资源简介 21.应用文写作(考情分析与写人记事)【题型总览】【考情分析】课标解读 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达 考生应能: 1.清楚、连贯地传递信息, 表达意思; 2.有效运用所学语言知识考试 年份 试卷名称 命题形式 写作文体 主题语境 写作话题 写作内容2023 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 建议信 人与社会 学校生活 针对分组存在问题提出建议2022 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 邀请信 人与社会 学校生活 邀请外教做一次访谈6月浙江卷 提纲 邀请信 人与社会 学校生活 邀请同学一起前往图书馆自习室1月浙江卷 提纲 邮件 人与社会 日常生活 分享文化节活动经历2021 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 投稿 人与社会 学校生活 庆祝创刊十周年6月浙江卷 提纲 投稿 人与社会 学校生活 参观学校举办的学生国画作品展1月浙江卷 提纲 发言稿 人与社会 学校生活 写发言稿欢迎来访学生【考向分析】选题特点 体裁和题材相对稳定。以应用文为主, 选材内容均与学生学习、生活及社会热点相关素养考查 中国的传统文化仍旧是考查的重点, 借用体裁蕴含其中, 体现英语学科的核心素养, 体现人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题, 体现立德树人、家国情怀、文化使命等命题特点 命题形式较为稳定。提纲类写作成为主流, 提示内容较为开放文体不再拘泥于书信体,报道、通知、发言稿等各种应用文体都有可能涉及与考生的学习和生活密切相关。话题涵盖学校生活、社会生活、参观旅行、人物介绍、课外活动等方面话题场景性和真实性突出,体现中外交流和正能量汉语提示简洁,要点明确,任务具体,考生的可发挥性强[真题示例](2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.说明问题; 2.提出建议。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua考场答题五步法 第一步:审题立意 (1)体裁:建议信 (2)时态:一般现在时为主 (3)人称:第三人称为主 (4)要点:针对外教Ryan随机挑选两个人分成一组练习这件事,说明问题;然后提出自己的一些合理的建议。 第二步:谋篇布局 Para.1:The purpose of writing the email Para.2:The problems that may arise from randomly pairing up students for the spoken English training class Para.3:My suggestions 第三步:要点盘点 第一段:表明写作目的,对随机挑选两个人分成一组练习提出反对意见。 (1)我认为在英语口语训练班随机挑选两个人分成一组练习是不好的。 I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. 第二段:文章主体内容。1.问题之一 2.问题之二 (2)如果和相处不好的或交流困难的人分成一组,学生可能会感觉不舒服或不积极。 Students may feel uncomfortable or less active if they are paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. (3)由于语言能力的不均衡,在同一组里一些口语较好的学生可能发现和只能进行基本谈话的学生交流太难,这可能对有效的交流产生坏的影响。 Due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it hard to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group.It is likely to have a bad effect on the effective communication. 第三段:提出建议 (4)为了营造支持学习且高效的学习环境,学生最好能根据他们的语言能力和个人爱好选择他们自己的伙伴。 In order to build a supportive and productive learning environment, it is better that students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. 第四段:收尾点题,希望对方考虑自己的建议。 (5)我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议。 I sincerely hope you can take my advice into consideration.第四步:润色升级 1.用状语从句的省略改写句(2),并升级加黑词汇。 Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. 2.用非限制性定语从句改写句(3),并升级加黑词汇。 Due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it tough to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group, which is likely to have a bad impact on the effective communication. 第五步:认真誊写 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class.I have a few reasons for my opinion. First of all, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.Besides, due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it tough to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group, which is likely to have a bad impact on the effective communication. In my view, in order to build a supportive and productive learning environment, it is better that students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. I sincerely hope you can take my advice into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【题型精析】写作类型1：人物描写人物描写是对杰出人物或者平凡人物的描写,都要从小处入手,描述其令人尊重和爱戴的原因,最好有细节描写或者举例说明。【必备句式】开 头 句 1.be admitted to...university 2.graduate from...department of...university 3.receive / get a master’s / doctor’s degree 4.When at college, he majored in English.=..., he was an English major. 5.gain/win/be awarded the first prize/place正 文 句 1.set a good example to sb./set sb. a good example 2.speak / think highly of... 3.be honored as... 4.make great contributions to 5....is a near-sighted/far-sighted boy with a pair of glasses on his nose.结 尾 句 1.He set a new world record of...which makes a great contribution to... 2....always behaves himself well. 3....is not only gifted but also diligent. 4....is very popular with the young. 5....is majoring in music at Zhongshan University.【真题示例】(2023·全国甲卷改编)学校举办以“用英文讲中国故事”为主题的征文活动,请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介和事迹;2.