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第27讲 书面表达之图画作文（讲义）
目录
一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向
二 考情分析 图画作文中考考情分析
三 图画作文 的考向 1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳
四 真题感悟 中考图画作文空经典考题精选
【复习目标】
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【网络构建】
【考情分析】
图画作文命题规律
【名师解难】
写作方法：
1.仔细审题，准确定位
（1）确定主题。考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图，从而确定文章的主题。
（2）确定体裁。仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文，单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。
（3）确定人称。日记、周记、议论文一般采用第一人称。
（4）确定时态。日记、周记类以过去时态为主，而议论文则以现在时态为主。
2.认真读图，进行图文转换
考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式（即两幅以上）出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，以便全面把握图画要传达的主要内容，在写作时不遗漏信息要点。
3.确定段落，草拟提纲
根据要点确定段落。寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。对于叙事型图画类作文（通常会涉及多幅图，要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行叙述），可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。写作攻略
4.斟词酌句，组句成篇
根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点 间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。
5.检查与修改
重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。
图画作文
必备亮点词汇
cartoon n.漫画 describe v.描述 avoid v.避免 indicate v.表明 serious adj.严重的 cause v.导致，引起
regret v.后悔 remind v.使想起 clean up 收拾干净 look after 照顾，看管 knock at敲（门、窗）
on one's way to在某人去······的路上 quarrel with与·····吵架 see sb.doing sth.看见某人正在做······
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
From the picture,we can see that...由图画我们可以看出······
The picture shows us that...图片向我们展示了······
What the picture shows is that...图片显示的是······
As is shown in the picture,...play(s) an important part in...如图片所示，······在······方面起着重要作用。
As can be seen from the picture, it is clear that...如图片所示，很明显······
It can be seen/found/noticed in the picture that...由图画可以看到／发现／注意到······
That sight reminds me of something in my daily life.那景象使我想起我日常生活中的一些事。
出彩篇中句
Look! Some teenagers are running on the running machine.看！一些少年正在跑步机上跑步。
How happily they are playing!他们玩得多么开心啊！
She saw a purse lying on the ground.她看见地上有一个钱包。图解
Xiao Ming asked his father for help and then went to buy some flowers.小明请爸爸帮忙，然后去买一些花。
精彩篇尾句
Therefore,we should realize the importance of...因此，我们应该意识到······的重要性。
Such behavior left me in deep thought.这样的行为使我陷入了深思。图解
Only in this way can we...只有通过这种方式我们才能·.·.··
I was so disappointed with the boy's behavior.我对那个男孩的行为失望至极。
We should pay more attention to our daily behavior and follow the social rules.我们应该更多地注意自己的日常行为，遵守社会规则。
Therefore,I think...因此，我认为·····
【模板之图画寓意】
As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the cartoon/picture,图画内容概括；
In the first/left picture/cartoon,描述图一内容.
As is shown in the second cartoon/picture, 描述图二内容.
It is therefore safe to draw the conclusion that提示寓意或主题句，回应主题但不是主题句的重复。
【模板之看图记叙文】
第一段，确定事件的时间（when)、地点（where)、人物（who)及事件（what);
开篇句：XXX and XX took part in. . .yesterday/today/last week. . .
第二段，介绍事件的原因（why)和过程（how);
过渡句：On the way to. . . By the time. . .
第三段，总结事件的意义和收获。
结尾句：It was quite an experience for us, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
【素材之单词和短语】
1.表示时间
immediately, early in the morning, the other day, by the time, the following day, at the same time, in a flash, on this occasion
2.表示解释：
in other words, that is to say
3.表示递进：
besides, moreover, furthermore, worse still1,furthermore, in addition, not only…… but also, in the first place…… ; in the second place……, equally important
1．（2023·四川成都·校联考模拟预测）
今年暑假 7月28日至 8月8日第31届世界大学生运动会（ FISU）将在成都举行，来自世界各地的大学生运动员将齐聚一堂。假如你是李华，应邀参加四川电视台成都宣传CHENGDU 2021篇的拍摄，请你根据以下图示用英文给外国朋友简要介绍家乡成都。
注意：
（1）请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
（2）须包含图示中所有信息；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）词数80-100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu. Chengdu is a beautiful city and enjoys the reputation of being a “Heaven Land of Plenty”.
