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第25讲 书面表达之提纲作文（讲义）
目录
一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向
二 考情分析 提纲作文中考考情分析
三 提纲作文 的考向 1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳
四 真题感悟 中考提纲作文经典考题精选
【复习目标】
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【网络构建】
【考情分析】
提纲作文命题规律
【名师解难】
1.认真审题，找准思路
认真阅读题目所列出的提纲，分析、揣摩出题者的用意，确立文章的要点，找准写作的思路，即找到作文的突破点，围绕提纲内容尽量发散思维补充更多的内容。
2.初步构思，拟定提纲
整理、归纳能想到的信息，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并确定使用哪种体裁来进行写作，
确定人称、时态等细节。
3.连词成句，连句成文
根据题目所列提纲，用恰当的词语表达信息，再把词语组成句子，最后使用适当的
语把句子串联成文章。要注意连接顺畅，适度使用过渡词和过渡句。
提纲作文
必备亮点词汇
disadvantage n.不利，劣势 advantage n.优势，益处 strong point 优点 weakness n.弱点，缺点
favorable adj.有利的 beneficial adj.有利的，有益的 properly adu.适当地，恰当地
in my eyes 在我看来 as for me 对于我来说 from my point of view 从我的观点来看
I maintain that 我认为 it seems to me that 我认为 as far as I am concerned 在我看来
from where I stand 站在我的立场上
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
In my opinion,I...我认为，我······
Nowadays,there's a wide-spread concern about/that...如今，······引起了广泛的关注。图解
···play(s) an important role/place among...especially...······在······尤其是···.··中占有很重要的地位。
···has become a fashion in our daily life.······已成为我们日常生活的一种时尚。
It's often said that...我们常说······
It goes without saying that...不言而喻，······
As we all know/As is known to all...众所周知，······
···is a hot topic in society. Enough on it has been said about...······是当今社会的一个热门话题。有关它的······已经谈得很多了。
About this,views differ among different people.关于这点不同的人有着不同的看法。
As we all know,everybody can't live without smartphones.众所周知，任何人没有智能手机都是不能生活的。
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious problem about...现如今，存在着日益严重的关于······的问题。
出彩篇中句
Every coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性。图解
First,we should know...首先，我们要知道······
First of all,we have to admit that...has brought us...首先，我们不得不承认······给我们带来···.··
It can be easily proved that...很容易证明···.··
The reason why...is that...之所以······的原因是······
I think it is important to be polite to others.我认为对他人有礼貌是重要的。
There are two reasons why...为什么······,有两个原因。
For one thing, it only takes me two hours to fly to City A, which will make me less tired during the.journey.一个原因是，乘飞机去A城只需要两个小时，旅途中我不会太累。
There are several reasons as follows.有如下几条原因。。
精彩篇尾句
Weighing up the pros and cons,I think...is convenient.权衡利弊，我认为······很方便。
Therefore,students should...所以学生们应该······
···sets a good example for me......为我树立了良好的榜样。
On account of this,we can find that...据此，我们可以发现······
As far as I am concerned,...在我看来，······
典型模板
模板1 观点看法型
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________（问题）. For example, some _____________（例一）; some _____________（例二）; some _____________（例三）and still some _____________（例四）.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________（解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better _____________（解决方法二). Because, we should _____________（解决方法三）.
In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________.
【模板范文】
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is many students have bad eating habits. For example, some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks; some always like to eat the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods, such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. For another thing, we'd better have meals at the right time. Besides, we should not eat too much especially before we go to bed.
In my opinion, if we have god eating habits, we will have good health. And we can study beer.
模板2 经历感受型
______________(时间)，____________(人物)had a great time in/at
____________(地点).We arrived at/in____________(地点) early._____________(活动一的时间)，we_____________(活动一). _____________(活动二的时间)，we_____________(活动二). _____________(活动三的时间)，we_____________(活动三). _____________(回家的时间)，we started to go back home.
We enjoyed ourselves and I’m looking forward to going there next
time.
【模板范文】
Last Saturday，Peter and I had a great time in Central Park.
We arrived at the park early. In the morning，we climbed the mountains. We saw many beautiful flowers and monkeys along the way. When we reached the top, we found the air was much fresher. At noon, we had a picnic under a big tree. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake. The water of the lake was very clear. At 5 p.m., we started to go back home.
We enjoyed ourselves and I’m looking forward to going there next time.
模板3 做法建议型
As is known to all of us，____________should____________.But do you know how？
First of all， we should ___________(建议一).Besides， it is also important for us to____________(建议二).What’s more， we should________________(建议三).
In my opinion， we should____________(总结、点题).Only in these ways can we_____________.