启示;3.意义。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Living in a golden age of Chinese poetry, Li Bai was best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry as well as for his great love for wine.His poetry, transcending time and space, communicates universal themes of nature’s beauty and human longing for freedom.Many of his poems have remained today, having a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. His legacy inspires us to express our inner feelings and views of the world.His artistic mastery reminds us of the power of words, urging us to engage with our own creative pursuits, shaping the world with our unique voices.写作类型2：活动介绍活动介绍类一般涉及计划安排类或活动回忆类,应该有活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及感受等。如果是计划安排类,时态应该用一般将来时;如果是活动回忆类,应该用一般过去时。【必备句式】开 头 句 1.The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of, which turned out to be a great success. 2.Not only does it build up our body, but also enriches our school life. 3.Undoubtedly these events have received high praise and everyone feels prouder of the school than ever before.正 文 句 1.Then followed a big party, where everyone had the opportunity to appreciate many a beautiful song and eye-catching talent show. 2.Never shall I forget the special Teachers’ Day. 3.Last Sunday witnessed a grand Coming of Age Ceremony held in our school. 4.The ceremony we had long awaited fell on...结 尾 句 1.A lot of famous schoolmates will attend the ceremony. 2.What’s more, there will be plenty of wonderful performances. 3.Meanwhile, you can take photos of the ceremony if you like. 4.It is a pleasure to welcome you to the anniversary.【真题示例】(2023·全国乙卷改编)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述在暑假所学到的一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 This summer, I decided to learn photography and it turned out to be an amazing journey. Started by researching different cameras and techniques, I enrolled in an online course to learn the basics of composition and lighting.It was challenging at first, but with practice and determination, I gradually improved.During the learning process, I encountered difficulties like understanding manual settings and capturing the perfect shot.However, I didn’t give up and sought guidance from experienced photographers.Their advice and encouragement helped me overcome the challenges. Learning photography has been an enriching experience.【题型精练】1．你班举行“Across the World”微话题英语口语活动，请根据下表内容，简单介绍新西兰。地理位置 太平洋上的岛国，由两个大岛组成。产业 重要农业国；主要出口羊毛、羊肉、牛肉、林产品、水果和蔬菜；葡萄酒质量很高，行销全世界。体育与假日 航海、游泳、骑马、攀岩；到山里或海滨露营。自然与动物 自然美，吸引游客；国鸟“几维”, 不会飞。注意：1. 词数：80-90左右； 2. 参考词汇：几维鸟—kiwi___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】New Zealand, an important agricultural country, is made up of two large islands in the Pacific Ocean. The main exports are wool, mutton, beef, forest products, fruit and vegetables. New Zealand is famous for its wine, which is of high quality and sells well across the world. People in New Zealand like to go sailing, swimming, horse-riding and rock-climbing. Many families go camping in the hills or on the coast. Besides, kivi, indigenous to New Zealand, is its national bird, The bird’s wings are very short and can not fly. New Zealand, with its natural beauty, attracts tourists from all over the world.【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生根据表格内容，简单介绍新西兰。【解析】1.词汇积累由……组成：be made up of→consist of喜欢：like→be fond of此外：besides→in addition吸引：attract→appeal to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：New Zealand, an important agricultural country, is made up of two large islands in the Pacific Ocean.拓展句：New Zealand, which is made up of two large islands in the Pacific Ocean, is an important agricultural country.[高分句型1]New Zealand is famous for its wine, which is of high quality and sells well across the world.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]People in New Zealand like to go sailing, swimming, horse-riding and rock-climbing.（运用了动词不定式作宾语）2．