少于80词。Dear Jack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·广西·统考三模)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生,中考将至,她写邮件询问你,如何缓解学习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容,用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点:How to relieve (缓解) study pressure listen to some soft musicwatch some interesting moviesask your parents or teachers for help……写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可以适当发挥;2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;3. 字数80左右,开头不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,How are you these days _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua(2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题)眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平,你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件,说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求:(1)不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。(2)根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥。(3)内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。(4)词数:80~100词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。近视原因 长时间使用电子产品; 读书时间过长。建议 控制使用电子产品时间; 养成好习惯(如饮食、做眼保健操) ……希望 ……参考词汇:视力 eyesight;近视 myopia;电子产品 electronic deviceDear Mike,How is it going with you ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ping(2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题)青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题,为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏,倾听读者的心声,并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华,最近也遇上了些烦心事,请给该专栏发一封英文邮件,讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项:(1)邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;(2)词数在100左右,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。Dear Mr. Friend,I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua3.(2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题)假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件,向你诉说她最近的困扰;自己体型微胖,想通过节食减肥,以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件,谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)Dear Li Hua,I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan Can you give me some advice Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Amy要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2—3分;4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Amy, I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua4.(2022·山东威海·中考真题)某英语杂志社Just Ask栏目收到一位青少年Claire的电子邮件,邮件中讲述了自己的困惑,并向大家寻求帮助。认真阅读这封电子邮件,假定你是Sarah或Kevin,请从不同角度给出合理化建议。From: Claire To: Just Ask Subject: Asking for advice Dear friends, I feel terrible and I really need your advice. The problem is that I’m not interested in clothes. I don’t know what’s in fashion and I don’t like going shopping for clothes. Some of my friends laugh at me and say that I haven’t got style. What do you think I should do Claire, 13要求: (1) 词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2) 文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。Dear Claire,I understand you. Once I was also in the similar situation. It’s not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Good luck!Sarah/Kevin5.(2022·山东滨州·统考中考真题)假定你是李华,最近你的笔友刘明发来邮件,向你诉说他的困扰;他的父母不让他用手机APP给英文电影配音,认为会影响学习和休息。请你根据邮件内容用英语给他回封邮件,内容包括:1.表示理解,并予以安慰;2.提出合理的建议;3.希望情况有所好转。参考词汇:dub(v. 配音)Dear Li Hua, I’m in trouble now. Yesterday I argued with my parents because they didn’t allow me to dub foreign films by using mobile apps. They thought that it would have a bad influence on my study and sleep. I broke their hearts and made them angry. I’m sorry for that but I really think it helpful to learn English by dubbing the foreign films. Now I don’t know what to do. Could you help me Yours. Liu Ming要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名:3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2-3分;4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Liu Ming.I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours.Li Hua 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源列表 第21讲 书面表达之建议信(讲义)(原卷版).docx 第21讲 书面表达之建议信(讲义)(解析版).docx