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2024年中考英语复习 书面表达 江苏省模拟汇编
1．（2024·江苏南京·一模）英文校刊Sunshine for Teens面向九年级学生征文。请你根据下面征文要求，以“The teacher I will never forget”为题，写一篇征文。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右 (征文开头不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
The teacher I will never forget
During the past three years in our school, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
My Favourite City
My favourite city is ___________________________________________________________
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I hope you can visit it some day.
3．（2024·江苏徐州·一模）本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议)，向社团投稿。
写作要点
1. What outdoor activity do you like
2. Why do you like it
3. What is your plan (when, where, what to do…)
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数90左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear that there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
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Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
4．（2024·江苏常州·一模）中考临近，很多同学为了能取得好成绩，经常熬夜复习，这对身体健康产生了较大的影响。请你就“Staying up late”这一话题发表你的看法，内容需包括：
（1）除了影响健康，熬夜会对学习带来怎样的影响？
（2）你认为应如何取得好成绩？
注意：1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．词数100左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot.
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5．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）中考将至，不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现，因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪，迎战中考”为主题的班会课，来探讨如何调节自己的情绪，请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 简述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现；
2. 提出调节情绪的方法（至少三点）；
3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100左右（首尾不计入总字数）。
2. 围绕主题，表达内容积极向上（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。
3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
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Thank you for your listening.
6．（2024·江苏南通·一模）近来，安全问题备受关注。专家指出，提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此，自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿，选择或自拟两个方面，谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。
要求：
词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
参考词汇：school-bullying校园欺凌
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
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Thanks for your listening!
7．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）母亲节即将到来，你校英语角将举行以“My plan for Mother’s Day”为题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的计划，感恩母爱。
注意：(1)短文应包括所给问题提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My plan for Mother’s Day
Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother.
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8．（2024·江苏淮安·一模）读万卷书，行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日，你们学校为此举行了“Reading makes a better me”的征文活动，请以此为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容需包含表格中所有要点。
你的阅读习惯 读各种各样的书；每天读书半小时；经常去图书馆。
你最喜欢的一本书 书名：《秘密花园》The Secret Garden 主题：亲近自然；互帮互助；保持希望；收获成长。
阅读给你带来的改变。 至少两点。
注意：
1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
9．（2024·江苏盐城·一模）假如你是阳光中学的李雷，学校英语社团正在开展以“感恩”为主题的征文比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等；
2. 词数100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。
There have been many people around me who I want to thank. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2024·江苏扬州·一模）假定你是李华，接到笔友Tommy的邮件询问有关垃圾分类的情况。请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数100字左右。
To: Lihua 2024@
From: Tommy@
Subject: Waste sorting
Dear Li Hua, I hear that you are carrying out waste sorting in Yangzhou. Would you please share your ideas with me Why should you carry out waste sorting What do you do about waste sorting at school or at home What else can you do to protect the environment I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Tommy
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
相关词汇：厨余垃圾kitchen waste；可回收垃圾recyclable waste；有害垃圾hazardous waste
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Hua
11．（2024·江苏泰州·一模）初中三年的学习生活中，总有一些美好的瞬间令人难以忘怀。请选择一个你经历过的美好时刻，与大家分享你的故事和感受。以“一次美好而难忘的经历”为主题内容，写一篇演讲稿，参加我们的征文比赛。内容须包括：
1.What story is it
2.What have you learned from it
注意：
1.字数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数；
2.内容必须包括上述所有信息，并作适当的发挥；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；
4.语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。
Good morning，everyone!
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Thank you for listening.