【模板范文】
How to get on well with others
As is known to all of us，students should learn how to get on well with others. But do you know how？
First of all， we should respect others. Everyone has his or her own way to do things，so we should understand each other. Besides，it is also important for us to talk with each other and share happiness and sadness. We can be closer to one another by communicating. What’s more，we should be kind to others and always give a hand to those who are in need.
In my opinion， we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get on well with others.
模板4 事物介绍型
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about /I’m glad to be here to talk about ________________________. (要介绍的内容)
_______________（提纲一）_______________（提纲二）_______________（提纲三）
All in all, I like _________________very much. What do you think of it Look forward to hearing from you!
【模板范文】
Dear David,
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about the song My Motherland.
This song was composed by Qiao Yu and by Liu Chi. Its lyrics are majestic and its melody is exciting. It was first sung on the film Battle On Shangganling Mountain.
When I was ten years old, I watched the movie. The song brought hope and strength to the wounded soldiers. At that moment, I was deeply moved.
Whenever I hear this song, I am proud of my motherland. It inspires me to study hard. In the future, I will try my best to contribute to our country and wish our country better and better.
All in all, I like the song very much. What do you think of it Look forward to hearing from you!
Li Hua
模板5 活动打算型
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called________________（活动名称）in our school.
The activity was held at_______________（具体时间） on/at ______________（地点）. In the beginning,________________（安排一）. After that, _____________(安排二). In the end,________________(安排三).
Through this activity, we will have a better understanding of ______________. I hope____________.
【模板范文】
Dear John，
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we will have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Jim
（2024·湖北·统考一模）
2024年春节即将来临，你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为 “My New Year’s Plans”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice Chinese New Year is coming! You may have many great things to do. What are your New Year’s plans How are you going to achieve them You can talk about your bealth, hobbies, schoolwork and so on. Share with us! ENGLISH MONTHLY
要求:
（1）你的新年计划至少包含通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My New Year’s Plans
Chinese New Year is coming! I have many great things to do in the new year.
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【答案】例文
My New Year’s Plans
Chinese New Year is coming! I have many great things to do in the new year. To begin with, I’m going to stay healthy by taking exercise every day and keeping a balanced diet. In addition, I will take up some hobbies such as painting and singing, which can make my life more colorful and meaningful. I’m going to practice them a lot. As for the schoolwork, I plan to improve my math grades. I’m going to review notes and do more exercises. Lastly, I will celebrate Chinese New Year with my family, enjoying such a great festival.
In a word, I’m looking forward to the New Year and I’m determined to achieve all the plans.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍新年计划有哪些；
第二步，谈谈自己将如何实现这些计划；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy 保持健康
②keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
③take up 开始从事
[高分句型]
①In addition, I will take up some hobbies such as painting and singing, which can make my life more colorful and meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
②In a word, I’m looking forward to the New Year and I’m determined to achieve all the plans.（and连接的并列句）
（2024·辽宁·统考模拟预测）
假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。
要点如下：
(1)回顾过去；
(2)表达感谢；
(3)展望未来。
注意：
(1)词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you. I’ve been in this school for three years. The school is beautiful and my school life is really colourful. In the past, I learned a lot from my teachers and classmates and made much progress. I also made a lot of friends who helped me a lot.
I want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述过去的3年生活；
第二步，表达对老师、同学的感谢以及表达美好祝福；
第三步，最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②make much progress取得进步
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①Not only do they teach us knowledge, but also they help us shape our character.（部分倒装句）
（2023·河南周口·校考三模）
河南是中华民族和华夏文明的重要发祥地。中华文明的起源、文字的发明、城市的形成和统一国家的建立，都与河南有着密不可分的关系。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Danny发邮件告诉你他想今年暑假到河南旅游，但他对河南不是很了解，想向你寻求建议。请你用英语写一封回信，为他推荐一个城市，帮助他度过一个愉快的假期。
写作要点：
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation. It’s indeed a great place to explore the roots of Chinese civilization. I highly recommend you visit the city of Luoyang.
Luoyang is famous for its historical and cultural sites. One must-visit attraction is the Longmen Grottoes, which is a UNESCO World Heritage site. When it comes to food, Luoyang offers a wide variety of delicious dishes. Don’t miss out on the famous Luoyang Water Banquet, which consists of 24 courses of various dishes cooked in different ways using water. Besides, Luoyang is known for its traditional peony culture. The city holds an annual Peony Festival, where you can admire the beautiful peony flowers in full bloom. Lastly, Luoyang has a rich history. It was once the capital of multiple dynasties, including the Eastern Zhou and Tang Dynasty.
