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Continuation Writing
读后续写之
重生我是编剧
上一世，你只是一个酷爱追剧的小孩；
看得正高兴的时候，
什么！编剧居然把你最爱的角色写死了！
什么！编剧居然把你最磕的cp拆散了！
一气之下，一口气没过来，
还好重生一世，你变成了一个编剧；
这一次你要夺回你的一切......
假如你是一个编剧，
那么，读后续写对你来说，
等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本，让你创作
初识读后续写-----是什么
读后续写：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据所提供的 和 进行续写；词数要求： ，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
材料内容
两段开头语
150 词左右
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That night, I quarreled with my mother, then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket , I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home.
At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!
The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked," Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl "
" But ... but I do not carry money ..." I shyly replied.
" Okay , I ‘ ll treat you ." the seller said ," come in , I will cook you a bowl ."
A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried.
" What is it " He asked.,
" Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness!" I said as I wiped my tears. " Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel !!"
The seller sighed," Girl, why did you think so Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little. Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom "
I was really surprised after hearing that.
Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.
注意：
1. 续写的词数应为 150 左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. _____________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.__________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
350词左右的语言材料
未完成的剧本
两段开头语
the 6 basic elements
the main idea
vocabulary sentence
structure linking words,
the plot and feeling
the tense
the main character
the style
语言生动，高级
完成一篇“剧本”的基本步骤
写剧本---整洁书写
who; when; where; what; why; how
To solve the
problems
be full and attractive
读剧本---审题
续剧本---构思情节
合理的情节
1.原文
2.读两段提示语
目的
读后续写-----如何应对
“剧本”写作指南
三大原则
01原文一致原则
　内容要前后衔接，上下连贯
语言表达风格一致。
03曲折性原则
　凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。
02正能量原则
　故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。
主题
人与社会
人与自我
人与自然
（温情或化险为夷的故事，表达人间有真情、大爱）
（主角的自我发展、变化或成长）
（人与动物或自然和谐相处）
Part One
读剧本
读剧本之找人
主角+配角
Who are in the story
That night, I quarreled(争吵) with my mother, then stormed out of (气冲冲地离开)the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket , I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home.
At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!
The seller saw me standing before the counter(柜台) and asked," Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl "
" But ... but I do not carry money ..." I shyly(害羞地) replied.
" Okay , I ‘ ll treat you ." the seller said ," come in , I will cook you a bowl ."
A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming(热腾腾的) bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried.
" What is it " He asked.,
" Nothing. I am just touched(触动) by your kindness!" I said as I wiped my tears. " Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel(残忍的) !!"
The seller sighed," Girl, why did you think so Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little. Why were you not grateful(感激的) and why did you hurt your mom "
I was really surprised(惊讶的) after hearing that.
Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised(养育) me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
读剧本之找时间
When did/does the story happen
决定续写需要用的主要时态
That night, I quarreled with my mother, then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket , I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home.
At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!
The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked," Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl "
" But ... but I do not carry money ..." I shyly replied.
" Okay , I ‘ ll treat you ." the seller said ," come in , I will cook you a bowl ."
A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried.
" What is it " He asked.,
" Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness!" I said as I wiped my tears. " Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel !!"
The seller sighed," Girl, why did you think so Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little. Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom "
I was really surprised after hearing that.
Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.
Tense:_____________
simple past tense(一般过去时)
读剧本之找事
情节 主题
What happened
Events (What happened)
I quarreled(争吵) with my mother, then stormed out of (气冲冲地离开)the house.
The owner brought me a steaming(热腾腾的) bowl of noodles for free.
I had no money, but I was hungry and wished a bowl of noodles.
The owner told me that my mother raised(养育) me and I should be grateful(感激的) to her instead of(而不是) a stranger(陌生人) who just gave me a bowl of noodles.
I was touched(触动) by the owner’s kindness, and thought my mother was cruel(残忍的).