It’s the capital city of Sichuan Province in the southwest of China. It covers an area of 14.335 square kilometers with a population of around 20.93 million. It’s about 4,500 years old. Known as the home of pandas, Chengdu also has lots of interesting places like Jin-li Old Street and Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage. The transportation here is very convenient. There are many subways. If you come here to visit, the Panda Research Base is a must go. There are many lovely pandas here.
Chengdu is also called the world of food, and it’s especially famous for hot pot. There are also many famous attractions and entertainment places for you to visit and play. The weather is fine in September, tourists can come here at this time.
Welcome to Chengdu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍成都的地理位置；
第二步，介绍成都的历史、景点等；
第三步，介绍成都的美食及天气等。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②the home of………的家
③be famous for因……而出名
[高分句型]
①If you come here to visit, the Panda Research Base is a must go.（条件状语从句）
②There are also many famous attractions and entertainment places for you to visit and play. （There be句型）
（2023·陕西西安·陕西师大附中校考模拟预测）
上个月，西安市政府迎接了创建全国文明城市巡检。为配合此项工作，上周日，你们学校组织了一场名为“文明无句号，创建无止境”的环保活动。请根据以下图片及提示，用英文写一篇短文，简要介绍你们的活动和感受。
参考词汇: clean up; guide the pedestrians（行人）; volunteer; ...
要求：1. 使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
To build a civilized city, our school organized an environmental protection activity last Saturday. We did many meaningful things.
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【答案】例文
To build a civilized city, our school organized an environmental protection activity last Saturday. We did many meaningful things. It was a fine day. Some of our classmates helped with the cleaning. There was a lot of garbage out there because of people’s uncivilized behavior. We cleaned them up. Some students helped direct the traffic. If we encountered uncivilized traffic behavior, we would correct it promptly. Some students went to the nursing home. We tell them stories to make them happy. Although we were tired this day, we were very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍你们的活动和感受。
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②because of因为
③clean up清理
[高分句型]
①If we encountered uncivilized traffic behavior, we would correct it promptly.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Although we were tired this day, we were very happy.（Although引导的让步状语从句）
（2023·河南焦作·统考一模）
假如你是李华，你的笔友Sally的班级正在开展“Good learning habits we should develop”的调研活动。于是Sally给你写了一封邮件想询问你有哪些好的学习习惯。请你结合下面图示信息，根据自身经历给Sally回一封邮件，分享你的学习习惯。
写作要求：1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：effective 有效的
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you. To be honest, good learning habits play an important role in my study. Firstly, by making a study plan, I can know what to study every day clearly and make full use of my time. In addition, I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. What’s more, preparing lessons before class can improve my self-learning ability, and I am able to understand some key points and the goals of the lessons better. The last but not least, I usually review what I’ve learnt. It’s quite effective.
In a word, without the help of these good habits, I can’t learn better. I hope my learning habits can be helpful to you.
Yours,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合图片，适当增加细节使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏图片所给的关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明主题，引出下文；
第二步：从图片提供的三个方面进行介绍，并补充自己的另外一个方面；
第三步：总结全文，表明自己对好的学习习惯的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to be honest老实讲，老实说
②make full use of充分利用
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. (定语从句)
②I usually review what I’ve learnt. (宾语从句)
（2023·四川成都·统考二模）
上周, 你校各班开展了“以快乐之姿展青春风采”的主题班会活动，你班同学就“如何做一名快乐的中学生”进行了热烈讨论，下图是讨论的结果，请你根据图片所示向学校英文报社投稿介绍你班的讨论结果。
HOW
The true happiness develop some ② ________ have a clear ① ________ balance the study and rest
注意:1.请先在表格中填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2.须全面反映图文信息；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.词数: 80-100词。
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【答案】范文：
Last week, each class in our school held a class meeting with the theme of “Showing Youth style with Happy posture”. My classmates had a heated discussion on “How to be a happy middle school student”. The following is the result of the discussion.