I hope this recommendation helps you have a fantastic vacation in Henan. Enjoy your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己想推荐的城市——洛阳；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从景点、美食、风俗、历史等角度介绍洛阳。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①indeed确实
②traditional传统的
③annual一年一次的
[高分句型]
①One must-visit attraction is the Longmen Grottoes, which is a UNESCO World Heritage site. （定语从句）
②Don’t miss out on the famous Luoyang Water Banquet, which consists of 24 courses of various dishes cooked in different ways using water. （祈使句）
（2023·浙江·模拟预测）
目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：
1. 主要原因；
2. 个人看法；
3. 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）短文题目与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
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【答案】例文：
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examination at school.
On the one hand, as students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at our lessons. So when taking examinations, we sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please our parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the school rules. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括“作弊的原因”和“对作弊的看法”，需要具体描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些学生考试作弊（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍作弊的原因；
第三步，介绍对于作弊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
②in order to为了
③break the school rules违反校规
④instead of而不是
⑤get well prepared for好好做准备
[高分句型]
①...but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.（定语从句）
②In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.（it的固定句型）
（2023·陕西西安·西安市铁一中学校考模拟预测）
俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place ”为主题的讨论，同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。假如你是王平，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。
●Spend more time with family ●Share happiness and worries ●Remember family’s birthdays ●Your idea…
参考词汇：
cheer...up, support each other, prepare gifts
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名，姓名，地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear editor,
I’m Wang Ping from Class 2, Grade 9. Recently, our class had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas.
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【答案】例文：
Dear editor,
I’m Wang Ping from Class 2, Grade 9. Recently, our class had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas.
Some say it’s a good idea to spend more time with family. They believe family members should share happiness and worries. When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. Home is always the first place for us to get help and support. Others think that it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. The feeling of being loved can bring us more pleasure.
In my opinion, showing love for family is really important. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己，并引出主题（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍班里的学生的不同看法；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①spend more time with sb花更多的时间和某人在一起
②cheer sb up使某人振奋
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Others think that it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents.(that引导宾语从句；it固定句型)
（2023·云南昆明·昆明八中校考模拟预测）
提示：在初中三年的学习生活中，好习惯伴随着你的成长和进步。播种习惯，收获性格；播种性格，收获命运。请你以“Good habits make me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好习惯对你学习或生活的影响。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Good habits make me ________
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【答案】例文
Good habits make me healthy
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think good habits make me healthy. I have some good habits such as eating healthy food and doing exercise.
Years ago, I used to be fat and often fell ill. I liked junk food and never took any exercise. My health condition became so worrying that I decided to change. It was hard for me to give up bad habits and develop good ones. However, I started to try to eat healthy food. I spent some of my spare time exercising every day. What’s more, I joined a sports club and took part in the activities there. Gradually, I got healthier and healthier. It is the good habits that helped me.
Thanks to my good habits, now I have a healthy body. It is not easy to keep them, but I’ll try my best. Health is wealth, after all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文以“Good habits make me healthy”为题谈谈好习惯对你学习或生活的影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍好习惯的好处；
第二步，介绍自己养成好习惯的一个经历；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②used to be过去是
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①My health condition became so worrying that I decided to change.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②It is not easy to keep them, but I’ll try my best.(but引导的并列句)
（2023·黑龙江绥化·模拟预测）
亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，在此离别之际，恰逢学校英语报征稿，请你以“A/An__________ Person in My School Life”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）;
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整;
（3）词数不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
A Helpful Person in My School Life
I have met a lot of people in my school life. One of them is my good friend Emma. She is the best friend I’ve made in the class, and she is always there for me when I need help.
When I was in Grade 8, I found myself getting upset easily. I was under a lot of stress and couldn’t even listen to the teachers carefully in class. Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with her difficulties. From her, I learnt that the only way to overcome difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining. I felt much more confident when I knew that I could fight against my difficulties together with Emma.
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” A good friend is the person who encourages you to be happy and strong.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去事情用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明描写对象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍令你印象深刻的事情；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①upset心烦的
②stress压力
③deal with处理
④overcome difficulties克服困难
⑤complain抱怨
[高分句型]
①A good friend is the person who encourages you to be happy and strong.（定语从句）
②From her, I learnt that the only way to overcome difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining.（宾语从句）
（2023·吉林松原·统考模拟预测）
母亲节快到了，Tony准备给妈妈一个surprise。假设你是Tony，请你根据下面的提示与同学们分享你的母亲节设想。内容包括：
1. something about your mother when she was very young;
2. your plans for Mother’s Day;
3. your hope.
作文要求：
（1）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Mother’s Day is coming. It reminds me of my mother and something about her when she was very young.