假如你是李华，假期在理想身材健身训练营(Dream Body Fitness Camp)做兼职。请你写一篇短文，向身边的外国朋友们推荐这个训练营。要点如下：1. 地址：国家公园内；2. 服务项目：组织健身活动，如徒步旅行、练瑜伽(yoga)、街舞等；量身定做健康减肥食谱；二十日体能训练计划帮助养成定期锻炼的习惯；3. 特点：环境优美，教练专业。注意：1. 词数在120左右。2. 可以根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Dream Body Fitness Camp is located in the national park. It is a unique training environment for you to increase your physical strength and lose weight.Come and join Dream Body Fitness Camp. The reason why I recommend Dream Body Fitness Camp to you is that you will find a variety of fitness training opportunities such as hiking, yoga classes, street dance classes and so on. What’s more, we offer a balanced diet based on your condition. A 20-day physical training program will help you get into the habit of taking regular exercise.Please contact us as soon as possible. Our professional trainers and beautiful scenery will never disappoint you!【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文，向身边的外国朋友们推荐理想身材健身训练营(Dream Body Fitness Camp)。【解析】1.词汇积累坐落于：be located in →be situated in各种各样的：a variety of →varieties of而且：what’s more →in addition联系：contact→get in touch with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Our professional trainers and beautiful scenery will never disappoint you!拓展句：I am sure that our professional trainers and beautiful scenery will never disappoint you!【高分句型1】What’s more, we offer a balanced diet based on your condition.(运用了过去分词短语作定语)【高分句型2】The reason why I recommend Dream Body Fitness Camp to you is that you will find a variety of fitness training opportunities such as hiking, yoga classes, street dance classes and so on.(运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句)3．每年春节，是我们最盛大的一个节日。人们买年货、贴春联、拜年贺岁……告别过去，迎接新的播种和收获。在你的记忆中，哪一年的春节让你印象最深刻？为什么？请以“A Special Spring Festival”为题写一篇英语短文，进行描述，并谈一谈你的收获和感悟。要求：(1)语言表达准确，语句连贯通顺；(2)短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；(3)词数 80 左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。A Special Spring Festival___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】A Special Spring FestivalThis Spring Festival was quite special in 2020. Because of COVID 19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped parents with housework like cooking. And I learnt how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.I will never forget this special Spring Festival. What I learnt during this period will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A Special Spring Festival”为题写一篇英语短文。【解析】1.词汇积累因为：because of→due to结果：as a result→as a consequence帮助：help→assist影响：influence→impact2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.拓展句：Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents, as a result of which I learnt to get on better with them.【高分句型1】As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】What I learnt during this period will surely influence my future life.（运用了what引导主语从句）4．近年来，我国旅游业发展日新月异，但是许多景区的环境却被严重污染，触目惊心。假如你是李华，寒假期间你目睹了许多游客的不文明行为，为了改善你家乡的景区环境，请你以“How to Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇短文。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。How to Be a Civilized Tourist___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】How to Be a Civilized TouristWith the winter holiday coming, thousands of people pour into the tourist sites. But some tourists have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. So it’s important to know how to be a civilized tourist.First, we should protect the natural environment. Don’t throw rubbish away or draw anywhere. Besides, when we cross roads, we must obey the traffic rules. Also in public places, we are supposed to wait in line and mustn’t talk loudly. Finally, wherever we go, we should respect local customs and traditions. Just keep it in mind that whenever we travel at home or abroad, we are representing the country to the rest of the world.To be a civilized tourist will help build a better society. Let’s become civilized tourists!【写作分析】本文是开放式作文。近年来，我国旅游业发展日新月异，但是许多景区的环境却被严重污染，触目惊心。