12．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。
优秀品质 乐于助人， 积极参加志愿者服务（举一例说明）
心路历程 勤学好问，克服困难（举一例说明）
展望未来 1. 自拟一点对自我的要求；2. 做一位健康阳光、感恩的少年。
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2023·江苏南京·一模）假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到学校俱乐部TEENS CLUB在招募会员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
TEENS CLUB NEEDS YOU!TEENS CLUB needs you to organize activities to make our school lives more colourful. You are needed! Please let us know: ● What qualities do you have to join our club ● What activity/activities will you organize ● Why do you organize the activity/activities Contact us by sending an email at: TEENSCLUB@
注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2023·江苏无锡·二模）假如你是Lucy，想加入学校传统文化俱乐部。请根据招聘要求写一封自荐信，阐述你的理由。
A Member of the School Traditional Culture Club Wanted Do you want to be a member of our club Now, it’s your big chance! If you want to be one of us, please let us know: Anyone who is interested in it, please e-mail us at stunion@.
注意：
1.内容须包括表中要点，适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
My name is Lucy. I am writing to recommend myself as a member of the club._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Lucy
15．（2023·江苏徐州·二模）近日，在公共场所，人们身着汉服拍照，演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器；校园里，学生吟诵古典诗词，写毛笔字……处处彰显着中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture 的征文活动，请你选择下表中的一种传统文化的形式，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式；
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①穿汉服wearing Hanfu ②写毛笔字learn calligraphy ③讲中国故事tell Chinese stories ④演奏中国传统乐器play traditional Chinese musical instrument ⑤……（自拟）
注意：
1.词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3.参考词汇仅供选择使用。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
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参考答案：
1．范文
版1
During the past three years in our school, I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me.
Firstly, you let me know what is the confidence. As you know, this can help me with my interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. It’s great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not a boring thing as before and I’m interested in studying !版2
During the past three years in our school, I would like to thank you for all the help you gave me. The follow is what I want to say to you—Miss Zhang.
You were always so patient when asking you questions. You listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. You showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. You made the exercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice.
My English has improved so much. How could I thank you enough! I will keep working on my English.版3
During the past three years in our school, I’d like to use this chance to express my thanks to my English teacher, Ms Wang.
In the past, I was not good at English, especially in the field of spoken English. Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. Ms. Wang found my disadvantage and she encouraged me that: I believe you can do this and there are no difficulties you can’t overcome! At that time, I thought why couldn’t I trust myself as Ms. Wang did So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. After the hard working of both Ms. Wang and myself, I can speak English in front of people now.
To sum up, I’d like to express my gratitude to Ms. Wang once again. Without her help, I could not make such a big progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明你永远不会忘记的老师是谁；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍为什么让你难以忘记及你从他身上学到的东西；
第三步，书写结语。表达感激。
[亮点词汇]
①especially特别
②oral English口语
③overcome克服
④express my gratitude表达我的感激
[高分句型]
①Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. (原因状语从句)
②So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. (定语从句)
2．例文
My Favourite City
My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities.
Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of……的首都
②such as例如
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m happy to hear that there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month. I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting, I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th. Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. We can collect some history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together. It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment. Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，具体说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of nature自然之美
②hope to do希望做某事
③pick up拾起，捡起
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and go there by bus. (since引导原因状语从句)
②It’ll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. (if引导条件状语从句)
4．例文
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. Besides, it accounts for the fact that we cannot concentrate in class, thus decreasing efficiency. Furthermore, people who suffer from lack of sleep get angry and impatient easily.
So serious is the problem that we have to find effective solutions to it. In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.
Finally, I wish the students get good grades in the high school entrance examination.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：针对“熬夜”这一话题发表看法，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要涵盖材料中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述情况；
第二步，介绍熬夜会对学习带来的影响以及关于如何取得好成绩；
第三步，表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①lack of sleep缺少睡眠
②as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.(it句型以及非限制性定语从句)
5．例文
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exam
First, it is important for us to be in a good mood. Second, we should have proper aims. Third, we should have enough sleep instead of staying up late. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. Last but not least, we should face the High School Entrance Exam positively and optimistically.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现，比如有些同学感到自信和兴奋，而有些同学感到紧张、压力过大，这导致他们吃不好也睡不好；
第二步，具体提出调节情绪的方法，例如保持心情愉悦、制定合适的目标、保证充足的睡眠、多和父母、老师、同学们沟通交流等；
第三步，书写结束语，鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
[亮点词汇]
①try their best to 尽他们最大的努力
②stressed out 极度焦虑的
③in order to 为了
④be in a good mood 心情愉悦
⑤instead of 代替，而不是
⑥stay up late 熬夜
⑦Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
⑧positively and optimistically 积极乐观地
[高分句型]
①Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. （and连接的并列句）
②While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
6．例文
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently, more and more people pay attention to safety problems. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
We can avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to do in different situations. Fire is one of the most terrible accidents around us. If our building is on fire, the most important is to calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as possible.