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【答案】参考范文
Mother’s Day is coming. It reminds me of my mother and something about her when she was very young. My mother used to be poor. She gave up her studies for her brother and sister. She got up early to help my grandmother with the housework.
Now I’m going to do something for my mother. First, I will use my pocket money to buy a useful but not expensive gift like a dress. Second, I can do something for her. For example, I can prepare a cup of tea. When my mother comes back from work, she can drink it. Third, I will watch a concert with my mother. That will make her happy and relaxed.
I hope my mother will have a good time on Mother’s Day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍母亲节即将到来，作者想起了关于母亲很小的时候的事情；
第二步，具体阐述母亲节的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb of使某人想起
②used to be曾经是
③help sb with帮助某人做某事
④have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①It reminds me of my mother and something about her when she was very young.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope my mother will have a good time on Mother’s Day.(省略that的宾语从句)
（2023·吉林长春·校联考模拟预测）
体育运动是校园生活中的重要组成部分。假定你是李华，你校英文网站的体育栏目正在征集稿件，请你以“Sports and I”为题，写一篇投稿。
要点：
1. 你对体育运动的理解；
2. 个人运动的经历和感受；
3. 呼吁大家热爱运动和生活。
要求：
1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Sports and I
Sports are of great importance for us. They can help us build up our body and become refreshed.
Basketball is my favourite sport, which is full of fun and challenge. Of all the matches I’ve experienced, my first basketball match in senior high school is the most unforgettable. Our rival was a skillful team with several champion titles. It turned out as expected, we fell behind most of the time. However, although there were difficulties, each of us spared no efforts and we played as a team. Our hard work finally paid off. We managed to win 3 scores at the final moment!
Basketball enriches my spare time, both physically and mentally. I love this game! Let’s all love sports and life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Sports and I”为题，结合提示要点进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己对体育运动的理解；
第二步，介绍个人运动的经历和感受；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家热爱运动和生活。
[亮点词汇]
①build up增强
②be full of充满
③fall behind落后
④spare no efforts不遗余力，竭尽全力
[高分句型]
①Basketball is my favourite sport, which is full of fun and challenge.（which引导的定语从句）
②However, although there were difficulties, each of us spared no efforts and we played as a team.（although引导的让步状语从句）
（2023·吉林长春·校联考模拟预测）
假如你是班长李华，你班的外教老师Ms. Steen即将回美国，你们将在下周五为她举行欢送会（send-off party）。请你给她写一封不少于40词的邀请函。
要点：1.时间：晚上6点；
2.地点：学校音乐厅
3.活动内容：品尝中国传统美食和欣赏学生民族舞表演（folk dance）；
4.期待 Ms. Steen 参加。
要求：字句工整；语法正确；信息齐全；简练得体。
Dear Ms. Steen,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ms. Steen,
We have heard that you are going back to America. We will hold a send-off party for you at 6 o’clock next Friday evening in the school concert hall. We will taste traditional Chinese food and enjoy the students’ folk dance performance. We sincerely look forward to your participation. If you have any questions, you can send me an email.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，注意信的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间地点；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①go back to回到
②look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①We will taste traditional Chinese food and enjoy the students’ folk dance performance. (and并列句)
②If you have any questions, you can send me an email. (If引导的条件状语从句)
（2023·山西大同·统考模拟预测）
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
阅读可以使人更充实、丰富，可以滋润心灵，开启心智。No.1 Middle School针对学生在英语阅读方面存在的问题，对全校2, 300名学生进行了一次调查，下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自身经历，谈谈你在英语阅读方面的困难和你是如何克服的。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
No.1 Middle School did a survey among 2, 300 students about the problems of their English reading. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
No.1 Middle School did a survey among 2, 300 students about the problems of their English reading. Here are the results. 23% of the students aren’t interested in English reading. 25% of them say they hardly have time to do English reading because of too much homework. 35% of them have difficulty in English reading and don’t know how to do English reading in right ways. Besides, 17% say they don’t have proper reading materials.