Our classmates agree that true happiness is satisfaction. In other words, to be satisfied with what we have. Secondly, we should develop some hobbies. In addition to learning, we have poetry and distance. So we should use our leisure time to do something we like. At the same time, we need to have a clear goal. We need to know what we are going to do today, what we are going to do next and what we are going to do last. Finally, we have to balance the relationship between study and rest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏主要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用主题班会活动来引出“如何做一名快乐的中学生”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明“兴趣爱好、个人计划、劳逸结合”几点建议的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达做一名快乐中学生的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①In addition to此外
②be satisfied with对……满意
③At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①We need to know what we are going to do today, what we are going to do next and what we are going to do last. （宾语从句）
（2023·黑龙江佳木斯·统考三模）
图示作文：仔细观察下列五幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇英语短文。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分。
要求：
（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
（2）词数在80—100之间。
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Today is May 3rd. It’s Lucy’s birthday. She invited her friends to her birthday party. Her mother made some noodles with an egg and bought a birthday cake for her. Her friends lighted candles with her. She made wishes and blew them out in one go. Then they enjoyed the cake. After that they took a lot of photos happily. At last she thanked her parents because they gave her a lot and they did a lot for her. She was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片信息进行写作，可适当发挥，注意想象合理，表述清晰连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍图片中的时间；
第二步，介绍图片中的人物所做的事情；
第三步，表达对父母的感谢及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make wishes许愿
②blow out吹灭
③take a lot of photos拍很多照片
④at last最后
[高分句型]
At last she thanked her parents because they gave her a lot and they did a lot for her.（because引导原因状语从句）
（2023·甘肃庆阳·统考二模）
请你以“A wonderful weekend”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about the topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
★What did Wang Ting do on Saturday morning
★Where did Wang Ting go
★Who did Wang Ting go to the zoo with
★What did Wang Ting do in the library
The following words may help you:
★do homework
★old people’s home
★her friends
★read books
要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
A wonderful weekend
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【答案】例文：
A wonderful weekend
Today was Sunday. Wang Ting didn’t have to go to school. She finished her homework in the morning. And then she went to the old people’s home, where she helped them clean and told them stories. She went to the zoo with her friends in the afternoon. They saw a lot of animals. They sang, danced and played games there. Then they went to the library. They read a lot of books. Although she was busy that day, she was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍王婷周六上午做了什么事情；
第二步，介绍王婷去了什么地方，和谁去的以及做了什么事情。
[亮点词汇]
①have to不得不
②finish完成
③tell sb. sth.告诉某人某事
[高分句型]
Although she was busy that day, she was very happy.（although引导让步状语从句）
（2023·黑龙江鸡西·统考一模）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 词数： 80～100之间。
2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文：
One day, Lucy left school after the final bell rang. On her way home, there was a woman selling fast food that was boiled in hot water. It smelt very fragrant, and some children were enjoying themselves. The food was very cheap, only 1 yuan for two people, so Lucy also bought a lot and ate quickly. After a while, Lucy had a stomachache and felt worse and worse. Then she was taken to the hospital by her mother. Fortunately, she quickly recovered. Luckily, she got better soon. Lucy decided to stay away from junk food and eat healthy food every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片，把图中所示内容完整表达，条理清晰，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序，描述女孩吃了不洁食物而住院的过程；
第二步，表达要吃健康食品的决心；
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy oneself 尽情享受
②worse and worse 越来越糟糕
③decide to do 决定做
[高分句型]
①On her way home, there was a woman selling fast food that was boiled in hot water.（定语从句）
②Then she was taken to the hospital by her mother.（被动语态）