目睹许多游客的不文明行为，为了改善你家乡的景区环境要求考生以“How to Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇短文。【解析】1.词汇积累重要的：important→vital此外：besides→morever记住：keep sth. in mind→bear sth. in mind代表：represent→stand for2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the winter holiday coming, thousands of people pour into the tourist sites.拓展句：As the winter holiday is coming, thousands of people pour into the tourist sites.【高分句型1】But some tourists have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest.（运用了状语从句的省略）【高分句型2】Just keep it in mind that whenever we travel at home or abroad, we are representing the country to the rest of the world.（运用了that引导宾语从句，whenever引导状语从句）5．上周末你和朋友到你们当地山村参加志愿活动，请写一篇短文介绍你的此次经历。 内容包括：1.你的经历；2.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Last weekend I, together with my friend, participated in a voluntary activity in a local mountain village. During the voluntary activity, we were first shown around the village and then given a lecture about the elderly living there, their situations and the care they could receive. Finally we were allowed to care for some of them and had a heart-to-heart talk.Through this unforgettable activity I realize that the elderly are lonely sometimes, who are badly in need of someone to chat with. Thus, as children, we should spare more time to accompany them. What we should do is give them more care instead of more money.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍上周末你和朋友到你们当地山村参加志愿活动的经历和感受。【解析】1.词汇积累参加：participate in→take part in演讲：give a lecture→make a speech照顾：care for→take care of难忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last weekend I, together with my friend, participated in a voluntary activity in a local mountain village.拓展句：Last weekend I, together with my friend, went to a local mountain village where we participated in a voluntary activity.[高分句型1] Through this unforgettable activity I realize that the elderly are lonely sometimes, who are badly in need of someone to chat with. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和who引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] What we should do is give them more care instead of more money. (运用了what引导的主语从句)6．写一篇关于水污染的文章，体现以下三点：1.水污染的原因2.水污染的后果3.如何控制水污染注意：写作词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Water pollutionThere are various causes of water pollution.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Water pollutionThere are various causes of water pollution. Much industrial waste poison the water after they enter water bodies. Moreover, animal and human waste pollutes the water. Water pollution is also caused by poisonous chemicals used in agriculture.Polluted water bodies not only do harm to animals and plants, they also have a long-lasting effect on humans.To prevent further damage to water bodies, it is necessary to take some measures. First, we must draw public attention to the problem. Second, more strict laws should be passed to help reduce water pollution. Third, we can volunteer to take part in clean-up activities.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇关于水污染的文章。【解析】1.词汇积累各种各样：various→a variety of此外：moreover→besides必要的：necessary→essential长期的：long-lasting→long-term2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To prevent further damage to water bodies, it is necessary to take some measures.拓展句：It is necessary to take some measures, which can prevent further damage to water bodies.[高分句型1] Much industrial waste poison the water after they enter water bodies. (运用了after引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2] To prevent further damage to water bodies, it is necessary to take some measures.(运用了不定式作目的状语)7．高中生的年龄是一个充满美好和遐想的年龄，每位高中生都对自己的将来有着美好的期待。请以“What will I be like in ten years ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：1. 学历和专业；2. 工作(从事的职业，工作时间等)；3. 生活(包括业余爱好，日常交往等)；4. 实现上述愿望的途径。注意：1. 