Which is the theme
A. a cruel(残忍的) mother
B. a warm-hearted(热心的) seller
C. a family tragedy(悲剧)
D. a touching(感人的) mother-daughter story
"...Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little. Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom "
I was really surprised after hearing that.
Why did I not think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.
clue
线索
when
where
that night
Tense:_____________
simple past tense
house;
the street
who
I, my mother;
The seller
first person perspective
第一人称视角
beginning
climax
ending
story mountain
rising action
falling action
I had a quarrel with my mother.
A seller_________
_______________
The seller’s words__
____________________
____________________
Many memories came back into my mind.
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
gave me a
bowl of noodles.
reminded me what my mom had done for me.
故事线
I: angry
mother: angry, sad
情感线
touched/moved/grateful
ashamed
羞愧的
regretful后悔的, grateful 感激的
Part One
创作剧本
已知信息
Tip 1: 由已知信息推理未知信息
Given information
New information
新信息
Para.1
1.我想起了母亲为我做的事情（第一段首句）
2.我快速朝家走去（第一段尾句）
已知信息
新信息
Para.1
1.I remembered the things my mom had done for me. (第一段首句)
2.I walked home quickly.(第一段尾句)
Tip：The ending of Para.1 should be connected with_____________of Para.2.
the beginning
已知信息
新信息
Para.2
1. Why did the mother sit at the dinner table
2. Why was the mother worried and tired
3.母亲一定在到处寻找我(第二段首句)
已知信息
新信息
Para.2
1. Why did the mother sit at the dinner table
2. Why was the mother worried and tired
3.My mom must have been looking for me everywhere. (第二段首句）
已知信息
新信息
Thinking for the ending
Para.2
4.我和母亲和好并拥抱了对方(故事结局)
5.通过这件事我得到了成长，明白了我们应该对父母有感激之情(情感主题升华)
Thinking for the ending
Para.2
4.I hugged my mom and we made peace with each other.(故事结局)
5.That night, I grew up and realized that we should be grateful to our parents.(情感主题升华)
Tip2:五句定框架
首句呼应上文
1.I remembered…(回忆起母亲为我做的事)
尾句衔接过渡
2.I walked home quickly.(我快速朝家走去)
首句呼应上文
3.She must have….(母亲一直在找我)
给故事一个结局
情感主题升华
5.sorry, grateful (对母亲感到抱歉意识到要对父母感恩)
......
......
4.We made peace with each other...(我和母亲和好)
在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见、所闻、所思、所说、所为等给每段增加5至8个具体细节，我们称之为叫“58细节添加法”。
Tip 3: 通过对话、动作、情感等刻画细节
台词
内心独白
动作
Para.1
What did your mother ever do for you
Paragraph 1
所思
当我生病时，母亲细心照顾我；
当我放学回家时，母亲为我准备好热腾腾的饭菜；
当我遇到困难时，母亲耐心地鼓励我；
... ...
many memories
母亲为我做的一切
things mother had done for me
内心独白
Paragraph 1
当我生病时，母亲细心照顾我；
当我放学回家时，母亲为我准备好热腾腾的饭菜；
当我学习遇到困难时，母亲总是耐心鼓励我；
When I was ________, she always __________________________ me _____________.
ill
took care of/looked after
carefully
When I came back home, she always __________________________ for me.
prepared steaming food
When I _________________________, she always ________________ me _____________.
had trouble with my studies
encouraged
patiently
描写细节时多用一些形容词、副词使描述更生动。
短语积累
take care of=look after 照顾
prepare sth. for sb. 为某人准备好某物
have trouble with sth. 某事遇到困难
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind.
情绪感受、心理活动描写
I remembered many things my mom had done for me.(首句)
Therefore, I walked home quickly.(尾句)
When I was ill, she always took care of me carefully. When I came back home, she always prepared steaming food for me. When I had trouble with my studies, she always encouraged me patiently. (细节描写）
Suddenly, I just realized that all the scolding(责备) from my mother was because she really cared a lot about me.
