牛津译林版(2019)高中英语必修第三册UNIT1-UNIT4表达作文巧升格学案(4份打包)

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牛津译林版(2019)高中英语必修第三册UNIT1-UNIT4表达作文巧升格学案(4份打包)

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图表类调查报告
[基本框架]
1.开头——开篇要明确地指出调查的目的,这样也就明确了调查报告所要传达的信息。
2.主体——主体段落呈现调查信息并分析原因。对于图表类调查报告而言,主体段落是最终实现图文转换的段落。写主体段落时要注意以下几个方面:
(1)确定所要转换的信息时,要在题目的具体要求下提取信息,并对信息进行明确地分类。
(2)重组信息时,要注意根据题目要求确定信息表述的详略,重要的信息要进行详细说明,次要的信息一笔带过即可。
(3)转述所给信息时,要使用不同的表达方法,也就是要使用不同的词、词组和句型等。
(4)分析原因时要以具体的调查数据为依据,描述原因时要注意采用多样化的表达方式。
3.结尾——末段通常是对调查结果的总结,也就是根据调查结果得出结论或是针对调查结果发表个人看法。写此段时,考生要注意结论的客观性和看法的合理性,不可妄加评断。
[常用词块]
1.with the development of society
随着社会的发展
2.many reasons involved in this situation
这种情况有很多原因
3.vary from person to person因人而异
4.hold the opinion that持有……的观点
5.arouse the public's great concern
引起公众极大的关切
6.have different choices on how to travel
关于旅行出行有不同的选择
7.a variety of brands to choose from
多种品牌可供选择
8.the advantages and disadvantages of the goods
该商品的优缺点
某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查,调查结果如下。请根据表格1所给出的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因,并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
表格1:网购吸引用户的几个方面
37% 商品种类丰富
33% 商品价格合理
30% 不受时间、地域限制
表格2:网购用户担心的几个方面
55% 质量问题
27% 售后服务
18% 交易安全
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.
【学生习作】
Recently,a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.The results are here.
Chart 1 tells us why people buy goods online. Some people think there are many kinds to choose from. Some people think the prices are OK. And the rest people think they can buy things at any place and any time.
Chart 2 tells us what people are worried about. They include:quality, service and safety.
I think it is good and easy to go shopping online.
点评:1.句式过于单一,并列结构句式过多;
2.内容过于简单,未能详述调查结果。
【升格作文】
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.
37% think that there is a wide variety of products in online shops. About one third of them say that the reasonable price is the most appealing factor for them. And 30% of them hold that online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anywhere at any time.
However, many consumers also express their concerns about online shopping. The quality of the products accounts for as much as 55%,which attracts my attention.
Personally,we should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.
上个月,我们公司以35岁以下的人群作为调查对象,选取了1 000人进行了关于“网上购物”的一项调查,调查情况如下:
你是否愿意在网上购物?
结果 64%愿意 36%不愿意
原因 1.方便,在家可买到所需物品2.网上商品比较便宜,而且可选择的品牌多 1.害怕买到赝品2.担心被骗钱
结论 只要防范网上购物的弊端,将有越来越多的人选择网上购物
根据以上数据,写一篇调查报告,内容包括:
1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;
2.愿意网上购物的人占调查人数的百分比;
3.人们愿意在网上购物的主要原因;
4.人们不愿意在网上购物的主要原因;
5.本次调查的结论。
注意:1.文章必须包含以上内容,并且内容要连贯;
2.词数80左右;
3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping online among 1,000 interviewees younger than 35 years old.
【参考范文】
Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping online among 1,000 interviewees younger than 35 years old.
64% of those interviewed think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods online are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees claim that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money.
In conclusion,only by guarding against the disadvantages of online shopping will more and more people choose to shop online.介绍自然灾害
[基本框架]
1.开头——说明什么地方发生了什么样的自然灾害。
2.主体——具体介绍自然灾害造成的损失。
3.结尾——表达自己的祝愿。
[常用词块]
1.a house looking as if to fall down 看上去好像要倒塌的一栋房子
2.feel a sudden urge to run away突然想赶快逃走
3.seriously injured his legs 他的双腿严重受伤
4.cause a great loss 造成巨大损失
5.take safety measures 采取安全措施
6.cause damage to property 造成财产损失
7.leave the area in ruins 使这个地区成为废墟
8.hope to find their missing son希望找到他们失踪的儿子
假如你是李华,得知你的英国网友Bill的家乡发生山火,房屋被烧毁,他现在住在临时避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他,内容要点如下:
1.询问受灾情况,表示关心;
2.鼓励他振作起来,重建家园。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:山火 mountain fire
Dear Bill,
Yours,
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Bill,
Hear you have mountain fire and I am sad. Are you OK,now I am worried about you.
Your houses were burned down and you are living outside. That's so bad. How do you live now?Do you have water and food I can help you. The mountain fire is not easy to put out,so you should be patient and cheer up! I am sure you will be better.
Come on!Be happy and confident.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:
1.句式简单,不能学以致用;
2.虽表示关心,但浮于表面客套。
【升格作文】
Dear Bill,
On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your hometown, I am extremely worried about you.
Are you or your family injured I heard that your house was burned down and you are living in the temporary shelter now. How about the conditions there Do you have enough clothes and food
The fire has caused great damage to your family, but I firmly believe that all things will get better. Cheer up! I'm sure you will rebuild your hometown soon. Anyway, tomorrow is another day!