As for me, I am fond of English reading. In the beginning, I had difficulty in understanding the meaning of the materials because of too many new words. I wanted to give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, told me I could find a wonderful world if I insisted. Therefore, I tried to guess the words’ meaning by reading the sentences before and after them. At the same time, I also looked them up in the dictionary. Little by little, I could read more articles. As my teacher said, my life becomes more colorful because of reading. What’s more, I find it easier to study English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称和第三人称，介绍学校关于英语阅读方面存在的问题的调查结果和自己在英语阅读方面的困难和怎么克服的，内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍表格里面的信息；
第二步，介绍自己在英语阅读方面遇到的困难；
第三步，介绍自己怎么克服困难的。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②because of因为
③have difficulty in doing sth.在……方面有困难
④As for me对我来说
⑤In the beginning开始
⑥What’s more另外
⑦look up查找
[高分句型]
①25% of them say they hardly have time to do English reading because of too much homework.（宾语从句）
②I wanted to give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, told me I could find a wonderful world if I insisted.（条件状语从句）
③As my teacher said, my life becomes more colorful because of reading.（定语从句）
④What’s more, I find it easier to study English.（it固定句型）
（2023·吉林长春·长春市解放大路学校校考模拟预测）
在生活中，有许多能触动我们心灵的词汇，如进步、坚持、拼搏、自信等，最能打动你的词是什么呢？请从下图所给的词汇中或其它词汇中选择一个你最喜欢的词，结合所见所闻或个人经历，以My favorite word is ________为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈你喜欢这个词的理由及带给你的感受。
要求：
（1）补全题目；
（2）表达真情实感；
（3）不得使用真实的姓名、校名；
（4）短文不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
My favorite word is “progress”
In our daily life, there are many beautiful words that can touch our hearts. My favorite word is “progress”, because it makes the world better. Progress is important to a country or a person. Because of it, our country is becoming stronger and richer, and we will be more excellent and confident.
I remember that my English was poor when I entered the middle school. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress little by little. In the final exam, I got good grades. The progress encouraged me to study harder.
In my opinion, progress means becoming better and better. So I like it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意需把题目补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍最喜欢的词是什么及喜欢的理由及感受；
第二步，通过介绍自己的个人经历来说明这个词对自己的影响；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①touch one’s heart让某人感动
②With the help of sb在某人的帮助下
③in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①My favorite word is “progress”, because it makes the world better.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I remember that my English was poor when I entered the middle school.（when引导时间状语从句）
（2023·吉林长春·吉林省实验校考模拟预测）
你校英语俱乐部正在举办“弘扬中华传统美德”的征文活动。中华传统美德包括：热爱祖国、尊敬师长、乐于助人、勤学好问、诚实礼貌等很多内容。请你从中挑选一项内容，以“We should...”为题，写一篇短文参加征文活动。
提示：respect v./n. 尊敬
内容：1. 叙述你奉行美德的事例；
2. 谈谈作为中学生应该怎样传承和弘扬中华传统美德。
要求：1. 把题目补全完整；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
4. 不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
We should honor our parents
As we all know, honoring our parents is one of the excellent traditions of China.
I honor my parents. I often help my parents do housework in my spare time. I think it’s our duty to honor our parents. Our parents make every effort to raise us up, so it’s important for us to honor them. They love us, so we should love and respect them.
As teenagers, first, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us. Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after a day’s work. What’s more, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely. We’d better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions. It’s also important to tell our parents we love them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据内容提示进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，注意不要忘了补全题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，讲述尊重父母是一项传统美德；
第二步，具体介绍自己奉行美德的事例；
第三步，介绍如何传承和弘扬中华传统美德。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s spare time在某人空闲时间
②make every effort to do sth竭尽全力做某事
③raise sb up抚养某人
④communicate with sb与某人交流
[高分句型]
①Our parents make every effort to raise us up, so it’s important for us to honor them.（so连接的并列句）
②we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after a day’s work.（because引导原因状语从句）
③We’d better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.（if引导条件状语从句）
（2023·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】例文
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact, he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求介绍自己最喜欢的书，包括其主要内容及喜欢它的理由；考生应按照要求写作，正确用词，使作文表达流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己最喜欢的书是什么；
第二步，详细介绍这本书的主要内容以及你喜欢它的理由；
第三步，介绍从这本书中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact 事实上
②try his best to do sth. 尽他最大的努力做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. (why引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
②I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.(because引导的原因状语从句)
（2023·山东东营·统考中考真题）
旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want to visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want to visit
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【答案】例文：
The place I want to visit
Beijing, the second largest city in our country, is the place I want to visit.
There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital of China, and has a history of more than 3,000 years. It has been the capital for many dynasties. Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are also some new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
I am really looking forward to going there and visiting all the wonderful places. At the same time, I hope Beijing will be more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“The place I want to visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里；
第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因；
第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth. 想要做某事
②such as 例如
③look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
④at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
①There are several reasons why I would like to visit Beijing.（why引导定语从句）
②Second, there are many historical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.（there be句型）
（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
2023年5月29日，习近平总书记在中共中央政治局第五次集体学习时强调，加快建设教育强国，就是培养一代又一代德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请根据以下提示，就“如何做一名新时代的中学生”，谈谈你的看法。
提示词：honest, keep one’s promise, take exercise, protect the environment, take an active part in…
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Teenagers are the builders and successors of our country. To be an excellent middle school student,
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【答案】例文
Teenagers are the builders and successors of our country. To be an excellent middle school student, we should try our best.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must be honest and keep our promise. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. And we should try our best to protect the environment. Last, we should take an acitive part in after-school activities.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍如何做一名新时代的中学生，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍应如何做一名新时代的中学生；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep one’s promise信守诺言
②be friendly to对某人友好
③take an active part in积极参加
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.(as long as引导的条件状语从句)
（2023·云南·统考中考真题）
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.