所思
回到家后预想母亲的反应(内心独白)
所说
我和母亲分别会说什么（台词）
Paragraph 2
生气？
大喊？
所为
母亲：
我：
我和母亲分别会做什么（动作）
相互道歉？
相互拥抱？
所思
回到家后预想母亲的反应(内心独白)
所说
我和母亲分别会说什么（台词）
Paragraph 2
I thought mother would be angry and shouted at me…
所为
I: Mum, I’m sorry to quarrel with you…
我和母亲分别会做什么（动作）
We made an apology(道歉) and hugged each other…
Mother: You must be hungry and I have cooked your favourite noodles…
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
She must have been looking for me everywhere.(首句)
That night, I grew up and realized that we should be grateful to our parents.(主旨升华)
feel(内心独白):I thought mother would be angry and shouted at me.
We hugged tightly and made peace with each other.(故事结局)
say(台词):
母亲:“Oh, dear! You came back! You must be hungry and I cooked your favourite noodles…”
我:“I shouldn’t quarrel with you, mom. I should say sorry to you for my rudeness. Thank you for all the things you have done for me.”
母亲: “I’m happy that you can understand me. I love you forever.”
do(动作):增加哪些动作使上面的句与句之间衔接更自然？
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.
She must have been looking for me everywhere.(首句)
That night, I grew up and realized that we should be grateful to our parents.(主旨升华)
I thought mother would be angry and shouted at me. However, before I said something, she saw me and said gently, “Oh, dear! You came back! You must be hungry and I cooked your favourite noodles…” After hearing her words, I couldn’t control myself and said, “I shouldn’t quarrel with you, mom. I should say sorry to you for my rudeness. Thank you for all the things you have done for me.” “I’m happy that you can understand me. I love you forever.” She said warmly.(细节描写）
We hugged tightly and made peace with each other.(故事结局)
首句呼应上文
1.I remembered…(回忆起母亲为我做的事)
尾句衔接过渡
2.I walked home quickly.(我回到了家里)
首句呼应上文
3.She must have….(母亲一直在找我)
给故事一个结局
4.We made peace with each other...(我和母亲和好)
情感主题升华
5.sorry, grateful (对母亲感到抱歉意识到要对父母感恩)
......
......
刻画细节
the things I remembered
刻画细节
say/do/feel
范文赏析
Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. [When I was ill], she was always the one (taking care of me). [When I had trouble with my studies], she never lost faith in me and encouraged me to keep going. [When I arrived home during the weekend], she always prepared my favorite food. All her kindness came back to me. I should be grateful for all (she had done for me). I just realized {that all the scolding from my mother was due to the fact }. [Tears rolling down my cheeks], I made my way home [immediately].
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
范文赏析
When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired. She must have been looking for me everywhere. I was ready for her anger and shouts. However,[before I could apologize], my mother saw me and [gently] said, “Oh, honey! You're back! Come inside. You are probably very hungry I cooked your favorite noodles...” No longer able to control myself, I stepped forward and cried in her arms. “I'm sorry, mom. I should make an apology for my rudeness to you. I shouldn't quarrel with you. Mom, I love you. Thank you for all the things (you have done for me).” “I am very happy< that you can understand me>. My dear, I love you forever." Mom said [warmly]. We hugged each other as tightly as possible, [our eyes filled with tears]. That night, I grew up.
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
语言、对话描写
情感升华
Writing for homework
Evaluation Criteria
Is the handwriting beautiful
Does the writing include two paragraphs
Are there any punctuation(标点符号) errors
Is the first word in each sentence capitalized(大写)
Are there any spelling mistakes
Is the last sentence in paragraph 1 a transitional(过渡性的) sentence
Are there any vivid description
Can you feel the theme in your writing
Thank you

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