（2023·黑龙江·校联考一模）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇英语短文。
提示词： a cigarette case香烟盒；bin垃圾箱。
要求：
1.词数在80～100之间；
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文：
One day, when Tom was running in the park, he saw a man light a cigarette and throw the cigarette case on the ground. Tom ran over to the man and picked up the cigarette case. He said “Hello, Uncle, I will take you to a place”. Then he pulled the man to a garbage bin. Tom put the cigarette case into the garbage bin and he pointed to the sign—No smoking. Tom said “Smoking is bad for your health”. At last, the man felt a little regretful. He said to Tom “I am very sorry to do that. Thank you. I won’t do that again. You are a good boy”.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，描写故事开端。小男孩注意到一位男子随手丢弃香烟盒；
第二步，描写故事发展。小男孩主动捡起香烟盒子，带着叔叔一起将香烟盒丢到垃圾桶里，并将吸烟危害和“禁止吸烟”的标志告诉叔叔；
第三步，描写故事结局。男子感到很愧疚，并对小男孩的行为进行表扬。
【亮点词汇】①run over to sb.跑向某人
②pick up捡起
③point to指向
④be sorry to do sth.很抱歉做某事
【高分句型】①One day, when Tom was running in the park, he saw a man light a cigarette and throw the cigarette case on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Smoking is bad for your health.（动名词作主语）
（2023·黑龙江·统考二模）
根据下列图片，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
(2)词数在80—100之间。
(3)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
It was Meimei’s birthday yesterday. Her parents took her to a restaurant to have a big dinner. The food was delicious and they enjoyed themselves. After the meal, they wanted to leave. Meimei asked her parents to take the food home. She said wasting food was wrong. The parents looked at their daughter, feeling very surprised and happy. They did as their daughter told them. Meimei was very pleased.
Valuing food is a virtue. The food we eat comes from farmers’ hard work. What’s more, there are a great many people around the world who don’t have enough food to eat. Many of them even die from hunger. So it’s everyone’s job not to waste food. Let’s take action.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据图片内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，合乎逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序介绍发生的事情；
第二步，表达自己的观点；
第三步，号召大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①have a big dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐
②die from hunger死于饥饿
③enjoy oneself玩得开心，尽兴
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①She said wasting food was wrong.（省略that的宾语从句）
②there are a great many people around the world who don’t have enough food to eat. （who引导定语从句）
（2023·山东青岛·统考二模）

如图所示: Amy Hayes住在自己用垃圾建造的房子里（屋顶是倒扣的旧船，门窗来自附近倒塌楼房，屋前的大门是石头和旧瓶子做成的）。请用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 简单介绍图片中Amy Hayes的房子；
2.回答问题：你会住这样的房子吗？为什么/为什么不？ （至少两条理由）
要求: 字数 80。
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【答案】范文：
Amy Hayes lives in a house that she built herself out of rubbish. The windows and doors come from old buildings around her town that were pulled down. The top of the house is an old boat turned upside down. And the gate in front of her house is made of rocks and old glass bottles.
I’d like to live in such a house. Here are the reasons. First, I will feel comfortable to live in it because it is very warm in winter and it is very cool in summer. Second, the environment around the house is quite good. I can hear the birds singing when I wake up. I can enjoy the beauty of nature. I can enjoy the sunshine. What’s more, these materials are very environmentally friendly. They are good for my health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中Amy Hayes的房子的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍图片中Amy Hayes的房子”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“Amy Hayes的房子、我喜欢住这样的房子、原因等”几个方面重点Amy Hayes的房子的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“它们对我的健康有好处”的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①turn upside down 倒置；
②be made of由……制成的；
③what’s more而且；
④be good for对……有好处；
[高分句型]
①First, I will feel comfortable to live in it because it is very warm in winter and it is very cool in summer. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I can hear the birds singing when I wake up. (现在分词作宾语补足语)
（2023·宁夏石嘴山·统考一模）
学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你所在的学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
2.紧扣思维导图内容提示，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
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Thank you for your time!