School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us. If we meet with school-bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we should have some self-protection skills to live a safe and happy life.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自我保护”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自我保护的重要性；
第二步，根据题干中的表格，具体介绍两种情况并给出建议；
第三步，收尾，并再次点评自我保护的重要性，与前文呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①calm down冷静
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us.（定语从句）
②What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.（it is adj for sb to do句型）
7．例文
My plan for Mother’s Day
Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother. I really want to say, “Mum, you are my hero. I love you. ”
I want to do something meaningful for my mother. I can cook a nice meal for her. My mother is very busy but she always makes delicious food for me. Also, I plan to make a beautiful card by myself. I can write what I want to say to her. Besides, I’ll have a short trip with her so that she can relax herself.
I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己将为妈妈做的事及为什么要那样做；
第三步，介绍自己想对妈妈说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①something meaningful一些有意义的事
②have a short trip with her和她进行短途旅行
③besides除此之外
[高分句型]
①I can write what I want to say to her. （what引导宾语从句）
②I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother.（think 后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
8．
例文
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone.
I often read various books. I read for half an hour every day and often go to the library.
My favorite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games, but more focused on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写你的阅读习惯；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的一本书；
第三步，描述阅读给你带来的改变。
[亮点词汇]
①be addicted to对……上瘾
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
① It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them.（when引导时间状语从句）
9．例文：
There have been many people around me who I want to thank. Among them, the person I’d like to express my gratitude most is my English teacher, Mr Chen.
Mr Chen’s passion for teaching and patience to all the students have greatly touched me. He’s a talented and experienced teacher. His classes are not only about grammar and vocabulary but about opening our minds to a new world.
I am a student who is not good at and language learning and I wasn’t confident before. Whenever I have difficulty with English and felt upset, Mr Li is always there, helping and encouraging me. She always holds high hope for me. Now, I have become confident about my study. I’m really grateful to Mr Li. It’s he who makes me becomes a better self!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应紧扣“感恩”进行写作，注意不要遗漏重点信息，适当增加细节突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想感谢谁；
第二步，说明感谢对方的理由；
第三步，介绍对方帮助自己的事，并再次表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①talented有天赋的
②be not good at doing sth.不擅长做某事
③grateful感谢的
[高分句型]
①Among them, the person I’d like to express my gratitude most is my English teacher, Mr Chen. (定语从句)
②His classes are not only about grammar and vocabulary but about opening our minds to a new world.(not only…but also…句型)
③I am a student who is not good at and language learning and I wasn’t confident before. (who引导的定语从句)
④Whenever I have difficulty with English and felt upset, Mr Li is always there, helping and encouraging me. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
10．例文
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it.
In order to make an effort to make our city more beautiful, we carry out waste sorting. We separate the wastes into different types, and then throw them into the rubbish bins. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable waste. Hazardous waste will not pollute our environment after special treatment.
Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. First, we can collect more information about waste sorting and prepare different rubbish bins for different wastes. Paper can be recycled, while kitchen waste especially leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all, such harmful waste as plastics and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes. What’s more, we can tell our parents and relatives about the importance of waste sorting.
As well as waste sorting, keeping power off while electricity equipment is not in use is also a good idea to protect our environment.