It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
[高分句型]
①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
（2023·浙江湖州·统考中考真题）
幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to
注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us.
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【答案】例文
Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life.
In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；
第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①the sense of……的感觉
②have to不得不
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）
（2023·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题）
劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives.
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【答案】例文
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么；
第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处；
第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
（2023·青海西宁·统考中考真题）
为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
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【答案】A possible version：
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.
My mum always encourages me and teaches me to do chores. She wants me to learn more life skills and take good care of myself in the future. Thanks to her help, I can make simple food, tidy my room, wash clothes and take the dog for walks. Recently I have also learned to make cookies in my labor class at school. Later, I hope to learn how to cook beef noodles, because my family are fond of them. Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and improve my life. During learning, I can have a better communication with my parents.
Doing chores makes me more independent, confident and sociable. The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步，分享自己会做的家务以及希望学哪些家务，并说说明原因；
第三步，介绍做家务给我带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②take good care of好好照顾
③be fond of喜欢
[高分句型]
①As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.（动名词作主语）
②The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!（the+比较级，the+比较级） 第25讲 书面表达之提纲作文（讲义）
目录
一 复习目标 掌握目标及备考方向
二 考情分析 提纲作文中考考情分析
三 提纲作文 的考向 1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。 2.提升语言质量。 3. 强化高效训练。 4.提升必考题型归纳
四 真题感悟 中考提纲作文经典考题精选
【复习目标】
1.精选写作话题，紧扣核心目标。
2.提升语言质量。
3. 强化高效训练。
【网络构建】
【考情分析】
提纲作文命题规律
【名师解难】
1.认真审题，找准思路
认真阅读题目所列出的提纲，分析、揣摩出题者的用意，确立文章的要点，找准写作的思路，即找到作文的突破点，围绕提纲内容尽量发散思维补充更多的内容。
2.初步构思，拟定提纲
整理、归纳能想到的信息，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并确定使用哪种体裁来进行写作，
确定人称、时态等细节。
3.连词成句，连句成文
根据题目所列提纲，用恰当的词语表达信息，再把词语组成句子，最后使用适当的
语把句子串联成文章。要注意连接顺畅，适度使用过渡词和过渡句。
提纲作文
必备亮点词汇
disadvantage n.不利，劣势 advantage n.优势，益处 strong point 优点 weakness n.弱点，缺点
favorable adj.有利的 beneficial adj.有利的，有益的 properly adu.适当地，恰当地
in my eyes 在我看来 as for me 对于我来说 from my point of view 从我的观点来看
I maintain that 我认为 it seems to me that 我认为 as far as I am concerned 在我看来
from where I stand 站在我的立场上
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
In my opinion,I...我认为，我······
Nowadays,there's a wide-spread concern about/that...如今，······引起了广泛的关注。图解
···play(s) an important role/place among...especially...······在······尤其是···.··中占有很重要的地位。
···has become a fashion in our daily life.······已成为我们日常生活的一种时尚。
It's often said that...我们常说······
It goes without saying that...不言而喻，······
As we all know/As is known to all...众所周知，······
···is a hot topic in society. Enough on it has been said about...······是当今社会的一个热门话题。有关它的······已经谈得很多了。
About this,views differ among different people.关于这点不同的人有着不同的看法。
As we all know,everybody can't live without smartphones.众所周知，任何人没有智能手机都是不能生活的。
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious problem about...现如今，存在着日益严重的关于······的问题。
出彩篇中句
Every coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性。图解
First,we should know...首先，我们要知道······
First of all,we have to admit that...has brought us...首先，我们不得不承认······给我们带来···.··
It can be easily proved that...很容易证明···.··
The reason why...is that...之所以······的原因是······
I think it is important to be polite to others.我认为对他人有礼貌是重要的。
There are two reasons why...为什么······,有两个原因。
For one thing, it only takes me two hours to fly to City A, which will make me less tired during the.journey.一个原因是，乘飞机去A城只需要两个小时，旅途中我不会太累。
There are several reasons as follows.有如下几条原因。。
精彩篇尾句
Weighing up the pros and cons,I think...is convenient.权衡利弊，我认为······很方便。
Therefore,students should...所以学生们应该······
···sets a good example for me......为我树立了良好的榜样。
On account of this,we can find that...据此，我们可以发现······
As far as I am concerned,...在我看来，······
典型模板
模板1 观点看法型
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________（问题）. For example, some _____________（例一）; some _____________（例二）; some _____________（例三）and still some _____________（例四）.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________（解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better _____________（解决方法二). Because, we should _____________（解决方法三）.