【答案】例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
First, my Chinese teacher is patient with me. She always helps me whenever I have problems. Second, my classmates help me a lot. I am not good at sports. My friend Li Ming helps me run so that I can run faster now. Also, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and thanked me.
I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.
Thank you for your time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作角度已给出，考生应注意结构清晰逻辑紧凑，适当补充事例，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“老师对我、同学对我和我对老师同学”几个方面分别说明；
第三步，书写结语。总结我们彼此之间应当如何做，让学校成为更好的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①be patient with对某人有耐心
②care about关心
[高分句型]
①She always helps me whenever I have problems.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
②My friend Li Ming helps me run so that I can run faster now.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
③I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.（宾语从句；主将从现；if引导的条件状语从句）
12．（2023·山东青岛·统考中考真题）
观察图片，你想到了什么？请结合自己的经历，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的感悟。
要求：
1.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
From the cartoon, I can know
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【答案】例文
From the cartoon, I can know we should depend on ourselves. These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. We can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves and we can’t take good care of ourselves. I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it was our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.
So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
When we get into senior high school, we need to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. And we should make good use of time and get enough sleep. At the same time, we need to study seriously and make progress. To make more friends, we had better join clubs actively. Lastly, we should take up our hobbies in our free time to not only keep healthy but also keep our minds clear.
All in all, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意结合所给图片，谈谈自己的感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。结合自身生活实际，谈谈依赖父母的现象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。列举提升自我管理能力，更好地适应高中新生活的合理化建议。
第三步，书写结语。发出在未来生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依靠
②seldom很少
③as difficult as和……一样难
④make good use of充分利用
⑤not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.(宾语从句)
②So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.（It’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth.句型）
（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：rain heavily, umbrella, be thankful to…
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily. He walked slowly in the rain with his umbrella. Suddenly, he saw an old man with a walking stick. He didn’t have an umbrella. Tom came up to him as quickly as possible and shared his umbrella with him. Tom took the old man to his home safely. The old man was thankful to Tom. After saying goodbye to the old man, he went home happily.
What a good boy Tom is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片和提示词，把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序和内容描述Tom帮助老人的全过程；
第二步，对Tom进行赞扬。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
②as quickly as possible尽快
③be thankful to感激
[高分句型]
①Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②What a good boy Tom is!(感叹句)
（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：holiday, activities, colorful, meaningful, museum.
要求：1.词数：80-100之间。
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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【答案】例文
In the holiday, Xiao Li and her classmates took part in many activities. Xiao Li joined the art club, and she practiced handwriting carefully. Some girls joined the cooking club, and they felt very excited about it. They didn’t do that in the past. Their parents thought it was a waste of time. They only needed to study. But children were really fond of cooking. Some were in the sports club to do exercise, such as running and playing basketball. Others went to the history museum. There they learned a lot about the heroes in their hometown. They made great contributions to their hometown. Children admired them very much.
All the children fell in love with the holiday activities. They would leave sweet memories during their lifetime. What colorful and meaningful activities they had!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍图片中的孩子们做了哪些假日活动；第二段总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
15．（2022·湖北·统考中考真题）
饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：at the clinic (诊所)；junk food；stomachache；medicine
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【答案】例文
Possible Version One:
One day, Li Hua had a stomachache. His father took him to a clinic right away.
At the clinic, a nurse asked what was wrong with Li Hua. He answered, “I had a stomachache, maybe I ate too much junk food last night.” Then, the nurse took him to see a doctor. The doctor examined him carefully. He told him to take some medicine and rest in bed.
One day later, Li Hua felt better. He realized that he would cat more vegetables and fruit, less junk food in the future.
Possible Version Two:
Li Hua is a boy who likes eating junk food very much. Last night, after dinner, he started eating again as usual. A few hours later, a strong feeling of stomachache struck him and his face turned pale at once. His father took him to the nearest clinic. Soon a nurse came and asked what happened. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to stay in bed. He didn’t feel better until he took the pills.
