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When I was a kid , my parents and I lived near the forest . They often told me that our family was a team that needed to work together for the household to function smoothly . There was always an abundance of work to do - cooking , cleaning , and walking dogs . I volunteered to walk our dog , Max , who had been adopted one month before . I never dared let this giant dog off the lead ，just in case he took off .
当我还是个孩子的时候，我和父母住在森林附近。他们经常告诉我，我们的家庭是一个团队，需要齐心协力才能让家庭顺利运转。总是有很多工作要做——做饭、打扫卫生和遛狗。我自愿为我们的狗Max遛狗，它在一个月前被收养。我从来不敢让这只大狗离开牵狗的绳索，以防它跑掉。
One morning , we were walking along in the forest when Max started pulling on the lead . At first , I was able to hold on despite the wet ground from a recent shower . But the more I tried to stop him pulling , the more it turned into a tug of war . And thanks to the slippery ground , I lost .
一天早上，我们在森林里散步时，马克斯开始拉铅。起初，尽管最近阵雨导致地面潮湿，我还是能够坚持下去。但我越是想阻止他拉，就越是变成了一场拔河比赛。多亏了湿滑的地面，我输了。
Pulling his lead , Max shot off like a bullet , leaving me screaming behind . I chased him but lost my footing and fell face - first into some mud . I stumbled to my feet but looking ahead , I found him running back towards me . I thought he was going to stop and give me his " Sorry " look . But instead , the dog shot past me and returned after a while .
拉他的牵狗绳，马克斯像子弹一样射击，留下我尖叫。我追着他，但失去了平衡，脸朝下倒在泥里。我跌跌撞撞地边走边向前看，我发现他向我跑回来。我以为他会停下来给我一副“对不起”的表情。但相反，狗从我身边飞过，过了一会儿又回来了。
As soon as we got home , my mother immediately attended to Max with a warm towel and a doggy treat . I thought seeing me stumbling and covered in mud , I would also get a warm cup of tea and a motherly kiss . Instead , I got a very loud lecture about letting the dog loose in the forest .
我们一回到家，我妈妈马上用一条温暖的毛巾和一份小狗零食照顾马克斯。我以为看到我跌跌撞撞，浑身是泥，我也会得到一杯温暖的茶和一个母爱的吻。相反，我得到了一个非常响亮的关于让狗在森林里放松的教训。
I felt frustrated . It wasn ' t fair that she didn ' t understand how difficult it was to control Max . I fought back ," Stop lecturing me ! Why is everything my fault " With these words , I stormed into my bedroom and slammed the door shut .
我感到沮丧。她不明白控制麦克斯有多困难这是不公平的。我反击了“别对我说教了！为什么一切都是我的错？”说完这些话，我冲进卧室，砰的一声关上了门。
In the evening , I heard my mother call Max and take him out . It wasn ' t long before I heard my mother screaming and the door opening again .
晚上，我听到妈妈叫马克斯带他出去。没多久我就听到妈妈尖叫，门又开了。
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1
I walked out of my room .
Para2
Dad stepped in , suggesting that we work together to train Max .
故事梗概：
我小时候，和父母一起住在森林附近。他们告诉我，家人就应该互相合作。于是我主动承担起了遛狗任务。Max是我们一个月前刚收养的狗子，大型犬。有一天，当我在森林附近遛他时，他挣脱了我的牵引绳，我抓他时，摔了个嘴啃泥。等我带他回到家，妈妈责备我没有遛好Max，我生气地冲进了自己房间。晚上时，我听见妈妈带Max出门遛了，不久之后我听到了妈妈的尖叫，之后门又打开了。
续写情节发展：
第一段：
结果看到他们都糊了一身泥。
马克斯带着我母亲在森林里进行了另一次疯狂的追逐。
当我看到母亲歉意的表情时，我的沮丧情绪消失了。
妈妈轻声道歉，很抱歉刚才骂你
在快速淋浴后，她然后分享了她自己与马克斯的冒险
看来我们对这只狗都束手无策了。
第二段：
接下来的几天里，我们教马克斯基本的命令，这并不容易，2.渐渐地，马克斯开始对我们有更好的反应。
3.我们阻止他挣脱的那一刻，他坐下来，眼睛专注地看着我们。
4.在这个过程中，我们和马斯克建立了更亲密的联系bond。5.主旨升华---我们意识到，我们需要互相支持，以确保一切顺利。
参考例文：
I walked out of my room . Not surprisingly , they were both covered in mud . It was evident that Max had led my mother on another wild chase through the forest . My frustration melted away as I saw my mother ' s apologetic expression ." Sweetheart ," my mom said softly ," I ' m sorry for scolding you earlier ." After a quick shower , she then shared her own adventure with Max and how he also managed to escape from her grasp , when I served her a warm cup of tea . It seemed we were both at our wits ' end with this dog .
Dad stepped in , suggesting that we work together to train Max . We spent the next few days teaching Max basic commands like " sit "," stay ", and " come back ". It wasn ' t easy , but gradually , Max started responding better to us . The instant we tried to stop him pulling , he sat down with eyes looking intently at us . In the process , not only did Max become more obedient , but our family also grew closer . We realized that every member of our team played an important role , and we needed to support each other to ensure everything ran smoothly .
下水文：
P1:1 walked out of my room. My curiosity piqued by the noise outside. Edging(渐渐移动)towards the front door, I saw my mother struggling to keep Max under control as he darted around(扫视四周) eagerly.Together, we managed to calm Max down, his tail wagging sheepishly(难为情的;不好意思的) as if he knew he'd caused a stir. My mother looked at me, her frustration fading into relief, and l realized that maybe this was an opportunity to improve how we handled Max's walks. "We need to figure this out together,"l said.hoping to ease the tension and find a solution as a team,just like my parents always emphasized about family.
P2: Dad stepped in, suggesting that we work together to train Max. "Let's turn this into a team effort," he said, his voice full of conviction that sparked(引发;触发)a new enthusiasm in us all. We started training Max the next morning, using positive reinforcement techniques that captivated (吸引)his attention and prompted(促使)quick learning. As we all took turns working with Max, not only did his behavior improve, but the shared activity seemed to stitch our family closer together. Each command he followed, each trick he mastered, brought a sparkle(闪烁(或闪耀)的光) to our collective eye and made our daily sessions(-段时间)a highlight, transforming our previous frustrations into moments of joy and connection.

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