If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括邮件中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，介绍垃圾分类情况，从而引出话题；
第二步，阐述垃圾分类的意义；
第三步，介绍在家或在学校你是如何进行垃圾分类的？
第四步，介绍其他为了保护环境的做法；
第五步，书写总结，呼吁大家行动起来。
［亮点词汇］
① make an effort 作出努力
② carry out 执行
［高分句型］
① Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. (定语从句)
② If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11．One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share my favorite story about a basketball game with you.
Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t pay attention to the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up.
With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students, we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air.
Just as the saying goes, “One tree does not make a forest.” I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，表达从此处经历学到的东西时，用“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写一次美好而难忘的经历。
第二步，主要围绕“从这次经历中学到的东西”展开，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，重述主题，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多的
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③hurt+身体部位 伤到……
④think of认为
⑤pay attention to注意
⑥encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
⑦cheer sb. up使某人高兴
⑧With the help of…通过……的帮助
⑨as well as和
⑩make one’s biggest efforts尽某人最大的努力
[高分句型]
①I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. (because引导的原因状语从句)
12．参考范文：
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities.
Firstly, I am always ready to help others and do voluntary work actively. I usually spend my weekends helping old people clean their flats at our community center. I feel happy if they are happy. Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Last term, I had problems in understanding Physics, I asked Mr. Zhao for advice. I would not improve so much without his help.
In the future, I will keep studying to go towards a wider world. As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth. I will also learn to be more thankful to people around me and try to help more people.
I hope we can grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中作为新时代青少年的感受，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的优秀品质和经历；
第二步，简要介绍心路历程及体会；
第三步，表达未来期望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend... doing sth.花费……做某事
②a wider world更广阔的世界
③grow together一起成长
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help.（that引导定语从句）
②As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth.（since引导原因状语从句）
13．Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering me such a good opportunity.
I’m very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Li Hua. I am outgoing and I like talking with people. Moreover, I have held some activities successfully in our class. We can hold some activities such as English Speech Contest, Poetry Competition, Art Festival and other activities. Through these activities, we can not only learn something useful, open our eyes but also enrich our mind. In addition, we can relax ourselves and promote friendship among classmates.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，围绕三个问题，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌致谢。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的品质、组织的活动以及组织这些活动的原因。
第三步，书写结语。表达“尽快收到回复”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to do sth 很高兴做某事
② in addition 此外
③ look forward to 期待，盼望
[高分句型]
① Through these activities, we can not only learn something useful, open our eyes but also enrich our mind. （not only...but also并列句）
14．例文
Dear Sir,
My name is Lucy. I am writing to recommend myself as a member of the school drama club.
I have many strong qualities for this position. I am lively and energetic. I have many friends and I can get on well with them.
I am interested in our traditional culture. In my free time, I like reading books and watching videos about different cultures. As teenagers, I think it’s our duty to spread our traditional culture. The value and beauty of the traditional culture should be known by more people and get to more areas.
I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to take part in the club activities.
If I have the chance to be a member of the club, I’ll be happy.
Yours faithfully,
Lucy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的性格以及爱好等；
第二步，具体阐述你加入俱乐部的理由。
第三步，最后表达自己如果有机会成为俱乐部的一员，会很高兴的。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with sb和某人相处融洽
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The value and beauty of the traditional culture should be known by more people and get to more areas.（含有情态动词的被动语态）
②If I have the chance to be a member of the club, I’ll be happy.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．例文：
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people.
I started learning calligraphy at eight. At first, it was challenging for me to use the brush to write Chinese characters. My wrist would ache after holding the brush for a long time. Fortunately, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can write spring couplets for my family every year. It makes me proud.
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. I become more patient and careful thanks to years of practice. I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容且适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述自己最喜欢的传统文化；
第二步：阐述个人体验该传统文化的经历；
第三步：阐述个人的收获及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pass down流传
②with the help of在……帮助下
③more partient and careful更加有耐心和细心
④feel honored感到荣幸
[高分句型]
①My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced many people.（定语从句）
②Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me.（动名词作主语）

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