Junk food is delicious, but it is not so healthy. We should eat regularly and do sports often. The better living habits are, the healthier we’ll be.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片以及图片上的词汇展开想象写一篇作文，关于李华的就诊经历。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称以第三人称为主。结合题干内容和图片可知李华应该是肚子疼。所以可以围绕这一点展开叙述。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 第27讲 书面表达之图画作文（讲义）
目录
一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向
二 考情分析 图画作文中考考情分析
三 图画作文 的考向 1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳
四 真题感悟 中考图画作文空经典考题精选
【复习目标】
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【网络构建】
【考情分析】
图画作文命题规律
【名师解难】
写作方法：
1.仔细审题，准确定位
（1）确定主题。考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图，从而确定文章的主题。
（2）确定体裁。仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文，单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。
（3）确定人称。日记、周记、议论文一般采用第一人称。
（4）确定时态。日记、周记类以过去时态为主，而议论文则以现在时态为主。
2.认真读图，进行图文转换
考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式（即两幅以上）出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，以便全面把握图画要传达的主要内容，在写作时不遗漏信息要点。
3.确定段落，草拟提纲
根据要点确定段落。寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。对于叙事型图画类作文（通常会涉及多幅图，要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行叙述），可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。写作攻略
4.斟词酌句，组句成篇
根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点 间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。
5.检查与修改
重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。
图画作文
必备亮点词汇
cartoon n.漫画 describe v.描述 avoid v.避免 indicate v.表明 serious adj.严重的 cause v.导致，引起
regret v.后悔 remind v.使想起 clean up 收拾干净 look after 照顾，看管 knock at敲（门、窗）
on one's way to在某人去······的路上 quarrel with与·····吵架 see sb.doing sth.看见某人正在做······
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
From the picture,we can see that...由图画我们可以看出······
The picture shows us that...图片向我们展示了······
What the picture shows is that...图片显示的是······
As is shown in the picture,...play(s) an important part in...如图片所示，······在······方面起着重要作用。
As can be seen from the picture, it is clear that...如图片所示，很明显······
It can be seen/found/noticed in the picture that...由图画可以看到／发现／注意到······
That sight reminds me of something in my daily life.那景象使我想起我日常生活中的一些事。
出彩篇中句
Look! Some teenagers are running on the running machine.看！一些少年正在跑步机上跑步。
How happily they are playing!他们玩得多么开心啊！
She saw a purse lying on the ground.她看见地上有一个钱包。图解
Xiao Ming asked his father for help and then went to buy some flowers.小明请爸爸帮忙，然后去买一些花。
精彩篇尾句
Therefore,we should realize the importance of...因此，我们应该意识到······的重要性。
Such behavior left me in deep thought.这样的行为使我陷入了深思。图解
Only in this way can we...只有通过这种方式我们才能·.·.··
I was so disappointed with the boy's behavior.我对那个男孩的行为失望至极。
We should pay more attention to our daily behavior and follow the social rules.我们应该更多地注意自己的日常行为，遵守社会规则。
Therefore,I think...因此，我认为·····
【模板之图画寓意】
As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the cartoon/picture,图画内容概括；
In the first/left picture/cartoon,描述图一内容.
As is shown in the second cartoon/picture, 描述图二内容.
It is therefore safe to draw the conclusion that提示寓意或主题句，回应主题但不是主题句的重复。
【模板之看图记叙文】
第一段，确定事件的时间（when)、地点（where)、人物（who)及事件（what);
开篇句：XXX and XX took part in. . .yesterday/today/last week. . .
第二段，介绍事件的原因（why)和过程（how);
过渡句：On the way to. . . By the time. . .