Yours,
Li Hua
去年夏天,南方发生了严重的洪涝灾害,造成了很大的损失。请根据下面三个方面的内容,写一篇英语短文:
1.损失:农田被毁,房屋被冲垮,很多人无家可归;
2.洪涝灾害的原因:下雨达数月,森林遭到破坏,湖泊被改造成农田;
3.补救措施:保护河边树木,重建堤坝,退田还湖。
注意:词数80左右。
【参考范文】
Last summer,big floods occurred in the south.Fields were ruined,houses were washed away and many people became homeless.
There are three reasons for the flood.Firstly,it had kept raining for months.Secondly,many forests had been destroyed and the soil was washed away.Finally,some lakes had been turned into fields,which seriously blocked the waterway.
Now,some measures have been taken to prevent floods from happening again.The trees along the rivers have been protected.Old dams have been rebuilt and some fields have been turned back into lakes again.写一封建议信
[基本框架]
1.开头——提出写建议信的缘由。
2.主体——写出建议的具体内容,并指出你所提出的建议可能会带来的好处。
3.结尾——表明希望自己的建议被采纳。
[常用词块]
1.take action to protect wildlife
采取措施保护野生动物
2.spare no effort to protect them from extinction
不遗余力地保护它们免于灭绝
3.stop the factories from giving out the polluted water and waste gases
阻止工厂排放污水和废气
4.arouse the public's awareness of protecting the endangered species
激起大众保护濒危物种的意识
5.pay more attention to our daily life
更多关注我们的日常生活
假如你叫李华,你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少,对此你想向有关部门写一封信,分析造成这种现象的原因,并根据实际情况提出几条切实可行的建议。以下要点要包括在内:
1.野生动植物的现状;
2.分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因;
3.提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.
We know much wildlife is in danger. So we should protect them. And the environment is becoming more and more harmful to them. We destroyed them. They don't have something to eat. We also kill them for food.
I think we should protect them and do something useful. First,don't cut trees.Second,make laws to punish. And last, everyone should do.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:1.语言过于口语化;
2.复杂句式偏少,简单句居多;
3.所给措施可操作性差。
【升格作文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.
As we know,many species of wildlife are in danger of extinction.This is because the environment that they are living in has been destroyed greatly.They not only have little to eat,but also can be killed by human beings.
Personally,more measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt.Firstly,more laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees.Secondly,all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes.Thirdly,more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你们学校将举办以“Protect Wild Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.野生动物的现状;
2.保护建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等);
3.美好愿景。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve;意识awareness
Good morning,everyone!
I'm very glad to give a speech today.The topic of my speech is
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone!
I'm very glad to give a speech today. The topic of my speech is Protect Wild Animals.
As we all know, wild animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are in danger, and some of them are dying out. So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them. First of all, we must establish nature reserves. Secondly, it is important to raise public awareness of protecting wild animals. To harm wild animals is to harm ourselves. Therefore, let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them. I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with wild animals.
Thank you!写一篇介绍活动计划类的文章
[基本框架]
1.开头——活动的时间、地点、参加的人员及活动主题。
2.主体——活动主要内容及代表性的活动。一般来说,给人印象最深刻的往往是有代表性的活动,应详细介绍、突出重点。
3.结尾——收获或感想。不同的活动给人的感受是不一样的:有的活动能够增进友谊,有的活动使人轻松愉快,有的活动令人增长见识,有的活动可以催人奋进……写了真情实感,才能感染读者。
[常用词块]
1.meet at the school gate 在校门口集合
2.have a wide variety of activities活动多样
3.spend some time together花一些时间一起
4.take photos for future memories拍照方便以后回忆
5.be deeply impressed by the exhibitions对展品印象深刻
6.return at 5 p.m. and get home 1 hour later下午五点返回,一小时后到家
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry,在中国学习。他发来邮件询问你校举办的科技展的情况,请回复邮件。内容包括:
1.科技展的时间和地点;
2.科技展的内容和意义;
3.发出邀请。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:科技展Science and Technology Exhibition
Dear Terry,
Yours,
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Terry,
I am happy to tell you something about the exhibition next week.
The Science Exhibition will be in my school. It includes many activities like AI and VR. It also has a new collection of science books and videos.You can have a try in many places.
Now I invite you to e on,don't forget the time.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:1.词数少;
2.句型单一;
3.缺少衔接词语。
【升格作文】
Dear Terry,
I'm delighted to tell you the details of the Science and Technology Exhibition to be held by my school next week in the science building.
The exhibition, including several themes like AI and VR, features a new collection of science books and videos. Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions, such as robot models, 3D printers, etc., but they can also experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair. The activity is of great significance.
Therefore, I sincerely invite you to participate in it. And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自英国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示,给英国的领队史密斯先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动安排并简要说明理由,最后征求对方的意见。
1.上午与我校学生座谈(如校园文化、文化差异);
2.中午与我校学生共进午餐(饺子、面条等);
3.下午和我校学生游览海河。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.
In the morning, there will be a forum in the school auditorium, where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences. At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste dumplings, noodles and other Chinese foods. In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the Haihe River.
How do you like the arrangements I hope you will have a nice time in Tianjin.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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