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Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76. 假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友 Michael 来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动；
2）你所提建议的理田。
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Sample 1
Dear Michael,
I was absolutely delighted when I heard about your upcoming trip to China this summer! The prospect of exploring my hometown together fills me with excitement.
【prospect ≈ chance ≈ possibility 可能性】
亲爱的迈克尔:
当我听说你今年夏天要来中国旅行时，我非常高兴!一想到要一起探索家乡，我就兴奋不已。
Exploring the ancient town of Lijiang will start our adventure with an excellent beginning. Imagine cobblestone streets winding through traditional architecture, creating a charming scene. Here, we can also choose to leisurely boat on the serene Black Dragon Pool, soaking in the peaceful atmosphere. Moreover, with its long history and rich culture, the ancient city of Lijiang is sure to offer us a unique experience. And during our hike among the magnificent Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, we will witness
unforgettable scenery and experience exciting adventures.
游览丽江古城将为我们的探险之旅开一个好头。想象一下，鹅卵石街道蜿蜒穿过传统建筑，营造出迷人的景色。在这里，我们还可以选择悠闲地划船于怡人的黑龙潭，沉浸在宁静的氛围中。此外，凭借悠久的历史和丰富的文化，丽江古城一定会给我们带来独特的体验。在雄伟的玉龙雪山的徒步旅行中，我们将见证难忘的风景，体验激动人心的冒险之旅。
These encounters will undoubtedly enrich your comprehension and admiration of Chinese history, culture, and the breathtaking natural landscapes my hometown boasts. I
am eagerly anticipating being your guide and experiencing these unforgettable moments together!
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【体会副词 undoubtedly 的翻译技巧】
毫无疑问，这些经历将 丰富你对中国历史、文化和我家乡令人惊叹的自然景观的理解和钦佩 。我热切期待成为你们的导游，一起经历这些难忘的时刻!
你的,
张磊
Sample 2
Dear Michael,
I hope this letter finds you well. I was thrilled to hear that you're planning to visit China this summer, and I'd love to invite you to my hometown for an unforgettable experience.
【①时态不一致：I was thrilled to hear that you're planning to visit China…
② 体会…to …for …结构】
我希望你收到这封信一场安好。听说你打算今年夏天来中国，我很激动，我很想邀请你来我的家乡度过一段难忘的经历。
Firstly, I'd like to take you to the ancient town in our city, which is known for its well-preserved architecture and lively street food scene. We can explore the narrow lanes, taste delicious local food, and learn about the town's rich history. It's a great place to experience authentic Chinese culture.
【and 并列了三个什么？】
首先，我想带你们去我们城市的古镇，它以保存完好的建筑和充满活力的街头小吃而闻名。我们可以探索狭窄的小巷，品尝当地美食，了解小镇丰富的历史。那是体验正宗中国文化的好地方。
Another must-visit is the nearby national park, famous for its striking landscapes and peaceful atmosphere. We can go hiking to catch the sunrise from the top of the hill and possibly camp under the stars. It's a perfect way to connect with nature and escape the hustle and bustle of
citylife.
另一个必去的地万是附近的国家公园，以其令人惊叹的风景和宁静的氛围而闻名。我们可以去爬山看山项上的日出，还可以在星空下露营。这是一种亲近自然、逃离城市生活喧嚣的完美方式。
I suggest these places because I believe they represent the essence of my hometown's beauty and culture. The ancient town offers a glimpse into our past, while the national park displays the natural splendor of our region. I'm confident you'll enjoy exploring these spots as much as I do.
我推荐这些地方是因为我相信它们代表了我家乡的美丽和文化的精髓。古镇让我们一瞥我们的过去，而国家公园则展示了我们地区的自然风光。我相信你会像我一样喜欢探索这些地方。
Looking forward to your visit,
Zhang Lei
期待你的来访，
张磊
Sample 3
Dear Michael,
I was excited to hear that you're planning to visit China this summer vacation. I would like to invite you to come to my hometown and explore the beautiful places and participate in some interesting activities.
【①时态不一致？
② 中文的无主句源于先翻译不定式？
③ 两个and 在中文里面无影无踪？】
亲爱的迈克尔:
听说你打算今年暑假来中国旅游，我很兴奋。我想邀请你来我的家乡，探索美丽的地方，参加一些有趣的活动。
Firstly, I would like to take you to the famous mountains in my hometown, where you can enjoy the breathtaking scenery and fresh air. We can also climb to the top of the mountain and watch the sunrise, which is an unforgettable experience.
【① breathtaking adj.惊人的；惊险的；令人激动的≈ tremendous / incredible / spectacular / striking
② scenery ≈ beauty ≈ splendor ≈ attraction ≈ landscape ≈ 美景/风景。
③ 两个定语从句：翻译、作文 100%会用到 】
首先，我想带你去我家乡的名山，在那里你可以享受惊人的风景和新鲜的空气。我们还可以爬到山顶看日出，这是一次难忘的经历。
Secondly, I would like to introduce you to our traditional culture by visiting some historical sites and museums. You can learn about the rich history and unique customs of my hometown.
Lastly, we can go to the local market and try some delicious local food. I'm sure you will love the taste of our traditional dishes.
其次，我想通过参观一些历史遗迹和博物馆向你介绍我们的传统文化。你可以了解到我家乡丰富的历史和独特的风俗。最后，我们可以去当地市场，尝试一些当地美食。我相信你会喜欢我们传统菜肴的味道。
The reason why I suggest these activities is that I want you to have a comprehensive understanding of my hometown, not only its natural beauty but also its cultural heritage. I believe this will be a memorable experience for both of us.
Looking forward to your visit!
Best regards,
Zhang Lei
我建议这些活动的原因是我想让你对我的家乡有一个全面的了解，不仅是自然美景，还有文化遗产。我相信这将是我们双方难忘的经历。
期待您的光临!
致以最良好的问候，
张磊
Sample 4
Dear Michael,
I was excited to receive your letter saying that you plan to come to China for your summer vacation this year. I would like to invite you to visit my hometown, where I believe you will have a wonderful time.
亲爱的迈克尔:
我很高兴收到你的信，说你计划今年暑假来中国。我想邀请你来我的家乡玩，我相信你在那里会玩得很开心。
There are several places I would love to take you to. First, we can visit the ancient town, which is famous for its traditional architecture and cultural heritage. We can also explore the local markets together, where you can try some delicious local cuisine and purchase souvenirs to take home. Additionally, I would like to introduce you to the natural beauty of my hometown by taking you on a hike in the nearby mountains.
【你记住了吗？考过多次：souvenirs】
我想带你去几个地方。首先，我们可以参观古镇，古镇以其传统建筑和文化遗产而闻名。我们还可以一起逛逛当地的市场，在那里你可以品尝到美味的当地美食，并购买纪念品带回家。此外，我想带你去附近的山上远足，向你介绍我家乡的自然美景。（两个“美”的英语不一样）
I believe these suggestions will give you a taste of the rich culture and natural wonders of my hometown. I am confident that you will have a memorable vacation and I am looking forward to spending time with you.
Best regards,
Zhang Lei
我相信这些建议会让你领略到我家乡丰富的文化和自然奇观。我相信你会有一个难忘的假期，我期待着与你共度时光。
致以最良好的问候，
张磊

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