In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________.
【模板范文】
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is many students have bad eating habits. For example, some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks; some always like to eat the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods, such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. For another thing, we'd better have meals at the right time. Besides, we should not eat too much especially before we go to bed.
In my opinion, if we have god eating habits, we will have good health. And we can study beer.
模板2 经历感受型
______________(时间)，____________(人物)had a great time in/at
____________(地点).We arrived at/in____________(地点) early._____________(活动一的时间)，we_____________(活动一). _____________(活动二的时间)，we_____________(活动二). _____________(活动三的时间)，we_____________(活动三). _____________(回家的时间)，we started to go back home.
We enjoyed ourselves and I’m looking forward to going there next
time.
【模板范文】
Last Saturday，Peter and I had a great time in Central Park.
We arrived at the park early. In the morning，we climbed the mountains. We saw many beautiful flowers and monkeys along the way. When we reached the top, we found the air was much fresher. At noon, we had a picnic under a big tree. In the afternoon, we went boating on the lake. The water of the lake was very clear. At 5 p.m., we started to go back home.
We enjoyed ourselves and I’m looking forward to going there next time.
模板3 做法建议型
As is known to all of us，____________should____________.But do you know how？
First of all， we should ___________(建议一).Besides， it is also important for us to____________(建议二).What’s more， we should________________(建议三).
In my opinion， we should____________(总结、点题).Only in these ways can we_____________.
【模板范文】
How to get on well with others
As is known to all of us，students should learn how to get on well with others. But do you know how？
First of all， we should respect others. Everyone has his or her own way to do things，so we should understand each other. Besides，it is also important for us to talk with each other and share happiness and sadness. We can be closer to one another by communicating. What’s more，we should be kind to others and always give a hand to those who are in need.
In my opinion， we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get on well with others.
模板4 事物介绍型
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about /I’m glad to be here to talk about ________________________. (要介绍的内容)
_______________（提纲一）_______________（提纲二）_______________（提纲三）
All in all, I like _________________very much. What do you think of it Look forward to hearing from you!
【模板范文】
Dear David,
How’s everything going I’d like to tell you something about the song My Motherland.
This song was composed by Qiao Yu and by Liu Chi. Its lyrics are majestic and its melody is exciting. It was first sung on the film Battle On Shangganling Mountain.
When I was ten years old, I watched the movie. The song brought hope and strength to the wounded soldiers. At that moment, I was deeply moved.
Whenever I hear this song, I am proud of my motherland. It inspires me to study hard. In the future, I will try my best to contribute to our country and wish our country better and better.
All in all, I like the song very much. What do you think of it Look forward to hearing from you!
Li Hua
模板5 活动打算型
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called________________（活动名称）in our school.
The activity was held at_______________（具体时间） on/at ______________（地点）. In the beginning,________________（安排一）. After that, _____________(安排二). In the end,________________(安排三).
Through this activity, we will have a better understanding of ______________. I hope____________.
【模板范文】
Dear John，
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we will have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Jim
（2024·湖北·统考一模）
2024年春节即将来临，你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为 “My New Year’s Plans”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
Notice Chinese New Year is coming! You may have many great things to do. What are your New Year’s plans How are you going to achieve them You can talk about your bealth, hobbies, schoolwork and so on. Share with us! ENGLISH MONTHLY
要求:
（1）你的新年计划至少包含通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My New Year’s Plans
Chinese New Year is coming! I have many great things to do in the new year.
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（2024·辽宁·统考模拟预测）
假设你是李辉。初中生活即将结束，学校英语社团发起了毕业感言短视频征集活动。
请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为录制视频做准备。
要点如下：
(1)回顾过去；
(2)表达感谢；
(3)展望未来。
注意：
(1)词数80~100, 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am Li Hui. I am honored to share some of my thoughts and feelings with you.
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Thank you.