词数100左右(短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)；2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：专业 majorWhat will I be like in ten years In ten years I will be more mature and confident._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】What will I be like in ten years In ten years I will be more mature and confident. I will have achieved a master degree by then. My major will be traditional Chinese medicinal science which I have been caring for, and I will devote myself to curing the sick and the development of the very science. As a doctor, I will work in some hospital from Monday to Friday. But at some weekends I’d like to call on some patients who are too old to walk.Also I’d like to read some books on traditional medicine in my spare time. I will make friends with my patients and chatting with them is my great pleasure. Maybe I will not make much money, but I enjoy my work, which will surely bring me happiness.Now I know it’s only my dream and to realize my dream, I should make great efforts. I believe hard work can bridge the distance between dream and reality.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生以“What will I be like in ten years ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍十年后自己的学历和专业、工作(从事的职业，工作时间等)、生活(包括业余爱好，日常交往等)，并讲述实现上述愿望的途径。【解析】1. 词汇积累喜欢：care for→be fond of致力于：devote oneself to→be dedicated to/be devoted to拜访：call on→visit/drop in on赚钱：make money→earn money2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Maybe I will not make much money, but I enjoy my work, which will surely bring me happiness.拓展句：Although maybe I will not make much money, I enjoy my work, which will surely bring me happiness.【高分句型1】My major will be traditional Chinese medicinal science which I have been caring for, and I will devote myself to curing the sick and the development of the very science.(使用了which引导定语从句)【高分句型2】But at some weekends I’d like to call on some patients who are too old to walk. (运用了who引导定语从句)8．近年来，学生越来越广泛地使用电子词典，它既给学生带来了便利，也给学生带来了一些负面影响。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1. 电子词典的优点；2. 电子词典的缺点；3. 你的观点和结论。注意：词数80左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The discussion about electronic dictionaries has never stopped in the past few years.An electronic dictionary has lots of advantages, of which the biggest is its convenience. What’s more, they can pronounce the words clearly. Last but not least, more and more students can afford them.However, the negative effects of an electronic dictionary are also obvious. To begin with, some students rely too much on them. In the second place, some explanations are not so accurate.Now, we can see it clearly that an electronic dictionary is neither beneficial nor harmful in itself. The key lies in the user—so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学生越来越广泛地使用电子词典，它既给学生带来了便利，也给学生带来了一些负面影响。要求考生写一篇英语短文阐述电子词典的优点、缺点以及自己的观点和结论。【解析】1. 词汇积累此外：what’s more→in addition明显的：obvious→apparent首先：to begin with→in the first place正确的，恰当的：proper→appropriate2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Last but not least, more and more students can afford them.拓展句：Last but not least, electronic dictionaries are not expensive so that more and more students can afford them.【高分句型1】An electronic dictionary has lots of advantages, of which the biggest is its convenience. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】The key lies in the user — so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects. (运用了so long as引导的状语从句)21.应用文写作(考情分析与写人记事)【题型总览】【考情分析】课标解读 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达 考生应能: 1.清楚、连贯地传递信息, 表达意思; 2.有效运用所学语言知识考试 年份 试卷名称 命题形式 写作文体 主题语境 写作话题 写作内容2023 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 建议信 人与社会 学校生活 针对分组存在问题提出建议2022 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 邀请信 人与社会 学校生活 邀请外教做一次访谈6月浙江卷 提纲 邀请信 人与社会 学校生活 邀请同学一起前往图书馆自习室1月浙江卷 提纲 邮件 人与社会 日常生活 分享文化节活动经历2021 新高考Ⅰ卷 提纲 投稿 人与社会 学校生活 庆祝创刊十周年6月浙江卷 提纲 投稿 人与社会 学校生活 参观学校举办的学生国画作品展1月浙江卷 提纲 发言稿 人与社会 学校生活 写发言稿欢迎来访学生【考向分析】选题特点 体裁和题材相对稳定。以应用文为主, 选材内容均与学生学习、生活及社会热点相关素养考查 中国的传统文化仍旧是考查的重点, 借用体裁蕴含其中, 体现英语学科的核心素养, 体现人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题, 体现立德树人、家国情怀、文化使命等命题特点 命题形式较为稳定。