第三段，总结事件的意义和收获。
结尾句：It was quite an experience for us, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
【素材之单词和短语】
1.表示时间
immediately, early in the morning, the other day, by the time, the following day, at the same time, in a flash, on this occasion
2.表示解释：
in other words, that is to say
3.表示递进：
besides, moreover, furthermore, worse still1,furthermore, in addition, not only…… but also, in the first place…… ; in the second place……, equally important
1．（2023·四川成都·校联考模拟预测）
今年暑假 7月28日至 8月8日第31届世界大学生运动会（ FISU）将在成都举行，来自世界各地的大学生运动员将齐聚一堂。假如你是李华，应邀参加四川电视台成都宣传CHENGDU 2021篇的拍摄，请你根据以下图示用英文给外国朋友简要介绍家乡成都。
注意：
（1）请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
（2）须包含图示中所有信息；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）词数80-100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Chengdu.
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（2023·陕西西安·陕西师大附中校考模拟预测）
上个月，西安市政府迎接了创建全国文明城市巡检。为配合此项工作，上周日，你们学校组织了一场名为“文明无句号，创建无止境”的环保活动。请根据以下图片及提示，用英文写一篇短文，简要介绍你们的活动和感受。
参考词汇: clean up; guide the pedestrians（行人）; volunteer; ...
要求：1. 使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
To build a civilized city, our school organized an environmental protection activity last Saturday. We did many meaningful things.
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（2023·河南焦作·统考一模）
假如你是李华，你的笔友Sally的班级正在开展“Good learning habits we should develop”的调研活动。于是Sally给你写了一封邮件想询问你有哪些好的学习习惯。请你结合下面图示信息，根据自身经历给Sally回一封邮件，分享你的学习习惯。
写作要求：1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：effective 有效的
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
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Yours，
Li Hua
（2023·四川成都·统考二模）
上周, 你校各班开展了“以快乐之姿展青春风采”的主题班会活动，你班同学就“如何做一名快乐的中学生”进行了热烈讨论，下图是讨论的结果，请你根据图片所示向学校英文报社投稿介绍你班的讨论结果。
HOW
The true happiness develop some ② ________ have a clear ① ________ balance the study and rest
注意:1.请先在表格中填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2.须全面反映图文信息；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.词数: 80-100词。
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（2023·黑龙江佳木斯·统考三模）
图示作文：仔细观察下列五幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇英语短文。
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分。
要求：
（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
（2）词数在80—100之间。
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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（2023·甘肃庆阳·统考二模）
请你以“A wonderful weekend”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about the topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
★What did Wang Ting do on Saturday morning
★Where did Wang Ting go
★Who did Wang Ting go to the zoo with
★What did Wang Ting do in the library
The following words may help you:
★do homework
★old people’s home
★her friends
★read books
要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
A wonderful weekend
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（2023·黑龙江鸡西·统考一模）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 词数： 80～100之间。
2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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（2023·黑龙江·校联考一模）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇英语短文。
提示词： a cigarette case香烟盒；bin垃圾箱。
要求：
1.词数在80～100之间；
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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（2023·黑龙江·统考二模）
根据下列图片，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
(2)词数在80—100之间。
(3)字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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（2023·山东青岛·统考二模）

如图所示: Amy Hayes住在自己用垃圾建造的房子里（屋顶是倒扣的旧船，门窗来自附近倒塌楼房，屋前的大门是石头和旧瓶子做成的）。请用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 简单介绍图片中Amy Hayes的房子；
2.回答问题：你会住这样的房子吗？为什么/为什么不？ （至少两条理由）
要求: 字数 80。
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（2023·宁夏石嘴山·统考一模）
学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你所在的学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
2.紧扣思维导图内容提示，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.
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Thank you for your time!
12．（2023·山东青岛·统考中考真题）
观察图片，你想到了什么？请结合自己的经历，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的感悟。
要求：
1.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
From the cartoon, I can know
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（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：rain heavily, umbrella, be thankful to…
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：holiday, activities, colorful, meaningful, museum.
要求：1.词数：80-100之间。
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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15．（2022·湖北·统考中考真题）
饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：at the clinic (诊所)；junk food；stomachache；medicine
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