（2023·河南周口·校考三模）
河南是中华民族和华夏文明的重要发祥地。中华文明的起源、文字的发明、城市的形成和统一国家的建立，都与河南有着密不可分的关系。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Danny发邮件告诉你他想今年暑假到河南旅游，但他对河南不是很了解，想向你寻求建议。请你用英语写一封回信，为他推荐一个城市，帮助他度过一个愉快的假期。
写作要点：
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to hear you will visit Henan this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2023·浙江·模拟预测）
目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：
1. 主要原因；
2. 个人看法；
3. 注意：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）短文题目与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
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（2023·陕西西安·西安市铁一中学校考模拟预测）
俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place ”为主题的讨论，同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。假如你是王平，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。
●Spend more time with family ●Share happiness and worries ●Remember family’s birthdays ●Your idea…
参考词汇：
cheer...up, support each other, prepare gifts
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名，姓名，地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear editor,
I’m Wang Ping from Class 2, Grade 9. Recently, our class had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas.
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（2023·云南昆明·昆明八中校考模拟预测）
提示：在初中三年的学习生活中，好习惯伴随着你的成长和进步。播种习惯，收获性格；播种性格，收获命运。请你以“Good habits make me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好习惯对你学习或生活的影响。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Good habits make me ________
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（2023·黑龙江绥化·模拟预测）
亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，在此离别之际，恰逢学校英语报征稿，请你以“A/An__________ Person in My School Life”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）;
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整;
（3）词数不少于80词。
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（2023·吉林松原·统考模拟预测）
母亲节快到了，Tony准备给妈妈一个surprise。假设你是Tony，请你根据下面的提示与同学们分享你的母亲节设想。内容包括：
1. something about your mother when she was very young;
2. your plans for Mother’s Day;
3. your hope.
作文要求：
（1）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Mother’s Day is coming. It reminds me of my mother and something about her when she was very young.
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（2023·吉林长春·校联考模拟预测）
体育运动是校园生活中的重要组成部分。假定你是李华，你校英文网站的体育栏目正在征集稿件，请你以“Sports and I”为题，写一篇投稿。
要点：
1. 你对体育运动的理解；
2. 个人运动的经历和感受；
3. 呼吁大家热爱运动和生活。
要求：
1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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（2023·吉林长春·校联考模拟预测）
假如你是班长李华，你班的外教老师Ms. Steen即将回美国，你们将在下周五为她举行欢送会（send-off party）。请你给她写一封不少于40词的邀请函。
要点：1.时间：晚上6点；
2.地点：学校音乐厅
3.活动内容：品尝中国传统美食和欣赏学生民族舞表演（folk dance）；
4.期待 Ms. Steen 参加。
要求：字句工整；语法正确；信息齐全；简练得体。
Dear Ms. Steen,
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Li Hua
（2023·山西大同·统考模拟预测）
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
阅读可以使人更充实、丰富，可以滋润心灵，开启心智。No.1 Middle School针对学生在英语阅读方面存在的问题，对全校2, 300名学生进行了一次调查，下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 结合自身经历，谈谈你在英语阅读方面的困难和你是如何克服的。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
No.1 Middle School did a survey among 2, 300 students about the problems of their English reading. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2023·吉林长春·长春市解放大路学校校考模拟预测）
在生活中，有许多能触动我们心灵的词汇，如进步、坚持、拼搏、自信等，最能打动你的词是什么呢？请从下图所给的词汇中或其它词汇中选择一个你最喜欢的词，结合所见所闻或个人经历，以My favorite word is ________为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈你喜欢这个词的理由及带给你的感受。
要求：
（1）补全题目；
（2）表达真情实感；
（3）不得使用真实的姓名、校名；
（4）短文不少于80词。
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（2023·吉林长春·吉林省实验校考模拟预测）
你校英语俱乐部正在举办“弘扬中华传统美德”的征文活动。中华传统美德包括：热爱祖国、尊敬师长、乐于助人、勤学好问、诚实礼貌等很多内容。请你从中挑选一项内容，以“We should...”为题，写一篇短文参加征文活动。
提示：respect v./n. 尊敬
内容：1. 叙述你奉行美德的事例；
2. 谈谈作为中学生应该怎样传承和弘扬中华传统美德。
要求：1. 把题目补全完整；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
4. 不少于80词。
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（2023·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
某中学生英语杂志开展主题为“My favorite book”的征文活动，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文投稿，文中要包含这本书的主要内容和你喜爱它的理由。
注意：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。
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旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want to visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want to visit
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（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
2023年5月29日，习近平总书记在中共中央政治局第五次集体学习时强调，加快建设教育强国，就是培养一代又一代德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请根据以下提示，就“如何做一名新时代的中学生”，谈谈你的看法。
提示词：honest, keep one’s promise, take exercise, protect the environment, take an active part in…
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Teenagers are the builders and successors of our country. To be an excellent middle school student,
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（2023·云南·统考中考真题）
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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（2023·浙江湖州·统考中考真题）
幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to
注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us.
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（2023·辽宁朝阳·统考中考真题）
劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives.
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（2023·青海西宁·统考中考真题）
为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
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