提纲类写作成为主流, 提示内容较为开放文体不再拘泥于书信体,报道、通知、发言稿等各种应用文体都有可能涉及与考生的学习和生活密切相关。话题涵盖学校生活、社会生活、参观旅行、人物介绍、课外活动等方面话题场景性和真实性突出,体现中外交流和正能量汉语提示简洁,要点明确,任务具体,考生的可发挥性强[真题示例](2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.说明问题; 2.提出建议。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua考场答题五步法 第一步:审题立意 (1)体裁:建议信 (2)时态:一般现在时为主 (3)人称:第三人称为主 (4)要点:针对外教Ryan随机挑选两个人分成一组练习这件事,说明问题;然后提出自己的一些合理的建议。 第二步:谋篇布局 Para.1:The purpose of writing the email Para.2:The problems that may arise from randomly pairing up students for the spoken English training class Para.3:My suggestions 第三步:要点盘点 第一段:表明写作目的,对随机挑选两个人分成一组练习提出反对意见。 (1)我认为在英语口语训练班随机挑选两个人分成一组练习是不好的。 I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. 第二段:文章主体内容。1.问题之一 2.问题之二 (2)如果和相处不好的或交流困难的人分成一组,学生可能会感觉不舒服或不积极。 Students may feel uncomfortable or less active if they are paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. (3)由于语言能力的不均衡,在同一组里一些口语较好的学生可能发现和只能进行基本谈话的学生交流太难,这可能对有效的交流产生坏的影响。 Due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it hard to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group.It is likely to have a bad effect on the effective communication. 第三段:提出建议 (4)为了营造支持学习且高效的学习环境,学生最好能根据他们的语言能力和个人爱好选择他们自己的伙伴。 In order to build a supportive and productive learning environment, it is better that students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. 第四段:收尾点题,希望对方考虑自己的建议。 (5)我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议。 I sincerely hope you can take my advice into consideration.第四步:润色升级 1.用状语从句的省略改写句(2),并升级加黑词汇。 Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. 2.用非限制性定语从句改写句(3),并升级加黑词汇。 Due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it tough to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group, which is likely to have a bad impact on the effective communication. 第五步:认真誊写 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class.I have a few reasons for my opinion. First of all, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.Besides, due to imbalanced language abilities, some students with advanced speaking skills may find it tough to talk with those with basic conversation skills in the same group, which is likely to have a bad impact on the effective communication. In my view, in order to build a supportive and productive learning environment, it is better that students can choose their own partners based on their language abilities and personal preferences. I sincerely hope you can take my advice into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【题型精析】写作类型1：人物描写人物描写是对杰出人物或者平凡人物的描写,都要从小处入手,描述其令人尊重和爱戴的原因,最好有细节描写或者举例说明。【必备句式】开 头 句 1.be admitted to...university 2.graduate from...department of...university 3.receive / get a master’s / doctor’s degree 4.When at college, he majored in English.=..., he was an English major. 5.gain/win/be awarded the first prize/place正 文 句 1.set a good example to sb./set sb. a good example 2.speak / think highly of... 3.be honored as... 4.make great contributions to 5....is a near-sighted/far-sighted boy with a pair of glasses on his nose.结 尾 句 1.He set a new world record of...which makes a great contribution to... 2....always behaves himself well. 3....is not only gifted but also diligent. 4....is very popular with the young. 5....is majoring in music at Zhongshan University.【真题示例】(2023·全国甲卷改编)学校举办以“用英文讲中国故事”为主题的征文活动,请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介和事迹;2.启示;3.意义。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Living in a golden age of Chinese poetry, Li Bai was best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry as well as for his great love for wine.His poetry, transcending time and space, communicates universal themes of nature’s beauty and human longing for freedom.Many of his poems have remained today, having a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. His legacy inspires us to express our inner feelings and views of the world.His artistic mastery reminds us of the power of words, urging us to engage with our own creative pursuits, shaping the world with our unique voices.写作类型2：活动介绍活动介绍类一般涉及计划安排类或活动回忆类,应该有活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及感受等。如果是计划安排类,时态应该用一般将来时;如果是活动回忆类,应该用一般过去时。【必备句式】开 头 句 1.The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of, which turned out to be a great success. 2.Not only does it build up our body, but also enriches our school life. 3.Undoubtedly these events have received high praise and everyone feels prouder of the school than ever before.正 文 句 1.Then followed a big party, where everyone had the opportunity to appreciate many a beautiful song and eye-catching talent show. 2.Never shall I forget the special Teachers’ Day. 3.Last Sunday witnessed a grand Coming of Age Ceremony held in our school. 4.The ceremony we had long awaited fell on...结 尾 句 1.A lot of famous schoolmates will attend the ceremony. 2.What’s more, there will be plenty of wonderful performances. 3.Meanwhile, you can take photos of the ceremony if you like. 4.It is a pleasure to welcome you to the anniversary.【真题示例】(2023·全国乙卷改编)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述在暑假所学到的一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 This summer, I decided to learn photography and it turned out to be an amazing journey. Started by researching different cameras and techniques, I enrolled in an online course to learn the basics of composition and lighting.It was challenging at first, but with practice and determination, I gradually improved.During the learning process, I encountered difficulties like understanding manual settings and capturing the perfect shot.However, I didn’t give up and sought guidance from experienced photographers.Their advice and encouragement helped me overcome the challenges. Learning photography has been an enriching experience.【题型精练】1．你班举行“Across the World”微话题英语口语活动，请根据下表内容，简单介绍新西兰。地理位置 太平洋上的岛国，由两个大岛组成。产业 重要农业国；主要出口羊毛、羊肉、牛肉、林产品、水果和蔬菜；葡萄酒质量很高，行销全世界。体育与假日 航海、游泳、骑马、攀岩；到山里或海滨露营。自然与动物 自然美，吸引游客；国鸟“几维”, 不会飞。注意：1. 词数：80-90左右； 2. 参考词汇：几维鸟—kiwi___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，假期在理想身材健身训练营(Dream Body Fitness Camp)做兼职。请你写一篇短文，向身边的外国朋友们推荐这个训练营。要点如下：1. 地址：国家公园内；2. 服务项目：组织健身活动，如徒步旅行、练瑜伽(yoga)、街舞等；量身定做健康减肥食谱；二十日体能训练计划帮助养成定期锻炼的习惯；3. 特点：环境优美，教练专业。注意：1. 词数在120左右。2. 可以根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．每年春节，是我们最盛大的一个节日。人们买年货、贴春联、拜年贺岁……告别过去，迎接新的播种和收获。在你的记忆中，哪一年的春节让你印象最深刻？为什么？请以“A Special Spring Festival”为题写一篇英语短文，进行描述，并谈一谈你的收获和感悟。要求：(1)语言表达准确，语句连贯通顺；(2)短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；(3)词数 80 左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。A Special Spring Festival___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．近年来，我国旅游业发展日新月异，但是许多景区的环境却被严重污染，触目惊心。假如你是李华，寒假期间你目睹了许多游客的不文明行为，为了改善你家乡的景区环境，请你以“How to Be a Civilized Tourist”为题写一篇短文。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。How to Be a Civilized Tourist___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．上周末你和朋友到你们当地山村参加志愿活动，请写一篇短文介绍你的此次经历。 内容包括：1.你的经历；2.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．写一篇关于水污染的文章，体现以下三点：1.水污染的原因2.水污染的后果3.如何控制水污染注意：写作词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Water pollutionThere are various causes of water pollution.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．高中生的年龄是一个充满美好和遐想的年龄，每位高中生都对自己的将来有着美好的期待。请以“What will I be like in ten years ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：1. 学历和专业；2. 工作(从事的职业，工作时间等)；3. 生活(包括业余爱好，日常交往等)；4. 实现上述愿望的途径。注意：1. 词数100左右(短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)；2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：专业 majorWhat will I be like in ten years In ten years I will be more mature and confident._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．近年来，学生越来越广泛地使用电子词典，它既给学生带来了便利，也给学生带来了一些负面影响。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1. 电子词典的优点；2. 电子词典的缺点；3. 你的观点和结论。注意：词数80左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源列表 题型精析21.应用文写作(考情分析与写人记事)(原卷版).docx 题型精析21.应用文写作(考情分析与写人记事)(解析版).docx
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